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1、XB1U5 Working the Land 爱V高中英语工作室李莉 单元主题语境和语篇内容分析主题语境：人与自然主题群： 自然生态、环境保护子话题: 1. 人与环境、人与动植物 2. 自然科学研究成果【单元主题解读】本单元围绕农业展开，主要介绍我国“杂交水稻之父”、中国工程院院士袁隆平的高尚品质和他的杂交水稻技术对我国乃至世界其他国家的巨大贡献，其次讨论全球饥饿问题以及化学耕作和有机耕作等方面的内容。 本单元还着力培养学生正确的价值观，通过介绍袁隆平和李保国的感人事迹、现代农业的多元发展、青年人的农业创业之路等，引导学生思考正确的人生追求和理想事业，理解个人的发展和价值的实现要与国家和社会发
2、展的需要相结合。一、 教材语料：人教版 XB1U5 (单词+短语+习惯表达）描述农业和人物的主题单词（源自全单元，包括教材单元所有教学内容+workbook）食物Sorghum broom grain wheat flavor nutritional nutritious nutrition bacterium in turn digest mineral root农业生产Hybrid boost yield conventional expand output strain soil salty chemical fertilizer poverty organic pesticide wi
3、despread essential粮食问题Shortage tackle crisis domestic consumption generate reality描写人物devote.to. convince characteristic attain assumption overcome estimate leisure deep down celebrity envision vision城市建设Intense be comprised of. urban bomb tunnel extension alleviate alternative for instance depth en
4、tirely aspect描述人物的教材金句(一) 人物品格1. As a result, her decision has also helped to alleviate poverty and improve the lives of many people in her village. (As a result, 表因果)因此，她的决定也帮助缓解了贫困，改善了村里许多人的生活。2. As a man of the soil, he cares little for celebrity or money. Instead, he makes large donations to sup
5、port agricultural research. (Instead表强调)实际上，袁隆平在内心深处仍然是一位农民。身为土地之子，他不在乎名利，反而捐赠巨资支持农业研究。(二) 人物性格1. Despite his advanced years, Yuan Longping is still young at heart and full of vision, and everyone is waiting to see what he will dream up next.虽年事已高，但袁隆平仍然保持年轻的心态，而且满怀憧憬，大家都在期待他的下一个不同寻常的想法。(Despite表转折)
6、2. Born in a small village in Southwest China, she decided not to follow many of her former classmates to the city after getting her degree at university.她出生在中国西南部的一个小村庄，在获得大学学位后，她决定不跟随许多以前的同学去城市。(Born in +地点，非谓语动词表状态)3. Yuan was convinced that the answer could be found in the creation of hybrid ric
7、e. (袁隆平确信答案可以在杂交水稻的培育中找到。(人+ be convinced that从句)（三）人物言行及成就1. Yuan overcame enormous technical difficulties to develop the first hybrid rice that could be used for farming in 1974.（定语从句）历经千辛万苦，袁隆平攻克了艰巨的技术难题，在1974年开发出了可用于耕作的第一代杂交水稻。2. Today, it is estimated that about 60 percent of domestic rice cons
8、umption in China is comprised of crops generated from Yuans hybrid strains, and his strains have allowed Chinas farmers to produce around 200 million tons of rice per year. (It + be+过去分词+that从句.)据估计,现在中国国内吃的大米有约60%来自袁隆平的杂交水稻生产的,他的(水稻)品种使中国农民每年生产约两亿吨大米。3. Given that Yuans hybrids have made him quite
9、wealthy, one might think he would retire to a life of leisure. (given that 引导的从句)考虑到杂交水稻使袁隆平变得相当富有,人们可能认为他会退休享受闲适的生活。4. Because of his invaluable contributions, Yuan Longping has received numerous awards both in China and abroad. (Because of+名词词组表因果)袁隆平凭其不可估量的贡献，在国内外获奖无数。5. Yuans innovation has help
10、ed feed not just China, but many other countries that depend on rice as well, such as India and Vietnam.（such as表举例）袁隆平的创新不仅养活了中国，也养活了以稻米为主食的许多其他国家，如印度和越南。（四）人物外貌1. Indeed, his slim but strong body is just like that of millions of Chinese farmers, to whom he has devoted his life. （形容词短语描述体型）确实，他瘦削但结
11、实的身躯，与其为之奉献毕生的千千万万的中国农民无异。二 佳句仿写：人教版 XB1U5 （约510句）1、公式：It + be+过去分词+that .Today, it is estimated that about 60 percent of domestic rice consumption in China is comprised of crops generated from Yuans hybrid strains, and his strains have allowed Chinas farmers to produce around 200 million tons of ri
12、ce per year. (P50-51) (It + be+过去分词+that .)据估计,现在中国国内吃的大米有约60%来自袁隆平的杂交水稻生产的,他的(水稻)品种使中国农民每年生产约两亿吨大米。仿写：1）据估计,英语中80%的谈话都是闲话。(It + be+过去分词+that .)It is estimated that 80% of all conversation in English is small talk. 2）众所周知,这些故事可以缓解我们的压力,开阔我们的视野。(2021新高考卷短文)（It is thought/believed/hoped that . 大家认为/相信
13、/希望）It is recognized that these stories can relieve our stress and expand our horizons. 3）众所周知,中西方国家文化差异很大。(2021全国甲卷求助信)(It is well known that . 众所周知)It is known that there is a huge cultural difference between China and the western countries. 2、公式：given that 引导的从句Given that Yuans hybrids have made
14、him quite wealthy, one might think he would retire to a life of leisure. (given that 引导的从句)考虑到杂交水稻使袁隆平变得相当富有,人们可能认为他会退休享受闲适的生活。仿写：考虑到我们学生需要更多的锻炼,我校上周日组织了一次越野赛跑。（2020新高考卷报道） Given that we students need more exercise, our school organized a crosscountry running race last Sunday. 3. 公式：形容词短语描述情感和外貌体型In
15、deed, his slim but strong body is just like that of millions of Chinese farmers, to whom he has devoted his life. （形容词短语描述体型）仿写：这个又高又瘦的男孩感到很累且脸色苍白，由于路途艰难和看不清路，他中途摔下来很多次。Tired and pale, the tall and thin boy fell down halfway many times because the road was rough and he couldnt see it clearly.（形容词短语）
16、 4. 公式：Despite+名词词组表转折Despite his advanced years, Yuan Longping is still young at heart and full of vision, and everyone is waiting to see what he will dream up next.虽年事已高，但袁隆平仍然保持年轻的心态，而且满怀憧憬，大家都在期待他的下一个不同寻常的想法。(Despite+名词词组表转折)仿写：他尽管有许多问题, 但对未来仍十分乐观。 He was still full of optimism for the future de
17、spite his many problems. 5. 公式：such as表举例Yuans innovation has helped feed not just China, but many other countries that depend on rice as well, such as India and Vietnam. (such as表举例）袁隆平的创新不仅养活了中国，也养活了以稻米为主食的许多其他国家，如印度和越南。仿写：她参加了许多课外活动, 如音乐、运动和戏剧。She took part in many extracurricular activities, suc
18、h as music, sports and drama. 6. 公式：As a result, 表因果As a result, her decision has also helped to alleviate poverty and improve the lives of many people in her village. (As a result, 表因果)因此，她的决定也帮助缓解了贫困，改善了村里许多人的生活。仿写： 他经常邀请我加入他的特别小组，结果，我开始认识别人。He often invited me to join his particular group, and as
19、 a result, I started getting to know people.7. 公式：定语从句Yuan overcame enormous technical difficulties to develop the first hybrid rice that could be used for farming in 1974.（定语从句）历经千辛万苦，袁隆平攻克了艰巨的技术难题，在1974年开发出了可用于耕作的第一代杂交水稻。仿写：今天我们认识了一位非常著名的科学家屠呦呦，她的工作帮助了世界上很多人。Today we have learnt a very famous scie
20、ntistTu Youyou, whose work has helped a lot of people in the world.8. 公式：Because of+名词词组表因果 Because of his invaluable contributions, Yuan Longping has received numerous awards both in China and abroad. (Because of+名词词组表因果)袁隆平凭其不可估量的贡献，在国内外获奖无数。仿写：他由于粗心大意,数学考试没及格。He failed his maths examination becau
21、se of his careless work.三 教材语料：目标文本（来源自人教版XB1U5第一篇文章）主题阅读，灵活续写个性结局Yuan Longping, known as the “father of hybrid rice”, is one of Chinas most famous scientists. Yet, he considers himself a farmer because he continually works the land in his research. Indeed, his slim but strong body is just like that
22、 of millions of Chinese farmers, to whom he has devoted his life.Yuan Longping was born in 1930 in Beijing. His parents wanted him to pursue a career in science or medicine. However, what concerned him most was that farmers often had poor harvests and sometimes even had a serious shortage of food to
23、 eat. To tackle this crisis, he chose to study agriculture and received an education at Southwest Agricultural College in Chongqing.After graduating in 1953, he worked as a researcher. Yuan Longping realized that larger fields were not the solution. Instead, farmers needed to boost yields in the fie
24、lds they had. How this, could be done was a challenging question at the time. Yuan was convinced that the answer could be found in the creation of hybrid rice. A hybrid is a cross between two or more varieties of a species. One characteristic of hybrids is that they usually attain a higher yield tha
25、n conventional crops. However, whether it was possible to develop a hybrid of self-pollinating plants such as rice was a matter of great debate. The common assumption then was that it could not be done. Through intense effort, Yuan overcame enormous technical difficulties to develop the first hybrid
26、 rice that could be used for farming in 1974. This hybrid enabled farmers to expand their output greatly.Today, it is estimated that about 60 percent of domestic rice consumption in China is comprised of crops generated from Yuans hybrid strains, and his strains have allowed Chinas farmers to produc
27、e around 200 million tons of rice per year. Yuans innovation has helped feed not just China, but many other countries that depend on rice as well, such as India and Vietnam. Because of his invaluable contributions, Yuan Longping has received numerous awards both in China and abroad.Given that Yuans
28、hybrids have made him quite wealthy, one might think he would retire to a life of leisure. However, this is far from the case. Deep down, Yuan is still very much a farmer at heart. As a man of the soil, he cares little for celebrity or money. Instead, he makes large donations to support agricultural
29、 research.What impresses people most about Yuan Longping is his ongoing ability to fulfill his dreams. Long ago, he envisioned rice plants as tall as sorghum, with each ear of rice as big as a broom, and each grain of rice as huge as a peanut. He succeeded in producing a kind of rice that could feed
30、 more people at home and abroad. His latest vision for “seawater rice” has also become a reality, and potentially opened up nearly one million square kilometres of salty land in China for rice production. Despite his advanced years, Yuan Longping is still young at heart and full of vision, and every
31、one is waiting to see what he will dream up next.获取基本信息who： When： Where： What： How： 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Para 1: One day, a high school graduate approached Yuan Longping to ask for advice on choosing a major for university. The student expressed an interest in English, biolo
32、gy, and agriculture, but was unsure which one to pursue. Yuan Longping responded with patience and wisdom, explaining that selecting a major is a significant decision that can shape ones future. He advised the student to consider their interests, strengths, and goals when making this choice, emphasi
33、zing that the decision should be driven by passion rather than following a trend. Yuan Longping emphasized that the chosen major does not necessarily dictate ones entire career path, and that following ones heart is key to success. Para 2: Four years later, the same student graduated from an agricul
34、tural university with honors and visited Yuan Longping once again to express his gratitude.Upon entering the scientists office, the young man felt a sense of awe. He shared his eagerness to contribute to the field of agriculture but expressed uncertainty on where to begin. Yuan Longping congratulate
35、d him and suggested gaining practical experience in the industry. He emphasized that while theoretical knowledge is important, practical experience is equally valuable and can take one even further. The young man left Yuan Longpings office feeling inspired and motivated to make a difference in the a
36、gricultural industry, knowing that with hard work and determination, he could accomplish anything.佳作学习（续写下水文的挖空）根据中文提示写续写：(用上前面的课文好句欣赏的句式或短语)_(1930年出生于北京), Yuan Longping decided not to follow many of his former classmates to the city after getting his degree at university. Instead, as a man of the s
37、oil, he _(致力于) improving the lives of those in the countryside. _(他苗条但强壮的身体就像) that of millions of Chinese farmers, to whom he devoted his life.His decision helped to _(缓解贫困) and inspired him to make large donations to support agricultural research._(袁隆平深信) the answer to improving rice production co
38、uld be found in the creation of hybrid rice. _(尽管存在技术困难), he persevered and developed the first hybrid rice that could be used for farming in 1974. His innovation not only helped feed China but also many other countries that depend on rice, _(例如) India and Vietnam.Despite making him quite wealthy, _
39、(但他很少在意名誉或财富). He remained young at heart and _(充满憧憬) even in his later years, and everyone waited in anticipation to see what he would _(梦想出) next. _(他对农业的宝贵贡献赢得了国内外众多奖项).Yuans hybrid strains now _(占) around 60 percent of domestic rice consumption in China, allowing farmers to produce approximately
40、 200 million tons of rice per year. Keys:Born in 1930 in Beijing(1930年出生于北京), Yuan Longping decided not to follow many of his former classmates to the city after getting his degree at university. Instead, as a man of the soil, he devoted his life to(致力于) improving the lives of those in the countrysi
41、de. His slim but strong body was just like(他苗条但强壮的身体就像) that of millions of Chinese farmers, to whom he devoted his life. His decision helped to alleviate poverty(缓解贫困) and inspired him to make large donations to support agricultural research.Yuan was convinced that(袁隆平深信) the answer to improving ri
42、ce production could be found in the creation of hybrid rice. Despite the technical difficulties(尽管存在技术困难), he persevered and developed the first hybrid rice that could be used for farming in 1974. His innovation not only helped feed China but also many other countries that depend on rice, such as(例如
43、) India and Vietnam.Despite making him quite wealthy, Yuan cared little for celebrity or money(但他很少在意名誉或财富). He remained young at heart and full of vision(充满憧憬) even in his later years, and everyone waited in anticipation to see what he would dream up(梦想出) next. His invaluable contributions to agric
44、ulture earned him numerous awards both in China and abroad(他对农业的宝贵贡献赢得了国内外众多奖项).Yuans hybrid strains now make up(占) around 60 percent of domestic rice consumption in China, allowing farmers to produce approximately 200 million tons of rice per year. XB1U5 Working the Land点评李玲：本单元围绕农业展开话题讨论，在第一篇阅读里叙述
45、的是袁隆平的成就以及高贵品质，通过学习，引导学生向袁隆平学习努力进取，追求理想。在续写设计中，通过青年学生向袁隆平先生咨询如何选择专业，追求理想。先生的智慧给了青年学生正确的指向。在第二段，青年学生在毕业时致谢先生，同时感悟到坚守初心，才能抵达理想彼岸。两段续写有新意，且指向积极，描述了袁先生的智慧对青年学生追求理想的积极意义。把教材内容推向了更高层面的教育意义。宋夫利：1.主题词汇主要从食物，农业生产，粮食问题，描写人物，城市建设几个方面，选取典型，重点突出，紧扣单元话题与主题。2.教材金句选择符合人与自然的主题，主要从人物品格，人物性格，人物言行，人物成就和人物外貌方面重点选用如下句型，副
46、词（短语）作状语，非谓语动词作状语，定语从句，主语从句和It作形式主语。3.佳句仿写，重点突出，主要是It作形式主语，Given that+从句，形容词（短语）作状语，副词（短语）作状语，定语从句，例句选择适合学生背诵。4.教材语料选自人教版XB1U5第一篇文章，内容紧扣单元话题，通过介绍袁隆平的感人事迹，引导学生思考正确的人生追求和理想事业，理解个人的发展和价值的实现要与国家和社会发展的需要相结合。5.读后续写用到如下句型或词块。主语+谓语+宾语+and+be unsure which宾语从句。主语+谓语+宾语，explaining that宾语从句（从句中含有一个定语从句）。主语+谓语+宾语+when时间状语从句，emphasizing that宾语从句（sth. should be done by A rather than B）。Upon doing sth.时间状语, 主语+谓语+宾语。主语+谓语+宾语+bu