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1、TEM-4 Writing测试要求 Section A: Composition 要求根据所出的题目和列出的写作提纲或图表、数字统计表等写一篇200词左右的短文。文章体裁主要属于记叙文、说明文或议论文的范围。考试时间35分钟。总分15分。 Section B：Note-writing 要求根据提示写大约50-60词的通知、便条、请帖等。考试时间10分钟。总分10分。评分原则与标准 1.说明文、议论文评分等级表思想内容思想内容(50%)：观点清楚，前后不矛盾，并有充分、 恰当的 例证说明自己的观点组织结构组织结构(10%)：细节安排有条理，叙述层次清楚，段落之间 联系自然，句子连贯语言语言(40
2、%)： 语法语法(20%) 没有句子结构上的重大 错误。拼写、标点、大小 写等正确或有个别错误。 引用原文适度，不超过作者文章的10% 用词用词(15%) 用词(包括习惯用语)准确、恰当 得体得体(5%) 语言得体，语气恰当，以理服人，有说服力 评分原则与标准 2.叙述文、描写文评分等级表思想内容思想内容(50%)：包含所有重要的、必不可少的内容，没有任何 无关紧要的或不切题的内容组织结构组织结构(10%)：细节安排有条理，叙述层次清楚，段落之间 联系自然，句子连贯语言语言(40%)： 语法语法(20%) 偶有个别句子结构等有错误，但不造成误解， 拼写、 标点、大小写等正确或有个别错误 用词用
3、词(15%) 用词(包括习惯用语)准确、恰当 得体得体(5%) 语言得体，能用恰当的问题表达思想， 达到预期的交际效果 Sample-studySection A: Composition (35MIN) Nowadays, the Internet has become part of peoples life, and millions of young people have made friends online. Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is
4、It Wise to Make Friends Online? You are to write in three parts: In the first part of your article you should clearly present your view. In the second part you should support your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or sum
5、mary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Sample 1: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? I think it is wise to make friends online. First, Now jobs pressure more and more. Everyone cannt b
6、etter talk face to face. Second, Friends online may speak everything of them. Third, friends online may help something of them and solve some problem. The forth, friends online may gain more knowledge and information. All in all, make friends online is wise in the society. Make friends online cant c
7、hange a 潮流. Everyone may enjoy Everyone with his friends online! Sample 2: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? People would like to make the best of Internet to broaden their minds, they can get large information, they can play interesting games, even they can make friends online. While a question ha
8、s been arisen: “Is It wise to make friends online ?” The Internet is not reality, you can not trust a person through the Internet. Now I would not like to talk about the advantages of the Internet, while the disadvantages you cannot deny is existing. Many people make the most of it to do bad things,
9、 such as trick you that he is need of eagerly and wise you would help him as a friend, or character as your friend to inform your family that you are in danger and need money to save you, etc. All the things can be seen on the newspaper magazines, etc. So it is unwise to trust a so called online fri
10、end. I can jump to the conclude that it is unwise to make friends online, because it is not reality, also we cannot trust others without knowing the person well. So lets do utmost to make the base use of the advantages of the Internet. cherish the friends around us ! Sample 3: Is It Wise to Make Fri
11、ends Online? There is a tendency we cant deny that most of us have access to Internet. Subsequently, making friends online has become a common thing. Some may argue that making friends online isnt a good choice, however, personally, I hold the idea that it is wiser to make friends online. On one han
12、d, its a kind of company. When we live in our apartment, we seldom communicate to the neighbors, esp. that our family members are outside, the sense of feel lonely overcome us. Therefore, in order to get rid of this, we need to find someone to talk with. Then making friends online is a good way to s
13、olve this problem. Meanwhile, we can not only gain friendship, but also exchange our minds. In this way, we obtain a sense of satisfaction from talking with a stranger who will tend to say beautiful words toward us. On the other hand, making friends online help us enrich our sight. We make friends,
14、coming from different areas, accordingly, we obtain a lot of information that we cant get from our limited knowledge. Sometimes, friends online encourage us to read helpful books where will be able to learn more. All in all, from my point of view, making friends is helpful for enriching our knowledg
15、e and helping us encourage with others, hence, it is adviseable to make friends online as long as we use it properly. Sample 4: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? Nowadays, it has been a fashion to make friends online, and more and more teenagers, college students and even many adults will spend a l
16、ot of time chatting with people on the Internet. But I dont think it is wise to make friends online. Firstly, most of people will not reveal their real identity on the Internet, which will not enable you to make true friends. Just imagine, a young lady you are talking with may be an old man, and Im
17、sure we will feel very bad when we are exposed to the truth. Besides, the friends online can bring bad effect to people, especially for teenagers. The unhealthy stuff will both physically and psychologically influence young people and, in a certain degree, can lead an unproper way to their whole lif
18、e. At last, making friends online can do bad to the relationship between you and your family and friends in real life. Being addicted to the Internet makes you ignore the reality. You will be angry about your parents persuading and after a long time, maybe you will find you have lost the ability of
19、how to communicate with others properly. In a word, it is not wise to make friends online. I hope everyone can focus on the reality instead of wasting too much time making friends on the Internet. Sample 5: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? With the Internet becoming an indispensable part of modern
20、 peoples life, making friends online enjoys its great popularity, especially among young people. However, is it wise to make friends online, as many parents and teachers are worrying about? As far as I am concerned, I strongly oppose being addicted to making friends online. Firstly, too much attenti
21、on to online friends distracts your concerns to the true friends and families in the real world. If we look around, we often find a lot of young people staying online and chatting with online friends all day long. By the same time, the communication between them and the friends around them are becom
22、ing less and less. Therefore, they feel lonelier in real life and spend more time on Internet. Besides, online friends are often disguised. A large number of cases have proved that many criminals make use of Internet to cheat of money or love. Even if they are not cheaters, they tend to be totally d
23、ifferent persons when you get in actual contact with them. Theres always a gap between the real world and the imaginary one. Nevertheless, it is unwise to make friends online. Those who are indulging in Internet should cast your eyesight to the friendship and kinship in the real life. What you shoul
24、d do is to seek solution, but not to escape. 便条写作评分标准 日期 格式(2分): 称呼 结尾 内容(3分)：涵盖全部内容 语言(4分)：语法，词法正确 语言得体性(1分)：总分在8分及以上可加次分 总字数：50-60字，少于40或多于80扣1分日期： 右上角, April 22nd, 2007 22 April, 2007 Apr(.) 22, 2007 22/4/2007 4/22/2007 April 22nd Apr(.) 22称呼： 在日期下一行左侧， Dear Jimmy, Dear Jimmy: Jimmy, Jimmy: 结尾： 右
25、下方，Truly yours, Yours truly, Yours sincerely, Sincerely yours, Yours, 日期、称呼、结尾全左对齐也可，如：April 22, 2007Dear Jimmy, Sincerely yours,Sally Sample-study Section B: Note-Writing Write on Answer Sheet Two a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the un
26、iversitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Sample 1: Hello, Jimmy: Im shy to tell you I like other sport. So
27、I dont take part in you club. You may ask: Why? Not because other reasons, I interested more in pingpong and it is more cheaper. I think, except me, more people will support you. Tony Sample 2: Dear Jimmy, Sorry! I couldnt take part in your university swimming club, because I more like football. I h
28、ave to decline your invitation. What a pity! I am sure you will not be angry at me, because you are always my best friend. Sorry again! Yours, Tom April 22nd, 2007 Sample 3: April 22nd, 2007 Dear Jimmy, Thank you for your inviting me to participating in the universitys swimming club. But I regret to
29、 tell you that Im not able to join you, since I found myself more interested in the basketball club. I hope you will not be angry to me. Yours, Mike Sample 4: April 22nd, 2007 Dear Jimmy, Its very kind of you to invite me to join the universitys swimming club. I am most grateful to be asked. However
30、, Ive already joined a basketball club. You know I like playing basketball very much. Im afraid I do not have enough time to take part in two sports. I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying swimming with you. Good luck to your club. Yours, Mi
31、ke 专四英语作文历年题型 从1992年至今的专业四级作文考题来看，全部都为提纲式作文。 提纲式作文为考生提供了明确的英文题目与一个简单的写作提纲，将考生的写作控制在一定范围内。它要求考生紧扣题目主题，并根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。 由于提供的写作提纲一般分为提出论点、论证或描述论点和总结全文等三部分，所以考生必须按照三段式作文将简单的提纲扩展为主题句，再按照主题句作文的写作方法进行文章写作。提纲式作文的三个类型 一、一、 对比选择型：对比选择型： 对比选择型的题目，在提出一个话题后，通常给出关于这个话题的两种观点或两种选择，然后要求考生分析对比两个观点或两种选择的优缺点，从二者中选出一
32、种作为自己作文的论点，并论证其正确性。 1. Advantages/Disadvantages 型1999：A major advantage/disadvantage of advertising on television1995: The advantages and disadvantages of Part-time Jobs 1994: TV: a good thing or a bad thing?提纲式作文的三个类型 一、 对比选择型 2. A/B型2006: Saving Money or Using Tomorrows Money 2004: Will Phones Kil
33、l Letter Writing? 1996: The Main Difference Between My College Life and My Middle School Life 提纲式作文的三个类型 一、 对比选择型 3. Yes/No 型2007: Is It Wise to Make Friends Online? 1997: More Pressure from Academic Studies Does (or Does no) Good to Us 二、给定观点型：二、给定观点型： 给定观点型的题目，在提出一个话题之后，同时也给定了关于这个话题的一种观点，要求考生以这个给定
34、的观点作为作文的论点进行论证。这种类型作文的关键是如何能够很好地论证给定的观点。 2003: The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood 2000: The Importance of Extracurricular Activities 2001: Travel Broadens the Mind 三、自由发挥型三、自由发挥型：自由发挥型的题目，在提出一个话题之后，可能会提供一些大家对此话题的观点和看法，要求考生通过利用已给定的材料做出自己的分析，然后发挥想象力，提出并论证自己的观点。题目对考生的观点不做限定，只要不离开给出的话题即可。考生既可以从题目给出的观
35、点中选一个作为自己的观点，也可以自己提出一个题目没有的想法。 1. My Idea型型2005: My Idea of a University Art Festival 1993: My Idea of Becoming a Teacher in the Future 1992: My View on Reading Extensively 2. The Best Way型型2002: The Best Way to Stay Healthy 1998: One Way to Solve the Problem 专四作文写作方案 1. 审题 2. 联想 3. 谋篇 4.写作 5.修改定稿三段
36、式作文写作手法综述 1、作文开头部分的写作 1）开门见山，点明主题。文章一开头，就交代清楚文章的主题和论点是什么。这种写法适用于“自由发挥型”和“给定观点型”作文。 The best way to stay healthy is to develop a good quality of psychology. Globalization is a double-edged sword to the countries all over the world. 2)正反表态法 在开头一段中把正反观点都表达出来，最后一句写自己的观点。用一、二句介绍主题，再用一、二句介绍正反两种观点或看法，接下来再表
37、达自己的看法。这种写法比较适合“对比选择型”题目。 A Major Advantage/ Disadvantage of Advertising on Television Nowadays more and more advertisements are seen on TV every day. Some people think that advertising on TV can bring us a lot of benefits, but others hold the different opinions. In my opinion, I am in favor of the
38、former. Where Would You Go after Graduation? After graduation, some students choose to go to super cities for career development. Meanwhile, some students prefer to return to their hometowns. As for myself, I would like to go back to my home city. 3)让步法。先把反方观点引出来，做一个肯定的评价，然后笔锋一转，回到自己的观点上来。比较适用于“对比选择
39、型”。 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? Nowadays, young people choose to phone each other rather than write letters. Some are worried that letter writing will be useless in the future. Even so, I still maintain that letter writing will never be killed by phones, despite the fact that we have already st
40、epped into the information age. 4)背景法。即对一个现象进行分析时，先把这个现象事件的原因、后果、发展等背景信息介绍一下，然后再给出自己的看法。这种写法适合“给定观点型”和“自由发挥型”。 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood The modern society is characterized by rapid pace, and people in such a society have to cope with a lot of pressures from either outer world or inner w
41、ill. The most difficult, but necessary thing for them is to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. 5)提问式。 2、作文主体部分的写作 1）段落: 主题句，扩展句，结尾句 2）论证手法：举例、因果、对比与比较 3、作文结尾部分的写作 1）总结式: 对全文做简短的归纳、概括，得出结论 Taking into account of all these factors, we may draw the conclusion that keeping a good mood brings
42、 you not only friendship, but health as well. From the above, we can easily see that TV advertising is beneficial both to manufacturers and consumers on account of the abundant information it provides. 2）重申式：重申主题，即再次强调和肯定文章引言段中阐述的中心思想 To sum up, I think that it is a good idea for me to have both typ
43、es of friendssome who are similar to me and some who are different from me. 3）引申式: 提出建议，提供解决方法。这种方法特别适用于讨论问题的文章，例如对某事的原因或结果的分析，提出建议和解决方法，也可展望未来。 In order to survive the competition of globalization, we must go along with the historic tide of globalization, and actively cope with the opportunity and
44、challenge that the economic globalization brings. Exercise 2006: Recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangzhou, Xian, Chengdu, Shanghai, Wuhan, Nanjing and Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that
45、 saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money today is better. What do you think? Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words You are to write in three parts: In the first part of your article you should clearly present your view. In the second part you should support your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.