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1、专题11 书面表达一、材料作文1（2023江苏淮安校考一模）春季是游园的大好时节。然而，一些游客的不文明行为让美丽的景色大打折扣。请根据要点就此写一篇英语短文谈谈自己的观点。要点：1.描写公园春天的美景和人们可以在公园里进行的活动。2.请列举三个不文明游园的行为。3.提出文明游园的建议或希望。注意：1.总词数 80-100。2.文章中不得出现真实的个人信息。_【答案】例文Spring is a good time to visit parks. There are a lot of colorful flowers and birds in the trees. People often go
2、 to parks to enjoy the beauty of the spring. They can do many things in parks, such as having picnics, taking photos, doing sports and so on. However, the uncivilized behaviors of some tourists have become a hot topic. For example, someone likes talking and laughing loudly while enjoying the scenery
3、; someone drops litter everywhere after having picnics in the parks; someone walks on the grass while they are taking pictures or playing and do not take good care of public property.Its everyones duty to protect the parks. I think we should pay more attention to our behaviors and say no to those ba
4、d habits. When we are traveling in the parks, we should obey the rules and take care of the environment.【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇议论文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”中提出游园的建议或希望，注意要点要齐全。写作步骤第一步，描述公园春天的美景和人们可以在公园里进行的活动；第二步，列举三个不文明的游园行为：大声喧哗、随地乱扔垃圾和踩踏草坪；第三步，提出文明游园的建议。亮点词汇a lot of大量，大量的and so on等等take care
5、of注意pay attention to注意，留心高分句型Someone walks on the grass while they are taking pictures or playing and do not take good care of public property.（while引导的时间状语从句）I think we should pay more attention to our behaviors and say no to those bad habits.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）When we are traveling in the parks, we s
6、hould obey the rules and take care of the environment.（when引导的时间状语从句）2（2023江苏无锡统考一模）David是一个患有先天性疾病的孩子，他没办法像别的孩子一样正常的跑跳，也不能进行长途远足活动。最近学校发生了一些事情，他很担心害怕，于是想向老师写一封信寻找帮助。请根据提示帮他写一封信。when I was having PE, my coach let me choose run or not.I wanted to run but I couldnt .be afraid others will laugh at.My c
7、oach was angry .What I thought.was disability Lost heartEven dont want to go to schoolWhat I didI tried my best to do everything like others so that nobody knew I had brain disease.Dear Mr Li, I am_【答案】例文：Dear Mr Li,I am worried about something in school these days. So I am asking you for some help.
8、When I was having PE, my coach let me choose run or not, I wanted to run but I couldnt because of my disease, with which I couldnt run or jump like other children. And because of that, I am afraid others will laugh at me. My coach was angry with my behavior.I am so nervous these days. I think of my
9、disability and I almost lose heart. Whats worse, I even dont want to go to school.I always tried my best to do everything like others so that nobody knew I had brain disease. But I really cant run or jump. Can you give me some advice? What should I do?Best wishes,David【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇材料作文，格式为书信；时态：“
10、一般过去时”为主；提示：文章要点给出了主要的提示，考生应注意围绕要点适当发挥，同时注意时态的正确性。写作步骤第一步，表明写作意图，需要寻求帮助；第二步，说明所遇到的事情，以及自己不能跑步的原因，并且说明因为这个事情自己的内心想法和教练的生气；第三步，表示自己的处境，不想被别人发现自己的疾病，需要老师给出建议，并注意最后的书信格式。亮点词汇be worried about sth担心某事ask for help寻求帮助because of由于lose heart灰心丧气高分句型I always tried my best to do everything like others so that
11、nobody knew I had brain disease.（so that引导的目的状语从句）I wanted to run but I couldnt because of my disease, with which I couldnt run or jump like other children.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）3（2023江苏宿迁统考一模）法国作家雨果说：“进步是目的，理想是标准”。回首两年多的初中时光，你一定取得了不少的进步，请根据以下思维导图的提示，以“The Progress Ive Made”为题写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你在生活和学习方面取得的进
12、步，以及对未来的展望。要求：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。The Progress Ive MadeLooking back on the past two years, I have made great progress. _【答案】One possible version:The Progress Ive MadeLooking back on the past two years, I have made great progress. First of all, I have ma
13、de many friends. We share our feelings with each other. I am not shy any longer and become active and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to my kind and patient teachers,
14、I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well. I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；时态：时态为“现在完成时”和“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“Future”部分，需要自我发挥，描述自己对未来的展望。写作步骤第一步，开篇点题：回望过去两年，取得的进步很大；第二步，具体描写自己在生活、学习方面取得的进步；第三步，描
15、写自己对未来的展望。亮点词汇 make great progress 取得很大的进步 each other 互相 not . any longer 不再 do some housework 做家务 take care of 照顾高分句型 With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on.（learn to do sth.学会做某事；such as表示列举） Thanks to my kind and patient teach
16、ers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.（and连接的并列句）4（2023江苏无锡校考一模）假设你是李华，你所在的阳光小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。注意事项：1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。One possible version:I would like to recommend my fa
17、mily for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year._ I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours faithfully,Li Hua【答案】例文I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. In my family, we respect each other and everyone enjoys equal
18、 rights. We often communicate with our family members to encourage and support each other.In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When someone has problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family. It is important for us to live a green life. We have a bala
19、nced diet to keep healthy. Besides, we usually ride bikes or walk instead of driving cars. We try our best to protect the environment. Whats more, my family members like doing volunteer work. We often take an active part in charity work to help people in need. I hope we can get the award. I am looki
20、ng forward to your answer. Yours faithfully,Li Hua【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，根据所给图表的内容写一封推荐信，推荐自己的家庭参加“模范家庭”的评选，要适当进行发挥。2. 写作指导：本文用第一人称进行写作，时态用一般现在时；正文内容主要从家庭成员、邻里关系、绿色生活和志愿者活动等方面详细说明了参加评选的理由。检查时注意是否遗漏要点，语言表达是否符合英文习惯。5（2023江苏徐州统考一模）为积极响应落实国家“双减”政策，你校英语老师研发了多种形式的英语作业，为学生减负，为教学增效。英语组正在举办题为“My favorite Engl
21、ish homework”的征文活动。请根据以下表中信息，写一篇短文投稿。要求：1)文中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名；2)语言通顺，表达正确；3)至少三个理由：4)词数：80词左右。My favorite English homeworkReasonsWishes/Suggestions1. the whole book reading整本书阅读2. play show 话剧表演3. king of words单词王4. collection of translation of public places搜集公共场所的英语译文5. movie dubbing 电影配音6. volunteer
22、guide for foreigners给老外当导游1. develop/raise reading interest, reading habit2. improve reading ability, thinking ability, language ability, writing ability, communication ability.3. build confidence 树立自信4. enlarge vocabulary 扩大词汇5. learn by practice6. enrich knowledge and experience7. know about weste
23、rn culture8. tell Chinese good stories9. spread Chinese traditional and excellent culture.参考词汇：“双减”政策“Double Reduction” policy；减轻学生负担release students burden；提升教学效果improve teaching quality_【答案】例文My favorite English homeworkIn response to the implementation of “Double Reduction” policy, our English te
24、acher has developed various forms of English homework to release students burden and improve teaching quality.Among them, I like volunteer guide for foreigners best. It not only helped me improve my spoken English, but also provides a chance for me to spread Chinese traditional and excellent culture
25、 to foreigners. Whats more, I become more confident than before.In my opinion, its also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to sing English songs, since most of us like singing. In this way, our English as well as hobbies
26、develops.I hope we will have more creative English homework in the future.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My favorite English homework”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍“双减”政策下的新型英语作业，自己最喜欢哪项以及原因；第二段表明自己对英语作业的形式的建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。二、书信作文6（2023江苏苏州统考一模）假如你叫李明，你所在的跑步
27、俱乐部拟组织一次师生户外跑活动。请你写信给外教布朗先生，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括：（1）写信意图和邀请原因；（2）活动路线和距离；（3）活动注意事项（至少两点）。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的真实姓名。（2）语句连贯，词数80词左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Mr. Brown, How are you doing? Our running club will go for a run this Saturday morning. _Best regards,Li Ming【答案】参考范文Dear Mr.
28、Brown, How are you doing? Our running club will go for a run this Saturday morning. I would like to invite you to attend. Because I know you like running very much and you run very well. We will start from Zhongshan Park and then go around Green Street for 10 kilometers. There are two places to drin
29、k water on the way. If you want to participate, please reply to me before this Friday. Meanwhile, please prepare some comfortable sportswear and shoes. If you have any questions, you can call me. My number is 12345678. I look forward to your participation.Best regards,Li Ming【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为邀请信
30、；时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。写作步骤 第一步，表明写信意图和邀请的原因；第二步，介绍活动路线和距离，以及活动注意事项；第三步，预留联系方式等回复，并表达期望。亮点词汇 would like to想要start from从开始reply to sb回复某人look forward to期望高分句型Because I know you like running very much and you run very well. (know后是省略that的宾语从句)If you want
31、 to participate, please reply to me before this Friday.(if引导的条件状语从句)7（2023江苏徐州统考一模）假如你是李华，你两个星期前在网上订购的手机质量有问题，电池只能用半天，屏幕也有问题，时不时地不能看到显示内容。请你根据以下提示写一封信给网店的售后客服反映问题。When and where did you buy the mobile phone?Whats wrong with the mobile phone?How would you like to solve the problem?注意事项：1信件必须包括所有要点，可适
32、当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2词数90左右。信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。3不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。提示词汇： 质量 quality电池 batteryDear Sir/Madam,Order number 8043197725Thanks for your attention. Im writing to complain about your product._Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】例文：Dear Sir/Madam,Order number 804319772
33、5Thanks for your attention. Im writing to complain about your product. Two weeks ago, I ordered a mobile phone from your online shop. However, the quality of this mobile phone is not up to standard.First of all, its battery can last for half a day at most. I think it should last at least a whole day
34、. Also, there is something wrong with its screen. From time to time, I cant see what is on the screen. Im not satisfied with this mobile phone at all. I regret buying a mobile phone like this. I would like to get my money back. Im looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【详解】总体分析题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不