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1、 读后续写读后续写技能提升技能提升 遣词造句遣词造句Step1 Lead-inLouisaCantonibecameawareofayoungmanleaningagainstthesideofherhouse,acigarettehangingfromhismouth.Helookedtobe13or14yearsoldwiththreatening,darkbrowneyes.Whenshewasyounger,thelittleoneswouldflockaroundher.TheylovedherItalianaccentandflowersandalwaysstayednearbyw
2、henitwastomatoseason,poppinghersweettomatoesintotheirmouths.Thosesweetmemorieswerejustthat.Somuchhadchangedintheneighborhood.TheItaliansectionofthedowntownareahadbeenturnedintolow-renthousingandovergrownyards.Newrentershadjustmovedinandwornheroutwithalltherudeness,theshouting,andthesadfacesofthegran
3、nies.Oneday,Louisawasharvestingthelastofhervegetableswhenashadowappearedfrombehindher.Sheknewitwastheboy.“What,whatdoyouwantfromme?”Sheaskedinatiredtone.Theboystoodsilentforawhile.“Mymomma,shelikesflowers,showmehow?”heoffered.“Showyouwhat,howtobeaniceperson?”Louisahadnointerestinshowingthisboyanythi
4、ng.“Showmehowtogrowthose.”Hepointedtotheflowers.Louisasighed.“Justgoonawayandleavemealone.”“Youaintgottabesomean,”Jevonmurmuredandleft.Thenextday,theboycameasusual,butshenoticedhewasdifferent,younger,innocentandbeautifulwithsmoothbrownskinandbroadshoulders.“Whatisyourname,youngman?”Sheasked.“MynameJ
5、evon.”“Thankyou,IamLouisa.MissLouisatoyou.”Shestuckoutherhandwhichhereluctantlyshook.“Whatisityouwantfromme?Youstareatme;youstealmyzinnias（百日菊）.Thatsnotnice,Jevon.”“Iwanttolearnhowtogrowaflowerformymomma.”Hesoundedlikealittleboy.“Ihaverules,Jevon.Norudeness,nohoodie（连帽衫）,pullyourpantsup,andnocigaret
6、tes,ever.”“Yourenotmymomma.Idonthavetodoanyofthat,”heresponded.九江市2024年高考英语第二次模拟试题读后续写注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Fivedayslater,JevonshowedupinacleanT-shirtandbeltedpants._Timeflying,JevonbecameaHarvardfreshman,eagertoseeMissLouisa._状语状语状语状语定语定语定语定语名词性名词性名词性名词性从句从句倒装倒装倒装倒装虚拟虚拟虚拟虚拟强调强调强调强调特
7、殊句特殊句to doto doto doto dodonedonedonedonedoingdoingdoingdoing非谓语非谓语百日菊百日菊zinnias zinnias 高级高级句型_madeLouisasurprisedandsatisfiedwasJevonschanges.(1)Adverbialclause状语从句(2)Attributiveclause定语从句(3)Nounclause名词性从句WhatLouisafeltsurprisedandsatisfied_shenoticedJevonschanges.LouisanoticedJevonschanges.Shefe
8、ltsurprisedandsatisfied.when1.Clauses从句LouisanoticedJevonschanges,_madeshesurprisedandsatisfied.whichemotions+reactions Step2 PresentationRelatives关系词 Shefeltsurprisedandsatisfiedwhenshenoticedhischanges.Shenoticedhischanges,_(make)hersurprisedandsatisfied.2.Non-finiteverb非谓语动词(notice)hischanges,she
9、feltsurprisedandsatisfied.Shenoticedhischanges,whichmadehersurprisedandsatisfied.(1)Non-finiteverbAttributive/adverbialClausesemotions+reactions Noticingmakingn2.Non-finiteverb非谓语动词(2)with复合结构(3)独立主格结构 高三（1）班李鑫怡 SVOSVOSbe fixed on Withsthdoingsth,Sbdosth.Withsthdonesth,Sbdosth.Sthdoingsth,Sbdosth.St
10、hdonesth,Sbdosth.O With 高三（1）班朱瑞奇never;notuntil;not.only,but.;nosooner.than等(1)Invertedsentence倒装句她是如此惊讶以至于她不敢相信她的眼睛。So+adj.+be+sb+that.Sosurprisedwasshethatshecouldnotbelievehereyes.3.Specialsentencepatterns特殊句型only+状语emotions+reactions topicsentence 直到这时,Louisa才意识到她小小的善举给他带来了大大的不同。hersmallactofkin
11、dnessmadeagreatdifferencetotheboy.OnlythendidLouisarealizethatWithout/Butforsth,sbwouldhavedonesth;3.Specialsentencepatterns特殊句型(2)Subjunctivemood虚拟语气IfithadnotbeenforLouisasguidanceandcare,hewouldnothavegrowninarighttrack.高三（1）班李鑫怡 Without/ButforLouisasguidanceandcare,hewouldnothavegrowninarighttra
12、ck.If引导虚拟条件句IfSbdidsth,Sbwoulddosth.现在IfSbhaddonesth,Sbwouldhavedonesth.过去3.Specialsentencepatterns特殊句型(3)Emphaticsentence强调句：Topicsentence 高三（4）班汪倩楠 Itis/was.that/who.ThelittlematchgirldiedonChristmasEve.ItwasonChristmasEvethatthelittlematchgirldied.Atmosphere 好奇地问 毫不犹豫地回答耐心地解释 兴奋地尖叫4.Wordsandphras
13、es笼统词 具体词 Sb+adv.Sb+prep.+n.Sb+ina+adj.+voice/inavoiceof+n.sayexplainpatientlyscreamexcitedlyaskwithcuriosityrespondwithouthesitationaskinapolitevoice/inavoiceofpoliteness 礼貌地问3.(他如此礼貌)shecouldhardlybelieveit.2.(既开心又满足)sheacceptedthebouquet.1.(令她惊讶的是)hebroughtherabunchofzinnias.Step3Summary1.Emotion
14、sWith+n.,Sbdosth.Toones+n.,Sbdosth.What+v.+sb+be+that.adj.andadj.,Sbdosth.So+adj.+be+sbthat.Tohersurprise,/WhatsurprisedherwasthatJoyedandSatisfied/Withjoyandsatisfaction，Sopolitewashethat4.Asense/feeling/waveof（自豪感）flooded/sweptoverher.pride无灵主语Personification拟人2.ReactionsSbdosth,dosthanddosth.Doin
15、gsth,Sbdosth,doingsth.(主动doing/having done)Done,Sbdosth,doingsth.(被动/状态)They_theseeds,_themeverydayand_forthemtogrowup.theseeds,theywateredthemeveryday,forthemtogrowup.他们种下种子，每天浇水，等着他们长大。HavingplantedwaitingdParallelism排比plantedwateredwaitedStep3Summary beoverwhelmedwith 状态 无灵主语以景衬情3.AtmosphereS VO高
16、三（2）班邱仔岩 Personification拟人kindness and warmth embarkedembarkondoing开始做 花园中弥散着香气，善良和温暖的花朵在他们心中绽放。Step3Summarywitness情感升华4.Topic名言式结尾修辞结尾Step3SummaryOnlythendidsbrealizethetruemeaningof+名言氛围结尾Fromthenon,Sb(never)dosth.Onlythendidsb.realizethat.floatedintheair/bebathedin.“飘在空中/沉浸在”Metaphor比喻无灵主语Personi
17、fication拟人as/like/asif.Step4PracticeGroup1:Group2:Group3:Topicsentence:Finally,hetookabunchofzinniastovisither.Hewasexcitedandjoyed.HerushedtoLouisashouse.“Hereyouare.Thankyou.”Jevonsaid.“Yousavedmefromthedark.Icannotbecomeanicepersontodayifyoudidnthelpme.”hesaidagain.WhenLouisasawtheprettyflowers,s
18、hecannothelpcrying.Shedidntrealizehersmallactshouldmakeagreatdifferencetohim.“Madamcouldyoupleasetellmehowtogrowaflower?”Jevonsaid.Louisastaredattheboyinfrontofher.Sherealizedhisdeterminationandperseverance.Shewasexcitedandsatisfied.Shesmiledandsaid,“Whataniceboy.Letslearntodoit.”Later,Jevonlearnedh
19、owtoplantaflower.Healsoleanedtobeaniceman.“Madam,couldyoupleasetellmehowtogrowaflower?”Jevonutteredinawarmtone.Staringattheinnocentandadorableboyinfrontofher,Louisarealizedhisdeterminationandperseverance.WithsmileofexcitementandsatistactionlighteningupLouisasface,shesaid,“Whataniceboy!Letscommenceto
20、learnhowtodoit.”Afterthat,toLouisascredit,notonlydidJevonlearnhowtoplantaflower,butalsolearnhowtobeaniceman.doingsth,Sbdosth.Withsthdoingsth,Sbdosth.notonly.,butalso.倒装Excitedandoverjoyed,hepackedabunchofzinnasseriouslyandrushedtowardsLouisashouse.Heutteredandbeamed,“Hereyouare,thankyouforallyouhave
21、done.”NosoonerhadLouisaspottedtheprettyflowersthantearswelledupinhereyes.“Itwasyouwhosavedmefromthedark.Butforyourhelp,IwouldnothavebeenwhoIamtoday.”OnlythendidLouisarealizehersmallactofkindnessmadeagreatdifferencetotheboy.Eminentscentlingeringinthegarden,theflowerofkindnessandfriendshipembarkeduponblossominginbothoftheirhearts.nosooner.than.倒装无灵主语butfor.虚拟onlythen.倒装sthdoingsth,Sbdosth.adj.+adj.状语强调1.Pleasepolishyourwriting.2.Shareyourwritingswithyourclassmates.Step5HomeworkThank you!Thank you!