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1、05 人物心理状态刻画技巧人物心理状态刻画技巧 心理写概述心理写概述心理写是在特定情境Q对人物的内心活1心理情感1情绪状态等进行的写2心理写渗透w实境，读者能从人物的心理写中感知角色视角Q对生活的体验，从而领会人物的精神面貌1展人物的性格特征2心理写要V直接心理写和间接心理写，w中，直接心理写包括心理剖析1内心独白1梦境幻觉2 1.心理剖析心理剖析 心理剖析是以第O人的视角述人物心理活，多用于小说1寓言1童话等文学体当中，如:皇帝的新装;中皇帝1大臣的心理写都采用了心理剖析，以心想=他想=等作标志，用作者的口吻表人物的心理状态2心理剖析以文外视角进行撰写，能够表达O同人物的O同情境Q的真实心理
2、感，能够使读者更直的理解角色心理活2 2.内心独白内心独白 内心独白是以第N人阐释的无声的人物内心语言，能最真实最直接的映当前角色的内心状态和情绪2相比较心理剖析，人物内心独白更偏向于理性和逻辑的考，它以作N种内心的考，比基于特定情oQ的意识心理的产生而言，更x逻辑性和哲理性2人物内心独白要置于文本大背oQ考量，同时结合件1情感进行理性考，挖掘w中的题想，在理解人物内心独白的真l认识人物2因m，在进行人物独白的剖析时，要以理性的眼光综合人物独白出的境1情节，避免人物心理活P境的割在写作中对人物独白进行修改时，注意既要符合人物身份，又要表人物真实情感，感悟人物心理写P语境的融入2 3.梦境幻觉梦
3、境幻觉 梦境幻觉是指通过梦境或人物在某种情绪状态Q，视觉1觉P出虚幻的画面1声音，从而展人物内心世界1发情感的写2 人物的心理写是以角色视角渗透生活实，细腻的心理写能W实感人物的情感化1展人物内心，将读者代入把握人物行因，体会人物共情2心理写是对人物内心活的直接刻画，是将人物的内心感触表出来的N种要方式2心理写是N种述视角的调整，以人物的所所感来表作者在文本中传达的想，是以文本情境中的角色个人心理V析来视历1社会1人生的独白=2从人物的心理写中，读者能直面人物的内心世界，或以人物的心理挖掘文本背后的内涵2 读者直接面对的O是赤裸裸的生活，而是被N层心理体验所透的生活，心理写的边缘就是生活的05
4、 人物心理状态刻画技巧-2024年高考英语一轮复习读后续写必备微技能05 人物心理状态刻画技巧-2024年高考英语一轮复习读后续写必备微技能 边缘NN是使读者对熟悉的生活境产生陌生感的要源泉2因m，V析人物的心理写，应该将人物置于文本情境中，以人物的角度考量心理活产生的脉2 心理状心理状态刻画微态刻画微技技 写恐心理的方法写恐心理的方法 第N部V第N部V 表示恐表示恐 1.他心跳较快，想都没有想，他就开始跑了2His heart beat wildly and without thinking,he started to run.2.他突然闪N_恐2 The thought of fear c
5、rossed his mind.3.突然N恐控v了他，他吓得呆在原地2他试w移，但是却O能，直到N个尖锐的声音唤醒了他2 A sudden rush of panic ruling him,he was frozen to the spot.He tried hard to move，but could not,until a sharp sound awoke him.4.Mac 心跳得很快，手颤2他的脸得白，眼充满了恐2 Mac9s heart was beating wildly/violently/was pounding and his hands were shaking.His
6、face turned pale and eyes were full of horror.5.他因恐而呆Q，站在那儿NO2Frozen with fear,he stood rooted to the spot.6.N看到凶猛的狼，s吓得僵Q了，吓得N也Og2 At the sight of the fierce wolf,I froze with terror,too scared to move an inch.7.他被恐吓倒了，Mac O知道要说什N？Overwhelmed by fear,Mac didn9t know what to say/do.(be overwhelmed b
7、y 被.给压垮/吓倒/征服)8.N种惊恐的感觉掠过他的心头2 A frightened feeling crept/swept/over his heart.9.他心中涌起了N恐2/恐卷了他2 A flood of fear welled up in him./Fear flooded over him.10.她因恐而窒息2She was choked with fear.11.时间似乎停k了，尽管他们能只在那儿至OV钟2 Time seemed to stand still,though they were probably there for only two or three minut
8、es.第部V第部V 应对恐应对恐 1.N股力量立刻代了 Jane O断增长的恐和焦虑2 A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Janes mind.2.他的大脑又开始快速转，尽力想w.His mind began to race,trying to thinking.3.他鼓起勇气.He plucked up his courage to do.4.(副词)立刻/马P;突然 =immediately/abruptly/instantly/promptly;suddenly=all of
9、 a sudden 5.短语立刻马P=without delay/without pausing;6.毫O犹豫/迟疑=without any hesitation 第O部V第O部V 历后的心情历后的心情作写作写 1.They breathed a sigh of relief.2.(心有余悸)Though Mac was safe,he still could feel his heart beating quickly.He was even having troubling breathing,and he felt dizzy(眩晕).For a moment有N会,he was afr
10、aid he would faint(晕倒)注注对对 adventurous experience=总结性的句子总结性的句子 1.Never would they forget such a thrilling summer holiday in their whole life.2.What a thrilling adventure!3.Many years have passed,till now,I still remember the thrilling trip to the Wild West.4.The vacation with my my forgetful mother
11、would always stand out in my memory.和妈妈N起的旅行总是会让s记忆犹新2 心理状态写常用升心理状态写常用升级策级策略略 开心通过心理1表开心通过心理1表情1情1作来表达作来表达 n通版He was happy.进版:1.Her eyes shone/glittered/sparkled/twinkled with joy.2.Her face lit up with pleasure.容光焕发 3.Her heart was pounding with excitement.砰砰直跳 4.Happiness/joy/pleasure/delight took
12、 hold of him.(极度开心)5.She was overflowing with happiness/joy/pleasure/delight.(幸福洋溢)6.He shed tears of joy.流Q开心的泪水 例句 1.His eyes twinkled with pleasure when he saw the news.当他看到新闻，他的眼闪w快乐2 2.He grinned with delight when he saw us.当他看到s们，咧开嘴开心地笑了2 3.The smile on her face shone like a diamond.她脸P的笑容像钻石
13、N样闪2 4.I couldn9t restrain my joy and jumped into the house.svOQ内心的喜悦，蹦蹦跳跳地进了家门2 5.He cast us a look/glance,with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.她看向s们，面带灿烂/温的笑容2 6.When his mother kissed him on the cheek,it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world.当妈妈亲吻他的脸颊时，小婴儿开心极了2 伤心心理1
14、表情1伤心心理1表情1作作 n通版He was sad.进表达 O同的哭cry 哭泛指，哭出声 sob 呜咽，啜泣 wail 嚎啕大哭 weep 小声/无声流泪 burst into tears 放声大哭 fight back tears vQ泪水 be close to tears/be on the verge of tears 快要哭了 be in tears 泪 例句 1.He sighed with disappointment.他失望地叹了口气2 2.He struggled to fight back his tears.他试图控vQ自的泪水2 3.His eyes brimme
15、d with tears of sorrow.他的眼噙满了悲伤的泪水2 4.He stood silently,tears rolling down his cheeks.他静静地站w，眼泪流Q他的脸颊2 5.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.s感觉自漂浮在悲伤的洋2 6.I saw an old lady wailing with fist beating her chest in the street corner.s看到N个奶奶在街角捶胸痛哭2 7.When he embraced me with his arms open
16、 wide,I felt my throat choke with sob.当他张开臂拥抱s时，s觉得自喉头哽咽2 8.Upon hearing the bad news,she felt seized by a burst of sadness and couldn9t help crying bitterly.N到个 _消息，她就被N股悲伤之感控v，忍OQ哭泣2 紧张心理1表情1紧张心理1表情1作作 n通版He was nervous.进版 1.Standing in the classroom,I became increasingly nervous and could feel my
17、 heart beating wildly.站在教室，s越来越紧张，s能自心跳速的声音2 2.Her face turned pale,feeling like sitting on pins and needles.她的脸w白，感觉如针毡2 3.Before the competition,his palms were sweaty and knees were soft.比赛前，他手心出汗，膝盖发软2 4.At the sight of the fierce wolf,I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt w
18、eak.看到恶狼，s喉咙发紧，膝盖发软2 5.At the sight of the fierce wolf,I froze with terror,too scared to move an inch.看到恶狼，s被吓呆到NO2 6.At the sight of the fierce wolf,I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.看到恶狼，s被N股强烈的恐感攫Q了，掌心流汗2 尴尬尴尬/羞愧心理1表情1羞愧心理1表情1作作 n通版 He was embarrassed/ashamed.进版
19、1.His face flushed(通红)/burned(燃烧)with embarrassment/shame.他因尴尬而满脸通红2/他窘得脸都红了2 2.He hung/dropped/lowered his head in shame.他羞愧地PQ了头2 3.She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning.她感到羞愧难当，脸P滚烫2 4.So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.她感到羞愧极了，血液涌P脸颊2 5.So ashame
20、d did she feel that she was close to tears.她羞愧到快哭了2 愤怒心理1表情1愤怒心理1表情1作作 n通版 He was angry.进表达fly off the handle 勃然大怒 lose one9s temper 发脾气 例句 1.His voice trembled with anger/rage(愤怒).他气得声音发2 2.He glared at me with burning eyes.他ws，眼充满怒火2 3.Filled with anger/fury(狂怒)，Tom was unable to utter a single wo
21、rd.Tom 气得N句话也说O出2 4.Boiling with rage，Tom shook his fist at me.Tom 怒火中烧，对s挥舞拳头2 望心理1表情1望心理1表情1作作 n通版He felt hopeless/desperate.进版 1.Upon hearing the bad news,he was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.到个_消息，他突然被入黑世界，陷入望2 2.He felt left out and was getting desperate wi
22、th loneliness.他感觉被遗弃了，孤独使他感到望2 3.His beliefs in looking forward and seeing the positive in everything deserted him.被信念弃 他那种向前看1看到NW物极N面的信念弃了他2 感谢心理1表情1感谢心理1表情1作作 n通版I thanked my father.进版 1.I ran over to my father,reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.s跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱Q他2 2.With gr
23、ateful tears hanging in his eyes,he kept extending表达his gratitude(感激，Thank you so much!=他眼中满是感激的泪水，O停地说非常感谢！=鼓励心理1表情1鼓励心理1表情1作作 n通版 He felt encouraged.进版 1.Taking a deep breath,I managed to calm myself down and walked up to the platform confidently.深吸N口气，sr地让自镇定，然后自信地走P了讲2 2.I walked over to him,and
24、 patted him on the shoulder,encouraging:Come on!=s走向他，拍拍他的肩膀，鼓励道油！=震惊心理1表情1震惊心理1表情1作作 n通版 He was surprised/shocked.进版 1.His eyes grew wide/widened with surprise/astonishment(震惊)when he heard the news.到个消息后，他惊讶地x大了眼睛2 2.It9s hard to believe.He didn9t accept the job that he was long for.真难以置信，他竟然没有接那份
25、期待久的作2 3.Grandfather9s death was really a bolt from the blue for me.祖父去世的消息对s来说简直是晴y霹雳2 疑惑疑惑/迷茫心理1表情1迷茫心理1表情1作作 n通版 He felt confused.进版 1.With a confused look on his face,he had no idea what to do.他露出困惑的表情，O知道该做什N2 2.He scratched his head,having on idea what to do.他挠了挠头，O知道该做什N2 3.He scratched his h
26、ead,not understanding a word.他挠了挠头，N个字也O懂2 写写作策作策略实践略实践P强P强化化 1阅读Q面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构rN个完整的故2 Lily was dressed and ready for her first performance.The hall was crowded with parents and grandparents to see the students9 dance.It was a tradition for the school every year and Lily was going to dance in
27、front of everyone.It scared her.Yesterday she practiced her dance on the stage and everything went on smoothly.With only several moms watching,it wasn9t too bad.But it was different tonight.All the seats would be full and she felt nervous and terrified.Don9t worry.When you go out on the stage,you ju
28、st look right where I was siting yesterday I will still be there.You just look at me and it will be just like yesterday!=Mom encouraged Lily.What I should focus on is every movement in the dance.Just get lost in my dance and bring out the best,Lily told herself.When she came back sage,she took a qui
29、ck look from behind the curtain(幕).Butterflies were flying inside her stomach and she just wondered whether Mom would be there.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应 80 2.续写部V的开头你写好2 The music began to play._ 2阅读Q面材料，根据w内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构rN篇完整的短文2 My struggles started in seventh grade when I began passing out.I had many me
30、dical check-ups and finally found one that helped.My average blood pressure was about 80/60 on a good day.To this day,I continue to battle this problem.Then,two years ago,I was diagnosed(断)with fibromyalgia,a muscle disease that is not really helped by medication.It9s like having a pulled muscle whe
31、n the disease attacks.It can last as long as three months.I was bedridden for a month.Cold weather,rain,or physical or emotional stress can cause the pain,It9s hard enough to be a healthy teenager and go through the typical changes with friends,family,school,etc.Add to that missing two to three mont
32、hs of school a year,and it can make things very difficult.The hardest part was on the outside I looked normal like everyone else;however,on the inside,I was in horrible pain.Some classmates had passed their comments on me thinking that since my physical appearance was fine,I must be OK.The judgment
33、hurt me more than anyone will ever know.I battled with depression(郁)as well,because I felt like an outsider.I longed to be normal and healthy.I even developed an eating disorder.In the beginning,I had lost a lot of weight.For the first time,I felt like I was attractive because I was skinny.I was rec
34、eiving more attention than ever.I would still feel depressed,though,because of all that was going on in my life.I would eat a lot hoping the stress would go away.But then I would throw up the food so I would still look good.Luckily,I overcame these problems with the help of my family and a wonderful
35、 job.注意1.续写词数应 150 2.请按如Q格式在答题卡的相应O置作答2 My mother stuck by me and encouraged me in all my time of need._ I found a purpose knowing I had something to give to these elderly people._ 3阅读Q面材料，根据w内容和所给段落开头语段续写两段，使之构rN篇完整的短文，续写的词数应150 词2 Doris was a 68-year-old woman who lived alone.Her children lived in
36、 a different city and her husband had passed away.In order not to feel lonely,she would take daily walks at the nearby park.One afternoon she saw her neighbor9s son,Martin.He sat alone on a park bench(长椅).Concerned,Doris approached him and asked where his mother Lucy was.She9s still at work,=Martin
37、answered.She left you here so she could work?Have you been here the entire day?=Doris asked.Martin nodded,explaining his mom had just got a new job that required her to be out from 9 am to 5 pm.Doris checked her watch,seeing it was 2:30 pm.Have you eaten?=she asked.Martin replied he had eaten some b
38、read.Doris felt bad for the poor boy.Not wanting to leave him alone,she sat with him and waited for Lucy to pick him up.Later Martin felt his feet were so cold.Doris found his socks were thin and worn out.She took out a shawl(披肩)from her bag and put it around Martin9s legs.Finally,Lucy appeared.Lucy
39、,it9s dangerous for Martin to be out here alone the entire day,Doris said.Ashamed,Lucy said that she wanted to take care of Martin,but she had to get a job because of their increasing bills to pay.It9s my first day at my new job.I can9t leave Martin at home alone.If social services(社会服机构)find it,the
40、y won9t allow me to raise him anymore.I have no choice but to leave him in the park in order to work,=she added.Doris knew Lucy was trying her best but also felt bad that Martin would have to stay out in the cold every day.After all,winter was coming.The following morning,when Lucy went to work,Dori
41、s met her outside her home.Lucy said that Martin wasn9t feeling well and was still sleeping.He had to stay home for the day.Doris understood Lucy was risking being caught by social services leaving Martin alone at home.So,she offered,I9d be happy to take care of Martin at your home or mine.=注意 1续写词数
42、应 150 2请按如Q格式在答题卡的相应O置作答2 Lucy cried tears of joy upon hearing it._ When Doris left,Martin said,Mom,can I ask Doris to be my grandmother?=_ _ 参考答案 1 The music began to play.Taking a deep breath,she walked onto the stage.All she could see was a vast sea of unfamiliar faces.Suddenly,her gaze was drawn
43、 towards a bright and familiar face in the corner of the room.It was her mother,with a loving and encouraging smile.All the fear and nervousness drained away like water.She felt instantly more confident and ready to show her best.As the music went on,Lily felt like she was flying on the stage,so abs
44、orbed in her performance.She performed so great that at the end of the performance,the audience gave a loud cheer,bringing Lily back to her senses.The whole hall was filled with applause and excitement as Lily took her bow,arms wide open and with a relieved and satisfied smile that she had done her
45、best.She was now looking forward to getting reunited with her mother.0写作指导1本文以件发展线索展开，讲述了 Lily 每年Nk的舞表演做了充V准备，但是临P前感到紧张的故2 0解析11.段落续写 由首句内容音乐开始响起=知，本段写 Lily P后感到很紧张，但是当她看到妈妈的笑脸的时候镇静Q来，她认真地做w每N个作，整场表演非常r，以至于全场她l呼2 2.续写线索 深吸气P44紧张44看妈妈44镇静Q来44专注表演44表演r44众l呼44期待到妈妈2 3.词汇激活 行类 d走Pwalked onto/stepped ont
46、o e展示show/present 情绪类 d表示爱意的loving/affectionate e自信的confident/self-assured 0亮点1高V句型 1.Taking a deep breath,she walked onto the stage.用了在V词短语作状语 高V句型 2.All she could see was a vast sea of unfamiliar faces.用了省略了引导词的定语从句 2 My mother stuck by me and encouraged me in all my time of need.When I lost my te
47、mper,my mother silently accompanied me.When I was in a better mood,my mother told me some interesting things,encouraging me to see my strength and suggested that I do something meaningful,such as volunteering in the old people9s home to realize my value by helping the old people.I found a purpose kn
48、owing I had something to give to these elderly people.Accompanied by my mother,I often went to the nursing home to send the calligraphy I wrote to the old people.The old people couldn9t put down the blessing I wrote.From this incident,I realized that I was recognized by people and that I gathered up
49、 the courage to face the future bravely.0写作指导1本文以人物线索展开，讲述了作者七年级时身体开始出问题，得了饮食失调症的作者渴望l常和健康，在作者需要的时候，母亲总是支持她，鼓励她2 0解析11.段落续写 d 由第N段首句内容在s需要的时候，母亲总是支持s，鼓励s2=知，第N段写作者母亲是如何鼓励作者的2 e 由第段首句内容s找到了N个标，s知道s以给些人N些西2=知，第段写作者给予人们N些西，以及最终生活n入l轨2 2.续写线索鼓励s44建议去养院44送书法44到l迎44感到意O44感悟 3.词汇激活 行类 d伴accompany/pany e讲述t
50、ell/narrate f意识到realize/be aware of g面对face/be faced with 情绪类 d心情更好in a better mood/in a better temper e勇g地bravely/courageously 0亮点1 高V句型 1When I lost my temper,my mother silently accompanied me.(用了 when 引导的时间状语从句)高V句型 2 From this incident,I realized that I was recognized by people and that I gather