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1、中考英语真题满分作文亮点解析中考真题一：浙江杭州卷假定你是李萍，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细 节，以使行文连贯。Hi there, Li Ping!My name5s Jack and Im going to be at your school for the exchange visit next month. Tm really excited about it!Well, why am I writing right now? For one thing, I really want to know something about the interesting ac
2、tivities at your school, so could you introduce one of them? Also, I am interested in Chinese culture. So what do you suggest I do after school?Take care and hope to hear from you soon.JackDear Jack,Li Ping写作要点(1 )对Jack的来访表示欢迎。(2)介绍学校的有趣活动。(3)介绍课后可以参加的关于中国文化的内容。可用素材(1 )词汇be pleased to do ,delighted
3、.exchange visit za great chance ,talent , singing competition , rank , have a good time(2 )句式 Im pleased to know that youre coming for the exchange visit. It offers a great chance to show our talents and helps us to learn something new. As for Chinese culture, I suggest you visit the Hangzhou Nation
4、al Tea Museum.满分文展示Dear Jack,I am very delighted that you will come to our school for the exchange visit. As for the interesting school activities, I think the English Speech Contest ranks the first, which can surely help us to improve English ability.Besides, it is fun to go visiting some local tea
5、 houses, since there you can have a good taste of Chinese cultures by yourself. I am really expecting your coming soon and I hope that you will have a good time with us.Li Ping满分亮点开门见山，表明对Jack的欢迎。在“I am+形容词+that 从句”句式中，that引导宾语从句。as for意为“至于:which引导非限制性定语从句， 显示了作者较好的英语语言运用能力。besides承上启下，since引导状语从句，
6、让全文句式多样。该句由and连接，同时用that引导宾语从句。句式多样，很好地表达了对Jack的欢迎和祝愿。中考真题二：湖北天门卷饮食不当，可能会诱发多种疾病。以下图片是李华同学的一次就诊经历, 请结合图片及所给提示词，发挥你的想象，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文， 讲述一下他经历了什么，以后要注意些什么。文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。提示词：at the clinic (诊所)；junk food; stomachache; medicine写作要点(1)李华感到肚子疼，爸爸带他去诊所看病。(2)护士询问他昨天晚上吃了什么后，指引他们去看医生。(3 )对文章进行适当的结尾并谈论一下自己的观点
7、。可用素材(1 )词汇have a stomachache , the clinic , nurse , doctor , advice ,take some medicine , say no to junk food(2 )句式 One dayz Li Hua suddenly have a stomachache, so hisfather took him to the clinic to have a check. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him tostay in bed. Li Hua follows the doct
8、ors advice and says no to the junk food, so he is feeling better and better.满分文展示Li Hua is a boy who likes eating junk food very much. Last night , he started to eat again as usual. A few hours later , a strong feeling of stomachache struck him and his face turned pale at once. His father took him t
9、o the nearest clinic. Soon a nurse came and asked what happened. The doctor gave him some medicine and told him to stay in bed. He didnt feel better until he took the pills.Junk food tastes delicious , but it does no good to our health. Therefore z we must form the habit of eating healthily.满分亮点高级词汇
10、as usual的准确运用，提升了文章的档次。a strong feeling of stomachache struck him 是一个很地 道的英语句式，说明李华肚子疼这一情况。句型not.until的恰当运用增强了文章的表达效果。form the habit of为高级词汇,意为养成的习惯，充 分彰显了作者的语言功底。中考真题三：广东卷假如你叫李明，你所在的跑步俱乐部拟组织一次师生户外跑活动。请你写 信给外教布朗先生，邀请他参加此次活动。内容包括:(1)写信意图和邀请原因；(2)活动路线和距离；(3)活动注意事项(至少两点)要求：(1)不得照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和考生的
11、真实姓 名。(2)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词 数，也不必抄写在答题卡上Dear Mr. Brown,How are you doing? Our running club will go for a run this Saturday morning.Best regards,Li Ming写作要点(1)说明写信的意图，以及邀请外教参加跑步活动的原因。(2 )具体阐述活动路线和距离。(3 )补充至少两点活动注意事项。可用素材(1 )词汇in order to ,healthy ,arrive at ,activity ,carry out ,provide ,
12、 make sure , serious(2 )句式 I write this letter in order to invite you to join us because doing exercise makes us healthy. The activity takes 2 hours to carry out. One is that the club wont provide water for us , so you have to bring your own water ; the other is that you need to make sure that there
13、 isnt any serious illness in your body.满分文展示Dear Mr. Brown ,How are you doing? Our running club will go for a run this Saturday morning. Soz I would like to invite you to join us to have a good time.First of all z youd better know the route of this run, which will be from the school gate to the city
14、 center. Whats more, it will cover a distance of around 10 kilometers. That means it will be a hard and tiring run, so wearing a pair of comfortable sneakers is a good choice. And please remember not to be late for the run, which is planned to start at 9 a.m. on Sunday. It is said that it will be a
15、bit hot on Sunday, so it is wise to take some water. Finally, you should have a good rest these days, since having a good health will do good to your running performance.I do hope that you can enjoy yourself in the run and Im looking forward to your reply.Best regards,Li Ming满分亮点 开门见山，直接导入写信的背景和目的。which引导非限制性定语从句，拓展了跑步的具体信息；用 first of all开头，起到很好地导入作用。s。表示因果关系，并起到承接作用;动名词wearing作主 语，使得文章句式丰富，语言多彩。that引导宾语从句；do是助动词，表示强调，语言地道丰 满。