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1、阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Lesson from My SisterMy parents worked very hard at ensuring that everything seemed pleasant for me and I mostly ignored the fact that my elder sister was different. The child psychologist had termed it as Asperger Syndrome(阿斯伯格综合症，一种自闭障碍). This diagnosis turne
2、d my parents world upside downbut they never let it affect me.我的父母非常努力地确保一切对我来说都是愉快的，而我大多忽略了姐姐与众不同的事实。儿童心理学家称之为“阿斯伯格综合症”(阿斯伯格综合症，一种自闭障碍). 这个诊断让我父母的世界天翻地覆但他们从未让它影响到我。It was only at the age of ten that I started to notice the differences, and become conscious of my social life and self-image that I ha
3、d carefully cultivated. My sister was socially awkward. She could not look at people in the eye. She would mumble(嘟哝)to herself and repeat the words she had just said under her breath. She, however, was academically capable, and hence we attended the same primary school. Despite this, I never, ever
4、acknowledged in public that she was my sister. There was one incident, however, just two years ago, that remains imprinted in my consciousness. It was the incident that changed how I viewed my sister. It was the incident that changed me.直到十岁时，我才开始注意到这些差异，并意识到我精心培养的社交生活和自我形象。我姐姐在社交上很尴尬。她不能直视别人的眼睛。她会喃
5、喃自语(嘟哝)然后低声重复她刚才说的话。然而，她在学业上很有能力，因此我们上的是同一所小学。尽管如此，我从未在公开场合承认她是我的姐姐。然而，就在两年前，有一件事仍然留在我的意识中。这件事改变了我对妹妹的看法。这件事改变了我。Being in primary six, about to graduate, my sister and her classmates had to put up a performance, whether in a group, or individually. Due to her inability to integrate(融入), my sister wa
6、s the only one left without a group. The school had made it a rule for everyone to put up an item, so my sister had to perform individually. Ill sing,my sister told my parents, confidently. Hearing that, I was taken aback and completely shocked. I knew she would embarrass me, one way or another. No!
7、I protested. My parents shot me a look and that was when I knew my sister was going to perform, no matter what. Silently, I prayed that something would happen and I would not have to watch my sister shame herself.在小学六年级即将毕业的时候，我姐姐和她的同学们不得不表演，无论是集体表演还是个人表演。由于她无法融入(融入), 我姐姐是唯一一个没有团队的人。学校规定每个人都要挂一件物品，所
8、以我姐姐必须单独表演。“我会唱歌的，”我姐姐自信地对父母说。听到这些，我大吃一惊。我知道她会以某种方式让我难堪。“不！”我抗议道。我父母看了我一眼，就在那时我知道我姐姐无论如何都要表演。我默默地祈祷着会有什么事情发生，我不必看着我姐姐自惭形秽。That day came. I sat in the hall, waiting for the performances to start. The lights dimmed(变昏暗) a minute or two later and the curtains parted to reveal the only solomy sister. Sh
9、e blinked(眨眼) a couple of times, as if the lights shining on her were hurting her eyes.那一天来了。我坐在大厅里，等着演出开始。灯光变暗了(变昏暗) 一两分钟后，窗帘拉开，露出唯一的独奏者我姐姐。她眨眼(眨眼) 有好几次，好像照在她身上的灯光在伤害她的眼睛。注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右; 2. 段落开头已给出。Paragraph 1:It took about a whole minute for her to stammer(口吃, 结巴地说) her name and class.Paragrap
10、h 2:How did I not know that my sister could sing so sweetly?二、下水思路1. 确定主题：“我”一直以来在公开场合不承认有一个患自闭综合症的妹妹。两年前的一个小插曲改变了我对妹妹的看法，也改变了我自己。原文第二段(There was one incident, however, just two years ago, that remains imprinted in my consciousness. It was the incident that changed how I viewed my sister. It was the
11、 incident that changed me.)点明了整个故事的主题, 所以续写部分将重心放我对妹妹的情感变化上：anxiously-embarrassment-surprise-pride and regret-excited-proud2. 时空变化：黄色标出部分为原文关键信息。续写两段时空变化不大，根据最后一段第一句(That day came.Isat in the hall, waiting for theperformances to start.)可知，故事发生在校大厅，时间是妹妹独唱演出期间。根据续写第二段段首提示语(How did I not know that my
12、sister could sing so sweetly? ), 在时间上可以理解为演出期间或者是演出以后的心理活动。3. 续写难点：故事情节简单，须感同身受，注重细节描写与心理活动，否则很难写出有画面感的细节内容。因此，平时要多积累贴近学生生活，情景相类似的语料。三、下水续写1Paragraph 1:It took about a whole minute for her to stammer her name and class.I watched anxiously as she stood there, her voice quivering with nervousness. Her
13、 hands trembled slightly, and her face flushed red. Seeing this, I could feel my cheeks burning with embarrassment, and for an instant, time seemed to stand still. How I wished the ground would swallow me up! After what seemed like ages, my sister started to sing, and a sudden silence fell. To my gr
14、eat surprise, her voice filled the hall with a sweet melody, as if it came from the singing of an angel. Tears burred my eyes as I listened, overwhelmed by a mix of pride and regret.Paragraph 2:How did I not know that my sister could sing so sweetly?I just sat there in shock, not believing my ears a
15、nd eyes. Never in my wildest dream could I have imagined that my sister had a talent for music. As a great roar of applause broke out at the end of her performance, everyone stood up, clapping and cheering. It was the unexpected applause and cheers that woke me up from my thoughts. The instant my si
16、ster left the stage, I ran up and threw my arms around her, too excited to utter a word. It seemed that all eyes were on us in the hall. Incredibly, instead of feeling embarrassed, I was more than a little proud to have such a sister.下水续写1Paragraph 1:It took about a whole minute for her to stammer h
17、er name and class.I watched anxiously as she stood there, her voice trembling with nervousness. Her hands trembled slightly, and her face turned red. Seeing this, I could feel my cheeks burning with embarrassment, and for an instant, time seemed to be at a standstill. How I wish the ground could swa
18、llow me up! It seems that after a long time, my sister started singing and suddenly there was a silence. To my surprise, her voice filled the hall with sweet melodies, as if from the singing of angels. As I listened, tears welled up, filled with pride and regret.Paragraph 2:How did I not know that m
19、y sister could sing so sweetly?I couldnt help but sat there in amazement, not believing in my ears and eyes. Never in my wildest dream had I imagined that my sister had a talent for music. When her performance ended with enthusiastic applause, everyone stood up, applauding and cheering. It was the u
20、nexpected applause and cheers that woke me up from my thoughts. As soon as my sister left the stage, I ran up and hugged her, so excited that I couldnt say a word. It seems that all eyes in the hall are focused on us. Its incredible that I didnt feel embarrassed, but rather very proud to have such a sister.学科网（北京）股份有限公司