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1、Continuation Writing阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Happily, I woke up earlier than my brother as every other day of the week. I jumped out of the bed, got dressed, brushed my teeth, and had breakfast. Saying goodbye to my mother, I got in the car no later than 7:05. I got to school on time, even
2、 though my brother came out of the house late as he used to. It was a Thursday. I was walking to the chemistry room when my phone in my left pocket vibrated(震动). I took it out and looked at the shiny screen. As soon as I saw my fathers name on that screen I realized something was not right.He would
3、not call me in the middle of a school day just to talk. He would want me to focus in school and do well. I answered the phone, and my father sounded worried. He told me to find my brother as soon as possible, walk with him to the school picking-up zone and get in the car with my brother. Our driver
4、would take us back home where my father was. When I was in the car with my brother, my dad called the driver and told him to take us to the hospital. We were going to meet him and my mom there. As soon as my brother and I found about the change in plans, we looked at each other in the eyes. I immedi
5、ately noticed the fear in my brothers eyes. To be honest, I was really scared too, probably more than he was. But I didnt say anything. We arrived at the hospital. I saw my dad waiting for us at the entrance. He was smoking. Seeing my dad smoking made me more worried, I had never seen him smoke befo
6、re. He hated it. As soon as he recognized the white car, he threw the cigarette away. I looked at my brother; He was looking out of the other window. I did not tell him what I just saw. I did not want him to worry. Paragraph 1:The car stopped right in front of my dad. _Paragraph 2: We walked down th
7、e hall with our eyes closed. _Task 1: Reading for elementsWho: father , mother , brother, IWhen: ThursdayWhere: At home-In the school-In the car-In the hospitalWhat: A call from father required me and my brother to go to hospital to meet him and mom. hospitalTask 2: Reading for plotsIn the carPlaceE
8、ventsMood(心情)At homeAt home, I and my brother _ up as usual and_ to school after saying goodbye to my mom.I was _At schoolI was _ to the chemistry room when my father _me. In the phone, He told me a driver would _ me and brother back _ immediately.I was _In the carWhen I and my brother were in the c
9、ar, my father _ the driver to take us to the _to meet him and my _.I felt _ and my brother had a sense of _In the hospitalOur dad _for us at the entrance of the hospital. He disliked smoking but was _ there. When seeing our car, he _ the cigarette away. I became more _?schoolhomeSchoolIn the carHosp
10、italHomeWorst ?WorseGood ?BadOrdinary Task 3: Inferring the development1. 两句定首段2. 二首定二段3. 完整、意料之外、正能量The car stopped right in front of my dad. We walked down the hall with our eyes closed. 在读懂读透全文以后,就可以对后面的故事进行大胆的预测,但却不是天马行空,异想天开。首先我们要记住第一句话:两句定首段。即:我们一定要读透所给的两个句子,分析它们之间的逻辑关系,通过分析推理,最终决定第一段的续写内容。在这篇
11、文章中,两个句子分别是The car stopped right in front of my dad. 和 We walked down the hall with our eyes closed. 读完这两个句子,我们不难看出,在第一段的后面一点,我们一定闭上了眼睛。那么问题来了?谁让我们闭上了眼睛?为什么我们闭上了眼睛?这些问题的出现会进一步帮助我们决定第一段的续写内容。 在决定了第一段的内容以后,我们再来读第二段首句,通过读该句子,我们又可以提出很多的问题,比如: 闭上眼睛我们可能去哪里?闭上眼睛时我们的心情如何?我们闭上眼睛会去哪里呢?我们会在什么时候,什么地方睁开眼睛呢?睁开眼睛以
12、后我们会看到什么呢? 惊喜?恐惧?这些问题的出现会进一步帮助我们梳理出第二段的续写内容。We walked down the hall with our eyes closed.I and my brotherFear surprise/happyMom or other relatives new babyInjured/diedWorried/upset/nervousHappy/delightedFather Surprise a terror new baby someone died Nervous/upset/worried Mother ? Possible answers: T
13、he car stopped right in front of my dad. He opened the door, and I jumped out of the car and hugged him. He noticed that I and my brother were worried and upset. With a smile on his face, he told us he had a big surprise for us. “what good things happen in hospital?” When we approached the hall, my
14、dad asked us to close our eyes and hold his hands. So we did. His warm hands made us feel more secure. We walked down the hall with our eyes closed. Suddenly, we stopped. When we walked into the room, father told us to open our eyes, but we were not in pain. Right next to my mother was the most beautiful thing I had ever seen. It was a lovely baby beside my brother. It occurred to me that my mother had given birth a baby. We are all pleased to have another family member. 4学科网(北京)股份有限公司