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1、-.z.专四新题型写作 自 2016 年起，专四考试写作部分改革，要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等，写一篇 200 词左右的作文。出现的新题型命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。考生可以采取“简短概述材料评论总结”的写作模式。值得注意的是，在写作过程中，概述材料和进行评论缺一不可，否则将可能被扣分。例题 1 PART VI WRITING Read carefully the following e*cerpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS,in which you should:1)Su
2、mmarize the main message of the e*cerpt,and then 2)Comment on whether students learn more from classes than from other resources You can support yourself with information from the e*cerpt.Marks will be awarded for content relevance,content sufficiency,organization and language quality.Failure to fol
3、low the above instructions may result in a loss of-.z.marks.Do students learn more from classes than from other resources With the advent of the Internet and other telecommunications technologies,there is a vastly growing wealth of resources available from an immense range of media outlets.Students
4、have the ability to absorb information in a quicker and more efficient way when researching on their own through reading publications or browsing webpages online.As a result,some people argue that students now learn more from other resources than from classes.Conducting research with online material
5、s is an active process,which allows youngsters to focus in greater detail rather than passively listening to a lecture in a large classroom.The Internet and TV are also easily accessible platforms for students in the remote places where teaching resources are not as abundant as those in more develop
6、ed regions.However,teachers have the capability of e*plaining the knowledge in a deeper way and not only provide 新题型命题材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求考生可以采取简短概述材料评论总结的写作模式值得注意的是在写作过程中概述材料和进行评论缺一不可否则将可能被扣分例题范文介绍背景总结第一种观点总结 生应首先简要概述正方观点宅是现代的一种新型生活方式然后概述反方观点宅有种种弊端接下来给出自己的观点现代科技是把双刃剑我们要把握好适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利但过度依赖则
7、会对身体有害最后总结全文重申观点-.z.theoretical e*planation but also practical e*perience about life.They have accumulated a large body of intelligence that is profoundly more precise than other sources.Teachers not only function as initiators who impart knowledge but also serve as supervisors or guardians.The conv
8、entional role of instructors,in this day and age,has evolved to become evaluators and facilitators,guiding students in their academic and personal efforts.范文 1 In theinformation age,the traditional student-teacher relationship has been affected deeply and people begin to doubt whether students can l
9、earn more from classes than from other resources.（介绍背景）According to the conventional view,teachers are still the primary source from which students obtain professional knowledge,timely class interaction,and effective supervision from teachers.（总结第一种观点）On the contrary,nowadays,many people believe tha
10、t students can learn more from other resources such as Internet and TV since they are more accessible and engage students more actively in research.（总结第二种观点）新题型命题材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求考生可以采取简短概述材料评论总结的写作模式值得注意的是在写作过程中概述材料和进行评论缺一不可否则将可能被扣分例题范文介绍背景总结第一种观点总结 生应首先简要概述正方观点宅是现代的一种新型生活方式然后概述反方观点宅有种种弊端接下
11、来给出自己的观点现代科技是把双刃剑我们要把握好适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利但过度依赖则会对身体有害最后总结全文重申观点-.z.For me,I am in favor of the first view.（表明立场）Teachers play an irreplaceable role in education,whether its in the past or at present,since they not only impart knowledge,but also educate people.（总论据）For one thing,what students learn from
12、 their classes is more precise than from other resources which provide an enormous amount of data needed to be sifted through to determine which information is accurate.（理由一）For another,teachers in school put the shaping of personality in a placeas important as the teaching of knowledge,which is har
13、d for students toobtain from other resource.（理由二）In conclusion,the development of cutting-edge technology e*erts a big impact on modern education.However,it can never eliminate the need for high-quality professionals in classroom.（重申论点）(213 words)例题 2 PART VI WRITING Read carefully the following e*c
14、erpt and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 WORDS,in which you should:新题型命题材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求考生可以采取简短概述材料评论总结的写作模式值得注意的是在写作过程中概述材料和进行评论缺一不可否则将可能被扣分例题范文介绍背景总结第一种观点总结 生应首先简要概述正方观点宅是现代的一种新型生活方式然后概述反方观点宅有种种弊端接下来给出自己的观点现代科技是把双刃剑我们要把握好适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利但过度依赖则会对身体有害最后总结全文重申观点-.z.1）Summarize t
15、he main message of the e*cerpt,and then 2）Comment on whether people should choose to become indoorsy You can support yourself with information from the e*cerpt.Marks will be awarded for content relevance,content sufficiency,organization and language quality.Failure to follow the above instructions m
16、ay result in a loss of marks.Should people choose to become indoorsy in modern world In modern times when we can buy everything we need on the Internet,and communicate and even work through the Internet,becoming indoorsy men or women is simply a choice of different lifestyle.In the past,if you want
17、to buy something,you need to go out of your house,go to the store,and spend an hour or two choosing the product you want to buy.But now you can just sit in front of a computer and click your mouse,and the product can be delivered to you.Being indoorsy can save people a lot of time.新题型命题材料作文对考生的阅读理解及
18、归纳能力提出了更高的要求考生可以采取简短概述材料评论总结的写作模式值得注意的是在写作过程中概述材料和进行评论缺一不可否则将可能被扣分例题范文介绍背景总结第一种观点总结 生应首先简要概述正方观点宅是现代的一种新型生活方式然后概述反方观点宅有种种弊端接下来给出自己的观点现代科技是把双刃剑我们要把握好适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利但过度依赖则会对身体有害最后总结全文重申观点-.z.Being indoorsy can allow people to think and work in a peaceful environment.For e*ample,writers can be quite cr
19、eative when they are alone at home without being interrupted.Some sociologists warn that the indoorsy lifestyle will make people become self-centered and naive.If people stay at home for a long time,they will have little interpersonal contact with others.They do not know how to have face-to-face com
20、munication with others,and they may become shy,uncomfortable,or self-centered when they are involved in real-life communication.This indoorsy lifestyle will have a bad effect on their normal interpersonal relationship and their normal work.Indoorsy men or women spend most of their time sitting in fr
21、ont of a computer,and they seldom attend outdoor activities.Watching the computer screen for a long time will do great harm to their eyes.Also,many indoorsy people do not like to attendsports activities,and in the long run,their health will get worse.范文 2 审题思路 本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。在具体行文方面，考生应首先简新题型命题材料作文对考
22、生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求考生可以采取简短概述材料评论总结的写作模式值得注意的是在写作过程中概述材料和进行评论缺一不可否则将可能被扣分例题范文介绍背景总结第一种观点总结 生应首先简要概述正方观点宅是现代的一种新型生活方式然后概述反方观点宅有种种弊端接下来给出自己的观点现代科技是把双刃剑我们要把握好适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利但过度依赖则会对身体有害最后总结全文重申观点-.z.要概述正方观点：“宅”是现代的一种新型生活方式。然后概述反方观点：“宅”有种种弊端。接下来给出自己的观点：现代科技是把双刃剑，我们要把握好，适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利，但过度依赖则会对身体有害。最后总结全
23、文，重申观点。Should We Embrace Indoorsy Lifestyle Withthe globalization of modern technology,especially the world-wide access to Internet service,peoples lifestyle has been greatly influenced.(介绍背景)Some enjoy indoorsy lifestyle.They hold that indoorsy lifestyle is time-saving and peaceful.In contrast,thos
24、e against the idea claim that keep an indoorsy lifestyle will do harm to people both psychologically and physically.（总结材料）As far as I am concerned,modern technology is a double-edged sword.（点明观点）If we consider it as a useful tool to improve our life,it will certainly bring unprecedented convenience
25、to us.With the assistance of the Internet,one can save his time through working,shopping,or communicating with others at home.（正方理由一）Also,solitude isnt always equal to loneliness.Free from outside interruption,one can be creative and 新题型命题材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求考生可以采取简短概述材料评论总结的写作模式值得注意的是在写作过程中概述材
26、料和进行评论缺一不可否则将可能被扣分例题范文介绍背景总结第一种观点总结 生应首先简要概述正方观点宅是现代的一种新型生活方式然后概述反方观点宅有种种弊端接下来给出自己的观点现代科技是把双刃剑我们要把握好适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利但过度依赖则会对身体有害最后总结全文重申观点-.z.keep his mind sharp.（正方理由二）On the other hand,too much reliance on or indulgence in the Internet will certainly have an impact on our normal life and work.For i
27、nstance,indulging in social network online may corrode peoples social skills.To be specific,they may feel lost when talking with people face-to-face,which may affect their normal relationship with family members and friends.（反方理由一）Whats worse,sitting in front of a computer all day long means little
28、outdoor activities,which may damage ones health.（反方理由二）In conclusion,while enjoying all the benefits the virtual world has brought to us,indoorsy people should also step out of their home and engage themselves in the real world.（总结上一段）(234 words)新题型命题材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求考生可以采取简短概述材料评论总结的写作模式值得注意的是在写作过程中概述材料和进行评论缺一不可否则将可能被扣分例题范文介绍背景总结第一种观点总结 生应首先简要概述正方观点宅是现代的一种新型生活方式然后概述反方观点宅有种种弊端接下来给出自己的观点现代科技是把双刃剑我们要把握好适当利用可以使我们的生活更便利但过度依赖则会对身体有害最后总结全文重申观点