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1、初中九年级英语写作专题训练50题-含参考范文一、材料作文1.假如你在网上结识了一位笔友Linda下面是她的一些情况，请根据此表写一篇 文章，向大家介绍一下Linda。年龄13岁国籍加拿大外貌圆脸；大眼睛；高个；长的卷发兴趣爱好喜欢弹钢琴；会说汉语；学校生活每天下午学校都有很多俱乐部；Linda通常去俱乐部练习钢琴和汉 语。交流体会十分感谢我帮助她学汉语。要求：（1）以上的信息必须完整，可以适当发挥。（2）语句通顺，条理清晰，字迹清晰（3）次数不少于60 （开头已给出，但不计入总词数）I have a pen pal （笔友）,and her namesLinda.【答案】例文I have a
2、pen pal, and her names Linda. She is a 13-year-old girl. She comes from Canada. I want to tell you what she looks like. She is a tall girl with long curly hair. And he has a round face and big eyes. She enjoys playing the piano. Also, she is able to speakChinese. In our school, there are all kinds o
3、f clubs every afternoon.Linda usually goes to the clubs to practice the piano and Chinese. She thanks me a lot for helping her with her Chinese.She is such a good girl that I feel so happy to have this pen pal.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示表格内容，介绍笔友Linda的情况，包括外 貌，爱好以及学校的情况等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选 用恰当的词汇和短语。2
4、.写作指导：写作时要与己给出的开头融合起来，用第三人称来写作，时态以一般现 在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。2.根据下面的提示写一篇短文。字数不少于50。1 .我叫李华，女孩。我的电话号码是697-7932, QQ号是722603418。2 .这个男孩叫Jim Smith。他在中国。他的电话号码是13886682966 , QQ号是 1510196234.3 .我们在相同的中学上学。我们是好朋友。要求：语句通顺、要点齐全。另外必须要分别介绍自己和朋友的名和姓。电话号码直 接用数字表示。提示：the same相同的【答案】例文：My name is Li Hua. Tm a gi
5、rl. My first name is Hua. My last name is Li. Mytelephone number is 697-7932. My QQ number is 722603418.The boy is Jim Smith. His first name is Jim. His last name is Smith. He is in China now.His telephone number is 13886682966. And his QQ number is 1510196234.We are in the same middle school. We ar
6、e good friends.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时应根据汉语提示的内容，介 绍作者和朋友Jim Smith的个人信息，包括姓名、电话号码、QQ号码以及学校情况 等。2 .写作指导：本文应该用第一和第三人称来介绍内容，时态采用一般现在时，在介绍 内容时，力求语句通顺，内容全面，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。3 .请用英文介绍你的好朋友Jane。要点如下：(1)英国女孩，12岁。有一个幸福的(happy)家；(2)房间是蓝色的，很小(small),但很整洁。书在书柜里，棒球在椅子下面；(3)很友好，你很喜欢她。【答案】例文Jane is my good friend. S
7、he is an English girl.She is 12 years old. She has a happy family. There are four people in the family. They are her father, her mother. Her room is blue and tidy. The books are in the bookshelf and the baseball is under the chair. She is very friendly and I like her very much.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。按
8、照要求提示介绍Jane的个人信息，包 括：性别、年龄、籍贯、房间及性格。以上要点缺一不可。2.写作指导：本文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题。本章采用一 段式写作，保证要点齐全，语句通顺有条理。4.假如你是李华，你的美国网友Ben想知道你今年是如何度过国庆节的，请根据下面的思维导图描述你国庆节一天的活动。时间：早上地点：家里活动：观看阅兵仪式；制作海报时间：下午地点：广东省博物馆看画展时间：晚上 地点：珠江边 活动：看烟花汇演,画展(art exhibition),博物注意：1.参考词汇：阅兵仪式(parade),海报(poster), 馆(museum),珠江(Pearl Ri
9、ver),烟花(firework display);2 .单词数：不少于60个(文章的开头已给出，不计入字数)3 .不得透露学校，姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。I had a good time on Nation Day.【答案】参考范文:I had a good time on National Day. In the morning, I watched the parade on TV with myfamily at home. Then I made a poster about it. In the afternoon, I went to the art exhibitio
10、n in Guangdong Museum. From the pictures, I learnt about the history of New China and the great changes in peoples life during the past years. Later in the evening, there was a firework display along the Pearl River. We really enjoyed the show and took many amazing photos.It was great fun and I felt
11、 so proud of our country.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己国庆节这一天的活动。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为两段式，第一段结合所给的提示内容来 介绍自己在国庆节这一天的活动；第二段发表自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性， 做到无语法和标点错误。5.请根据下列表格的内容，以“My good friends and I”为题，写一篇60词左右的 文章，向同学们介绍你的好朋友们。NameAgeCountryCanCantWays to schoolI(Li Ping)11ChinaPlay the guitarPlay the violinOn f
12、ootEric12AmericaDance, SingSwimBy b 汰eFrank13AustraliaDraw the picturesPlay volleyballTake a bus写作要求：1 .短文应包含表格中所有信息，可适当增加细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；2 .字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，层次清楚，语法正确；3 .词数60词左右（文章开头已经给出，不计入总字数）。My good friendsand IHello, everyone! My name is Li Ping. I am eleven. I am from China.My good friends and IH
13、ello, everyone! My name is Li Ping. I am eleven. I am from China. I can play the guitar. But I cant play the violin. I often go to school on foot.I have two good friends. They are Eric and Frank. Eric is twelve. He comes/is from America. He can dance and sing. But he cant swim. He often goes to scho
14、ol by bike. Frank is thirteen. He is from Australia. He can draw the pictures. But he cant play volleyball. He usually takes a bus to school.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My good friends and I”为题，根据 表格中提示的内容，从姓名、年龄、国家、能做什么、不能做什么等方面写一篇短文 介绍你与你的好朋友；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文采用第一、第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时 要认真审题
15、，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后 紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语 言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清 晰。6.同学们，良好的学习习惯对一个人的成长非常重要，据调查我们日常生活中的 行为90%都是靠习惯支撑的，所以养成好的习惯很重要。在英语学习方面，相信你一 定有一些好习惯。请根据以下提示用英语谈一谈：你有哪些学习英语的好习惯？针对 这些好习惯，你是怎么做的？这些好习惯会给你带来哪些好处呢？ 提示：1. What are your good habits of learning E
16、nglish?2. What do you often do to develop them?3. What advantages do they bring you?要求：1 .短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2 .短文中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3 .词数：6080。I have developed some good habits of learning English.【答案】例文：I have developed some good habits of learning English. They are reading English eve
17、ry day, taking notes carefully in class, keeping English diaries and so on.I get up at 6:00 a.m. and read English aloud every day. Reading can help me develop good language sense. I always take notes carefully in class. Therefore, whenever I want to review my lessons, the notes can help me a lot. I
18、can get a good mark in the examination. Keeping English diaries can help me improve my writing ability. I do it every day. I can write my own thoughts in English. It also gives me much fun.In a word, developing good habits is very important to learning English.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示问题写一篇短文，谈谈你有哪些学习英语的
19、好习惯、具体的做法及这些好习惯带来的好处。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来进行阐述：主要时态为一般现在时。在写作时应 注意题干的要求，按照3点提示内容展开叙述；开头承接上文，首先讲述总体讲述自 己学英语养成的好习惯，接着具体说明日常是如何培养该习惯，最后说明好习惯对学 英语的好处。7.假设你有一位好朋友Amy,请按照下列表格信息，用英语给全班同学做一个介 绍。基本情况女生，13岁，住在崇左学校在七年级一班，教室在一楼，干净明亮学习情况学习努力，最喜欢的学科是历史爱好喜欢听音乐，擅长画画穿着喜欢穿粉色或蓝色衣服，看起来很漂亮生活方式喜欢吃水果和蔬菜，喜欢体育运动要求：1、表达清楚，语法正确，上
20、下文连贯；2、必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥;3、词数：60词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）;4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。My Good FriendThis is my good friend Amy.【答案One possible version:This is my good friend Amy. She is thirteen years old. She comes from Chongzuo. She is in Class One, Grade Seven. Her classroom is on the ground floor. Its clean an
21、d bright. She works hard. Her favorite subject is history. She likes listening to music and she is good at drawing. She likes to wear pink or blue clothes. She looks beautiful in pink or blue. She likes to eat fruit and vegetables. She loves sports.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格中的提示内容，从姓名、 性别、家庭住址、学习情况
22、、爱好、穿着等方面写一篇英语短文，向全班同学介绍你 的好朋友Amy；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要 认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧 扣要点，动笔写作：可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言 的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯：层次要分明、条理要清 晰。8.请根据提示写一篇题为The Population Problem的短文。（80词左右）提示：1 .人口问题是当今世界上最大的问题之一；2 .中国是世界上人口最多的国家；3 .如果人口增长过快，
23、将会带来许多严重问题（请举例说明）;4 .我们应继续执行计划生育政策，以控制人口增长。The Population Problem【答案】The Population ProblemThe population is one of the biggest problems in the world today. China has the largest population with 1.3 billion. It has become a serious problem. A large population causes many difficulties, not only for e
24、very family, but also for the whole nation. For example, there is less living space. Ifs difficult for many people to find jobs. We are short of energy and water. Most cities are more crowded than before, and the traffic is much heavier.As far as I am concerned, we should do something to control the
25、 population. One answer is known as the one-child policy. It has worked well in controlling Chinas population.【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于材料作文，主要讲述当今世界上最大的问题人口 问题，并讲述人口过快增长的问题以及解决方法。注意时态的运用，并不能遗漏要 点。2 .例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，涉及到题目中所给的要点，第一段讲述人口问 题、中国是世界上人口最多的国家以及带来的问题，第二段讲述采取的措施。本文时 态运用准确，并运用了许多高级短语以及句型，符合英语国家的语言习惯。3 .高
26、分亮点：短语：one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数,not only.but also., for example, be short of, much+比较级，as far as I am concerned 等。句型：Ifs difficult for many people to find jobs中it作形式主语，真正的主语为to find jobs,【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要 点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数，be short ot much+比较级，Ifs difficult f
27、or many people to find jobs 中 it 作形式主语，真正的主语为to find jobs。等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与 句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连 词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如 not only.but also., fbr example, as fhr as I am concerned等；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法 结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。9.“中国核潜艇之父”黄旭华院士(academician),是央视
28、王牌节目开讲啦开播 以来最年长的演讲者。假设你是校英文报的编辑，请你根据以下提示，写一篇人物介 绍以宣扬黄院士的先进事迹。1/一 人生经历1926年出生于广东一家 庭富裕，早年学医，后 由于祖国需要改学建造 核潜艇主要贡献曾隐姓埋名30年，坚 持研究和建造核潜艇， 被称为“中国核潜艇之 父,，个人品质勤学上进，坚韧不屈，热爱祖国和人民你的感想和收 获(自由发挥)提示词：nuke核潜艇cover ones identity隐姓埋名要求：1 .词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总字数。2 .文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。Have you ever heard of Huang Xuhua, a
29、n academician in our motherland?【答案】例文Have you ever heard of Huang Xuhua, an academician in our motherland?He was bom in a rich family. In order to make our country stronger, he gave up the chance to be a doctor, but tried to learn how to bulid the nukes. To protect the national security, he used to
30、 cover his identity for about 30 years. Now he keeps working hard and is called The Farther of Chinas Nukes. He is so diligent and tough. And he loves the motherland and people.His story tells us what is the great love for the people and country . We are all inspiredby his deeds.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文
31、，题目要求根据所给内容写一篇关于黄旭 华院士的短文，主要介绍他的主要经历、贡献等。2.写作指导：本文可以按照所给材料分为两部分：第一部分介绍黄旭华院士的主要经 历、贡献以及个人品质；第二部分主要描述个人的感想及收获。人称主要采用第三人 称，时态主要采用一般过去时。准确运用时态，内容要充实，句子要通顺。10. If Tim is your good friend, then write an English passage according to the information about him in the chart below1,假如Tim是你的好友，请根据下面的表格有关他的信息，写一
32、篇英语短文，不少于60词。In the pastNowshorttallshyoutgoingwore sunglassesnot wear sunglasses any longerLiked junk foodlikes healthy foodEnjoyed pop musiclistens to country musicTim is my good friend and he has changed a lot in the past years. He used to be short, but now he is tall.【答案】例文：Tim is my good friend
33、 and he has changed a lot in the past years. He used to be short, but now he is tall.He used to be shy, but now he isnt. He is outgoing. He used to wear glasses, and now he does nt wear them any longer.He liked eating junk food in the past, but now he eats more healthy food.He used to enjoy pop musi
34、c, and now he listens to country music. He was weak in the past, but now he is strong. People really change!【详解】1.题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是介绍Tim过去与现在的情况对比， 内容按照表格中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表 达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称用第三人称展开描述。主要 是介绍Tim的过去与现在的对比，包括身高、饮食、爱好等。写作时语言要简单易 懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通
35、俗易懂。11.书面表达临近期末，学校将在学习小组内开展年终自评和组评活动，假如你是Moonlight小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，对你的组员Jerry进行评价。NameJerry (一个十五岁的初三学生)。Characteristics聪明、勤奋、大方、乐于助人。Hobbies看科幻小说；看体育节目。Study大部分精力投放到学习中Ability擅长跑步，校运会第一名。Honour会讲故事，能写出好的小说，获得最佳小作者奖(Award fbr Best young writers)。Problems面临考试感到压力，缺少睡眠。Your suggestions自拟注意：1
36、.词数：90词左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。2 .句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯。3 .表达中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。Jerry is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Jerry is a member of my team called Moonlight. Everyone in our group likes him very much because he is smart and hard-working. Its also generous of him to share things with us.
37、He often helps us when we are in trouble.In his free time, he not only likes reading science fiction but also likes watching programmes about sports. But since this term, he has devoted most of time to study and has made great progress.He is good at sports, especially running. He came first in the r
38、ace of school sports meeting this year. He is such a good storyteller that he can write exciting novels. Because of this, he was presented with “Award fbr Best young writers.But recently, he has got some problems. He suffers from the coming exams. He feels so stressed that he cant sleep well at nigh
39、t. I think that he worries too much and should arrange his time well so that he can achieve the confidence and pass the exams successfully. I hope you think my advice is worth taking.【详解】试题分析：这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Jerry的情况，为 Jerry写一篇综合素质的评价报告。在表格中有非常详细的关于Jerry各方面的内容， 我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。表格中涉及的内容较多
40、，写作 时要注意表达的条理性。这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。在最后要给Jerry提一些 建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和 第六项内容。写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的范文。这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内 容，没有遗漏要点。表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.o写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。短文注意到了 长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only
41、likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。考点：提纲类作文。12.请你根据所学内容，用英语写一篇题为“Life on Mars”的短文。要点：1 .公共交通系统非常舒适安全，人们开空气悬浮车，上班从不迟到；2 .有许多购物中心，甚至可以买到来自地球的商品；3 .学生不用去学校学习，每个学生家中都有一台
42、连接星际网络的(interplanetary)电脑，学起来更轻松有趣；4 .学生有了更多的空闲时间，可以注意：1 .词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2 .短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顾。Life on MarsWhen we reach Mars, we find everything is different.That is the life on Mars.【答案】例文Life on MarsWhen we reach Mars, we find everything is different.The public transpo
43、rt system is very comfortable and safe. People drive cars which float in the air and they arc never late fbr work. There are many shopping malls on Mars. We can even buy goods from the Earth. We dont need to go to school. Every student has a computer at home connected to an interplanetary network. I
44、t is much more relaxing and interesting fbr the students to learn. And we also have more free time now with the help of technology. We can pay more attention to the things we are really interested in.That is the life on Mars.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Li住on Mars”为题，根据提示内 容介绍火星上的生活。注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导
45、：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第 一段引出话题：第二段从交通、购物、学习等方面介绍火星上的生活；第三段收尾。 耍保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。13.假设你有一个名叫Tom的好朋友，进入初三后他变化了很多，请根据以下表格内容介绍一下他在学习、生活中的成长变化，写一篇100词左右的作文。简介15岁，九年级学生。最喜欢橙色，因为橙色可以使人振作。过去有太多家庭作业，别无选择只能熬夜。不仅常玩电脑游戏而且拒绝和父 母交流。现在有条理，仔细计划每一天很勤奋，在学习上对自己严格要求很自信，参加了校篮球队的选拔并且证明了将来想成为一个（理由）注意：1.文中不得出现真实的校名
46、、人名。2.内容完整、层次清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯。3.100词左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。Tom is my goodfriend. 【答案】例文：Tom is my good friend. He is a 15-year-old student. He is in Grade 9. His favourite color is orange because orange can make people cheer up.In the past, He not only played computer games but also refused to communicate wit
47、h his parents. He had too much homework, so he had no choice but to stay up to finish it. His teachers helped him solve many problems, and kept encouraging him to cheer up.Now, he plans his day carefully and tries his best to achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies. He is strict with himself in study. He is more confident. He takes part in basketball selection.In the future, he hopes to become a psychologist to help more students solve all kinds of teenage problems.【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求根据表格介绍好朋友Tom的过去和现在，以及未来 想成为的人，要求内容完整，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来介绍好朋友；时态采用一般现