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1、【2022年湛江一模读后续写题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Be sure to hang the decorations high, said Polly. my stepmom.“Jake might mistake the colorful glass balls for his toys and try to bite them. Jake was new to our family that Christmas. He was a beautiful brown-and-white dog. And, of course, he was
2、 loaded with the curiosity that made everything a toy.Two weeks before Christmas, we brought out the boxes of decorations, many of which had been in Pollys family for ages. Among them was a special box that held an entire gingerbread family(姜饼人). They were real cookies, hung with red ribbons(丝带) and
3、 made many years earlier.Every now and then, I or one of my little sisters-Ruth and Sue-would pretend we were going to eat one, knowing that Polly would say, Youll break a tooth! Theyre so old that theyre rock-hard. We didnt really want to eat them, but we enjoyed making fun of Polly.Since we didnt
4、know how Jake would react to the decorations or the Christmas tree, we were careful to put the decorations up high. Jake sniffed(嗅) the tree a lot. Those first couple of days, Polly caught him starting to lift a leg on the tree twice. But he learned quickly and settled for sniffing from a distance.T
5、he weekend before Christmas, Dad and Polly took us to watch the new holiday movie. Excited, we jumped into the car with bags of home-made popcorn,and off we went for a great evening.A few hours later, we returned home, only to find .a terrible mess. It wasnt the Christmas tree. In fact, we werent su
6、re what it was. We stood just inside the door staring at the mess. As it turned out, it was Jakes bed, which hed destroyed. Left alone for the first time, he must have gotten bored,attacked it and left it for dead. We didnt know that the bed was not the only victim.注意： 1续写词数应为150左右； 2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置
7、。 The next morning , we girls were playing in the living room where Ruth let out a a scream _ _ “It wasnt me,”I said, in case anybody thought Id a midnight snack of rock hard decorations._ _【前文分析】在圣诞节前夕，我们掏空心思地为节日装饰，在这些装饰物中，有继母Polly珍藏许久的一套圣诞“姜饼人”。我和我的妹妹Ruth和Sue会时不时假装要去吃这些姜饼，Polly知道后，开玩笑地说：“姜饼很硬，吃了会掉
8、牙的。”而我们家庭新成员Jake一只漂亮的小棕狗似乎对我们的圣诞节装饰物非常感兴趣，并且把所有的装饰物都当成玩具。在圣诞节前的周末，Dad和Polly带我们外出看电影，我们回家之后发现房间一团糟，那时我们并不知道Jake的床不是唯一的受害者，第二天早上我们发现.【续写情节问题分析】1.不少学生未能充分理解前文，不明确gingerbread family是挂在圣诞树上的，导致续写情节与前文不融合。2.本篇读后续写命题涵盖“人与自我”和“人与自然”两个主题语境，蕴含重组家庭的成员之间和谐相处及对动物的爱护的正能量主题。有些学生续写情节是继母Polly对“我”怀疑、指责、刁难、虐待，“我们一家人”严
9、厉惩罚狗狗Jake，严重违背了主流价值观。这是在后期备考中教师必须纠正的大问题。参考范文：The next morning, we girls were playing in the living room when Ruth let out a sudden cry. Then came her angry voice,Who had eaten the gingerbread family ?Hardly had she pointed out the Christmas tree without the ginger-bread family hung on it when Polly
10、came over,with her eyes fixed on the Christmas tree.lt seemed that she was brimming with disappointment ,which made us feel so sorry.Sue immediately explained that she disliked these cookies and she didnt eat them.At that moment,all the eyes arrowed into me .“lt wasn t me, I said, in case anybody th
11、ought ld had a midnight snack of rock-hard decorations.Honest as l was,words failed to convey my innocence. However I was about to burst into tears when Jake ran towards us,barking at the tree, Suddenly,an idea hit Polly.Observing the cookie crumbs scattered on the floor, Polly announced It was Jake
12、 that bit the gingerbread family!The stone in my heart finally reached the ground,l helped Polly make the new cookies for Christmas happily with my sisters. With the new gingerbread family,we family had a wonderful Christmas with our curious dog.点评:该篇文章亮点很多,语法结构不仅运用自如且十分高级，更难能可贵的是 语言“原汁原味”,衔接很合理。1、高
13、级语法结构:本文多次使用倒装如首句Then came her angry voice”,Para1第二句Hard had done when did”;以及Para2无灵主语的使用，words failed to”。这些都可看出作者对语法结构的运用口。2、街接地道,情节合理: Para1末句all the eyes arrowed into me自然引出Para2首句；Para2结尾做姜饼人小过圣诞情节可补全，使故事结局圆满。总而言之,该篇文章是值得反复品味的佳作!默写版：The next morning, we girls were playing in the living room wh
14、en Ruth let out a sudden cry. Then came her angry voice,Who had eaten the gingerbread family ?_她刚一指那棵没有姜面包家族挂在上面的圣诞树，波莉就走了过来，眼睛盯着那棵圣诞树.lt seemed that she was brimming with disappointment ,which made us feel so sorry._苏立即解释说，她不喜欢这些饼干，也不吃At that moment,all the eyes arrowed into me .“It wasn t me, I sa
15、id, in case anybody thought Id had a midnight snack of rock-hard decorations._尽管我很诚实，但言语无法表达我的清白. However I was about to burst into tears when Jake ran towards us,barking at the tree.Suddenly,an idea hit Polly._波利看到饼干屑散落在地板上，宣布是杰克咬了姜饼一家!The stone in my heart finally reached the ground,l helped Polly make the new cookies for Christmas happily with my sisters. _有了新的姜饼家庭，我们全家和我们好奇的小狗度过了一个美好的圣诞节.学科网（北京）股份有限公司