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1、让喜怒哀乐更有画面感读后续写MissLinWarmingupHisbeliefsCutecharacterimagesVividfacialexpressions1、Heishappy.3、Heissad.2、Heisangry.Whatcanweseefromhisfacialexpression?He is.Toobrieftovividlyreflecthismood.Howtomakemoodsdescriptionsvividly?HappinessHereyesaretwinklingwithexcitement.Hereyebrowssmooth.Hercheeksbeamwit
2、habrightsmile.eyes,eyebrows,teeth,faceSheisWhatcanyouseefromherface?HappinessSheissohappy,herhandsandfeetdancing.Sheclapsherhandsandjumpsupanddownwithjoy.body,hands,feetHappinessShegigglesandsquealswithexcitement.Sheburstsoutintolaughterfromthebottomofherheart.Voice,toneItshersummarybodyvoicefaceeye
3、seyebrowscheekshandsfeettonesmooth柔和的twinkle闪烁beam眉开眼笑clap鼓掌jump/dancegiggle咯咯笑/squeal轻声尖叫/BurstintolaughterhappinessWecandescribeapersonshappinessfromHeisAngerHischeeksarepepperyhotandhiseyebrowsnarrow.Heglaresatmewithburningeyesandclenchedteeth.eyes,eyebrows,teeth,faceWhatcanyouseefromhisface?Ange
4、rBoilingwithrage(怒火）,heclenchedhisfists.Helosthistemper,andstoodupsuddenlywithanger.body,hands,feetAngerHegrowlsatmethroughclenchedteeth.Voice,toneItshissummarybodyvoicefaceeyeseyebrowscheeksfistsfeettoneglareat瞪narrow拧在一起pepperyhot火辣辣的clench紧握双拳standup站了起来growl咆哮teethclench咬牙切齿AngerWecandescribeape
5、rsonsangerfromHowtousewhatwehavelearnedtodescribesadnessandsorrow?SadnessandsorrowWatchashortvideoWhatsyourdescription?bodyvoicefaceeyeseyebrowscheekshandsfeettoneteethGroupwork:threeminstofinishSadness/sorrowHewassittingsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.Ashelookedatthefood,greatsorrowcloudedhiseye
6、s.Part1:eyes,cheek,faceSadness/sorrowHishandsandshoulderswereshakingwithoutaword.Heburiedhisfaceinhishandsinsadness.Part2:body,hands,shouldersSadness/sorrowHesatthereinsilence,memoriesofherdaughterpouringintohismind.Memoriesofherdaughterpouringintohismind,finally,heburstintotears.Part3:voicebodyvoic
7、efaceeyescheekshandsshoulderstonesummarysorrowcloudedtearsrollingdownburiedhisfaceinshakingSilently/burstoutintotearsUselearnedknowledgetodescribemoviescenes情景描写Miancharacter一个患病的男孩。Aboywhosufferedfromcancer.他的家人付出一切为了救他。Hisfamilydideverythingtheycouldtosavehim一个温柔的母亲。Agentleandsoftmother.为了治疗她孩子的病，
8、从每一个小地方省钱。Totreatherchildsillness,shesavedmoneyfromeverysmallaspect.一位愤怒的父亲Anangryfather为了赚钱给孩子治疗癌症，下班偷偷去当司机。Inordertomakemoneyandtreatcancerforhischild,hesecretlydroveacarforothersafterwork.例如：男孩描写：那个绝望的男孩突然站起来，并且对他的父亲叫喊到,“Thethingsyoudidtosavemeonlymakesmefeellikeaburden,andImnotgratefulatall.“父亲描
9、写：在听完这番话后，_,_.母亲描写：与此同时（meanwhile），。TurnedherheadaroundSlaphiminthefaceMyEnglishversion：男孩描写：Thatdepressedboy“Thethingsyoudidtosavemeonlymakesmefeellikeaburden,andImnotgratefulatall.“父亲描写：Afterhearingthisword，hisfather母亲描写：Meanwhile，hismother我的英文版本：Thatdepressedboy“Thethingsyoudidtosavemeonlymakesme
10、feellikeaburden,andImnotgratefulatall.“父亲描写：Afterhearingthisword，母亲描写：Meanwhile，suddenlystoodupandshoutedtohisfatherHisfatherglaredathimwithburningeyesandclenchedteeth,evenslappedhimonhisface.Hismotherturnedherfacearoundandtearsrollingdownhercheeks.UsetheknowledgelearnedtodaytopolishyourarticlePLANB
11、回顾二检读后续写，用所学知识进行修改consolidation1Alittledogfollowedgirlshomeafterschool.2Reallydontwanttoadvertise.3Aparticularadvertisementjumpedout.consolidation4Putawaythenewspaper,neversaidaword.5Thedogfollowedthegirlseverywhere6Consciencebotheredme.charactersIownerdoggirlsFeeltorn(左右为难）InadilemmaCaringandkind体贴
12、善良Desperate绝望Lovely可爱的请添加您的小标题电话细节（核对狗的外貌特征，约定见面等等）,注意情绪变化最后一句，该妇女来到我家Molly的归宿（回原主人家；留在我家；约定今后的互访）故事的升华（诚实和善良）Languageoutput复杂情绪描写Withmixedfeeling,Ifinallypickedupthephone.Idialed the number on the paper,with a beatingheart against my chest.A woman answered thephone.I could sense the atmosphere of j
13、oy andhopethemomentItoldhereverything.Sheeagerlyfixedatimewhenshecouldcometomyhousetoseethedog.AsIputdownthephone,Ifeltgreatsorrowdominatingmymind.紧张的情绪紧张的情绪喜悦、激动的情绪悲伤的情绪喜悦、激动的情绪Igatheredthewholefamilyandtoldmydaughtersaboutit.Tearsfillingtheireyes,myyoungdaughterswereastonished.Thererangthe bell.I opened the door and saw thewoman.复杂情绪描写悲伤的情绪震惊的情绪homework积累好句，Usewhatwelearnedtorecitethisparagraph.用今日所学重写第二段感谢在场各位的耐心倾听