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1、读后续写练习写作：A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicke
2、n porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of
3、water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started
4、 frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared. Secure in
5、the knowledge that no blister was developing on Jeffs hand, father took command of the kitchen. Sweeping the stove clean, he grabbed a handful of rice into the pot and left it to simmer. Father then dipped two slices of fresh bread into the egg mixture, slipped them onto the pan and constantly flipp
6、ed them until both sides were golden brown. As father was dancing around in the kitchen, Jenna and Jeff stood beside in awe, their eyes round in admiration. It was merely twenty minutes later that everything was set on a tray. Winking at the twins, father sank his voice to a whisper, take it to your
7、 mother!The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Rubbing her bleary eyes and sitting up, mother was greeted by a bowl of steaming porridge, two pieces of crunchy bread and some fruits, all neatly arranged on a tray. Happy Mothers Day! the twins presented the tray to their m
8、other, a touch of shame etched on their smiling faces, we never knew how hard it was for you to prepare meals for us every day. Thank you mum, for what you have done for us! Hands tightly pressed on the chest, mum could hardlyutter a complete sentence, her face streaked with tears of genuine happine
9、ss. It was truly the most delightful Mothers Day surprise.9.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Their fathers jaw dropped in amazement when he saw everything before him. Jenna explained to their father their plan for Mothers Day and the accident that had just hap
10、pened. Having handled Jeffs injury, their father told him to rest for a while in the living room while Jenna continued to stay in the kitchen to help. They cleaned the messy stove, and after about an hour, the golden toast and the thick porridge were made. At that moment, broad smiles spread across
11、their faces. (87 words)The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Mom, happy Mothers Day! they said with one voice. The mother looked at the sweet-smelling breakfast - the French toast and the chicken porridge, saying, “My God, you are so great! Her voice shook with emotion, a
12、 wave of happiness flooding her. She suddenly felt her children had grown up! Seeing joy and pride on their mother/s face, Jenna and Jeff couldnt hide their excitement. The Mothers Day program also made them aware of the value of labor.(82 words) 169 wordsAs the twins looked around them in disappoin
13、tment, their father appeared. They pretended to be poised,trying to blockthe messy scene from his fathers sight. However, the odor of burning betrayed them.Questioned by his father, Jeff narrated the whole story, twiddling with his fingers nervously. Oh, man. You guys are so sweet. Now let/s get mom
14、 a surprise!” their father said in a soothing manner, his previous anger giving place to ecstasy. Without hesitation, their father guided them to prepare for the festive feast. Not long after that, an inviting cuisine was ready. Then their father retired into the bedroom.The twins carried the breakf
15、ast upstairs and woke their mother up. ”Happy Mothers Day! the twins exclaimed together. Their mother got out of the bed, hardly able to believe the gift before her. She felt a warm upsurge in her heart, tears streaming down her cheeks. Stretching out her arms, she lapped them in her arms. Thank you
16、, sweethearts. It is the best meal Ive ever had,“ she said after savoring the sandwich.At that moment, proud and overjoyed, Jeff and Jenna stealthily winked at their father standing beside them.Actually, not only is the meal a surprise but a secret bonding the father with his twins.As the twins look
17、ed around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Catching sight of their father, Jennas gloomy face turned into big smile while Jeff was trying hard to fight back tears. Confused about what had happened, the father darted to check Jeffs hand and at the same time listened to Jennas explanation
18、 carefully. An expression of intense joy illuminating the fathers eyes after getting to know the lovely heart of his twins, he patiently guided them to make attempt once again. Within half an hour, sweet-smelling porridge and well-baked bread were lying on a delicate plate, on which a heart was draw
19、n with some apple jam.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. ”Happy Mothers Day, dear Mom,“ the twins whispered to their mother. With amber sunlight piercing through the window, the mother had a drowsy look at the twins and then glanced at the food in their hands, tears m
20、isting her eyes. She quickly took hold of the plate, put it on the table, and hugged the twins tightly in her arms, murmuring, “Thank you, my babies. You are my best gifts. Just at that moment, the father tiptoed in, looking at the scene as if he had the whole world he wanted. Love may be clumsy, bu
21、t beautiful indeed.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Spotting the messy situation, their father understood everything. Instead of blaming them for their carelessness, their father put on a bright smile and patted on their heads. Do you want to give your mother
22、a surprise? Let me help you fix it. Father said with a mischievous twinkle in his eyes.Hearing the words, the twins nodded their heads, their eyes shining with excitement. Under the fathers instruction, they first cleaned up the mess, and then they respectively took responsibility for French toast a
23、nd chicken porridge. With the experience of failure, they accomplished their task perfectly this time. Looking at the inviting breakfast, they were deprived of all power of speech by excitement.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.The instant she noticed the breakfast wa
24、s brought in bed, a ripple of excitement flashed through her face. Her eyes wandered between the breakfast and the twins as if she was asking what happened. Happy Mothers Day!” the twins exclaimed with one voice. The mothers face beamed and her shining smile lit up the room. Thank you my angles! Com
25、e here and give me a hug.Thetwins rushed into their mothers arms and just at that moment, their father stopped behind them. Hey! Look here!” The mother and the twins turned their headssimultaneously. Click-click. Using the camera, the father recorded the memorable scene. What a Mothers Day Surprise!
26、13.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.With tears in her eyes, Jenna ran to her father and explained everything. After confirming the burn on Jeffs hand was well tended, their father cheered them up, helped them clean it up and prepared the breakfast all over aga
27、in. It didnt take him too long to fill a plate with toast and a bowl with porridge. Lets hope your mother is still fast asleep prayed their father, Bring it up and give her a big surprise/The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up/Whats going their mothers question was interru
28、pted by the sweet scent of the breakfast. She exclaimed with disbelief, Oh my God, thank you so much my children! This is the best Mothers Day ever!” Then she slowly enjoyed every bit of the breakfast, with the twins excitedly telling her about their secret plan, their disappointing preparation and
29、their fathers timely help. Their father went back to the bedroom when they just finished their story. Darling, what do you think of the breakfast? heasked. Unique, because it tastes of love and care she smiled along with the twins.14.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father ap
30、peared.With tears in her eyes, Jenna ran to her father and explained everything. After confirming the burn on Jeffs hand was well tended, their father cheered them up, helped them clean it up and prepared the breakfast all over again. It didnt take him too long to fill a plate with toast and a bowl
31、with porridge. Lets hope your mother is still fast asleep prayed their father, “Bring it up and give her a big surprise/The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.Whats going .” their mothers question was interrupted by the sweet scent of the breakfast. She exclaimed with disb
32、elief, “Oh my God, thank you so much my children! This is the best Mothers Day ever!” Then she slowly enjoyed every bit of the breakfast, with the twins excitedly telling her about their secret plan, their disappointing preparation and their fathers timely help. Their father went back to the bedroom
33、 when they just finished their story. Darling, what do you think of the breakfast?” he asked. Unique, because it tastes of love and care she smiled along with the twins.15.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at
34、 the scene with eyebrow frowning. When turning off the fire in tearing hurry, Jenna saw their father walking towards them with rage haunting. Whats up? Dad questioned them in a cold voice. Z/We.We just want to make breakfast for Mom as Mothers Day gift. Jenna whispered. so sorry. Dad. We made a mess
35、 in the kitchen and Jeff had his hand burned. So ashamed was she that she shed guilty tears with head drooping. Only at this time did father realize that the twins were his precious treasure. Then, with Dads help, Jenna and Jeff prepared a hearty breakfast.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs an
36、d woke their mother up. As their mother opened her eyelids, a substantial breakfast caught her sight and a sweet smell wafted into her nose. Happy Mothers Day!” The twins congratulated. “We just want to make breakfast for you as you do that for us. Mom, we love you!” Mom kissed them and smiled dazzl
37、ingly “Oh dear, thank you my sweeties.What a big surprise I Their father was standing beside the door, recording this touching scene. The whole room was bathed in a happy Mothers Day atmosphere.16.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. A disastrous kitchen greeting
38、 his eyes, Father was totally stunned, not uttering a single word. After calming himself down a moment later, he got to know what was going on. He smiled with rage choking back and said.Do you need a hand? The twins were filled with joy and tidied the kitchen up to restart cooking the dishes. This t
39、ime, everything seemed to go smoothly without a hitch. The chicken and rice were dancing harmoniously in the boiling water pot and bread slices were showing off its most tremendous golden color. Despite the oil stains and holes on the twins aprons, nothing seemed imperfect, and all was ready except
40、the most important one.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Rubbing her drowsy eyes, Mother let out a yawn. For what was almost simultaneous she opened her eyes widely and goggled at the twins and dishes they served. Happy Mothers Day. Mommy! Why not try out todays spec
41、ial? Though still in her pajamas, Mothertook a bite of the toast and sipped the hot porridge. Lost in the delicious breakfast and pure love from her son and daughter, she sobbed, with delightful tears streaming down her face. Mom. why are you crying? the pair asked in confusion.Is the breakfast good
42、 enough? Melting her tears into smiles, she gave the twins a bear hug.The breakfast tastes so good! Its the most wonderful gift Ive ever received! The dawning sunshine lit up the whole room, with air being sweet.17.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Their father
43、 seemed to understand exactly what had happened and what to do next. He grabbed the handle of the pan and slipped a bar of butter to melt before putting another slice of cup. Then he swiftly removed the burnt porridge away, and poured another cup of rice, starting to cook it all over again. In betwe
44、en, he kept silent and focused on what he was doing. The twins stood straight and awe, watching the hustle and bustle from their father. At 7 oclock, everything was done and perfect. The twins took over the tray, feeling guilty about being over-confident about their competence in performing the hous
45、e chores.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they co
46、uld continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain.Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Parag
47、raph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.考场优秀文展示1.As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Knowing the situation, dad comforted the two immediately
48、and asked, “Why not make your division of work clear? The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They presented the well-cooked breakfast in front of Mother. Their mother beamed from ear to ear, praising and appreciating childrens nice act of gesture. However, the twins lower
49、ed their heads, shoulders drooping down. It didn/t turn out as they had planned. Finally, Jenna broke out the silence, confessing “Mother, we have taken it for granted for so long that the breakfast that you make for us every morning is a super easy job. Jeff cut in But it wasnt, Jenna continued “On this Mothers day, we would like to thank you for your dedication and care for us. And fro