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1、Unit 1Follow-up exercises第1页Write a focused topic sentence for the following subjectLooking for jobs A person can look for a job in several ways.PenguinsPenguins resemble human beings in many respects.第2页Personality Ones personality plays an important role in foreign language learning.WeatherLiving
2、in a place where the weather is always warm has many advantages.第3页4.Paragraph I All inventions are either basic inventions or improvements on earlier inventions.Paragraph 2 There was a serious accident in the chemistry lab yesterday.Paragraph 3 Nutritional deficiency is a major problem of the elder
3、ly.第4页5.Paragraph 1 The world has enjoyed many benefits from the invention of telephone.Paragraph 2 I had a terrible morning today.第5页6.Topic sentence:5,7,4,1,6,9,8,3,2 第6页7.1)First of all 2)Secondly 3)By and by 4)In addition 5)In short 第7页8.Several techniques have been used to achieve coherence:l)R
4、epetition of key words:junk food,students(as are underlined)2)Use of transitional signals:For one reason,Also,As a result,however(as are italicized)3)Use of pronouns:they,their,this(as are boldfaced)第8页Unit 2 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES 3.When I was a child,we never varied our Christmas Eve ritual.We always
5、 began our private celebration promptly at 6 p.m.on December 24 when the whole family assembled in our small kitchen.We watched as Mother and my older sister prepared a light supper.As soon as we finished the meal,we rushed into the living room to decorate the tree.The younger children started the d
6、ecorating by putting tinsel and colorful第9页 balls on the branches near the base of the tree.Meanwhile,the two older children were placing ornaments on the higher branches.Finally,our parents completed the decorating by placing a beautiful golden-haired angel at the very top of the tree.After we fini
7、shed the tree,we hurriedly dressed and walked down the street to Midnight Mass.As we listened to the service,we remembered the reason we celebrated Christmas.Then we returned home where we ate some of Mothers Christmas goodies.We always ended our Christmas Eve ritual around 2 a.m.by gathering around
8、 the tree and singing Silent Night.第10页4.Logical sequence of the sentences:4 10 5 12 3 7 15 9 14 2 11 8 13 6-1Topic sentence:My family spent two fun-filled days at Disney World last year.第11页 What we did on the first day What we did on the second day 1.We boarded the monorail and rode around the par
9、k1.Early the next morning we once again the climbed aboard the monorail and headed for another day of fun.2.Getting off the car,we headed for Space Mountain.-After waiting in line for almost an hour,we boarded the famous roller coaster that took us for a thrilling ride through Disneys universe.2.We
10、got off at the first stop and immediately headed for the Country Bear Jamboree.-After waiting in a long line,we thoroughly enjoyed the singing and playing of the animated bears.第12页 3.Then while resting and drinking Cokes,we decided to visit Main Street.-There we found a good spot to stop and enjoy
11、a colorful parade of floats portraying the history of the United States.-An hour passed quickly as float after float rolled by,depicting such scenes as Daniel Boone killing a bear.3.When the show was over,we decided to spend the rest of our short visit touring the park and watching the many other sh
12、ows.第13页4.A short time later,we decided we wanted lunch and began to poke around the restaurants.-At last we settled on the Cafe Orleans where we had either a late lunch or an early dinner.5.Afterward,we spent the remainder of the day browsing in the specialty shops of the Magic Kingdom.第14页Concludi
13、ng sentence:Although we were very tired at midnight,we agreed that our two-day vacation at Disney World was one of the best we had ever had.5.(1)Then (2)morning (3)afternoon (4)Then(5)After that (6)when (7)already (8)after第15页6.Sample paragraph The New Year celebration was so unforgettable for me wh
14、en I was a child.Weeks before the New Years Day,my mother would let me help her send out New Years cards and go shopping with her.In the crowded markets 1 bought firecrackers,like all the other kids.Then,beginning on New Years Eve,the sound of exploding firecrackers was everywhere,day and night.On N
15、ew Years Day,I watched huge parades go by in the middle of the streets.People wearing costumes danced past us.Some of them were playing instruments;some were having lion dances,and dragon dances.Afterwards,we worshiped our ancestors in a temple and visited friends and r e l a t i v e s t o w i s h t
16、 h e m H a p p y N e w Y e a r.第16页Unit3 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES3.Logical sequence of the sentences:3 6 1 4 7 5 2 Relationship:Primarily,the organization of the paragraph represents movement in geographical space.第17页4.l)Standing in the burned-out shell of my living room was a shocking experience.Above
17、my head were charred beams,all that remained of our ceiling.In front of me,where our television and stereo had once stood,were twisted pieces of metal and chunks of blackened glass.Strangely,some items seemed little damaged by the fire.For example,I could see the TV tuner knob and a dusty CD under t
18、he rubble.I walked through the ashes until I came to what was left of our sofa.Behind the sofa had been a wall of family photographs.Now,the wall and the pictures were gone.I found only a water-logged scrap of my wedding picture.第18页 2)The central focus is a shocking experience.To support the main i
19、dea,the writer uses a lot of descriptions and organizes these details according to the space relationship,and thus coherence is achieved.第19页5.(1)into (2)crosses (3)In the center of (4)Outside (5)inside(6)On the front(7)over (8)down (9)lined with (10)At the rear第20页6.This paragraph is developed in a
20、 circular order,i.e.from east to north,and then to south.You are encouraged to describe the house using other ways of arrangement.第21页Unit 4 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES Look at each others paragraph on the procedures of completing some housework in pairs,comment on each others writing,using what you have le
21、arned in this unit.第22页3.Pattern:description with supplementary explanations.Steps of the processResults of the effortStep 1Wooden casks are first interconnected and then stacked in tiers./第23页Step2 Young sherries are poured into the casks at the top whereas the mature sherries are drawn out of the
22、casks at the bottom.One third of the content is drawn out of one cask in any one year.step3Different sherries are constantly mixed up.Special characteristics of the different sherries are maintained year after year.第24页4.(1)with (2)while (3)slowly (4)Gradually (5)With(6)By this time(7)Suddenly (8)fi
23、nal (9)ending (10)applause第25页5.Task 1Step 1Prepare and lay out food;make the special lanterns.Step 2Keep dancing and singing overnight.Step 3 Throw the food and lanterns into a river or sea.Step 4Watch the lanterns drifting way.第26页Linking words and phrases that connect these procedures:firstly,als
24、o,afterward,Then,signals the end第27页6.According to the Chinese lunar calendar,the 15th day of the eighth lunar month is the day for the Mid-Autumn Festival,and the day usually falls on one of the days in the latter half of September.For this occasion people need to buy moon cakes in advance.And when
25、 that evening comes with a full moon rising,Chinese families begin to have a big dinner together.The family members enjoy many delicacies,including sweet or salty moon cakes as well as some第28页 special food like taros and young soya beans.For those who are absent from the family,moon cakes have alre
26、ady been sent to them days before.When the family enjoy all of these,they will look up at the full moon,chatting or missing their faraway relatives or friends.For them,the full moon symbolizes reunion.Such feelings and scenes are fully expressed by a Chinese saying:the moon at home is exceptionally
27、brighter.第29页Unit5 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES The outline for Paragraph B:Topic sentence:Working in an apple plant was the worst job I ever had.Examples:I.First of all.the work was physically hard.第30页Specific details:l)For ten hours a night i took cartons that rolled down a metal track and stacked them on
28、to wooden skids in a tractor trailer.2)Each carton contained twelve 32-ounce cans or bottles of apple juice,and they were heavy.第31页 2.The second bad feature of the job was the pay.Specific details:I was getting the minimum wage at that time,$1.25 an hour,plus a minimum of a nickel extra for working
29、 the night shift.第32页 3.The worst feature of the apple plant job was the working conditions.Specific details:1)During work we were limited to two 10-minute breaks and an unpaid half-hour for lunch.2)The steel floors of the trucks were like ice:the quickly penetrating cold made my feet feel like ston
30、e.Concluding sentence:I felt humiliated by the poverty that forced me to do such a bitter job.第33页4.Logical sequence of the sentences:3-6-1-8-2-4-7-5Pattern:It follows Pattern l and uses many examples to illustrate the controlling idea.第34页5.(l)For example (2)Furthermore (3)In still another instance
31、 (4)Even(5)his (6)these (7)contemporary第35页6.Examples 2,3 and 5 are relevant and specific,Theyre effective examples that can be used.Examples 1 and 7 are not specific,thought relevant.Examples 4 and 6 are completely irrelevant.They dont refer to a Massachusetts law.第36页7.1)Ive never seen a girl as l
32、azy as Arena.2)English teachers are applying different means to teach the English language.3)Americans have been decreasing their working hours since early 19/)0s.4)My father has been a generous man to his children.第37页Unit 6 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES3.Subject;Class;CharacteristicsRepublic:a form of gover
33、nment in which power resides in the people(the electorate)Wolf:a large,dog-like carnivorous mammal with yellowish or brownish gray and coarse fur,erect pointed ears,and a bushy tail第38页Jazz:a style of music that features improvisation and performancePersistence:a kind of quality not giving up even d
34、uring rough times第39页4.Improved definitions1.A stadium is a structure or building in which sports spectaculars are held.2.Socialism is a theory or system of community organization that advocates the vesting of the ownership and control of the means of production,capital,land and so forth,in the comm
35、unity as a whole.第40页3.Photosynthesis is the process by which plants use the energy of light to produce compounds,such as sugar and starch,from a number of substances including water and carbon dioxide.4.Surreptitious means secret.第41页5.Political conservatives are people who are dedicated to preserv
36、ing the existing conditions,such as William F.Buckley,Jr.,and Pat Robertson.6.Hearing aids are a kind of device which enables deaf people to hear sounds such as normal speech.第42页Unit 7 Follow-up ExercisesKey to exercises3.1)Pattern:single effect and multiple causes2)Causes Effectgot drunk at the pa
37、rtyhad taken the drug of Bart Jr.s suicide Accutaneadolescent depression第43页4.Logical sequence of the sentences:2 4 1 3 6 5Pattern of cause and effect:single effect and multiple causes.5.Task OneTopic:Society itself may be producing the distortions of personality,mental illness,and emotional instabi
38、lity.第44页Points Causes Effect1 societys compartmentalizing2.societys competitive demands distortions of personality,etc.3.inability to rebel第45页6.Points of cause and effect:1)The lorry is on the left of the motorcyclist.2)The car is not traveling in the same direction.3)a dog is running in front of
39、the car.4)A woman is running after her child who is holding a ball.第46页Unit 8 Follow-up ExercisesKey to exercises3.1)Topic:University Students Entertainment Topic sentence:University students entertainment can be divided into three categories according to where it takes place.Division:a)entertainmen
40、t at homeb)entertainment on campusc)entertainment elsewhere2)Topic:Roles of Young Married Women in SocietyTopic sentence:The average young married women in todays society has her life divided into three different roles.第47页Division:a)the role of wifeb)the role of motherc)the role of self3)Topic:Neig
41、hborsTopic sentence:Neighbors fall into three categories accordign to their different attitudes towards you.Division:a)those who are friendlyb)those who are indifferentc)those who hate you第48页4.1)Mattresses:Queen;twin;firm;doubleSingle basis:size2)Exercise:Fatigue;swimming;gymnastics;jogglingSingle
42、basis:field 3)Churches:Roman Catholic;Baptism;Protestant;OrthodoxSingle Basis:branch 第49页4)Vacation:Seashore;winter;summer;weekendsSingle basis:time第50页5.Logical sequence of the sentence:73 10 9 1 5 8 4 2 11 6Subject:Christmas giftsTopic sentence:Christmas gifts can be divided into three groups,acco
43、rding to their after-Christmas fate.第51页Division:a)those that are welcomed and put into use very soonb)those that are halfway between being hated and lovedc)those that you banish as soon as possible.Concluding sentence:By New Years Day,you have either used,stored or disposed of each of your Christma
44、s gifts.第52页6.1)types 2)Though 3)Finally 4)however 5)Even though 6)Before 7)third 8)If 9)Then 10)these第53页Unit 9 Follow-up Exercises3.Pattern:point-by-pointSubjectPoint Western HomesJapanese Homesroom functionEach room has its own function.One room serves all the functions.tableEach home has several
45、 tables for different functions.One low table serves all the purposes.第54页doorWestern homes have fixed,hinged doors.Japanese homes have lightweight sliding doors.第55页4.Logical sequence of the sentences:53 6 2 4 8 7 1Pattern of comparison and contrast:subject by subject5.similar;although;difference;i
46、dentical;again;while;But;difference;consistency completely第56页5.1.similar 2.although3.difference4.identical5.again6.while7.But8.difference9.consistency pletely第57页6.Task One SubjectPoint Authority-centered HomeSocial-centered Homerole of parentsFather or mother is the authority.Parents are assistant
47、s.division of house areasclear distinction between family areas and guest areasno distinction between house areasfamily dinnerThe family dines together.The family doesnt eat together.第58页Unit 10 Follow-up Exercises3.General statement:The enormous importance of television news had started the process
48、 of change in the printed press.第59页6.1.Thus 2.When 3.also 4.however 5.Moreover 6.indeed 7.also 8.Yet 9.and 10.Thus第60页Unit 11 Follow-up Exercises3.The description centers on one trait of personality:Uncle Amoss being ordinary and average in life.4.Four methods used:comparison(1),generalization(2,4)
49、,cause-effect(3).The one that stands out is generalization.第61页Unit 12 Follow-up ExercisesRead again the original composition you wrote on generation gap and rewrite it.Please pay attention to the organizational structure of your composition.第62页3.SubjectThesis StatementGambling Gambling is the root
50、 cause of many social problems.The Future of EducationThe future of education lies in the innovation of educational technology.Violence on TelevisionViolence on television has a negative impact on childrens view of society.Social EqualityWomen should be given equal opportunities in education and car