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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上（七分范文）Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career， while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.Discuss both views and give your opinion.When they finish school， teenagers face the dilemma that whether
2、to get a job or continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school， I would argue that it is better to go to college or university.The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young people want to start earning mon
3、ey as soon as possible. In this way， they can become independent， and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of their career， young people who decide to find work， rather than continue their studies， may progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real e
4、xperience and learn practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a successful career.On the other hand， I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. Firstly， academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example，
5、 it is impossible to become a doctor， teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result， university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities， and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly， the job market is becoming increasingl
6、y competitive， and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.For the reasons mentioned above， it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their ca
7、reers if they continue their studies beyond school level.以上就是这篇雅思写作7分范文的全部内容，字数足够。这篇雅思写作范文所占的观点是应该在大学继续学习，但是对另外的观点也做了相应的论述，所用的篇章结构的语法结构都值得大家借鉴。Band 5Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function
8、 of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people thi
9、nk that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and ski
10、ll is the students needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would be very disa
11、ppointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace makes a university progress. The new skills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound s
12、trategies to do research and make it more modernization.Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries economy stro
13、ng.In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every universitys basic function.只能拿到5分的原因：一、这个题目中有两方的观点：some 及others的，很明显这位考生在后面的论证过程中完全忽视了others的观点,都在一味地论证some 的观点的正确性，于是考官给出的评语是：it does not address all parts of the question.写作建议NO.3：Do not neg
14、lect any part, or you will regret your mark.不要忽视任何东西，否则你的分数会让你很伤心。二、这位考生在连接词和复杂句型上都表现得不错，可是他太偷懒了，knowledge and skill这个词组一共用了9次，这种高频率的repetition让这位考生付出了比较惨重的代价，所以看者希望你们能够汲取这样的教训，多注意Paraphrase的练习。尤其是常考的考试主题所可能涉及到的高频单词更是要做好homework. knowledge and skill就属于top 3 的高频考题的教育类，所以这类的词汇一定是多多准备才对，如 expertise, co
15、nversance, instruction, competence, aptitude, technique, prowess, dexterity 都可以拿来替换这两个词。写作建议NO.4：Paraphrase helps you parachute into a higher band.改写能助你拿到高分。Band 6Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate
16、 rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as wel
17、l as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea,
18、it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to students house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise school work.
19、 If they have experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the greatest plus point to go to the famous well-known high school. Moreover, there are four big school exam and two national examinations to test students level of studies. Generally, only the highest 40% can go to the good quality highsc
20、hools and colleges children learn as much as they can, to win the competition to obtain good quality schools.On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and study individually with their own tutors, there are problems. They become selfish. They become careless and dont help others a lot
21、 if it is about studies. There will be no co-operations for them. Then, why are there companies for many people to work in? each of them are clever, however, there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. To co-operate is to improve this part. People talk and listen to what others thinking o
22、f and learn. That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher.In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each other. therefore, I w
23、ant parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-operation, not compete and ranking them.问题分析：从论证大主题的角度来说，这一篇的最后的收尾是co-operation 更重要的成立的，但是这位考生在文字数量分配上缺乏规划，分配给competition的文字明显多于给co-operation的，这样就给了考官一个非常合情合理的借口扣分，实在是遗憾啊!写作建议NO.5：If it is your preference, give it more reference.如果你更认同
24、那个观点，那就在这个观点上多写点吧。如果我们进一步看下Body段里的细节内容，其实这位考生的语法功力和逻辑论证能力比上面那位5分同学还要差，但是这篇文章把题目中的两个方面都提到，没有犯我的NO.3建议中的错误。除此之外，文字总量上这一篇文章叫上两篇都有绝对的优势，所以再强调下数量真的也很重要。写作建议NO.6：A quantitative change causes a qualitative change.量变带来质变。Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sport
25、s stadiums. They should spend more money on medical care and education.Do you agree or disagree?Much discussion concerning allocation of resources assumes that the government should spend money on medicine and education rather than on theatres and sports stadiums. In my opinion, this issue should be
26、 examined from the angle of whether the investment benefits the great majority of the population.The institutions of medical care and education, undoubtedly, should receive priority in the allocation of a governments expenditures, at the thought of millions of children from deprived backgrounds who
27、now get a substandard education, and who would require a relatively high quality of education if they are to enjoy anything approaching equality of opportunity in later life. Another pressing need of society is improvement of medical care for the adult poor, for the aged, and so forth down the list.
28、Theatres and sports stadiums are institutions for promoting human culture. A successful theatrical event is an exciting and stimulating experience, whether it occurs in a grand theatre or a high school auditorium. Spectators as well as those involved in the production feel this excitement. Sports st
29、adiums, on the other hand, attract millions of spectators to watch professionals play every year. Many more millions watch games on television, read about them in newspapers, and discuss them with their friends. Therefore, can we say that these are unnecessary public expenditures the government shou
30、ld ignore?In conclusion, today man is becoming ever more aware of his spiritual needs. Medicine and education are needs that we recognize, but are contacts with theatrical or sports events also basic needs?(250 words)Some people believe that students who want to go to university after graduation fro
31、m high school should have about one years time to get a job to obtain work experience or have a travel to enlarge their vision.Do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?High school students who intend to study at university should attend tertiary education after graduation. To spend one years t
32、ime doing a job to acquire work experience or to travel for broadening ones vision is, to my mind, a waste of time and energy.First, university education is the continuation of high school education for those students who want to pursue their learning at an advanced level. A break of one year from a
33、cademic study will probably weaken ones memory of what has been learned, especially for those who will study such theoretical subjects as mathematics, physics or chemistry.Besides, many nations have established one examination that all students must pass to qualify for admission to a university. For
34、 example, in China there is a college entrance examination. Anyone who fails in the examination will be denied of admission into a university.Furthermore, one years work or travel does not help students much in their academic studies at university because it is unpredictable for ones work experience
35、 to be integrated into ones studies of specific subjects, to say nothing of traveling experience. Even if some subjects, such as MBA, require students to have work experience, one years work experience, however, is not sufficient to meet the requirements of three or five years, and ones work experie
36、nce should, after all, be related to management.To conclude, I would rather suggest that universitys curriculum allow the integration of academic study with practical training for the compensation for students lack of work experience.(250 words)It is suggested that all the young adults should undert
37、ake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and the young people?范文：In modern societies, it is increasingly popular that young people volunteer on weekends in the local community service center to help the people in need. If
38、all the youngsters do it in a regular way, the benefits are obvious to both the community and these young adults although there are some minor drawbacks as well.It can be argued that the advantages of doing unpaid community service are enormous. Indeed, when an old person feels sick, the volunteers
39、could offer first aid before the doctor or the ambulance arrives. Likewise, if a disabled person has difficulty doing some daily activities such as shopping, the assistance from young volunteers is indispensable. Moreover, as far as the young people are concerned, they could develop the sense of res
40、ponsibility, independence as well as interpersonal skills in the process of helping others in the neighborhood. In this way, people may live in harmony in the community.Nevertheless, the downsides of volunteer community service are worth mentioning. In fact, in the city like Shanghai, an increasing
41、number of graduates find it harder to make a living on their own. Thus, if all of the young adults are required to do full-time unpaid job in a fixed period, some of them would have no income source, which is unrealistic to these youngsters. In addition, it is believed that community service could possibly take up their time of acquiring knowledge.Therefore, compared with the merits of volunteer community service offered by the young adults, the demerits of that are just a few but cannot be overlooked.专心-专注-专业