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1、续写原文A Four-legged Guardian AngelSnow had just melted off the ground that April day at our house in Regina Beach, Saskatchewan. I had just cleaned up the pool in preparation for selling the house. The year before, I had lost my job with the provincial government, and now our financial situation was g
2、rim. In despair, I had finally put the home on the market, and a real estate agent was due to show up later that day.Even worse, I would have to give up my beloved Great Dane （大丹犬）,Brigitte, because I could no longer afford the cost of feeding it. The thought of losing the dog and our beautiful home
3、 was almost more than I could bear.Deep in despair, I sat typing up resumes and cover letters. Out of the corner of my eye I could see my thirteen-month-old son, Forrest, as he lay on the carpet, playing near our big, gentle nanny-dog, Brigitte. It seemed as ifBrigitte was always meant to be in this
4、 family and she turned out to be a perfect companion.Brigitte came to our house on Christmas eve when the doorbell rang and I was sure some of my Christmas packages had arrived. I ran to the door and swung it open, but no one was there. I sensed something and looked down, only to find a beautiful Gr
5、eat Dane sitting there, looking up at me with big, intelligent eyes. There was no way that she could have rung the doorbell by herself, was there? Perhaps, someone had found the puppy somewhere and left her there, and then rang the doorbell and ran away. They accurately guessed I would welcome an ad
6、ditional family member and take care of her.Thinking of these, I couldnt help heaving a sigh and went straight back to work. However, I hadnt typed more than two sentences when Brigitte began barking furiously and running back and forth to the sliding glass door overlooking our pool.I raced to seewh
7、at was happeningand noticed that the sliding door was slightly open. Suddenly, I realizedForrest was nowhere to be seen.In panic, I opened the door and ran outside.续写段首句：P1: There I was surprised to see Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool.P2: Finally, the doctor said Forrest was
8、 all right and could be released from hospital.解题思路：step1:根据读原文时所划关键信息确定故事问题/矛盾（通常有两层：事情本身一层；事情背后所展现的信息又一层）读原文时需划的关键信息主要包括：负面否定信息与前者形成对比的信息反复出现信息问题信息转折信息故事主要问题/矛盾：1 浅层：孩子去哪儿了；狗为何叫；孩子是否得救2 深层：是否放弃小狗；对小狗的新的认识step2:根据已给段首句与主要矛盾确定每段发展到什么程度P1:小狗救起孩子 孩子被送往医院P2:决定不放弃小狗 认识到它是守护天使step3：每段具体设计：确定描写对象，从行为动作/语言
9、、心理感受/神态表情两大方面交替描写各个对象，必要处添加环境等其他描写具体设计构思示例P1：描写对象我、小狗我：震惊紧张焦虑，祈祷小狗：快速蹬腿游向孩子我：急切拿出手机拨打急救电话小狗：咬住孩子衣服用力蹬往回游我：拍/抱一下小狗快速将孩子送上救护车P2: 描写对象我 、小狗小狗：一路陪伴在孩子身边。到家之后坐在孩子身边，不时地看孩子。我：感悟（小狗是守护天使，不能放弃）。蹲下拍它亲它说（语言内容主要是表达对小狗的肯定感谢不放弃）注意：感悟与语言内容多从文中找线索加以利用谨记：1. 必写高级句式：非谓、独立主格、 定从、名从、倒装、强调2. 多从原文找线索，利用相关词汇，提高与原文的契合度英文写
10、作示例P1: There I was surprised tosee Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool.Waves of astonishment and anxiety surging in my heart, I realized what was happening and crossed my finger for the safety of both Forrest and Brigitte. Struggle as Brigitte did, she swiftly kicked her legs an
11、d spared no strength to reach Forrest within the shortest time. Meanwhile, I grabbed my phone out of pocket and dialed for rescue with trembling voice. After what seemed to be a century, there was Brigitte, right under Forrest. She gripped Forrests cloth tightly with her teeth and kept kicking her f
12、our legs, attempting to swim back towards me. The moment she landed, wet all over, I took over Forrest, spread my arms around Brigitte and then rushed to the ambulance by which Forrest was sent to hospital for check and treatment.P2: Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be releas
13、ed from hospital.Since we stepped on the way back home, Brigitte had been staying beside Forrest as if she was concerned about another accident. After we arrived and when Forrest played on the carpet, Brigitte still sit near him and frequently stared at him with her intelligent eyes. It was this exp
14、erience that convinced me Brigitte was not just a perfect companion, but a priceless guardian angel who cared about us even more than herself. How silly it was to give her up. I squatted down, patted her on her back and kissed her forehead, whispering in her ear, “you are always meant to be in this
15、family, you are our guardian angel, and nothing could press/force me to give you up. ”下水文： P1: There I was surprised tosee Brigitte, who was terrified of water, dive into the pool.Quickly, she swam towards Forrest, who undulated up and down in the water. She bit on Forrests clothes and spared no eff
16、ort to drag him aside. I also jumped into the swimming pool without thinking. My sons heartbroken cries for help prompted me to save both of them as soon as possible because they couldnt swim at all. I tried my best to swim towards them. No waste of time! I sent Forrest to the nearest hospital for a
17、 thorough physical examination.P2: Finally, the doctor said Forrest was all right and could be released from hospital.Since we embarked on our way home, Brigitte has been by Forrests side, as if she is worried about another accident. After we arrived, while Forrest was playing on the carpet, Brigitt
18、e still sat next to him, often staring at him with her clever eyes. It was this experience that made me believe that Brigitte was not only a perfect companion, but also an invaluable guardian angel, who even cared more about us than herself. How foolish it is to give up on her. I crouched down, patted her back, kissed her forehead, and whispered in her ear, You will always be a member of this family. You are our guardian angel, and nothing can force me to give up on you.学科网（北京）股份有限公司