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1、更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君专题专题 05 人物肢体动作、行为描写人物肢体动作、行为描写（高分定律）（高分定律）【考情分析】【考情分析】在读后续写过程中，成功的动作描写，可以交代人物的身份、地位，可以反映人物心理活动的进程，可以表现人物的性格特征，有时候还能推动情节的发展，无论是描摹景物还是刻画人或事物的形象，都能收到淋漓尽致、形神兼备等独特的表达效果。【写作指导】【写作指导】在进行人物肢体动作、行为描写时，,要细化动作,把动作过程分解成细微的动作,学会描写动作时不仅表现“在做什么”,而且表现“在怎样做”。除了精选表示动作的词语，而且要给动词加上适当的修饰成分。适当的修饰成分可
2、以细致地表达出动作的时间、速递、力度、方式等，使人物形象更加具有活力，能更好地表现人物鲜明的个性与思想境界。动作描写中最常见的修饰成分就是状语，如副词、介词短语、非谓语短语副词、介词短语、非谓语短语等。（2023 年浙江卷）年浙江卷）As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spiders web.I rushed back to the deserted house.It was a great comfort that the orig
3、inal hole in the window was nowhere to be found.Leaving the house,I couldnt help wondering how it was getting on now.当我的车接近它时，我的思绪又回到了我从蜘蛛网中救出蜂鸟的那一刻。我冲回那座空无一人的房子。窗户上原来的洞无处可寻，这是一种极大的安慰。离开家后，我不禁想知道现在事情过得怎么样了。【素材宝库】【素材宝库】词汇积累之有关手（词汇积累之有关手（hand）take ones hand 牵某人的手spread ones hands 摊开双手in ones hand 在手里g
4、rab ones hand 抓起手pat ones hand 轻拍某人的手hand in hand 手拉手rub ones hands 搓着手cup ones hands over sth 用双手捂住hold out/reach out a hand 伸出一只手in hand 在手头；在控制中slap ones palm 用手拍击swing ones fist 挥动拳头wave ones hand 挥手put/hold ones head in ones hands 双手抱头hold/catch/take/seize ones hand 握住/抓住/拉起/抓住某人的手；hand 有关句式积累有
5、关句式积累专题05 读后续写人物肢体动作、行为举止描写（高分定律）-【高频热点】2024年高考英语话题写作通关必备攻略更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君1.Jim was watching a horror movie when his trembling hands almost knocked over the coke.Jim 在看恐怖电影时，他颤抖的双手几乎把可乐打翻了。2.He took a firm grip of my arm and marched towards the door.他紧紧抓住我的胳膊，朝门口走去。3.Tom knelt down and patted
6、 the dog.汤姆跪下来拍了拍狗。4.Make sure you keep hold of my hand when we cross the road.过马路时一定要牵着我的手。5.He tightened her hold,refusing to let her go.他紧紧抓住她，不让她走。6.He grasped the rope tightly with both hands.他双手紧紧抓住绳子。7.She smiled and held out/reached out a hand in wecome.她微笑着伸出手来。8.He slid his hands into his
7、pockets and pull out some change.他把手伸进口袋，掏出一些零钱。10.He kept pumping my hand up up and down.他不停地摇动着我的手。11.She ran at Jim,her fists flying.她挥舞着拳头朝他跑去。12.He swung his fists wildly at the mans head.他朝那人的头疯狂地挥动拳头。13.I cupped my hand over the phone so they couldnt hear me.我用手捂住电话，免得他们听到我的话。14.He reached fo
8、r her hand and held it tightly.他伸手抓住她的手并紧紧握住。15.They walked along,holding hands.他们手拉手并肩走着。16.She smiled and hold out/reached out a hand in welcome.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君她笑着伸出一只手表示欢迎。17.Her hands shook/trembled as she lifted the glass to her lips.她的手颤抖着把杯子送到唇边。18.She shivered,rubbing her hands togeth
9、er fiercely.她一边颤抖，一边使劲搓着双手。19.She put her hands to her cheeks in embarrassment.窘迫之中她用双手捂住了脸。20.He sat with his head in his hands.他双手抱着头坐着。词汇积累之有关手指、手掌、拳头词汇积累之有关手指、手掌、拳头 thumb up at sb.朝某人竖大拇指snap ones fingers 打响指dip one is finger in sth.用手指蘸point a finger at 用手指指着slap ones palm 用手拍击poke sb.with ones
10、 finger 用手指戳drum ones fingers on 用手指轻敲clench fist 紧握拳cross ones fingers 祈求好运finger、palm、fist 有关句式积累有关句式积累1.He let fly at me with his fist.他挥拳打我。2.Mark slapped the table with the palm of his hand.马克用他的手掌拍了一下桌子。3.The teacher raised a warning finger and we stopped talking.老师竖起一根手指以示警告，我们止了讲话。4.She took
11、 off his bandages with gentle fingers.她手法轻柔地取下了他的绷带。5.He smacked a fist into the palm of his hand.他用拳头啪地猛击一下手掌。6.I dipped my finger in the sauce and licked it.我用手指蘸了蘸调味汁，并尝了一下。7.He was drumming his fingers nervously on the arm of the chair.他紧张地用手指敲着椅子的扶手。8.He snapped his fingers and the dog came run
12、ning.他打了个响指，狗跑了过来。9.The teacher nodded with satisfaction and thumbed up at him.老师满意地点了点头，朝他竖起了大拇指。10.She wagged a disapproving finger.她摇摇手指表示不赞成。词汇积累之有关胳膊、肩膀（词汇积累之有关胳膊、肩膀（arm、shoulder）更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君with arms crossed 双臂交叉with arms crossed 双臂交叉arm in arm 臂挽臂hug/hold/embrace sb.in ones arms 拥抱p
13、ut/threw ones arms around sb.抱住某人catch/grab/hold ones arm 抓住某人的胳膊tap/pat sb.on the shoulder 拍某人的肩膀shrug ones shoulders 耸耸肩pull sb.into ones arms 拉某人进怀sit on ones shoulders 坐在某人的肩膀上hold out/open ones arms 张开双臂take ones arm 挽住某人的胳膊胳膊、肩膀有关句式积累胳膊、肩膀有关句式积累1.When I asked him why he had done it,he just shr
14、ugged his shoulders.当我问他为什么要这么做时，他只是耸了耸肩。2.My shoulders dropped with relief.我肩膀一垂，松了口气。3.He shouldered open the door.他用肩膀推开门。4.She shouldered her way through the crowd.她用肩膀挤过人群。5.He looked(back)over his shoulder.他回头朝后看。6.His arms swung as he walked.他边走边摆着双臂。7.She opened her arms and gave me a big hu
15、g.他张开双臂，紧紧地拥抱了我。8.She spread her arms and the child ran towards her.她张开双臂，孩子向她跑来。词汇积累之有关腿、脚（词汇积累之有关腿、脚（leg、foot）turn tail 掉头就跑、逃跑drag ones feet 慢吞吞地走pace 来回走踱步be on ones feet 站起来rise to ones feet 站起来spring/jump to ones feet 腾的站起来，更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君stagger out/stumble 跌跌撞撞地走stroll/wander 散步漫步stru
16、ggle to ones feet 挣扎着站起来with ones legs crossed 翘着二郎腿腿、脚有关句式积累腿、脚有关句式积累1.She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently.她不耐烦地跺着脚。2.Each team tries to kick the ball into the other teams net.每组都试图把球踢到另一对的球网里。3.Suddenly her knees buckled/weakened and she fell to the floor.突然她的膝盖一软，摔倒在了地上。4.He sat on her
17、fathers knees while he read her a story.他坐在他父亲的膝盖上，听父亲讲故事。5.He sat with her legs crossed.他翘着二郎腿坐着。6.My legs were trembling with fear.我吓得双腿发抖。7.He rubbed his arms and stiff legs.他揉了揉两条胳膊和两条僵硬的腿。8.She jumped to her feet when she heard this amazing news.当她听到这个惊人的消息，她突然跳起来。9.When the mother chatting hap
18、pily with her customer,her daughter is stamping/tapping her feet impatiently to imply its time to go.当母亲高兴地和顾客聊天时，女儿不耐烦地跺脚，暗示该走了。10.They dragged him out of the room with his feet kicking in the air.他们把他从房间里面拖出来，他的脚还一直在空中乱踢。词汇积累之有关头、面部词汇积累之有关头、面部nod ones head 点头 shake ones head 摇头frown 皱眉ones eyes wi
19、dened 某人瞪大了眼hung/dropped/lowered/bent/bowed his head 低头notice 注意；observe 观察；stare 盯；glance 瞥；gaze 凝更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君sniff 擤鼻涕视注视；glare 怒视；shine/sparkle/twinkle with+excitement/joy/pride 表示眼睛闪烁着.情绪头、面部有关句式积累头、面部有关句式积累1.He went home with the teachers warning ringing in his ears.回家的路上，老师的警告一直在他的耳边
20、萦绕。2.He pressed his ears to the door,but heard nothing他把耳朵贴在门上，但是什么也听不到。3.He was beaming/grinned/smiled from ear to ear.他笑得合不拢嘴。4.She put her hands over her ears to block out what he was saying.她用手捂住耳朵，不听他说的话。5.Her eyes widened and she put a hand over her mouth.她瞪大双眼，捂住嘴巴。6.The dog sniffed suspiciou
21、sly at the stranger.狗疑惑地嗅着那个陌生人。7.She buried her face in her handkerchief and sniffed loudly.她把脸埋在手帕里，大声地擤着鼻子。8.She covered his mouth to hide his yawn.他捂住嘴偷偷打了个呵欠。9.He bit his lip nervously,trying not to cry.他紧张地咬着嘴唇，努力忍着不哭出来。10.He shook his head in disapproval.他摇了摇头，表示反对。谚语积累谚语积累1.Justice has long
22、arm.天网恢恢，疏而不漏。2.Stretch your arm no further than your sleeve will reach.量入为出。3.A cold hand and a warm heart.手冷心肠热。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君4.One hand washes an other.有来有往，互相利用。5.fall ones leg 逢凶化吉6.as fast as ones legs can carry one 开足马力7.have a foot in both camps 脚踏两只船8.Better the foot slip with the t
23、ongue.宁可失足，不可食言。9.Better be the head of an ass than the tail of a horse.宁为鸡头，不为牛尾。10.Two heads are better than one.三个臭皮匠，赛过诸葛亮。11.Take a hair of the dog than bit you.以毒攻毒，以酒解酒。12.A wise head makes the tongue short.智者寡言。13.Walls have ears.隔墙有耳。14.Nothing is too difficult,if you put your heart into it
24、.世上无难事，只怕有心人。15.A bird in the hand is worth is worth tan two in the bush.一鸟在手胜过双鸟在林。16.You cannot clap with one hand.孤掌难鸣。17.Eye for eye and tooth for tooth.以牙还牙、以眼还眼。18.A fools heart dances on his lips.愚人心坦荡，挂在嘴唇上。19.Gain got by a lie will burn on ones fingers.靠欺骗得来的利益会使自己受害。20.Keep your mouth shut
25、 and your eyes open.多看少说。万能写作模板万能写作模板1.他在酒吧与人挥拳斗殴。He _ fight in the bar.2.他用拳头啪地猛击一下手掌。He smacked _ of his hand.3.我拍了拍那名男子的肩膀，让他挪动一下。I _ and asked him to love.4.他使劲捏我的手腕，弄疼了。He was _so hard that it ached.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君5.她抓起公文包跑到公共汽车站。She _her briefcase and ran to the bus stop.6.请小心搬运货物。Pleas
26、e_ the goods with great care.7.斯蒂夫抓住把手，对我大声喊叫。Stevie grasp the knob and yell at me loudly.8.我突然感到肩部一阵剧痛。Suddenly I felt a sharp pain_.9.鲍勃拖着一个大箱子进入了后备箱。Bob _ a big box into the trunk.10.他推开母亲，并返回家中。He _ and back into home.11.他的手臂微微地颤动。His arm_.12.他们一定会张开双臂欢迎你。They are sure to welcome you _.13.他们手挽手的
27、走着。They walked along _.14.他交叉双臂站在那，看起来很生气。He stood there _,looking angry 15.她双臂交叉，凝视着他。She _ and stared at him.16.他张开双臂,露出灿烂笑容。He _ with a broad smile.17.简依偎在他的肩膀上。Jane snuggled up _.18.小偷抢了她的钱包逃跑了。The thief_her purse and ran away.19.我牢牢地抓住了栏杆以防这强烈的风把我吹跑。更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君I _the railing in case
28、the strong wind blew me away.20.我像是受到惊雷轰击一般，一下子就站立起来。I _,completely thunderstruck.21.我拖着受了严重瘀伤的腿逃走了。I escaped _.22.她缓慢地移动着他的脚步，当他不情愿地跟着他父母。She _ as she reluctantly_her parents.23.当她看到海伦站起来时，惊讶地睁大了眼睛。Then her eyes widened in surprise as she saw Helen _.【高考真题】高考真题】（2022 年新高考年新高考 I 卷）卷）He had only gone
29、 a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground.他只走了几米就绊倒了，瘫倒在地上。（2022 年浙江卷）年浙江卷）They nodded gratefully as I pushed my spoon into the pot and took a large spoonful and poured it into their bowls.我感激地点了点头，把勺子塞进锅里，拿了一大勺，倒进他们的碗里。【名校模拟题提升练】名校模拟题提升练】1（2023湖南常德湖南常德高三阶段练习）高三阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给
30、段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A few years ago,the company I worked for sent my wife and me to live in New York for a year.Ive always loved running,so I was really happy when I found out I lived next to Central Park.This meant that every morning I could go for a run before I went to work.Because a lot of peo
31、ple had told me to be careful of robbers in the park,so usually I didnt take anything with me.How could they rob me if I didnt have anything?But one morning,my wife gave me a$10 bill and asked me to buy some bread on the way.更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君It was a beautiful morning and the park was quiet wit
32、h very few people walking or jogging(慢跑)around.While I was running through the park,another jogger knocked into me.He apologized and continued running.For a while,I didnt think too much of it.However,when I noticed the wide path where I was running,I thought it was kind of strange.The warning of rob
33、bers in the park occurred to me.“It could have been a robber!”I suddenly became alarmed,so I checked my pocket and found that the money was missing.Without thinking twice,I ran after that jogger.I finally caught up and held him by the arm.I shouted,“Give me the$10 bill!Now!”I am not usually a hot-he
34、aded(性急的)person,but I got really angry this time.I couldnt believe the robbery was actually happening to me.Filled with anger,I shook my fist at him.This seemed to frighten him.He quickly put his hand in his pocket and gave me the money.Then he ran away as fast as he could.I bought the bread and wen
35、t home.As soon as I got home,I couldnt wait to tell my wife my story.“You wont believe what happened to me,”I started with pride.She immediately stopped me,“I know,you left the money for the bread on the kitchen table.”注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1Looking at the money on the tab
36、le,I stood there,shocked._Paragraph 2:For several days,I waited at the same spot._更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君_2（2023 秋秋贵州六盘水贵州六盘水高三校考阶段练习）高三校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Thirty years ago,I was a sixteen-year-old boy,tall and thin.It was the end of summer and the cool winds of fall were in t
37、he air.In front of a house,there was a truckload of wood,which my father,my brother and I had unloaded the day before.My father and my brother were out to do farm work,so I needed to move these pieces of wood around the house again and again to where we were piling the chooped wood.And then I would
38、cover it with oilcloth to keep it from getting wet.In those days,we used to use these wood fires to cook.We tried our best to collect firewood because we still needed some to get through the whole winter.I worked fast at first,but soon I realized that I needed to go slower if I didnt want to make my
39、self too tired.Then I spent much time piling the wood and tying it together with a rope in case of falling down.To start with,I thought the work was boring.But then it became a game for me.Seeing that I could pile the wood so neatly,I smiled during the hard work.After a while,the wood was all piled
40、up,and my skinny arms felt a little sore.However,I didnt stop working.I still needed to fetch some water with containers from the spring near our home.Our well water was so full of iron that it tasted terrible,so all cooking and drinking water had to come from the spring.The five-gallon containers f
41、elt like they weighed a ton,but I picked one at a time and carried them all up the hill to my house.As I carried the last container back home,I saw my mother smiling at me at the door with a glass of tea in her hand.She said to me,“Here you are,baby.Just take a break.”We sat down with our dogs at ou
42、r feet,watching the leaves blowing in the wind.Relaxing in the moment of peace and harmony,I figured out a good way to get water easier.注意：1续写词数应为 150 左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I decided to make a pipe to convey water._更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷君_My neighbors came to my house to get water at dusk._3（2023 秋秋重
43、庆重庆高三巴蜀中学阶段练习）高三巴蜀中学阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was May 2018,and my partner,Gabe Rosescu,and I were taking a road trip in his little car from my home in Weyburn,Saskatchewan,to visit friends in Nelson,British Columbia.It was our first trip together after six months of dating,meaning
44、 it would be an adventure on so many levels.At around 5:30 p.m.,we were driving along the Crowsnest Highway,a steep winding road that splits through the southern Canadian Rockies.I was texting my mother when I happened to look up in time to see an enormous tree in front of us on the highway standing
45、 straight up!It was being pushed along by mud that was swallowing everything in its path.Within seconds,our car was rolling 900 feet down the cliffside.I dont know how long we were unconscious,but I woke up to the sound of Gab e moaning.He was slumped over the steering wheel and his blood was everyw
46、here.The car had landed on a small rock amid trees that had come down with the slide.On one side of us was the mountain.On the other,a steep drop of about 3,000 feet into a river.I tried opening my door and was overcome by sharp chest pain.Id later learn that Id suffered a broken breastbone.In addit
47、ion,my left ankle had been crushed and my foot was practically turned sideways.Gab e had broken his cheek bones,as well as his orbital(眼眶)bones,leaving him blind in his left eye.With the passenger and drivers side doors crushed shut,and my window impassable,the only way out was 更多全科试卷及资料，请关注公众号：高中试卷
48、君through the drivers side window.Neither of us remember doing it,but somehow we both managed to crawl out of that wreckage.We sat on a log and considered our options.注意：1.续写词数应为 150 左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。We had no phone signal,and the highway was 900 feet above us._Fortunately,four passersby happen
49、ed to spot our car the next morning._4（2023 秋秋海南省海南省高三校考阶段练习）高三校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Most people have an experience that they will never forget.For pilots Dave McMahon and Sydnie Uemoto,it involved a plane crash,and an ocean,which made them realize the meaning of life and coope
50、ration.As the twin-engine Piper Apache flew 5,000 feet above the Pacific Ocean,23-year-old pilot Sydnie Uemoto and her co-pilot,26-year-old Dave McMahon,heard the strange sound of the engines.Then,without warning,the pilots lost power to the right engine.A moment later,the left one went.At about 1,0