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1、文档标题武汉市武昌区2022届高三年级质量检测英语读后续写试题第二节 (满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。When I was young, my mother was going to Florida to visit my grandmother. I begged her to take me with her. “Ill take you, but remember,” my mother warned me, “Grandma is sick.” I had seen plenty of sick people before, so
2、I figured it wouldnt be a big deal. Besides, by the time we got to Florida, my grandma would probably be okay. Then we would have fun just as we used to. I remembered how excited I had left the summer before when my grandma carried me on her shoulders down the streets.Grandma was a great storyteller
3、 and her stories made me feel special whenever she told them. “Grandma, tell me story,” Id say, and she would always begin the story, “Once upon a time there was a boy named Billy” Every story started with a boy named after me. When I arrived at her house, my first words were going to be, “Grandma,
4、tell me a story.”When I got to Grandmas house, she didnt come out to meet me. Even after I ran up the steps, she still didnt come out to meet me. I went into her bedroom. Instantly, I was seized by terror and disgust, because what I saw in that room wasnt my happy-go-lucky (无忧无虑的) grandmother. It wa
5、s a crumpled (褶皱的) body, thin and weak.That night as I lay in bed, I heard my grandma moaning in pain. It had the same effect on me as someone running fingernails across the blackboard. It was so annoying that I just wanted to tell her to stop. However, I didnt and it continued all night.A few weeks
6、 after we came home, my mother asked me whether it was all right if Grandma came to live with us. I said yes, but in reality I never wanted to see her again. Although my grandma lived with us for the next few months, I never went into her room. She couldnt get out of bed. I didnt want to see her.注意：
7、1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1: One day, my grandma called me as I walked by her room, but I didnt want to go.Paragraph 2: I was about to run out of the room and leave the scene behind forever when she began to tell a story.【试题信息】试卷名称体裁主题语境词数武汉市武昌区2022届高三年级质量检测记叙文人与社会正文英文词数348个词，两个词给了中文提示。续写第一
8、段首句18个词，续写第二段首句22个词。【语篇分析】1. what (前文主旨)母亲要去看望生病的奶奶，“我”央求她带我同去，因为“我”认为奶奶只是生了小病，且“我”还想听奶奶讲故事。但奶奶并没有像往常一样迎接“我”。她躺在床上，痛苦呻吟。数周后母亲将奶奶带回家与我们同住，但是“我”不想走进她的房间。2. why (故事主题)亲情温暖，尊敬长辈3. how (写作技巧)第一人称、记叙、情感变化、行为变化4. 语言（1）人物角色 1：“我”性格：贪玩、自私、知错能改 行为：小时候喜欢奶奶，期待奶奶给自己讲故事，可是奶奶生病以后表现出了自私与冷漠的一面 心理：从纯粹地考虑自我到心生悔意，明白了自己
9、的错误 角色 2：奶奶性格：慈爱、温暖行为：无论何时都尽自己所能给孙子关怀与爱心理：kind helpful - satisfied（2）场景：home（3）语言风格：平铺直述5. 具体内容 （利用拉波夫叙事模式进行分析）点题：文章无标题。指向：故事主要发生在主人公“我” 和奶奶之间，讲述我对奶奶的情感和行动的变化。进展：奶奶生病前，我非常喜欢奶奶，因为奶奶可以给我带来欢乐。奶奶生病后，我开始躲避奶奶，逃避照顾奶奶的责任。 结果：最终“我” 被奶奶感动，认识到了自己的错误，开始主动照顾奶奶。评议：本文以第一人称视角进行叙述，所以无评议。6. 情节（1）冲突 “我”在奶奶生病后，不再亲近奶奶，逃
10、避与她相处的机会。（2）行动 在生病的情况下，奶奶依然为我讲故事的举动使我感到愧疚和难过，意识到了自己行为背后的自私与冷漠。（3）解决我开始主动地、无微不至地照顾奶奶。【素材积累】happy- go- lucky 无忧无虑have the same effect on sb 对某人有相同的影响【范文赏读】One day, my grandma called me as I walked by her room, but I didnt want to go. Her voice struck a chord with me. It was the voice that I couldnt tu
11、rn a deaf ear to (强调句). I followed the voice and cast a quick glance at her lying on the bed. I immediately diverted my eyes to the floor, avoiding any eye contact with her (现在分词短语作状语). How could such a pale and weak woman be my grandma! A sense of dislike started to creep into my mind. But I could
12、sense that she looked right at me (that引导的宾语从句) and smiled with all the might she had left in her weak body (省略了that 的定语从句，修饰先行词all the might).I was about to run out of the room and leave the scene behind forever when she began to tell a story. “Once upon a time there was a boy named Billy,” as she
13、uttered the words in a hoarse but warm voice (as引导的时间状语从句), I was stunned. “ and little Billy loved his grandma very much.” Suddenly I felt something indescribable pulled at my heartstrings, and tears blurred my eyes. The moment Grandma finished her story, I raised my head, looking into her eyes regretfully. Upon touching her skinny hand (upon doing sth.“一就”), I swore to keep her company and take care of her with my utmost effort.学科网（北京）股份有限公司