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1、Welcome A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice;and he spent most of his days complaining about it.It is true that you cannot sing;said the fox,but look how beautiful you are!0b，but what good is all this beauty;cried the bird,with such an unpleasant voice!Listen,said the fox,each one owns som
2、ething good:You have such beauty;the nightingale has his song;and the owl has his eyes.Even if you had a sweet voice,you would still complain about another thing.Why cant you just be happy about what you have already got?StorySummaryEach one owns something good.At the end of this lesson you will lea
3、rn to wirite a better summary and this will be your strength and something good you own ThemeSummary writingA summary is a account of the of an article in your .What is a summary?briefmain pointsown words 1.2.3.About 30 wordsAbout 30 wordsAll main pointsAll main pointsNo copy of the materialNo copy
4、of the materialLanguageFOCUS:Main pointsUse the second person instead of the third personThe story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers.The peacock,always feel unhappy because of his unpleasant voices.The because of his unpleasant voice.The fox comforted him by examples of the nightingale and
5、the owl.The fox added that you will be happy if you stop complaination and treasure what you have already got.Common mistakesCommon mistakesCommon mistakesCommon mistakesUse too many original words or sentences from the passage.A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice.Other birds said that it is a
6、pity for peacock to have ugly voice.However he is beautiful.At last the fox said:Everyone owns something,each one should be happy about what you have got.Common mistakesCommon mistakesCommon mistakesCommon mistakesUse too many specific details In the article above,a peacock is always complaining abo
7、ut not having a sweet voice until the fox points out that everyone has his strength,for example,the nightingale has his song;the owl has his eyes and the peacock has his beauty.Common mistakesCommon mistakesCommon mistakesCommon mistakesLanguageObjectiveGeneral BriefMain pointsCompleteNo copy of the
8、 materialTips on summary writing:Polish up your language!Presentation This story is about a peacock who complained about his ugly voice while actually he is very beautiful.A fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.(31 words)SamplePractice makes perfect!Some useful skills:l Change
9、 the structure of a sentencelAdopt the opposite way when saying a sentence It must have been about two in the morning when I returned home.=Arriving home in early morning,the writer.I tried to wake up my wife by ringing the doorbell,but she was fast asleep.=The writer failed to wake up his wife.lRem
10、ove the unnecessary information.Fortunately,the shouting woke up my wife who opened the window just as the policeman had started to climb towards me.=His shouting eventually woke his wife.Arriving home in early morning,the writer.The writer failed to wake up his wife His shouting eventually woke his
11、 wife.Arriving home in early morning,the writer failed to wake up his wife.Trying to climb in,he was found by a policeman taking him as a thief.His shouting eventually woke his wife.(34 words)NarrativeWhat main points should be included in the summary of a narrative?Presentation whowhenwhere whathow
12、 whySix elements Hi,I am Mike.I just went through my first year of college.The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.I went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me.But at the college I need to know some basic life skills,such
13、 as balancing a check-book,laundry,and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school!It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life,I love itgood facilities,helpful instructors,an
14、d a good library.The students Union organizes various parties every week.I also go to cinemas and concerts,and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things.I was on dance team in college and met a ton of people that wayit was so muc
15、h easier to make friends when you had a common ground.Main points of the summary of a narrativeMain points of the summary of a narrativeWhoWhenWhereWhatWhyHowThe general adjustment was tough./He couldnt The general adjustment was tough./He couldnt get used to college life.get used to college life.Mi
16、keMikethe first yearthe first yearHis mother did everything for him in high school.His mother did everything for him in high school./He lacked basic life skills./He lacked basic life skills.He got himself active in things.He got himself active in things.in collegein college The passage is about how
17、Mike spent his first year in college.He _ because he _ but later he_and _ (34 words)didnt adjust himself welladapted to itlacked basic life skillsSamplePresentation got active in thingsgot active in thingsIndividual workingAs is described in the passage,Mr Zeng firmly kept his wifes promise to his child by killing the only pig in his family,which is an admirable deed.(29words)Presentation Success is not in the dreaming but in the doing!