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1、英语写作指导-如何用英语写游记【写作任务】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John得知你上周乘坐京沪高铁去上海旅游，发来邮件问你旅游 情况。请你用英语给他回一封邮件，介绍你一路上的所见所闻及你的感受。注意：词数120左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。参考词汇:京沪高铁 Beijing-Shanghai high-speed trainDear John,Im glad to hear from you and Id like to tell you something about my visit to Shanghai.Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】一、审题定调本写作任务要求以电子邮
2、件的形式写一篇游记。游记是日记的一种，是描写游览中的所见所 闻和表达自己思想感情的一种文体，属于记叙文。写游记时，一般要交代清楚游览的时间、地点、 所乘交通工具、在每个景点的活动等，并且要适度地抒发自己的情感或发表自己的看法。游记类 文章的时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。二、谋篇布局本写作任务可分为三部分：第一部分：简述旅行概况；第二部分：描述旅行中的所见所闻；第三部分：表达对此次旅行的感受。三、组织语言第一部分：简述旅行概况。普通表达高级表达I visited Shanghai with . by Beijing-Shanghai high-speed train last wee
3、k.I, together with paid a visit to Shanghai by Beijing-Shanghai high-speed train last week.第二部分：描述旅行中的所见所闻。普通表达高级表达We got on the train in . and passed through . along the way.As soon as the train leftwe saw which were covered with .Then there were . covered with . as far as the eye could see.After w
4、e reached the big modern city of Shanghai, we were deeply attracted by .There were . everywhere and all kinds of cars passing by.We visited such as . and . and then we went home.From we caught the train bound for Shanghai and it passed through . along the way.No sooner had we left. than we were gree
5、ted by . covered with .After that, as far as the eye could see,. covered with . came into view.On our arrival in the destination, Shanghai, its . almost took our breath away. were everywhere and a variety of luxury cars passed by us.After visiting such as . and we returned home. 第三部分：表达对此次旅行的感受。 普通表
6、达 高级表达What a wonderful journey it was!Although I was tired, I felt very happy and I will never forget this experience.Exhausted as I was from the journey, I definitely had fun.The journey not only but also .【范文展示】普通范文Dear John,Im glad to hear from you and Id like to tell you something about my visit
7、 to Shanghai. I visited Shanghai with my parents by Beijing-Shanghai high-speed train last week.We got on the train in Jinan and passed through much different scenery along the way. As soon as the train left Jinan, we saw a series of mountains, which were covered with thick forests. Then there were
8、wide plains covered with crops as far as the eye could see. After we reached the big modern city of Shanghai, we were deeply attracted by its appearance. There were high-rise buildings everywhere and all kinds of cars passing by. We visited many interesting places, such as the Oriental Pearl Tower,
9、the Bund and Disneyland and then we went home.What a wonderful journey it was! Although I was tired, I felt very happy and I will never forget this experience.Yours,Li Hua高级范文Dear John,Im glad to hear from you and Id like to tell you something about my visit to Shanghai. I, together with my parents,
10、 paid a visit to Shanghai by Beijing-Shanghai high-speed train last week.From Jinan, we caught the train bound for Shanghai and it passed through many different landscapes along the way. No sooner had we left Jinan than we were greeted by mountain ranges covered with thick forests. After that, as fa
11、r as the eye could see, vast plains covered with all kinds of crops came into view. On our arrival in the destination, Shanghai, its prosperity almost took our breath away. Skyscrapers were everywhere and a variety of luxury cars passed by us. After visiting some interesting places, such as the Oriental Pearl Tower, the Bund and Disneyland, we returned home.Exhausted as I was from the journey, I definitely had fun. The journey not only entertained me, but also broadened my horizons.Yours,Li Hua