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1、2019 外研版必修三Unit 2 Making a difference2.4 Writing人物传记芯%,学习内容写一篇人物传记1 .文体特点高考中有关人物介绍的常见书面表达主题是：介绍同学、朋友、老师、父母、名人等。本单元侧重介 绍大国工匠式人物，写作时应注意以下几个方面：1 .写作思路：概括介绍人物的基本情况一介绍人物品质，叙述生平事迹一评价人物形象。2 .选取素材：在文章的框架确定后，对要介绍的人物相关素材的选取很关键。选材要注意取舍，应 该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。要突出重点，详写细述能表现文章主题的重要情节。3 .语言运用：写人物介绍类的文章，需要用具体的事件
2、和生动的语言对人物进行准确描绘，且语言 的表现力要强，这样才能将人物刻画得更丰满。4 .注意事项：信息点的表述不必完全按照题目所给的顺序，可根据文章结构安排做适当调整。介绍 人物时，时态多用一般过去时，也可灵活穿插使用其他时态。2 .篇章结构人物介绍的基本框架：1 .引入话题；2 .具体介绍（介绍人物的基本情况,如出生birth-place,年龄age,职业occupation,兴趣interest, 教育背景 education background,外貌 appearance,性格 character,主要事迹 big events,成就 achievement 等）;3 .总结全文（对所
3、介绍人物进行整体评价evaluation,从人物身上学到的精神）。穆知谢独写作指导话题词汇（汉译英）Positive words:1 ,杰出的，有成就的 remarkable /brilliant/outstanding/extraordinary/ accomplished/distinguished2 .有奉献精神的 committed/devoted/dedicated3 .意志坚定的 determined/strong-willed/strong-minded答案及解析：I审题体 裁：应用文+说明文主体时态：一般现在时，一般过去时主要人称：第三人称，第二人称要点：(1)书信的寒暄语；(
4、2)介绍自己喜欢的中国历时人物；(3)该人物在历史上做出的主要贡献；(4)表述该人物对你的影响。n写作提纲Paral:交代写信背景和目的；Para2:历史人物相关信息介绍(姓名，生平，主要贡献)以及该人物对自己的影响；Para3:表示期望。Dear Jim,Learning that you are very interested in Chinese history, I feel very happy and proud of you.As to me, my favourite figure in Chinese history is Li Bai. He is a great poet
5、 who was born in Tang Dynasty. During his lifetime, he wrote a great number of excellent poems, all of which have a great effect on Chinese culture. Influenced by Li Bai, I also like writing poems in my spare time and some of them have been published in magazines.If you want to know more about Chine
6、se history, dont hesitate to ask me.Yours,Li HuaPassage 3某英文报刊在征集关于体坛人物事迹介绍的英文作品，请你以“My Favorite Figure in Sports”为名向该报 社投稿，介绍你最喜欢的一名体坛人物。内容包括：1.基本信息及取得的主要成就；2.成长经历；3.他/她 的经历带给你的启示。注意：1 .字数120词左右；2.文中不能提及自己的真实姓名及个人信息。答案：My Favorite Figure in SportsMy favorite figure in sports is Deng Yaping, a talen
7、ted woman player of table tennis from Henan Province. She was the table tennis champion of the 11th Asian Games and the 41st World Table Tennis Championship, and in the 25th Olympic Games she won two gold medals.Why can she make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of her short figure?
8、It is her hard work and determination to succeed that helped her to overcome many disadvantages.At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis under the guidance of her father. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a me
9、mber of the National Training Team.From her way to success, I have learned that shortcoming is nothing and hard work is everything.Passage 4你校英文报刊征稿，题目为“The Most Unforgettable Person”。请你向该英文报刊投稿，记叙一位难忘的人。内容包括：1.其人的基本信息；2.举例说明难忘的事情；3描述自己的感受。注意：1.词数110词左右；2 .文中不得透露自己的真实姓名及所读学校名字。答案：In my life I have m
10、et a great many people who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever knew is my English teacher.What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First and foremost, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer an awakening of
11、a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Furthermore, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipat
12、ed his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.4 .坚持不懈的 pers
13、everant/persistent5 .勤奋的 hardworking/diligent/industrious6雄心壮志的ambitious7,负责的responsible8 .热心的 warm-hearted9.慷慨的 generous10.积极的 optimistic/positive 11 .有主见的、独立的 independent12.精力充沛的energetic13.有勇气的courageousPositive expressions：1 ,以积极的态度面对生活 take/adopt a positive attitude towards life2 .对工作有热情 have a
14、 passion for work3,全身心投入工作 devote/commit oneself to work= be devoted /committed to work4 .专注于科学研究 be absorbed in scientific research5,面对困难 meet with/be faced with/face/encounter difficulties6 .克月艮困难 get over/overcome/conquer the difficulties7 .在中起重要作用 play a crucial/an irreplaceable role in.8 .取得巨大成
15、就 make remarkable achievements9,对做出了重大贡献 make tremendous contributions to10被授予一 be awarded sth/be presented with sth .11 .受到高度评价be highly thought of12,给我树立榜样 set a good example for /to me=I model after him/her篇章结构词汇：Para. 1 （引入话题）想/渴望做某事：非常高兴做某事：介绍某物给某人：练一练：知道你想了解我国著名的农业科学家袁隆平，我非常高兴地向你介绍他。Para. 2 （具
16、体介绍）12 （出生日期/出生地+职业/兴趣）出生于：酷爱；对有强烈的兴趣：在方面有天赋：eg. （出生于）Shanghai, on September 12th, 1980, Yao Ming is one of the best basketball players in China.归纳总结句型：其他句型： 人名，（who was） bom in.，is.例子可改为：练一练：袁隆平1930年9月7日出生于重庆，刻苦学习，酷爱农业科学。（用分词做状语）（2）（用定语从句）13 （教育+主要事迹）被某大学录取：从某大学毕业：获取博士学位： 主修：做工作：把奉献给：做方面的研究：eg.（从毕业
17、）Peking University in 1993, he was sent to（做工彳乍）a teacher in Wuhan University.练一练：1.他 1953 年毕业于西南农学院（Southwest Agriculture College）。14 .他把他的一生奉献给了水稻研究。15 （外貌+性格）（1）外貌：英俊的：优雅的： 有魅力的：（2）性格：慷慨的：很强的意志力：坚定的决心：在获得巨大的成功：使某人能够做某事：eg.（有着很强的意志力和坚定的决心）,MadameCurie（在获得巨大的成功）discovering radium, which（使她能够赢得）the
18、Nobel Prize.归纳总结句型：练一练：袁隆平有着很强的意志力和坚定的决心，在增加水稻产量上获得了巨大的成功, 这为许多国家解决了粮食不足的问题。（用with短语，用非限制性定语从句）16 （成就）做出巨大贡献：被尊称为： 被授予： 作为而闻名：过着的生活： 关心；喜欢：练一练：1 .因此，他被尊称为“杂交水稻之父” （Father of Hybrid Rice）并闻名，因他对世界的巨大贡献被授予了许多奖项。2 .尽管他很出名，但他过着简朴的生活，不计名利。（用as引导的让步状语从句）Para. 3 （总结全文）（评价+学习）受尊重的：对评价高：给我们树立了好的榜样：值得我们崇拜和尊重：
19、练一练：袁隆平给我们树立了好的榜样，他真的是一位出色的科学家，值得我们崇拜和尊重。（用 分词做状语，用定语从句）写作背景话题句式（英译汉）1 .梁建英于1972年4月出生于山东省。Liang Jianyingin April 1972.2 .梁建英是中国高铁总设计师。Liang Jianying is of Chinas High-speed Railway.3 . 2007年她研制出国内首列时速为300-350公里的高速列车。In 2007, she developed the first G-Series High-Speed Train in China which was operat
20、ed 300-350 kph.4 . 2017年，、复兴号”以350公里的时速投入运营。In 2017, CHINA STANDARD EMU with the speed of 350 kph.5 .高铁运营领域取得了新的突破.（被动语态）in the operation of the High-speed Railway.6 .梁建英为我们树立了一个好的榜样。Liang Jianying has.7 .她的艰苦奉献和革新精神激励着我们努力学习，将来为祖国的发展做出贡献。Her spirit of painstaking dedication and innovation and the d
21、evelopment of our country in the future.答案：1. was born in Shandong Province2. general designer3. at the speed of4. Were put into service5. A new breakthrough was made6. Set a good example to us7. Inspires us to study hardcontribute to句式升级：1 .用同位语合并句1和句22 .用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并句4和句53 .用过去分词短语作原因状语改写句7答
22、案：8. Liang Jianying , general designer of Chinas High-speed Railway, was born in Shandong Provincein April 1972.9. In 2017, CHINA STANDARD EMU were put into service with the speed of 350 kph, which made a new breakthrough in the operation of the High-speed Railway.10. Inspired by Her spirit of pains
23、taking dedication and innovation, we will study hard to contribute to the development of our country in the future.常用句式：开场白常用表达：1 .When it comes to/ In terms of the figure I respect most, .undoubtedly comes to the top of the list.2 .Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, is my favorite.3
24、.” a track and field athlete, is the most admirable figure that has come to my mind.4. There are numerous athletes making great contributions to our China, among whom I think the most influential is .常用开头句1. the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809.，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，于1809年2月12日出生
25、于肯塔基州。2. Born in a poor clerks family, .had little schooling.出生于一个贫困的职员家庭，没怎么上过学。3. , who was born in.and died in., was considered as a talented and brilliant.，生于卒于，被认为是个有天资的杰出的主体部分常用表达：运用分词做状语1 .Peng Shilu, honored as the father of nuclear submarines”, played an indispensable role in developing and
26、 building Chinas first nuclear submarines.2 . Yuan Longping, known as “the father of hybrid rice, is one of China*s most famous scientists.3 .Luxun, acknowledged as one of the greatest modem writers in China, was born in Shaoxing, Zhejiang Province.4 . Bom of a poor peasants family in a little mount
27、ain village, Lei Feng was a model solider.运用定语从句QianXuesen is a man with great scientific thought and scientific spirit who was patriotic and served his homeland with effort, achievement, and devotion.运用同位语1 .Yang Zhenning, a renowned 著名的 physicist, contributed all his life to his motherland.2.Su Bi
28、ngtian, the first Chinese sprinter to compete in the mens 100-meter sprint final at the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games, shocked the world with his perseverance, whose story is one of triumphs over adversity.3 .Madame Curie, a woman of great achievement, made outstanding contributions to science.4 . Sun Sh
29、uwei, a world champion in diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.（巧用with做定语）1. .Shes of medium height, with long and blonde hair.2. He is a near-sighted /far-sighted guy with a pair of glasses on his nose.3. She is good-looking /ordinary-looking/funny-looking with long beautiful hair.4. He is a tall
30、and thin guy with thick eyebrows, looking very handsome.5. Bom in Germany, Einstein is a great scientist with an extraordinary imagination.6. She was neatly dressed, with a calm 恬静 face that showed a certain strength 与众不同的力量教育背景：1 .Majoring in （主修）Science, he graduated from （毕业于）a famous University
31、in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies （出国深造）.2 .Having graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University（毕业于中山大学英语系）， she went on further education （继续深造）and received a doctors degree （获得博士学位）.结束语常用表达：1 .Not only is he interested in science, but also he ha
32、s a gift for music.2 .Not only did Einstein devote all his life to scientific research3 . .sprinted to secure a place4 .So hard does he work that.5. With great determination and perseverance （有着毅力和决心）,he took 37 years to finish the book, which makes a great contribution to China.6. With a height of
33、2.26meters and good skill, .7. With a strong will, .8. What impresses people most about Yuan Longping is .9. What impresses me most.评价：1） Having set a great example to us, Lei feng fully deserves our greatest respect, whose spirit will push me to strive to achieve/fulfill my ambition2） He is .and wi
34、ll be always remembered as an outstanding man.3） We sing high praise for （高度赞扬）his bravery, whose heroic story will also give me inspiration and motivation to pursue my aim.4） .It was her hard work and determination that made her a model worker.5） .Owing to his remarkable story, .6）Perhaps no other
35、scientist has had a greater impact on China*s aerospace science than QianXuesen.常用结尾句1. .was really a distinguished/great/excellent., who inspires us to follow our heart and try our best to pursue our dreams.著名的/优秀的/伟大的，激励我们听从本心追逐梦想。2. There is no doubt that he/she is a great.毫无疑问他/她是个伟大的3. .made gr
36、eat contributions to the whole world/country.4. .set a good example to us so that we should learn from him/her.给我们树立了好榜样，我们应该向他/她学习。5. .set us a good example, so all the people speak highly of him/her.给大家树立了一个好榜样，所以大家都赞扬他/她。6. .is one of the greatest.in China/the world, and will be remembered as an
37、outstanding man forever.中国/世界最伟大的之一，并且将会作为杰出人物被人们永远记住。为整个世界/国家做出了重大贡献。趣实战应用【课堂练笔】请根据下表的内容提示，以Thomas Edison为题写一篇著名科学家爱迪生的生平介绍。词数100 左右。-姓名托马斯爱迪生简介美国历史上主要的科学家和发明家之一。1 .出生于1847年2月11日，并在美国长大。2 .小时候被认为不值得受教育，因此只受过三个月的学校 教育，可是，在妈妈的教育下，他对读书产生了兴趣。3 .10岁时,有了自己的实验室;12岁时，通过在火车上卖报 纸谋生。4.在他前一生中,他有很多发明，为世人做出了巨大贡献
38、。5.1931年10月18日去世，全美国熄灯一分钟以示哀悼。思路点拨:介绍爱迪生体裁记叙文人称以第三人称为主时态以一般过去时为主布局1 .按顺寻介绍人物的主要经历和成就2 .对人物作简单的评价参考范文:Thomas EdisonThomas Edison, bom on February 11th, 1847,was brought up in the United States. He is considered as one of the leading scientists and inventors in American history.As a boy, he was once t
39、hought not worth educating. As a consequence, he got only three months education in the school. However, educated by his mother, he took an interest in reading. At the age of ten, he had his own laboratory. And at 12, he earned his living by selling newspapers on trains. In all his life, he had a qu
40、antity of inventions, making great contributions to the world. Thomas Edison died on October 18th, 1931. In honour of the important figure, electric lights in the United States were out for one minute.I think he is a great scientist.项巩固练习Exercise 1假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你 介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1.该人物是谁；2.该人物的主要贡献；3. 该人物对你的影响。注意：1.词数不少于50；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（满分15分）