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1、写作素养提升练写作素养提升练人教版八年级下人教版八年级下 Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?人教版八年级下人教版八年级下天有不测风云，人有旦夕祸福。一些突发的灾难或事故留给人们的记忆是悲伤的、长远的。平安和健康是那么重要，我们要从事故中吸取教训，避免类似的伤害发生。让我们生活在更精彩的世界里吧！写作任务写作任务假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟了英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。要点提示：1.在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶。2.女孩要离开时，发现树下有一位老乞丐，他看上去
2、又冷又饿。写作任务写作任务3.女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。4.乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。5.你很感动参考词汇：乞丐beggar;感动be moved思路点拨思路点拨【谋篇布局谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。理清文章要素，构建文章结构。交代时间、人物时间：on a cold morning人物：a girl;an old beggar介绍事情的经过was going to leave;found;cold and hungry;came up to;said thanks to;left;smile介绍我的感受was moved;decided思路点拨思路点拨【遣词造句遣词造句
3、】就结构图中的要点和词语写出就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。句子。1.当我正买早餐时，我看见在我前面的女孩买了一些面包和牛奶。While I was _,I saw a girl in front of me _.2.当那个女孩要离开时，她发现树下有一个老乞丐。When the girl _,she found _.buying breakfastbuy some bread and milkwas going to leavean old beggar under the tree思路点拨思路点拨3.那个女孩走到他身旁，把她的早餐给了他。The girl _ and _.4.当那个乞丐向女孩
4、道谢时，女孩什么也没说并且微笑着走开了。When the beggar _,she said nothing and _ on her face.came up to him gave her breakfast to himsaid thanks to the girlwent away with a smile思路点拨思路点拨5.我被那个女孩所做的事感动了。I _ by what the girl did.was moved思路点拨思路点拨【巧妙衔接巧妙衔接】利用连词，使句子意思利用连词，使句子意思连贯。连贯。简述事情发生时用一般过去时和过去进行时，这两种时态的配合建立起上下文的逻辑联系。
5、全文按照事情的发展过程来描述，运用连词when或while，使文章过渡自然。【连句成篇连句成篇】On a cold morning,while I was._思路点拨思路点拨【精彩范文精彩范文】On a cold morning,while I was buying breakfast,I saw a girl in front of me buy some bread and milk.When she was going to leave,she found an old beggar under the tree.He looked cold and hungry.The girl ca
6、me up to him and gave her breakfast to him.When the beggar said thanks to the girl,she said nothing and went away with a smile on her face.思路点拨思路点拨I was moved by what the girl did.Her kindness touched me a lot.I decided to learn from her and be a kind person.I should help the people in need from now
7、 on.写作实践写作实践上个星期日下午三点，我市突然下起大暴雨，你的朋友们正在做着不同的事情。请你根据下面表格的内容，写一篇80词左右的短文。NameDoingPlaceJulia看书城市图书馆Jim等公共汽车在公交站Tim and Mike 观看动物表演在动物园里Peter and I打电脑游戏在我家里写作实践写作实践_A heavy rainstorm hit our city at 3：00 p.m.last Sunday.My friends in the city were doing different things at that time.Julia was reading i
8、n the city library.She could hear strong winds outside and the rain beat heavily against the windows.Jim was waiting for the bus at the bus stop.He didnt take an umbrella with him，so he was all wet.Tim and Mike were watching the animal shows in the zoo.Luckily,they found写作实践写作实践_somewhere to get out of the rain.Peter and I were playing computer games in my home.However，because of the loud noise outside,we could hardly hear each other.Although we didnt care about it，we lost interest in the games.We didnt have fun with the rainstorm.