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1、SectionJWriting游 记类记叙文.写作技法指导XIEZUOJIFAZHIDAO游记类记叙文就是记述旅途中所见所闻，并通过对当地的风土人情、山川地貌、人文景 致、名胜古迹等方面的描写来表达作者的思想感情。一、根本结构游记一般分为三局部：开头局部：引出话题，简要介绍巡游的状况；主体局部：具体记述巡游过程；结尾局部：要抒发自己的体验与感受。二、 增分佳句1. I will never forget my first trip to Lhasa.我永久不会遗忘第一次去拉萨的旅行。2. That was my first visit to the West Lake.那是我第一次去参观西湖。
2、3. . On the way to the Palace Museum, we saw the beautiful scenery. 在去故宫的路上，我们看到了漂亮的风景。4. After 4 hours riding on the train we arrived at Mount Tai.乘坐4个小时的火车后，我们到达了泰山。5. We were all attracted by the beauty of nature.我们都被这种自然美景吸引住了。6. This is an unusual/unforgettable journey to London Tower.这次去伦敦塔的旅游
3、令人难忘。7. It was really an unforgettable journey.这的确是一次难忘的旅行。8. . What a good trip we had today.我们今日的旅行多么开心啊！9. We were very tired, but we really had a wonderful day.尽管我们特别累，但我们真地度过了开心的一天。10. This was a real life-changing experience that I would never forget. 这是一次真正转变生活的经受，我永久不会遗忘。五步写作规范WUBUXIEZUOGUIF
4、AN题目要求去年夏天我和家人到大连旅游。我们参观了海洋公园，观看了海豚的精彩表演。又到海 里游泳，后来还去看了一些出名的景点，品尝了那里的名吃。请依据提示，以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题写一篇100词左右的英语记叙文。参考词汇：海豚dolphin第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1 .确定体裁：本文为游记类，属于记叙文;2 .确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称;3 .确定时态：主要用一般过去时。二、构思第一局部，引入：整体介绍巡游的概况；其次局部，阐述：具体介绍巡游过程；第三局部，总结：抒发体验并表达愿望。其次步：核心词汇想周全1. together with和一起2. m
5、ake a tour of巡游3. modern coast city现代化海滨城市4. take the bus/by bus乘坐公共汽车5. many kinds of许多种6. cant believe ones eyes不能信任自己的眼睛7. go swimming去游泳8. enioy oneself/have a wovderfuLtime玩得很开心第三步：由词扩句雏形现1 .去年夏天我和家人一起到大连旅游，由于大连是一个漂亮的现代化的海滨城市。（as 引导缘由状语从句）Last summer,L together with my family,made a tour ofLDal
6、ian,as Dalian is a beau tiful and modem coast city.2 .那里有许多种动物，以至于我不能信任自己的眼睛。（sothat引导结果状语从句）There W6re so may kinds of animals that couldnt believe my eyes.3 .观看了海豚的表演之后，我们在一家餐馆吃午餐，那里的海鲜美味可口。（after引导 时间状语从句；whose引导定语从句）Aftejwe had seen the show ofLdolphins, we had lunch in a jestaurant whose seafoo
7、dwas delicious.4 .大海是蓝色的，海滩是金色的，我们在海里玩得很开心。（so连接两个并列句）The sea was blue ancLthe beach was golden, so we enjoyed ourselves iv the sea.5 .我们也看了大连一些好玩、闻名的景点。（主谓结构）We also went to some interesting and famous places. in Dalian.6 .尽管巡游使我特别疲乏，但我感到很快乐。（although引导让步状语从句）Althoughwas vxhaustnd from the tour,fel
8、t very happy.7 .我盼望有空时能再次去那里。（that引导宾语从句；when引导时间状语从句）I hope that I can go the）e again when I have free time.第四步：句式升级造亮点1 .用which引导的非限制定语从句改写句1Last summer, L together with my family, made a tour of Dalian, which is a beautiful and modem coast city.2 .用现在分词短语作状语改写句3Having seen the show of dolphins, w
9、e had lunch in aestaunint whose seafood was delicious.3 .用as引导的让步状语从句改写句6Exhausted as was from the tour, felt very happy.第五步：过渡连接联成篇An Unforgettable TripLast summer, L together with my family, made_a_tour of Dalian, which is a beautiful and modem coast city.First we took the bus to the Sea Park. The
10、re were so many kinds of animals that I couldnJ believe my eyes.Having seen the show ofLdolphins,we hadunch in a】estaurant whose seafood was delicious.After lunch we went swimming. The sea was blue and the beach was golden, so we enjoyed ourselves in the sea. We also went to some interesting and famous places in Dalian.Exhausted as I was from the tour, I felt very happy.一 I hope that I can go there aga in when I have free time.