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1、 P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.接着P1(心理/动作链)根据P2P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.接着P2(心理/动作链)结局(紧贴首段/需求解决)升华(归类+总结共性)写大纲:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)另外5句:跟随原文描写占比高中英语读后续写(写大纲|只需10句)固定:P1P2首句+P1尾句+P2尾两句框架构思:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)P1:As the twin
2、s looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.接着P1(心理/动作链)根据P2P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.接着P2(心理/动作链)结局(紧贴首段/需求解决)升华(归类+总结共性)另外5句:跟随原文描写占比谋篇布局:写大纲 P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.P2:The twins carried
3、the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.写大纲:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.接着P1(心理/动作链)根据P2P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.接着P2(心理/动作链)结局(紧贴首段/需求解决)升华(归类+总结共性)写大纲:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)P1:As the twins look
4、ed around them in disappointment,their father appeared.心理(twins:害怕被责备+欣喜有救星;father:理解)根据P2:cooked the breakfastP2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.心理(twins:期待+忐忑;mother:惊喜+欣慰)结局:问题解决(回归首段)升华:价值观/感叹写大纲:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment
5、,their father appeared.心理(twins:害怕被责备+欣喜有救星;father:理解)根据P2:cooked the breakfastP2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.心理(twins:期待+忐忑;mother:惊喜+欣慰)结局:问题解决(回归首段)升华:价值观/感叹另外5句:2个关键情节:P1爸爸帮忙做早餐+P2妈妈开心3个细节描写:动作/语言/环境写大纲:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)P1:As the twins looked around them in dis
6、appointment,their father appeared.心理(twins:害怕被责备+欣喜有救星;father:理解)语言对话“”动作/环境clean the kitchen(原文复现、延伸)关键情节(由角色特点决定)father cooked breakfast;twins cleaned kitchen 根据P2:cooked the breakfastP2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.心理(twins:期待+忐忑;mother:惊喜+欣慰)关键情节同时空,各个角色做什么(由
7、角色特点决定)动作/语言/环境对话“”结局:妈妈惊喜(呼应首段)升华:价值观/小感叹写大纲:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)P1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment,their father appeared.接着P1(心理/动作链)根据P2P2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.接着P2(心理/动作链)结局(紧贴首段/需求解决)升华(归类+总结共性)写大纲:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)另外5句:跟随原文描写占比 P1:XXX.P2:XXX.写大纲:十句五定法(5句有固定依据)