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1、优点英语专题01 读后续写考情概述v 考情分析、低分剖析、评分标准、备考策略【考情分析】 读后续写是从2016年开始应用于高考综合改革试点省份的高考中、并将随着高考综合改革试点的推广在全国范围内使用。所提供短文词数在350左右，以记叙文或者夹叙夹议文为主，所考察的主题为人与自然，人与动物或者人与自我。 读后续写是创造性地将“阅读”与“写作”融为一体的新题型，难度较大。能够更加有效地考查考生的语言综合运用能力、思维能力、学习能力和书面表达能力。反映考生在面对生活实践或学习探索情境中，运用正确的思维方法，有效结合英语语言学科知识，认识问题、分析问题和解决问题的综合素质。读后续写所提供的材料一般都是
2、故事性较强的文章。文章通俗易懂，故事线索的逻辑性较强，要求考生续写的部分多是故事发展的高潮或结局。情节曲折跌宕，线索性和逻辑性较强。2021年-2023年新高考英语读后续写考情分析年份卷别类型话题2023新高考I&II卷人与自我在老师的鼓励下参加作文比赛2023浙江1月卷人与自然“我”与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅2022新高考I&II卷人与自我鼓励身残志坚男孩继续参加越野赛2022浙江6月卷人与社会为无家可归的人们发放食物2022浙江1月卷人与社会与“最不合拍”搭档成为好友2021新高考I&II卷人与自我双胞胎在母亲节给妈妈做早餐2021浙江6月卷人与社会作者上学时的一次打工挣钱的经历2021浙江1月卷人
3、与社会少年意外将头卡在南瓜中而爆红网络【低分剖析】1. 缺乏逻辑性： 续写部分只顾文字无效堆砌，内容偏离文章主题。2. 忽视每段首句的导向性：续写最常犯的错误，就是只考虑故事情节的延续，忽视了与段落开头的衔接， 这样很容易偏离主题。3. 忽视语法结构的准确性：错用动词时态、语态、人称等都会影响得分，各种特殊句式或从句的错用也是扣分的一大原因。4. 忽视词汇和句式的丰富性：不能充分运用丰富的词汇和多变的句法结构也使文章过于平淡。5. 过度运用对话：为追求长句，过多使用对话，使文章过于口语化，缺乏深度和阅读体验。6. 情节平铺直叙，缺乏创新：古人云：“文似看山不喜平”。即写文章就像观赏山峰那样，喜
4、欢起伏，不喜欢平铺直叙。所以续写应当体现跌宕起伏和矛盾冲突。7. 缺乏细节描写：人物的外貌、心理、肢体动作、环境等细节描写都会增加立体性和饱满度。8. 字迹潦草，卷面缺乏美感：卷面脏乱容易引起阅卷不适，也是扣分点。【评分标准】1. 本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。2. 评分时，主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为：（1）续写内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。3. 评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4. 评分
5、时还应注意:（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分；（2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；（3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。档次得分评分标准第七档22-25创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高:使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解:自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。第六档18-21创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高:使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错
6、误，但不影响理解:比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第五档15-17创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关:使用恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解:使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第四档11-14创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关:使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解:尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第三档6-10内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节:所
7、用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解:未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。第二档1-5内容和逻辑上有较多问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节:所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解:几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。第一档0未作答:所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判:所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。【评分标准分析】总体来看，读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力。评分标准是评分的依据和绝对标准。依据评分标准，读后续写主要考查阅读理解能力，由读到写的思维
8、能力和语言表达运用能力三个方面。评卷时，评卷老师先根据考生所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。阅卷老师在阅卷时，主要考虑以下内容：1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；2.内容的丰富性；3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；4.上下文的连贯性。【备考策略】一 把握故事主题续写故事要符合积极的世界观和价值取向，逻辑合理，情节连贯，从人与自我、人与社会、人与自然三个主题语境进行分析，读透文本信息，把握故事主题，防止主题跑偏和故事情节荒诞离奇。二 合理分析情节读后续写能否拿否拿高分某种程度上取决于故事情节的构思。这就要求考生做到学会分析情节
9、。分析故事情节一般从故事六要素着手，即我们通常所说的“5W1H”，即who, when, where, what, why, how。然后根据故事情节发展线和主人公的情感变化理清文章脉络，续写文章。三 构思续写情节1. 分析段首句，根据其关键信息，提出问题，预设故事情节发展走向，即第一段情节内容。关注段首句和续写部分的衔接，思考续写第一段和第二段的衔接，推出第二段的情节。续写评分标准中的其中一项是上下文的连贯。所以在写作中，我们要注意续写部分与原文的形式和意义两方面都要保持连贯。我们可以通过恰当准确地使用过渡词，来达到文章形式上的连贯性。2. 思考故事如何结尾，如何与前文做好首位呼应，逻辑性强
10、，展现故事主题。第二段尾句则应有文章主旨以及感情的升华，以正能量的语句（或自己从中得到的感悟等）进行总结，传递真挚的情感，弘扬人性的真善美。通过抒情、议论等方式表达人物的情感或人生的哲理，使文章完美收尾。四 优化语言结构可以从人物外貌描写、心理情绪描写、动作描写、场景描写等细节进行分类训练，提升语言表达的质量。续写文章语言不但要优美，而且遣词造句更要多样化。润色语言，提高文采，体现出多样化语句。要求考生不仅要熟练掌握语法知识、句式结构，（比如倒装句、强调句、非限制性定语从句、分词作状语、各种状语从句、独立主格、虚拟语气等），还要掌握大量的词汇和短语。五 运用细节微描写要点和细节描写是得高分的关
11、键。细节描写对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，考生应当善于捕捉细节、刻画细节（如心理描写、动作描写、环境描写、外貌描写、神态描写），并从这些方面进行润色，提升语言表达质量，还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法以完成语言风格契合度高的短文。六 避免常见失分点1. 随意偏离文本主题2. 违背逻辑常理常识3. 添加无关人物4. 情节荒诞离奇5. 运用过多对话6. 续写体现负能量7. 段落之间无联系8. 卷面脏乱不整洁七 避免常见失分点保持字迹工整，卷面优美，让文章阅读赏心悦目也是平时需要有效训练的要点。【 高考真题】（2023年新高考II卷）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使
12、之构成一篇完整的短文。When I was in middle school, my social studies teacher asked me to enter a writing contest. I said no without thinking. I did not love writing. My family came from Brazil, so English was only my second language. Writing was so difficult and painful for me that my teacher had allowed me to
13、 present my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by acting out a play, where I played all the parts. No one laughed harder than he did. So, why did he suddenly force me to do something at which I was sure to fail? His reply: “Because I love your stories. If youre willing to apply yourself, I think yo
14、u have a good shot at this.” Encouraged by his words, I agreed to give it a try. I chose Paul Reveres horse as my subject. Paul Revere was a silversmith (银匠) in Boston who rode a horse at night on April 18, 1775 to Lexington to warn people that British soldiers were coming. My story would come strai
15、ght from the horses mouth. Not a brilliant idea, but funny; and unlikely to be anyone elses choice. What did the horse think, as he sped through the night? Did he get tired? Have doubts? Did he want to quit? I sympathized immediately. I got tired. I had doubts. I wanted to quit. But, like Reveres ho
16、rse, I kept going. I worked hard. I checked my spelling. I asked my older sister to correct my grammar. I checked out a half dozen books on Paul Revere from the library. I even read a few of them. When I handed in the essay to my teacher he read it, laughed out loud, and said, “Great. Now, write it
17、again.” I wrote it again, and again and again. When I finally finished it, the thought of winning had given way to the enjoyment of writing. If I didnt win, I wouldnt care. 注意: 1. 续写词数应为150个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。A few weeks later, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. _I went to m
18、y teachers office after the award presentation. _【 名校模拟题提升练】1（2023湖北襄阳襄阳四中校考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My great-grandmother Eileen is fierce, loyal and strong and a bit of a legend in her lifetime, which now stretches to 92 years. Were not allowed to call her Gran, because it makes her
19、feel old.That summer, I lost my job and felt hopeless. One day, I visited her. She picked up a box. “There you go,” she said. “You are good at these things, arent you?” It was a new phone. Her current mobile was ancient. I was surprised it still worked.“Yes, ”I said. “Thats why I ask you. Young peop
20、le know more about such things than us oldies. You can take it home and get it all set up,” she went on. “Then, when you bring it back, you can show me how to use it, such as surfing the Internet, sending e-mails and so on.” She smiled so sweetly that I felt a surge of love for her.I grabbed the box
21、. Setting up the phone would be easy. It was teaching her how to use it that may prove challenging. The following day I headed back to my great-grandmothers with the phone.“Heres your phone. All ready to use.” For the next hour, I was busy setting up her passcode and fingerprint recognition, which s
22、he said was like something out of James Bond.She chose a picture for her screen and it was all going so well until I tried to show her how to swipe（滑动屏幕）. “Swipe?” she asked. She was 92, I reminded myself. This had been tiring for her.She pressed at the up arrow and got angry when nothing happened.
23、When I finally got her to swipe, she didnt put the right amount of pressure on and the menu slipped away. After what seemed like hours, she threw the phone on the sofa. “Take it away!” she howled. “I want my old phone back!”I picked up the phone and was about to leave to give her time to cool down w
24、hen I realized I didnt want to go home when she was angry and upset.注意：1续写词数应为150左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Come on, Eileen. One more try.” I said._Seeing this, I was not feeling hopeless any more._2（2023重庆高三市实验中学校考期中）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I got through another long, annoying day teaching
25、 high school English via Zoom. Upon reaching my office, I pulled up my work email. There was a message from a woman who I didnt know: Gigi Shepherd, who asked how she could join my class. “Was she a new teaching assistant?” I wondered. Id never done any co-teaching. And I certainly wasnt interested
26、in doing it now with a stranger.The email must be a mistake. Before I could figure it out, the principal called. She explained that Ms. Shepherd had got the passcode that would grant(同意) her admittance to my Zoom space.“Its good news!” the principal said. “Our district is trying to improve teachers
27、skills by placing experienced part-time teachers with new full-time educators. It means more help for you.”“Cant you put her in another classroom?” I said. “Im just fine alone.”“The assignments have been made,” she said. “This will be fine.”Deep down, I disliked changes. When things didnt go as I wa
28、nted, I tended to get anxious. That evening, I emailed the stranger, as Id come to think of her, with directions for joining us online.The next morning, my screen was filled with the image of Gigis husband, as he helped her sign on. Gigi looked to be about my age. I put her on the spot, asking her t
29、o teach a lesson supporting the students emotional needs. To my surprise, the students became cheerful and lively as Gigi led them in a discussion on ways to stay connected. “Remember-even when were apart physically from friends and family, we neednt feel alone, she said in a breathy, sweet yet deli
30、berate(从容的) voice, like a grade schoolteacher. And all the students responded. That was totally different from my teaching style.Her kind words werent reserved only for students. “What a wonderful lesson,” she said before we signed off. “I really like the way you express yourself, Lori,” she told me
31、.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按照图如下格式在答题卡的相应位置做答。After school that day, Gigi and I got to know each other._Since then, I had learned a lot from Gigi._3（2023湖南高三湖南师大附中校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。I wouldnt say that my sister Thika and I were particularly close. I was the naive little one, whil
32、e she appeared to me to be walking on waterShe was literally the symbol of perfection, and I wanted to be just like her. If she wore her hair in twin ponytails with a blue clip one day, I would do the same with mine the following day. I used to follow her and her friends around and beg to be include
33、d, but a thirteen-year-olds life doesnt really have much space for a bother so me ten-year-old sister. Over time, my admiration for her turned into indifference. Living in the same apartment as strangers, we shared meals but barely spoke to one another.I was so unconcerned when she informed me last
34、year that she would be spending eight months studying abroad in Lisbon, Portugal. I assumed Id get to use her CD player and wear the dresses she left behind. That was the only way I thought her leaving would affect me.I sat in my room that first evening after she departed and tried to finish my assi
35、gnment. I couldnt get rid of the feeling that something was wrong, something was missing. The apartment was far too silent. Both Thikas CD player and her voice giggling on the phone with her friends were absent. As I sat there, I became acutely aware of how different life was without her. Even thoug
36、h we didnt always talk, just having her there made me feel secure.I sobbed that evening. We wasted years trying to live our own lives and overlooking each others, and that made my heart ache. I sobbed that I did not even give her a hug before she boarded her plane. But as the night went on, my sobs turned into tears of peace, tears of new beginnings.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I picked up the phone and called her halfway across the world._For a long time there was nothing but silence on the other end._