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1、雅思考官如何表达雅思写作教育类观点看看雅思考官如何表达雅思写作教育类观点,一起来看看吧,下面小编就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。看看雅思考官如何表达雅思写作教育类观点考官观点示例:教育类观点下关于科技在教育中的利弊Technology in Education: AdvantagesTechnology is a powerful tool to engage studentsTechnology can make lessons much more interestingStudents can do research using online resourcesStudents can stu

2、dy at their own placeAdults can take distance learning coursesStudents can study whenever and wherever they wantStudents also learn skills which are useful for their future jobsFor example, they learn to write reports using a word processorTechnology in Education: DisadvantagesPeople rely too much o

3、n computersYoung learners do not become proficient in some basic skillsThey use word processors and spelling may sufferPeople should be able to write a letter by handTechnology is no substitute for a real teacherLearners need a structured courseAn experienced teacher knows what materials to chooseCo

4、mputers are expensive to maintain and can be unreliable雅思考试写作范文:年轻人压力大Write about the following topic:In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies.What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?Model A

5、nswer:Some young people find themselves with very little leisure time. I believe there are two main causes of this situation. The first is parental pressure and the second is competition for university places.Every parent wants to see his or her child do well in school and go on to have a successful

6、 career. This means that they exert pressure on their children to spend hours each day studying at home. Some even arrange extra tuition for their children. In my own country, it is not uncommon for young people to spend another three hours at small private schools after their usual day at stale sch

7、ool is over. As a consequence, their leisure time is extremely limited and the pressure on them is considerable.The second cause is related to the higher education system. Each year, there are many times more applicants to university than there are university places. The result of this is that only

8、those students with very high grades manage to obtain a place. This contributes to the pressure on teenagers since they must work long hours to have any chance of success.One solution to the problem is for parents to be made aware of the effects of the pressure they put on their children. Schools sh

9、ould inform parents that too much pressure can lead to anxiety, stress and depression. They should be shown ways in which they can help their children lead more balanced lives with a reasonable amount of leisure time.Another effective measure would be for the government to invest in the creation of

10、more university places. This could be done by expanding existing universities or by building new ones. This would have the effect of easing competition for places giving teenagers some of their precious free lime back.雅思考试写作范文:全球化的弊端Write about the following topic:As mass communication and transport

11、 continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Model Answer:Globalization means t

12、hat in some ways people around the world are becoming more and more similar. We often eat the same food, watch the same TV programmes, listen to the same music and we wear the same clothes. Some of this at least can be blamed on the spread of multinational brands available all over the world.On the

13、surface, it may appear as if the global diversity of cultural identities is being lost. If, the argument goes, people in Tokyo and London look and dress the same, then that must mean that cultural differences are disappearing. However, I would argue that this is a very narrow definition of culture a

14、nd that in fact cultural differences are as present as ever.Cultural Identity is built on far more than just the films we watch or the jeans we wear. The foundation of cultural identity is shared values. When you look in detail at different cultures, you realize that the things that are important to

15、 one culture can be very different from the things valued by another culture.Take my own culture, India, as an example and compare it to a very different culture, Japan. Although I have never visited Japan personally, I believe that it is a culture which places a lot of value on hard work and that p

16、eople often work very long hours. The Indian people, in contrast, greatly value their leisure time and strive to spend as much lime with their family as they possibly can. Even if we consume the same products, I would argue that there are still some very deep-rooted differences.To summarize, I do no

17、t accept that that total loss of cultural identity is inevitable, despite the influence of large companies and their products around the globe.雅思写作高分技巧解析雅思写作高分技巧之统一性一篇优秀的作文不仅仅在于词汇与句式的表达上,更注重的是这篇文章是否满足了统一性的要求,也就是说文章是否紧扣主题,段落安排是否合理,句子论述是否恰到好处等等。统一性是指所写的作文应该紧扣主题,也就是作者的核心观点,并要注意人称、文体和时态上的一致。此外,文章内容要均衡,不

18、偏多或缺少。统一性除了从文章整体上来体现之外,还要求每个段落的句子同样要满足统一性。一个段落通常由主题句和扩展句所构成,所以句子统一性则体现在主题句和扩展句上面。主题句是一个段落必不可少的成分,是一个段落的核心所在,也就是作者想要表达的中心观点,在一个段落中主题句应该只说明一个问题,或是一个问题的某个方面。每段只应有一个中心,任何偏离中心之外的句子都是无用的。而扩展句则必须紧密围绕着这个中心,给予充分说明,通过分析和议论,从而形成一个有机的整体。总之,文章的统一性是判断雅思作文质量的重要标准之一,考生要多多重视。雅思写作高分技巧之完整性文章仅仅有统一性还远远不够,完整性也是不可或缺的因素。文章

19、段落的主题思想除了由主题句提出之外,还要依靠扩展句来实现,这就要求扩展句进一步补充和说明,比如举出具体事例加以证明,以便把主题解释清楚等,从而构成一个完整的段落。不过,即使扩展句表达充分,主题句却缺失或是没有恰当地表达出来,也会给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。所以,只有保证文章的完整性才会让文章更加饱满贴切地表达出作者的所思所想,让读者理解的更加透彻。雅思写作高分技巧之连贯性文章的连贯性与统一性紧密相关,是组词造句的基本要求。句子的统一性和连贯性是相辅相成的,统一性要求紧扣主题,而连贯性则要求整篇文章前后连贯,也要求句子和段落之间相互关联并衔接自然。此外,句子与句子之间也要有一种自然逻辑关系,进而形

20、成有机的整体。但是很多考生在写作时往往想到哪写到哪,句子安排的乱七八糟,缺乏连续性,结果只能给读者留下一种不成文或是找不到逻辑的感觉。为了达到连贯性的要求,考生可以适当地运用一些连接词,比如therefore、however等等,让文章内容连接的更加自然顺畅。雅思考官如何表达雅思写作教育类观点相关文章: 雅思口语写作中话题词汇的重要性雅思考试大作文真题范文 小编给大家带来了雅思考试大作文真题范文,一起来学习一下吧,下面小编就和大家分享, 雅思写作Task1常出现的两大问题 对于雅思写作重要性已经是不争的事实。众多考生在写作训练的时候,往往忽视Task1里出 雅思成绩如何复议 雅思写作压分?雅思复议前你需要考虑这些,希望能帮助到大家,下面小编就和大家分 雅思写作提高之从5分到6.5分的5天过程分享 雅思写作提高之从5分到6.5分的5天过程分享,一起来学习一下吧,下面小编就和大家分享, 第 9 页 共 9 页

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