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1、高考命题偏好：变：话题丰富；考查灵活不变：语言地道；句式丰富；文化意识；思维流畅；行文连贯写作技巧：文化渗透前后呼应不落俗套思维逻辑:情节连贯语篇流畅语言方向:地道文气灵动Mavus sat by his window,gazing at the blinking lights on other buildings. He thought of Papa,who was visiting Marcus sick grandpa in Jamaica. nril try to help Mama while youre gone, Marus had promised his father. H
2、is little brother, Peter,sat beside him . When are we getting our Chistmas tree, Marcus?1 Peter asked. nI cant wait to decorate it with Mamas straw birds（草编鸟）JvWere not getting a tree this year, Peter.” Why not? Too many bills with Grandpa sick. Mama said we cant afford oneMarcus walked slowly to hi
3、s room and shook his piggy bank （猪形储蓄 罐）,seven dollars in quarters , dimes and nickels fell out, his tips from helping at the market. With school out, he thought, maybe I can earn enough in two days to buy a tree and surprise Mama and Peter.The next day,he stayed busy pushing cars to help shoppers.
4、By the time he left, six more dollars jingled in his pocket. My lucky day, he thought. Thirteen dollars should buy a small tree.He whistled all the way to the lot. But even the smallest trees were $15 or more. Tomorrow will be busy with shoppers,he thought. Ill earn those extra dollars.“Can you save
5、 this tree for me, sir?n he asked the man in the lot/4I cant, the man said, but come back tomorrow. It might still be here.H Fil be back.” Marcus waved and dashed off.The telephone rang early the next morning. Mama came into his room. The babysitter is sick, Marcus/1 she said/TH need you to take car
6、e of Peter for a day. Marcus pleaded, Its the busiest day at Mr. Smith*s market, Mama. He needs me there.” Pm so sorry. There*s nothing else we can do. Mama gave Marcus a hug. Ill try to come home early.DI never get a tree now, Marcus thought.Later, Peter asked, Can we go to the dollar store? I have
7、 a dollar.n Marcus nodded.OK We can buy our Christmas presents.HWhen they walked by the tree lot, Peter said, Wish we were getting a treeH Marcus didnt answer. He saw that most of the trees were gone including the one hed wanted. Then he saw a small tree in a can. HIs that one for sale, sir?”原文大意：今年
8、的圣诞节对Marcus注定有点特殊。爷爷生病花了不少钱， 而且爸爸也去照顾爷爷，不在Marcus和弟弟Peter身边。为了帮弟弟实现 圣诞节梦想，Marcus打零工能赚到一棵圣诞树的钱。但因为一些临时的变 动，Marcus离最终的目标只差一点点，而圣诞树都被大家买光了 .幸亏，摊点 的主人提供了 一棵小小的圣诞树，而且还是一棵能长大的有生命的常青树！Paragraph 1: nThat !s my last growing tree, “the seller said/Its small now, but it will grow tall”Paragraph 2: They hurried
9、home. Marcus set their tree and their purchase on thetable.原文关键信息梳理WTC WHEN: before Christmas WHERE: at homeWHO:Marcus, the big brother in the family, who promised Papa to help Mama and take care of his little brother Peter （caring & helpful）,worked hard to buy a Christmas tree （diligent）, was just
10、a few dollars shortPeter, the little brother, wanted to get a Christmas treeTheir Mama, had straw birds, was working away from homeTheir Papa, was visiting the sick grandpaThe seller, had a growing Christmas treeWHAT:（略） TOPIC: family bondsCONFLICT:1 .How they would deal with the small tree?（显性）.How
11、 they would enjoy this special Christmas ?（隐性）本文写作难点与亮点：如何摆脱套路禁锢，自然描写节日场景，与情节融为 一体？“以点带线”读后续写情节构建法Paragraph 1: Thats my last growing treejthe seller said.Its small now, but it will grow tall.”Marcus犹豫这棵树是不是太小了 一店主好心主动免费赠送（节日精神） 一 Peter开心拥有了自己的圣诞树一兄弟俩感激，去一元店采购圣诞 礼物Paragraph 2:They hurried home. Marcu
12、s set their tree and their purchase on the table.兄弟俩骄傲于自己的装饰作品一 2JMarcus揭晓这棵树的深层含义一 Peter愈发喜爱这棵树，继续尽力点缀一Marcus欣慰完成了爸爸妈妈 交代的任务 优质范文研读：Para.l:nThatfs my last growing tree, n the seller said. Its small now, but it will grow all. Marcus a second look （又看了眼）on the pine tree,whether it was strong enough t
13、o Mamas strawbirds （呼应原文）.The man said as ifhis mind（看 出心思）,HConsider it my Christmas present for you boys then, on Christmas Eve. Petefs eyes were, “Wow! Our small and special Christmas tree!nAfter expressing their thanks, Marcus held the gently in cupped hands（双手捧住）（空间变化）on the way to （呼应 原文）the d
14、ollar store. With the（剩下的）money, they got somegood（东西）for everyone. PeterJWere like Santa Clauswith all these presents and a Christmas tree!”（cast;wondering;hold;reading;sparling;treasure;leftover;stuff;giggled ）Para.2 They hurried home. Marcus set their tree and their purchase on the table. When th
15、ey finished decorating, they just couldn*t get enough of looking （看不够）at the（常青树）：a（蜿蜒的）pathway oflight to starlit （星光照耀的）top, and Mamas birds of course （文化意识）.Just then, Marcus his little brother a mysterious smile, nYou knowthe best part? Peter shook his head. Its OUR growing tree and will grow bi
16、gger, just like you.（大声笑），they got busy placing some （文化意识）gingerbread man （姜饼人）and stockings （长筒袜）under it. Papa and Mama will be so proud of me, Marcus thought when the house, for taking good care of Peter and making homeChristmas-y（充满圣诞气息的）！（everygreen;winding;flashed;Laughing out loud; looking a
17、round;such; so）更多关于节日的地道点题句1 .The sense （氛围）of Christmas was there all year around.2 .This Christmas Eve is a time for family and friends, for warm drinks and warm laughter, for sharing good stories and love.3 .On Christmas Day we are thankful for the one who came with a message of love. It was a ca
18、ll （呼吁）to think ofothers before the self.（互相帮助的主题）.This Christmas day the only gifts allowed were homemade, and hugs were perfectly acceptable as presents.实战演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。The Wilsons were having dinner. The food was left from their Thanksgiving dinner two days before:turkey soup an
19、d turkey meat mixed with potatoes.Eleven-year-old Angelina asked, “Are we having turkey ice cream, too?” Her father replied, Angelina, have you forgotten that I had no job for a whole year? Now I have work again. You should be very thankful.Tm sorry I said that about the turkey! But unless I get a n
20、ew dressj will not look good for the Christmas Festival.Angelina murmured.The Festival was the winter holiday celebration of a group she belonged to: the Avalon Girls1 Service Club. They wrote cheerful cards for hospital patients. They cooked meals for the homeless.But the Christmas Festival was dif
21、ferent . The girls wore party clothes and many people came to see them perform. Angelina had only a plain gray dress that she had worn to the event last year.And now it was a little too short. Angelina appealed to her parents to buy one for her, a beautiful red dress in Forbes1 Store. Her mother sig
22、hed, “Well, we can not buy it. We have to be careful. You never know when I might lose my job.”All hope was not gone.There was a sign in the Forbes9 store window that said Tayaway(分期付款)Angelina pulled ten worn dollar bills from her coat pocket .She ran to the store and begged the salesperson, Mrs.Ha
23、rding, to hold her dress for her. Ok. But you must come back in two weeks to pay the rest ” Angelina felt like jumping into the air. She was so happy that she told Mrs. Harding about the Avalon Service Clubs work and its Christmas party .Then, Angelina shook and suffered in the cold wind looking for
24、 work. Finally, Angelina got a job making new clothing for dolls. Angelina was excellent at sewing. Sure enough, the dollsandwith joy.cheered and jumped The crowd became(骚动),excitement the room.restless;filling Tears of happiness Susans cheeks.poured down Craig felt the wind touching his face withsp
25、arkle in hiseyes.selfish thought of beautifying herself regardless of the hard situation of Mrs Harding. Her accepting heart（她的determined her choice. She stepped up and gave him her money in the look of the Santa Claus and other donators.Snowflakes were still dancing along with her dream of children
26、 all wearing beautiful dresses.Christmas songs were on and on!(blowing;fluttering;pedestrians ;charity; brimming ;pondered; conflicting;Tightly; needy;haunting; laid off ;admiring;melodious) dresses turned out beautiful. She got twenty dollars. Still, she was far from having enough money for her dre
27、ss . She felt helpless as the final payment date arrived .She returned sadly to Forbes1 Store, I dont have enough money for the dress. Then she saw Mrs.Hardings eyes were red. She looked like she had been crying .She said the store was closing and she was losing her job.Paragraph 1 Suddenly, Mrs Har
28、ding said that she would pay the rest of the money so Angelia could have it.l.Angelina would be delighted at theoffer.(Angelina dreamed of having a new dress.)l.Angelina would refuse Mrs.Hardinges offered help.Mrs.Harding was losing her job ;she was needy.)Angelina walked out of the store with the m
29、oney.Paragraph 2:Outside, Angelina saw a man who looked like Santa Claus was asking people for money to help poor people.l.Angelina decided to donate the money, (ambivalent 矛盾？)2.What led to her decision?(l)Angelina9s club was warmhearted and generous.2)her father,mother or Mrs.Harding?如何表达高兴1. Bath
30、ed in sunshine, we allmerrily ;brilliant5. Her eyes with joy andhappiness.danced6. This commitment made Angelia, her heart wildly.ecstatic;thumping/thudding7. A of delightme, as if I were the king.surge;ran through8. His facehappiness,was brimmed with9. One evening, standing under a sky（宝石般的/晴朗的天空）
31、found myself thankful for all the hardships, jeweled如何表达内疚和难为情1. Guilthim at the thought of killing the cow.engulfed2. A unique sense of guilt. arises3. （ashame） she could feel the blood rush to her face/her face burning.So ashamed was she that犹豫和矛盾的情绪怎么表达1 . At the sight of this, I began to feel a
32、little. With the night falling, I was.Uneasy;on pins and needles2 .A mixed sense of embarrassment and guilt（紧抓）her. clung upon3/Donate it or keep it for myself? she, with a heart,pondered conflicting 范文学习Suddenly Mrs Harding said that she would pay the rest of the money so Angelia could have it. Thi
33、s commitment （许诺）made Angelia, her heart wildly. The scene of her peers in the clubsurrounding her and casting envious and worshiping look over at the Christmas party her mind. Her face and eyes.Giggles and chuckles were to sound when a face with red eyesinto her eyes. Shewith a gust of chill instan
34、tlyher spine. She felt a little ashamed for her 心退缩 了). “Thank you very much indeed for your kindness! Mrs Harding!” said Angelia, Merry Christmas to you and good luck for your job hunting! She out.(ecstatic;thumping; fantastic;flashed across;flushed;sparkled; depressed;reflected;shivered;running do
35、wn;momentary;withdrew;strode)Outside, Angelina saw a man who looked like Santa Claus was asking people for money to help poor people. Standing in the hard wind anddense snowflakes, he was seenbusy warmly greeting and saying “Thank you! Merry Christmas!” to the dropping money in the box, a facewith h
36、appiness(脸上洋溢着幸福). Donate it or keep it for myself? ”she , with a heart, holding thetwenty-dollar bill she had earned by sewing hard doll clothing, “The former will go to the people for life necessities and the latter, the long-expected dress , maybe , is justto show off.Thered-eyed MrsHarding aswellas theamazingly similar-seeming life scene where herfatherhadbeen