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1、 高考作文,特别是基础写作,提供的信息点多,但句数有限,熟练掌握以下四种整合信息的方法非常重要。用介词短语合并句子有两种情况我们常常可以用到：(1)介词短语作定语,(2)介词短语作状语。典型例题 用介词短语将下列句子合并成一句。(1)Waste water is making the river worse and worse.(2)The waste water is from a factory.(3)The factory lies on the river.合并：Waste water from the factory on the river is making the river
2、worse and worse.课堂练习 用介词短语合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Xiaxi Town is not big but beautiful.It has an area of about 8 square kilometers.2.There is an old tower there.The tower lies in the east of the town.There is a river behind the tower.3.(此题用并列结构合并)The sun rising from the river was very beauti
3、ful.Yesterday we took a bus there to visit the tower.4.We started early.We wanted to enjoy the sunrise on the top of the tower.5.As soon as we got there,we began to take photos.Xiaxi Town,with an area of about 8 square kilometers,is not big but beautiful.In the east of the town lies an old tower,beh
4、ind which there is a river.The sun rising from the river was very beautiful,and we took a bus there to visit the tower yesterday.We started early for the purpose of enjoying the sunrise on the top of the tower.On arriving there,we began to take photos.课堂练习 课外作业 用介词短语合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.
5、A professor gave us a talk this morning.He came from Beijing University.He talked about how to learn English well.2.He told us of his own interesting experiences of learning English.We laughed a lot.3.His talk lasted an hour.He asked us some questions.4.His talk was vivid and instructive.I learned a
6、 lot from his talk.5.I went back home.I decided to work hard at English.A professor from Beijing University gave us a talk on how to learn English well this morning.On hearing his own interesting experiences of learning English,we laughed a lot.During the one-hour talk,he asked us some questions.I l
7、earned a lot from his vivid and instructive talk.On my way back home,I decided to work hard at English.课外作业在写作中,正确使用非谓语动词,无疑为文章增色不少。非谓语动词包括不定式、现在分词和过去分词。使用时应注意以下几点：(1)不定式的动作发生在谓语动词之后(一般情况下,尽量用不定式的主动式)。(2)现在分词表主动,该动作与谓语动词的动作同时发生或紧接着发生。(3)过去分词表被动,或表示该动词的动作在谓语动词的动作之前发生,或没有时间性。(4)现在分词的被动式表被动,与谓语动词的动作同时发
8、生。典型例题 用非谓语动词将以下各组句子分别合成一句话。1.(1)He looked up.(2)He saw a bird in the tree.用不定式合并：He looked up to see a bird in the tree.2.(1)I dont like the man.(2)The man is wearing a pair of dark glasses.用现在分词合并：I dont like the man wearing a pair of dark glasses.3.(1)The temple is visited by thousands of people
9、every year.(2)It was built 1,000 years ago.用过去分词合并：The temple,built 1,000 years ago,is visited by thousands of people.课堂练习 用非谓语动词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Im writing to you.I want to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.2.Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car.I was walking on the roa
10、d at that time.3.I was seriously injured.I couldnt stand up.4.Mr.Li saw what had happened to me.He stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital.5.I dont know his name.I call him Good Man.Im writing to you to express my sincere thanks to Good Man.Yesterday morning I was knocked down by a car while walkin
11、g on the road.Seriously injured,I couldnt stand up.Luckily,a man stopped a taxi and sent me to a hospital when seeing what had happened to me.Not knowing his name,I call him Good Man.课堂练习 课外作业 用非谓语动词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.On the morning of last Sunday I went to the park.I wanted to take a
12、walk there.2.After one hours walk,I got tired and sat down on a stone by the road.I wanted to have a rest.3.Suddenly I saw an ant.She was trying hard to move another ant who was dead.4.She failed many times.She managed to carry him away.5.I saw that little creatures also have sincere love as human b
13、eings.I was greatly moved.在写作中,我们运用并列连词合并句子是最常用的手段。常用的并列连词有and,but,or,nor,so，yet，for,as well as,both.and,not only.but(also),either.or,neither.nor,(and)then,since 等。典型例句 用并列连词合并下列各组句子。1.(1)He is a friend in word.(2)He is a friend in deed;too.用as well as合并：He is a friend in word as well as in deed.2.(
14、1)I know her.(2)I am her best friend.用not only.but also 合并：Not only do I know her,but(also)I am her best friend.课堂练习 用并列连词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Nowadays,a lot of attention is focused on education.The fact that many children from migrant workers families have dropped out of school is ignor
15、ed.2.These children are wandering in the streets and other public places.Some of them commit crimes,such as theft and robbery.3.The government should be aware of the importance of providing education for all the children.The average people should be aware of the importance,too.4.Children from native
16、 families can enjoy good education.I hope children from peasant workers families can also enjoy good education.5.Children from peasant workers family are part of our society.They will also play an important role in building our country in the future.Nowadays,a lot of attention is focused on educatio
17、n,yet the fact that many children from migrant workers families have dropped out of school is ignored.These children are wandering in the streets and other public places,and some of them even commit crimes,such as theft and robbery.课堂练习The government,as well as the average people should be aware of
18、the importance of providing education for all the children.I hope children not only from native families but also from peasant-workers families can enjoy good education.Children from migrant workers families are part of our society,and they will also play an important role in building our country in
19、 the future.课外作业 用并列连词合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.Today,two of my friends went fishing by bike.I also went fishing by bike.2.We started off at 6:00 We got to Longwang Lake at 6:30.3.It was a little hot.The fish didnt seem to have a good appetite.I only got 10 fish during the day.4.We had lunch
20、in a little restaurant by the lake.We returned home at 5:30 p.m.5.Tired though I was,I felt happy.I thought it was one of my most meaningful days during the summer holidays.Two of my friends and I went fishing by bike today.We started off at 6:00 and got to Longwang Lake at 6:30.I only got 10 fish d
21、uring the day,as it was a little hot and the fish didnt seem to have a good appetite.We had lunch in a little restaurant by the lake and returned home at 5:30 p.m.Tired though I was,I felt happy.I thought it was one of my most meaningful days during the summer holidays.课外作业 要使文章漂亮,在写作中不可能不使用主从复合句,最常
22、用的从句是状语从句、主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和定语从句。典型例句1.(1)China is the third largest country in the world.(2)Everyone knows it.用定语从句合并：As everyone knows,China is the third largest country in the world.2.(1)It was raining hard.(2)We kept on working.用状语从句合并：Although it was raining hard,we kept on working.课堂练习 用主从复合句合并每一
23、组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.I live in a small town.It is about 20 kilometers away from the city.2.In the past,we planted many trees here.Now,no trees can be seen except heavy smoke and dark rivers.3.Ten years ago,many factories have been built.Heavy smoke and waste water from the factories are let
24、into the sky and the rivers without anything done to them.4.Some more factories are going to be set up.People told me that.5.The government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted.This is my opinion.I live in a small town which is about 20 kilometers away from the city.Alth
25、ough we planted many trees here,no trees can be seen now except heavy smoke and dark rivers.The reason is that since ten years ago,many factories have been built,from where heavy smoke and waste water are let into the sky and the rivers without anything done to them.It is said that some more factori
26、es will be set up here.I think the government should take measures to stop the town from being further polluted.课外作业 用主从复合句合并每一组句子,然后将这五组句子合并成一段五句话的连贯的短文。1.The drought is likely to continue till May and no substantial rainfall is expected ahead of the rainy season.The drought started from last autum
27、n.2.It has left 18 million residents and 11.7 million heads of livestock in the region with water shortages and caused direct economic loss of 23.7 billion yuan.Experts estimate.3.The government would organize more than 1,100 engineers and workers from across the country to dig wells in the countrys
28、 southwest.It is reported.4.More than 1,600 wells will be drilled.They will provide 200,000 cubic meters of drinking water per day for 2 million people and 1 million heads of livestock.5.1,400 of the wells are expected to finish digging by May 10.One of the engineers told me.The drought,which starte
29、d from last autumn,is likely to continue till May and no substantial rainfall is expected ahead of the rainy season.Experts estimate that it has left 18 million residents and 11.7 million heads of livestock in the region with water shortages and caused direct economic loss of 23.7 billion yuan.课外作业I
30、t is reported that the government would organize more than 1,100 engineers and workers from across the country to dig wells in the countrys southwest.More than 1,600 wells will be drilled,which will provide 200,000 cubic meters of drinking water per day for 2 million people and 1 million heads of li
31、vestock.One of the engineers told me that 1,400 of the wells are expected to be finished digging by May 10.一、合并句子 用以上四种手段合并下列各组句子,然后将这5组句子组成一篇通顺自然的短文。1.A traffic accident happened at the crossroad of Yuanlin Road,Yangguang Town.The accident happened at 9:00 a.m.on February.2.A taxi crashed into the
32、left side of a truck.It caused one death and two injuries.3.The truck driver was slightly injured.The taxi driver was killed and the passenger in the taxi was seriously injured.4.“The taxi didnt stop at the traffic lights.It went on running at a high speed when the red light was on.”said a witness.5
33、.The police want to know the real reason.The real reason is being investigated.A traffic accident happened at the crossroad of Yuanlin Road,Yangguang Town,at 9:00 a.m.on February.A taxi crashed into the left side of a truck,causing one death and two injuries.The truck driver was slightly injured,but
34、 the taxi driver was killed and the passenger in the taxi was seriously injured.“The taxi didnt stop at the traffic lights but went on running at a high speed when the red light was on.”said a witness.However,the real reason is being investigated.一、合并句子1.昨天,我们在班里进行了一场讨论。1.Yesterday we had a discussi
35、on in our class.2.我们讨论是否应该帮助那些困境中的人。2.We discussed whether we should help those in trouble.3.我的一些同学说应该。3.Some of my classmates said we should.二、翻译合并4.他们认为帮助他人是我们中华民族的传统美德。4.Helping others is a good traditional virtue of us Chinese people.5.一些人认为帮助他人不是个好主意。5.Others didnt think it a good idea to help
36、other people.6.现在的人忘恩负义。6.People nowadays are ungrateful.7.我们可能受到我们想帮助的人的伤害。7.We may be hurt by those who we are trying to help.8.依我之见,我们应伸出援助之手给那些需要帮助的人。8.In my view,we should give a hand to the people in need of help.9.人人能互相关心。9.Everyone can care for each other.10.这个世界会更美好。10.The world will become
37、 more beautiful.Yesterday we had a discussion in our class about whether we should help those in trouble.Some of my classmates said we should because helping others is a good traditional virtue of us Chinese people while others didnt think it a good idea to help other people as people nowadays are ungrateful.参考短文They said we may be hurt by those who we are trying to help.In my view,we should give a hand to the people in need of help.If everyone can care for each other,the world will become more beautiful.