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1、概要写作概要写作 Summary Writing By Jennie 英语概要写作指导英语概要写作指导 高考英语概要写作,是综合写作任务的一种常见形式, 被广泛应用于教学和评估活动中。 概要写作的目的不仅是要重述原文的主旨要义, 还要在不改变原文意思的前提下变换词汇和句子结构, 也就是要使用自己的语言写概要。 概要写作中, 提供给考生一篇350以内的短文, 要求其基于该短文写出一篇80词左右的内容概要。内容:能覆盖原文所有内容要点;能准确、客观地表述原文内容要点及其逻辑关系。语言运用:能使用自己的语言;能使用准确、恰当的词汇和句子结构。篇章结构:1. 能合理组织原文要点;2. 能使用恰当的连接
2、手段使概要内容完整、连贯。 注意要点具体步骤具体步骤1. 确确定主题句。定主题句。确定阅读文章的主题句, 一般在段首。主题句不明确的需要自己组合。2. 寻找关键词。寻找关键词。分析主题句意义, 确定关键词, 关键词一般体现为名词、形 容词, 关键词的数目决定了概括的信息浓度。3. 确定时态和人称。确定时态和人称。如果阅读材料是过去时, 那么基本时态用过去时;如果 是现在的, 那么基本时态用现在时。但模板的开头语一般为现在时, 如: The passage tells us that一般情况下采用第三人称来写作4. 重组支撑句。重组支撑句。支撑句的意义在逻辑上受制于主题句, 可以是补充过程或者
3、提供证据。3、4两个步骤其实就是改写改写阅读材料的主题句和支撑句。5.总结句总结句,这是画龙点睛之处。 Example: Read the following and write a summary 阅读原文并找出每段的主题句阅读原文并找出每段的主题句P1./2.P3.P4.Bees are essential to the production of food we eat. Unfortunately, bees have been disappearing at an alarming rate.There were many theories of the disappearance
4、of the bees.No one knows for sure what causes bees to diappear, but losing bees is very costly for the economy.增加每段的细节增加每段的细节( (支撑句)支撑句)P1./p2 Bees are essential to the production of food we eat. Unfortunately, bees have been disappearing at an alarming rate.增加每段的细增加每段的细节节( (支撑句)支撑句)P3. There were m
5、any theories of the disappearance of the bees.1. The most convincing one has to do with pesticides and lifestyles of bees today.2. Beekeepers get their income from renting bees to pollinate crops.3. Up to 30 percent bees die during transport due to stress .4. Instead, they live on a sweet liquid fro
6、m corn, usually polluted with pesticides.增加每段的细节增加每段的细节( (支撑句)支撑句)P4No one knows for sure what causes bees to diappear, but losing bees is very costly for the economy.What should we do?改改写每一个句子,不能用原句型。写每一个句子,不能用原句型。P1./2.Bees are essential to the production of food we eat. Unfortunately, bees have b
7、een disappearing at an alarming rate.When it comes to humans food production, bees are very important. However, it is a great pity that they have been becoming fewer and fewer rapidly.P3.There were many theories of the disappearance of the bees.1. The most convincing one has to do with pesticides an
8、d lifestyles of bees today. -Pesticides and lifestyles of bees today are the greatest reasons. -There are various reasons why bees have been disappearing.P3.2. Beekeepers get their income from renting bees to pollinate crops.3. Up to 30 percent bees die during transport due to stress .4. Instead, th
9、ey live on a sweet liquid from corn, usually polluted with pesticides. Rented for pollunation now, bees have to travel around, many dying from stess or polluted food.改写每一个句子,不能用原句型。改写每一个句子,不能用原句型。P4 No one knows for sure what causes bees to diappear, but losing bees is very costly for the economy.Wh
10、at should we do?What really causes the bees to disappear is unknown. However, the number of bees is becoming smaller and smaller, which does great harm to the economy.Only when we find efficient ways to protect them can we save the useful little insects.合成短文 When it comes to humans food production,
11、bees are very important. However, it is a great pity that they have been lost rapidly. Pesticides and lifestyles of bees today are thought to be the greatest reasons for the bees disappearance. Rented for pollunation now, bees have to travel around, many dying from stess or polluted food. What really causes the bees to disappear is unknown. However, the number of bees is becoming smaller and smaller, which does great harm to the economy. Only when we find efficient ways to protect them can we save the useful little insects.