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1、七年级英语下册Module 4写作指导【写作目标】用英语写一篇短文，描述未来生活。【写作任务】假如你们今天的英语作业是写一篇题为 Life in the future 的作文，请你用英语写一篇短文，完成这项作业。【指点迷津】本次写作任务要求用英语写一篇短文描述未来生活，其写作要点如下：(1) 内容：首先总体描述未来生活；然后从衣服、学校、旅行和环境四个方面描述未来生活的具体变化及其带来的影响；最后总结全文，表达自己对未来生活的期待。(2) 人称：以第三人称为主。(3) 时态：以一般将来时为主。(4) 文体：说明文。【谋篇布局】未来的生活总体描述我认为未来的生活将会非常不同。I think li
2、fe in the future will be very different.(1) 一切都会改变，比如衣服、学校、旅行和环境。Everything will change, _ _ clothes, schools, travelling and environment.具体变化及其带来的影响(2) 天气将会变热。人们不再需要厚重的衣服。他们只需要轻便的衣服。The weather will get hot.People wont need _ _ _ _.Theyonly need light clothes.(3) 学生们将会在家学习。他们不需要去学校。Students will st
3、udy at home.They wont need _ _ _ _.(4) 每家将会有一架小飞机。旅行将会很容易。Every family will have a(n) _ _.Travelling will be very easy.(5) 将会有更多的树木和花朵。环境将会更美。There will be more _ _ _.The environment will be more beautiful.表达期待未来的生活将会很美好，我很期待。Life in the future will be great and Im looking forward to it.【巧衔接】在描述未来生活
4、的具体变化及其带来的影响时 ，可用 so 来衔接。为使行文连贯，从不同角度描述未来生活的具体变化时，可用first、second、third(第三)、finally等表示列举的词语来衔接。【连句成文】同学们，根据【谋篇布局】的练习，赶快动笔完成这篇短文吧！Life in the future【收藏夹】描述未来生活的其他方面Jobsteacher,scientist(科学家), doctor, bus driver, cook,engineer(工程师),pilot(飞行员), pianist, actor, basketball player .Places to liveon themoon
5、 / Mars(月球/火星) / ., in space stations, in housesunder(在下面) the sea, inmoveable(可移动的) houses .Free timeactivities(活动)go to the moon / Mars / .for a holiday, travel in space, playwith robots .Transportation(交通运输)travel by spacerocket( 火 箭 ) / flying car / bus / train, drivesubmarines(潜艇), have a self-
6、driving car .Weathermorefrequent droughts(频繁干旱) / heavy rain / cold wind, therising sea level, warm all year .【小试身手】假设你校的中学生英文报正在举行题为 My life in 30years的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，参加该征文活动。My life in 30 years答案：【谋篇布局】2(1) such as(2) heavy clothes any more(3) to go to school(4) small plane(5) trees and flowers【连
7、句成文】Life in the futureI think life in the future will be very different.Everything will change, such as clothes, schools,travelling and environment.First, the weather will get hot,sopeoplewont need heavy clothes any more.They onlyneed light clothes.Second, students will study athome,sothey wont need
8、 to go to school.Third,every family will have a small plane,sotravellingwill be very easy.Finally, there will be more treesand flowers,sothe environment will be morebeautiful.Life in the future will be great and Imlooking forward to it.【小试身手】One possible version:My life in 30 yearsI think my life in
9、 30 years will be fantastic.I think I will be a scientist and work in amoveable office.I will live in a house under thesea.I will have a science lab under the sea too.Then I will take the submarine to go on a holiday.It will be great.In my free time, I will go to myrobot friendsparties.We will have a great time.I think my life in 30 years will be veryspec ial.Im looking forward to it.