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1、写作素养提升练写作素养提升练人教版八年级下人教版八年级下 Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains.人教版八年级下人教版八年级下你曾在小时候常常听妈妈讲女娲补天后羿射日精卫填海神笔马良等美丽的传说吗？你曾读过白雪公主小红帽海的女儿等美妙的童话故事吗？它们会使你想起那些神奇的世界吗？同学们，给大家讲讲那些故事吧！写作任务写作任务假如你是李梅,请你根据下面所给图画，给大家讲述这一经典故事。Sima Guang hit the tank(缸)play hide-and-seek(捉迷藏),full of waterfall into,be frigh
2、tened(惊恐的),cry,run for helpthink over,pick up,throw atbreak,be saved思路点拨思路点拨【谋篇布局谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。理清文章要素，构建文章结构。描述故事发生的场景once;in the backyard;there was.in the yard;water讲述故事发生的经过playing;fall into;be frightened;cry;run for help;think over;pick up;throw at;break;be saved引发感想Do you like the story?Wha
3、t do you think of Sima Guang?思路点拨思路点拨【遣词造句遣词造句】就结构图中的要点和提示写出句子。就结构图中的要点和提示写出句子。1.有一次，司马光和几个小孩在后院捉迷藏。Once Sima Guang _in the backyard.2.院里有一个大水缸。缸里盛满了水。There was a large water tank in the yard.It_.was playing hideandseek withseveral childrenwas full of water思路点拨思路点拨3.当他们正在玩时，一个小孩不慎掉进了水缸中。When they we
4、re playing,one child accidentally_.4.其他孩子惊慌得开始哭喊起来，跑出去求救。Other children _that they started to cry,running for help.fell into the tankwere so frightened思路点拨思路点拨5.司马光想了想，然后有了一个主意。他捡起一块 大石头，砸向那个水缸。Sima Guang _and then had an idea.He _ and _.6.缸破了，水流出来了。那个小孩得救了。The tank broke and the water ran out.The c
5、hild_.thought it overpicked up a big stonethrew it at the water tankwas saved思路点拨思路点拨【巧妙衔接巧妙衔接】利用连词，使句子意思连贯。利用连词，使句子意思连贯。本文按照故事发生的时间顺序来展述，利用一般过去时和过去进行时引出故事发生的场景。运用连词when,so.that等交代故事的发展和高潮。运用一系列动作，使故事发生的全过程紧密相连，脉络清晰。【连句成篇连句成篇】_思路点拨思路点拨【精彩范文精彩范文】Sima Guang hit the tankOnce Sima Guang was playing hide
6、-and-seek with several children in the backyard.There was a large water tank in the yard.It was full of water.When they were playing,one child accidentally fell into the tank.Other children were so frightened that they started to cry,running for help.However,Sima Guang思路点拨思路点拨was different.He though
7、t it over and then had an idea.He picked up a big stone and threw it at the tank.“Bang!”The tank broke and the water ran out.The child was saved.Do you like the story?What do you think of Sima Guang?写作实践写作实践同学们一定听过守株待兔的故事吧，根据图片和提示，请用英语描述这个故事。注意：80词左右。文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。写作实践写作实践提示词：farmer 农民；field 田地；
8、hare 野兔；hole 洞；hurriedly 匆忙地；knock against 撞上；lazy 懒惰的Once upon a time,_He was so lazy that he couldnt get anything again.写作实践写作实践_Once upon a time，there was a farmer working in his fields.Soon he was very tired.So he sat near a big tree.The sun was very hot,but he was cool under the tree.A hare ran
9、 out of a hole.When it saw the farmer,it was very afraid.It ran very quickly.It ran so hurriedly that its head knocked against another tree.It died soon.The farmer was very excited to see it.He picked up the dead hare and写作实践写作实践_took it home for dinner.He was very happy.From that day on,he no longer went for farming.He stayed by that tree,waiting for hares to come again.But he didnt meet any hares.He was so lazy that he couldnt get anything again.