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1、UnitlO Connections写作技巧点拨新闻报道本单元的写作任务是写一篇新闻报道。要写好一篇新闻报道，必须掌握新闻写作的语言特 占 /、1 .具体。新闻用事实说话，五个W和一个H (When、Where、Who、What、Why和How) 是构成一则完整报道不可缺少的要素，这就需要记叙具体的时间、地点、人物、事情、因果、 经过等。2 .准确。新闻语言不能含糊其词、模棱两可，也不能夸大或缩小事实。3 .简练。新闻语言要简明扼要、直截了当。一般来说，一篇新闻报道应分为三个部分：导语：简要介绍新闻背景，如时间、地点以及事件的基本情况等；正文：具体报道活动的细节；结尾：评价活动。增分佳句1 .
2、常用导语(1)A terrible storm hit/struck the area.一场可怕的风暴袭击了这个地区。(2)It was a cool autumn night when the accident happened. 事故发生在一个凉爽的秋夜。(3)A 4 X 100m relay race was held on the playground of our school last Sunday morning.我们学校于上周日的上午在运动场举行了一场4X 100米接力赛。2 .常用正文句(l)It was a nice/fine day.那天天气很好。(2)40 player
3、s took part in the relay race, and most of them were students and teachers of Grade 1.有40位运动员参加接力赛，他们大多是高一年级的学生和老师。(3)A11 the students were in high spirits.所有的学生都斗志昂扬。(4)Finally, the student from Class 1 Grade 1 won the race.最后，这位来自一年级一班的学生赢得了比赛。(5)With the help of the rescue team, people who were t
4、rapped in the flood were saved.在救援队的帮助下，被困在洪水中的人们得救了。(6)Clearly/Obviously/In my opinion, it seemed that people were shocked.显然/在我看来似乎人们震惊了。(7)Because ofVAs a result of/Thanks to the help of the army, people who got injured were sent to the hospital immediately.因为/幸亏有军队的帮助，受伤的人们被立即送往医院。3 .常用结尾句(1 )Th
5、e activity is very meaningful.这次活动非常有意义。(2)It not only enriched our school life, but also strengthened our team spirit.它不仅丰富了我们的学校生活，而且还增强了我们的团队精神。(3)In a word/In conclusion, I believe we will build a new city.总之，我相信我们将建设一个新城市。满分作文特训写作要求假定你是某国际学校的校英语报的记者李华，最近你校组织留十个学生到敬老院陪老人们 过重阳节。请按下列要点用英语写一篇新闻报道：1
6、 .时间、地点；2 .活动内容：打扫卫生、表演节目；3 .同学们的体会。参考词汇：敬老院(nursing home)；重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)注意：1.词数100左右；4 .可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。审题谋篇第一步：审题构思很关键（明确体裁话题I 新闻报道,留学生在敬老院活动: （确定时态人称） 一般过去时，第一、三人称:R:导语：简要叙述报道的核心内容;（布局文多架构正文:具体说明活动的细节；口:结尾：对该事件做出评价和总结（列出核心要点）!1 .十个留学生去敬老院陪老人过 重阳节；.帮助老人打扫卫生并表演节目；2 .同学们的体会第二步：补全句子雏形现1
7、 .在重阳节这一天，十个留学生去拜访了敬老院。On the Double Ninth Festival, ten foreign students visited the nursing home.2 .这十个留学生在我们学校学习。The ten foreign students are studying in our school.3 .他们早上八点乘车出发去敬老院，半小时后到达。They set out for the nursing homeby bus at 8： 00 am and arrived half an hour later.4 . 一到达，他们就开始帮助老人们打扫房间。O
8、n/Upon arrival they began to help the elderly clean their rooms.5 .他们做了很多事情，这些事情让老人们很快乐和温暖。They did many things and the things made the elderly happy and warm.6 .他们都觉得这次拜访是一次难忘的经历。They all found the visit an unforgettable experience.7 .通过这次经历，他们对这个节日有了更多的了解，同时也意识到老人需要得到尊重。Through theexperiencetheykn
9、ow moreabout the festival andrealize heelderlyneed to betreatedwithrespect.第三步：句式升级造亮点1 .用定语从句合并第二步中的句1和句2On the_ Double Ninth Festival, ten foreign students who are studying in o u】school visited the nuising home.2 .用what引导的主语从句改写第二步中的句5What they did made the elderly happy and warm.3 .用非限制性定语从句和“no
10、t onlybut also”结构合并第二步中的句6和句7They all found the visit an unforgettable experience, through which they no t only know more about the festival but also lealize the elderly need to be treated with lespect.第四步：过渡衔接连成篇One possible version ：Foreign Students Spent the Double Ninth Festivalwith the ElderlyO
11、n the Double Ninth Festival, ten foreign students who are studying in our school visited the nursing home.They set out for the nursing home by bus at 8： 00 am and arrived half an hour later. Upon arrival they began to help the elderly clean their rooms. Then, they spent some fun time together singin
12、g, dancing and playing games. What they did made the elderly happy and warm.They all found the visit an unforgettable experience, through which they not only know more about the festival but also realize the elderly need to be treated with respect.实战演练假定你是李华，你于上周日参加了学校组织的社区志愿服务活动。请你为校英文报写一篇 报道，内容包括：
13、1 .活动内容；2 .活动反响。注意：词数100左右。One possible version ：Our school held a volunteer activity to serve the community last Sunday. All the students in Grade One participated in the activity.My class went to Qingyuan community at 9： 00 am, where we were divided into five groups to care for the elderly and tel
14、l them some health knowledge. I was in group 4 whose assignment was to help theelderly clean their windows. Besides, I also provided smartphone technical support to the elderly, which was welcomed by them.By participating in such meaningful activities, not only are my inteipersonal skills improved but I also learn when we bring our love to the people in need, our life will be more significant.