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1、免费免费查查看看使使用用说说明明免费查看使用说明Sports and Sports and FitnessFitness高中英语人教版B1U3 READING FOR WRITINGLearning ObjectivesAt the end of this class,you will be able to1.learn the writing method through reading the passage “Going Positive Going Positive”2.have a good understanding of how to write a page in a clas
2、s wellness book.3.learn to use comparison writing method.你校英文报健康专栏 A Wellness Book 的主编Kayla收到一名高一新生Jean的求助信，在新环境中Jean因看到周围的同学都非常优秀而感到自卑。假设你是Kayla，写一封回信，内容包括：1.曾经有过类似的经历；2.思想如何发生转变；3.改变后的情况。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。高考链接Pre-writingPA RT 1ExamplesWhat is a wellness book?QuestionA wellness bo
3、ok is a book in which a group of people exchange ideas about health and fitness.You are encouraged to write an article to share your ideas on how to keep healthy physically and mentally.Whenever you have any questions on wellness,you can ask for help by setting down your questions in the book.What d
4、o you want to share in your class wellness book?BrainstormWhat can you do to make exercise like jogging more enjoyable?How can you make your meals healthier?How can you plan your work and make sure that you also have time to rest and relax?What can you do to become more confident and feel better abo
5、ut yourself?.Lets learn how to write a page for a wellness book.How?How?How?How?Going PositiveA sample article in a wellness bookWhile-writingPA RT 2Para.1 State the topic.Para.2 Describe the reason why Kayla changed her thinking and how Kayla changed.Para.3 How have the changes improved her life?Re
6、ad for the structure(P42)How many parts can this article be divided into?What does each part mainly talk about?I worried about my weight and tried every new diet to lose weight.An article said I should be asking“Am I fit?”instead of asking“Am I fat?”I ran two kilometres in eight minutes,did 30 push-
7、ups and added healthy foods to my meals.She stopped comparing with models,listed the things she liked about herself and became happier and healthier.Para.1 State the topic Para.2 Describe the reason why you want to change and how you changed.Learn to write a structure.How to change the sentences to
8、fit our article?Para.3 How have the changes improved your life?I worried about my grades and tried every method to study hard but in vain.My teacher told me that mental health is the most important.I concentrated on my study,got up early,jogged for half an hour and stopped staying up late.I stopped
9、comparing with others,listed the achievements I have made and became happier and healthier.Comparison Read for writing method.The pastThe presentworried about my weight and tried every new dietThe resultthink about fitness rather than weightwanted to look like the slimgirls on TVbe positive about my
10、self,become happier and healthierstop comparing myselfwith actresses and modelslooked for things that werewrong with my face or bodymake a list of things I like about myselfwanted to lose three kiloscut out the foods I enjoyedrun 2 kilometers in 8 minutesadd healthy foods to my mealsLearn to use com
11、parison writing method.The pastThe presentalways wanted to be the most excellent studentThe resultstop comparing myself with my classmatesdid more papers than my classmatesbe positive about myself,become happier and healthiermaster the knowledge Ive learnedcouldnt concentrate in classstudy efficient
12、ly in classstayed up latepaid attention to other studentsget up early every morningthink about my own studyUse comparison writing in our article.I always wanted to look like the slim girls on TV even though I knew that it was impossible.I worried about my weight and tried every new diet I read about
13、 online.I tried no-fat,low-fat,5:2,only bananas,no bananasI almost went bananas,too.Then I read an article that said instead of asking“Am I fat?”I should be asking“Am I fit?”I had no idea a letter could make such a difference!Once I started thinking about fitness rather than weight,things began to c
14、hange.Instead of saying“I want to lose three kilos”,I would say“I want to run two kilometres in eight minutes”or“I want to be able to do 30 push-ups”.Read the passage and find the phrases and sentence structures that you may use in your own article.Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed,I added
15、 healthy foods to my meals.I could still have a burger now and then,but I would add a salad or an apple.Finally,I stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body.Instead,I made a list of the things I liked about myself.By being positive
16、about myself and my body,I became both happier and healthier.Read the passage and find the phrases and sentence structures that you may use in your own article.Learn for useful expressions.even thoughI always wanted to look like the slim girls on TV even though I knew that it was impossible.套用句式I al
17、ways wanted to be the most excellent student in my class even though I knew it was impossible.(尽管我知道那是不可能的)Para.1 Learn for useful expressions.instead ofinstead of 代替；而不是Then I read an article that said instead of asking“Am I fat?”I should be asking“Am I fit?”Instead of saying“I want to lose three k
18、ilos”,I would say“I want to run two kilometres in eight minutes”or“I want to be able to do 30 push-ups”.Para.2 Instead of trying to be number one,you should be telling yourself to make progress step by step.（而不是努力成为第一名）Instead of saying“I want to do more papers than my classmates”,I would say“I want
19、 to try my best to master the knowledge Ive learned”.（而不是说“我想比同学们做更多的试卷”）套用句式Learn for useful expressions.instead ofLearn for useful expressions.rather thanrather than 后面可接单词，短语等Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed,I added healthy foods to my meals.套用句式我每天早上早起并慢跑30分钟，而不是每天熬夜。Rather than stayi
20、ng up late every night,I get up early every morning and go jogging for 30 minutes.Para.2 Learn for useful pare.with 套用句式Finally,I stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body.Finally,I stopped comparing myself with my classmates.最后，我停
21、止把自己和同学们做比较。Para.3 Learn for useful expressions.instead instead 是副词，代替，反而，相反；放在句首或句末Instead,I made a list of the things I liked about myself.套用句式相反，我把我取得的成绩列了个清单。Instead,I made a list of the things I have accomplished.Para.3 Learn for useful expressions.I had no idea what my teacher said could make
22、such a big difference.活用短语make a differencePara.2 I had no idea a letter could make such a difference!我没有想到老师说的话会有那么大的影响.I always wanted to look like the slim girls on TV even though I knew that it was impossible.I worried about my weight and tried every new diet I read about online.I tried no-fat,l
23、ow-fat,5:2,only bananas,no bananasI almost went bananas,too.Then I read an article that said instead of asking“Am I fat?”I should be asking“Am I fit?”I had no idea a letter could make such a difference!Once I started thinking about fitness rather than weight,things began to change.Instead of saying“
24、I want to lose three kilos”,I would say“I want to run two two kilometers in eight minutes”段首连接词 or“I want to be able to do 30 push-ups.”Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed,I added healthy foods to my meals.I could still have a burger now and then,but I would add a salad or an apple.Finally,I
25、 stopped comparing myself with actresses and models and looking for things that were wrong with my face or body.Instead,I made a list of the things I liked about myself.By being positive about myself and my body,I became both happier and healthier.段首连接词I always wanted to be the most excellent studen
26、t in my class even though I knew it was impossible.I worried about my maths grades and studied really hard.I stayed up late every night doing lots of papers,which caused sleep disorders.But all my efforts seemed to be in vain.I didnt feel energetic all day and I even couldnt concentrate in class.As
27、a result,I often felt tired and stressed.Write on your ownPart 1.Start with a general statement about the topic and your situation.Then my maths teacher talked to me with patience,“Adequate sleep is not only a way to relax but also a guarantee to improve your academic performance.Instead of trying t
28、o be number one,you should be telling yourself to make progress step by step.”I had no idea what my teacher said could make such a big difference.Write on your ownPart 2.Describe the reason why you want to change and how you changed.Once I started thinking about my own study rather than paying atten
29、tion to other students,things began to change.Instead of saying“I want to do more papers than my classmates”,I would say“I want to try my best to master the knowledge Ive learned”.Rather than staying up late every night,I get up early every morning and go jogging for 30 minutes.I can study efficient
30、ly in class now.Write on your own Finally,I stopped comparing myself with my classmates.Instead,I made a list of the things I have accomplished.By being positive about myself,I became both happier and healthier.Write on your ownPart 3.How the changes have improved your lifeSample writingDear Jean,Im
31、 sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school.Such problems are quite normal.Perhaps the experiences of my own will be helpful to you.When I was a student,I always wanted to be the most excellent student in my class even though I knew it was impossible.I worried about my math
32、s grades and studied really hard.I stayed up late every night doing lots of papers,which caused sleep disorders.But all my efforts seemed to be in vain.I didnt feel energetic all day and I even couldnt concentrate in class.As a result,I often felt tired and stressed.Sample writing Then my Maths teac
33、her talked to me with patience,“Adequate sleep is not only a way to relax but also a guarantee to improve your academic performance.Instead of trying to be number one,you should be telling yourself to make progress step by step.”I had no idea what my teacher said could make such a big difference.Onc
34、e I started thinking about my own study rather than paying attention to other students,things began to change.Instead of saying“I want to do more papers than my classmates”,I would say“I want to try my best to master the knowledge Ive learned”.Sample writingRather than staying up late every night,I
35、get up early every morning and go jogging for 30 minutes.I can study efficiently in class now.Finally,I stopped comparing myself with my classmates.Instead,I made a list of the things I have accomplished.By being positive about myself,I became both happier and healthier.I do hope you will find these
36、 suggestions helpful.Best wishes!Yours,Kayla Post-writingPA RT 3Revise your draftDo you explain why you changed?Do you tell how the changes have improved your life?Is the text well-organized?Do you use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?Are there any grammar or spelling error
37、s?Do you use correct punctuation?Summary for structureHow to write a page in a wellness book?Start with a general statement about the topic and your situation.Para 1:Para 2:Para 3:Give a brief summary about how the changes have improved your life.Describe the reason why you want to change and compare the results.Summary.New writing method:Review the writing methods we have learned before:Comparison 套用句式段首过渡词活用短语语法结构(-ing形式)润色HomeworkWrite a page for a class wellness book.(P43)脑 洞 英 语 课 堂免费免费查查看看使使用用说说明明免费查看使用说明