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1、How to improve your writingHow to improve your writing抄改连扩抓审书面表达六步法六步法幻灯片幻灯片 23书面表达（满分书面表达（满分2525分）分）人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生语写一篇关于学生网上交友网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。观点，并表达自己的看法。注意：注意：1 1文章必须包括表中的全部内容。文章必须包括表中的全部内容。2 2词数为词数为150150左右。左右。3 3参考词汇参考词汇: :网络朋友网络朋友on-line f
2、riend(s)on-line friend(s)， 上当受骗上当受骗to be cheatedto be cheated 赞成的理由赞成的理由 反对的理由反对的理由 你的看法你的看法 1 1广交朋友广交朋友2 2可自由表达思想可自由表达思想3 3利于外语学习利于外语学习 1 1浪费时间浪费时间2 2影响学习影响学习3 3可能上当受骗可能上当受骗 ? ?Listing useful phrasesListing useful phrases 赞成的理由赞成的理由 反对的理由反对的理由 你的看法你的看法 1 1广交朋友广交朋友2 2可自由表达思想可自由表达思想3 3利于外语学习利于外语学习 1
3、1浪费时间浪费时间2 2影响学习影响学习3 3可能上当受可能上当受骗骗 ? ?make friends make friends express ones ideasexpress ones ideasbe beneficial tobe beneficial toa waste of timea waste of timehave a bad influence onhave a bad influence onget cheatedget cheatedforagainstMaking sentencesMaking sentencesmake friends : make friends
4、 : express ones ideas:express ones ideas:. .be beneficial tobe beneficial to: :forThe Internet helps make friends on line. students can freely express their ideas on line.Chatting on line is beneficial to their foreign language studies . Making sentencesMaking sentencesa waste of time:a waste of tim
5、e:Making friends on line is Making friends on line is a waste of timea waste of timehave a bad influence on:have a bad influence on:Making friends on Making friends on line will have a bad influence on study . line will have a bad influence on study . get cheated: get cheated: Some students get chea
6、tedSome students get cheated on line. on line. againstCombining sentences into a paragraphCombining sentences into a paragraph1.The Internet helps make friends on line.1.The Internet helps make friends on line.2.Students can more freely express their ideas.2.Students can more freely express their id
7、eas.3.Chatting on line is beneficial to their foreign language 3.Chatting on line is beneficial to their foreign language studiesstudies . . . Should students make friends on line ? Some Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make people are for it .The int
8、ernet helps make many friends .many friends .Chatting on lineChatting on line ,students can ,students can more freely express their ideas, which is also more freely express their ideas, which is also beneficial to their foreign language studies .beneficial to their foreign language studies .Combinin
9、g sentences into a Combining sentences into a paragraphparagraph1. Making friends on line is a waste of time1. Making friends on line is a waste of time2.Making friends on line will have a bad influence on 2.Making friends on line will have a bad influence on study . study . 3.Some students get chea
10、ted on line.3.Some students get cheated on line. Others ,Others ,howeverhowever, are against it , saying that making , are against it , saying that making friends on line is a waste of time ,friends on line is a waste of time ,which will have a which will have a bad influence on study .Besidesbad in
11、fluence on study .Besides ,some students get ,some students get cheated.cheated.Forming an articleForming an articleShould students make friends on line ? Some people are Should students make friends on line ? Some people are for it .The internet helps make many friends .for it .The internet helps m
12、ake many friends .Chatting on Chatting on lineline ,students can more freely express their ideas, ,students can more freely express their ideas, whichwhich is is also beneficial to their foreign language studies .also beneficial to their foreign language studies .Others ,Others ,howeverhowever, are
13、against it , saying that making , are against it , saying that making friends on line is a waste of time ,friends on line is a waste of time ,which willwhich will have a bad have a bad influence on studyinfluence on study . .BesidesBesides ,some students get cheated ,some students get cheated on lin
14、e.on line. In my opinionIn my opinion, students should place their study, health , students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can find it easily in our classmates and other people around us
15、.find it easily in our classmates and other people around us. Sample WritingSolid story with complete outlines内容充实，要点全面 Changeable in language and elegant in wording 语言丰富，文字优美 Fluent in context, a clear train of thought, natural transition行文连贯，思路清晰，过渡自然 ideasforwritingsNMET English Writing 以前英语作文评分依
16、据是根据要点和语言准确度而定，但近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。 句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档 。NMET English WritingNMET English Writing:advanced sentence structuresNMET English Writing3. Participle and combined sentences make a story more fluent
17、ly and actively. NMET English Writing4. No good of repetitive use of the same word or expression in one sentence.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。避免重复使用某一单词或短语。 NMET English Writing1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）（使用名词性从句）2. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句使用倒装句)3. He did n
18、ot know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚用虚拟语气）拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.To enrich your writingTo enrich your writingWeak as I am, Ill make the effort. It was no
19、t until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says.
20、 （使用让步状语从句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用祈使句）9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to s
21、chool.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.NMET English Writing:5. Use of transitional words for story-telling (description of events). 学会使用过渡词，组织顺序，合并成学会使用过渡词，组织顺序，合并成文文怎样使用恰当的连接词怎样使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇时间顺序 first, second, finally, the moment ,immediately,
22、suddenly, at the beginning, later空间顺序here, there, on one sideon the other side,in front of, at the back of, next to 对称顺序for one thing, for the other thing, on one hand,on the other hand转折顺序but, however, while, though, otherwise因果顺序because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)条件顺序as long as, so lon
23、g as, on condition that, if, unless让步顺序though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what,when, where)ever递进顺序whats more, besides, to make the matter worse,whats worse过渡性插入语I think, Im afraid, in a word, As we all knowMay 25, Sunday Cloudy This morning I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yest
24、erday. _The salesgirl treated me coldly. _She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. _She said that I made it dirty. _She gave various excuses to refuse my request. _I quarreled with her. _The manager turned up. He asked what was the matter. _He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criti
25、cized (批批评评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.HoweverAt the beginningLaterIn a wordI got so angry thatAfter that/ As soon as/ The momentJust at that momentLadies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to ou
26、r school! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. I
27、t used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . 书面表达书面表达：Now it is taking on a new look.结 论审题，抓点审题，抓点造句，成文造句，成文改错，誉写改错，誉写NMET English WritingPractice书面表达 某英文网站正在开展关于填报志愿时首先考虑专业还是学校的讨论。请你根据下面所给的要点用英语
28、写一篇短文，描述学生中存在的两种想法，并谈谈你自己的看法，将此文在该网站BBS上发表。观点观点理由理由1首先选专业首先选专业1可以学习自己感兴趣的东西可以学习自己感兴趣的东西2便于将来从事自己下的工作。便于将来从事自己下的工作。2首先选择大学首先选择大学1。学习环境对人的成长很重要；。学习环境对人的成长很重要；2。名牌大学的毕业生在求职时常会受到青睐。名牌大学的毕业生在求职时常会受到青睐3你的看法你的看法（考生自拟）（考生自拟）注意：词数150左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数Every student will be faced with the question after he passes
29、 the college entrance examinations; Should I choose a good major or a good university first?_Every student will be faced with the question when he passes the college entrance examinations: Should I choose a good major or a good university first? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that
30、they can learn what they are interested in. It will also make it possible for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believe that the environment is important to ones development and that graduates from leading universities are often more likely to find
31、a good job . In my opinion, the best choice is a good major at a good university. If we cannot obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if we try our best. Sample Writing书面表达六步法一、审题 reviewing style, tens
32、e, person, etc.style, tense, person, etc.书面表达六步法二、抓要点List useful phrases.Grasp the key points.书面表达六步法三、扩展成句Make sentences with the listed phrases.书面表达六步法四、连句成段，连段成文时间 空间 细节连贯 呼应Combine sentences into paragraphs to form an article.书面表达六步法五、查错改错要尽量剔除错误Check the contents carefully.书面表达六步法六、誊写卷面不工整扣5分Pay more attention to your handwriting.