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1、读后续写练习：偷偷打工（学生版）一、题目My mother eyed me with suspicion. I dared not look at her. Knowing that I was late from school five days continuously, I could not offer an acceptable explanation. I knew she did not believe that I had extra classes every day and arrived home after 5 pm. However, realizing she ha
2、d little choice but to believe in me, she told me that dinner was in the refrigerator. She had to rush for her night shift at the local clinic.Ever since we lost our dad in an accident, my mother became the breadwinner. I was the eldest among the four siblings and it fell upon my shoulder to ensure
3、that they could become responsible adults. Besides helping mother with the housework, I regularly coached them in their studies. Thankfully, never once had I had to raise my voice or force them to complete their homework. But all of us missed dad very much. He was a model father and husband.Life was
4、 cruelly taken away from him at a very young age of 42.However, my mother managed to pull through and found a job at the clinic. It was very tough on someone like her who had never worked before in her life. But money was scarce and there were five mouths to feed. Dad did not leave much behind.He ne
5、ver suspected he would die so young.We stopped dining out and had our meals mostly at home. We basically lived from hand to mouth.Thats when it dawned on me that I had to do my part for the family. I knew mother would not agree but I threw caution out of the window and managed to get a part-time job
6、 at a fast-food restaurant. I worked three hours a day and managed to bring home money so that my siblings and I could go out for occasional movies or meals. I was sure that mother suspected something. But she could not quite point the figure to the source of her suspicion.Paragraph 1 :One day,while
7、 I was busy serving the customers, I was shocked to see mother standing opposite the counter.Paragraph 2:Mother made me sit dawn. She was already crying, so were my siblinqs.1. eye me with suspicion怀疑地看着我9. coach sb in .辅导某人2. an acceptable explanation一个可以接受的解释10. Never once had sb done sth.某人从未做过某事
8、。3. have little choice but to do除了做某事外别无选择11. pull through渡过难关4. night shift夜班12. scarce5. clinic诊所13. from hand to mouth6. breadwinner养家糊口的人14. It dawned on me that + 句子某人突然明白7. sibling15. throw caution out of the window把谨慎抛到窗外8. XX fall upon my shoulder.XX落在我的肩上。16. occasional二、审题思考L妈妈为什么会来到我工作的地方
9、？是偶然吗?2 .第二段段首句的地点是哪里？3 .我犯了什么错？4 .在店里我见到母亲后的反应是什么？5 .妈妈为什么哭？6 .我看到妈妈哭会怎样反应?三、教师下水文短语1. the instant + 从句，主句一就2. capture the astonished look of my mother看（捕捉）到妈妈惊讶的表情3. eyes moisturize with tears热泪盈眶4. turn around转身5. It seemed that + 句子似乎6. in the hope of.想（做某事）7. edge away离开8. disappear in the crow
10、d消失在人群中9. subsequently随后10. screw up sth弄砸某事11. anxiety about sth对于某事的焦虑12. a reasonable explanation一个合理的解释13. be resolved to do = resolve to do决心做某事 =be determined to do = determine to do14. Scarcely had sb done when sb did一就=Hardly . when . = No sooner . than .15. trot towards快步走向16. be seated by
11、the table坐在桌旁17. dare (not) do sth（不）敢做某事18. look sb straight in the eye直视某人眼睛19. surprise = astonish = astound = startle使某人惊讶V.20. surprised = astonished = astounded = startled感到惊讶的21. surprising = astonishing = astounding = startling令人惊讶的22. suspect23. confirmV.确认，证实24. clumsily笨拙地25. take ones or
12、ders请某人点菜26. a worried expression愁容27. my family situation我的家庭情况28. take over my duties接替我的工作29. remove my apron解开我的围裙30. stagger to .蹒跚走向31. be occupied by .被占据32. contain my emotions抑制感情33. tears brimmed over热泪盈眶34. with a mixture of shame and remorse overwhelming me羞愧又悔恨（地）35. forgive sb for sth原
13、谅某人某事36. nevertheless然而37. in ones words用某人的话来说38. be appreciative of感激39. with the expectation that希望一40. promise to do承诺做某事41. be committed to致力于做某事42. clutch sbs hands抓紧某人手43. sbs hands are clutched in sbs手被抓紧44. grin笑容四、连词成篇Paral: (Version 1)One day while I was busy serving the customers I was s
14、hocked to see mother standing opposite the counter.看到妈妈惊讶的表情的同时，我也看到她热泪盈眶。【内容：情绪+动作】【句：the instant, see sb doing】Ithe astonished look of my mother, I could see her eyeswith tears.似乎她张嘴想说什么，但没有，只是转身离开，消失在人群中。【内容：动作】【句：It seemed that;介词短语；only to do;非谓语】 she opened her mouth something, but she didnt,t
15、urn around and edge away,into the crowd.随后，我搞砸了顾客的订单，焦虑地想着怎样给出一个合理的解释。【内容：动作+心理】【句：with结构】Subsequently, 1 screwed up customers9orders,anxiety about how to offer aexplanation.最终，我决定说出真相。【内容：心理】Ultimately, Itell the truth.快餐店一到关门时间，我就快步走回家。【内容：动作】【句：一就】the fast-food restaurant closing time comeI trott
16、ed towards home.当我推开门，我看到妈妈和我的三个兄弟姐妹都在，坐在桌前。【内容：动作】【句：时间状从，非谓语作状语】I pushed the door open, I saw my mother and my three siblings all in,by the table.Paral: (Version?) One day9while I was busy serving the customers, I was shocked to see mother standing opposite the counter. 我特别惊讶和尴尬以至于我不敢直视妈妈的眼睛。 【内容：
17、情绪一动作】【句：sothat倒装】I dare notmy mother straight in the eye.起初她似乎很吃惊，但后来她怀疑了很长时间的事情似乎得到了证实。【内容：情绪变化】【句：并列句；It seemed that句式，主语从句】 Sheat first, but then it seemed thatfor a long timewas.我笨拙地请她点菜，然后看见她蹒跚地走向一张桌子，那张桌子已经被我兄弟姐妹占领了。 【内容：动作描写】【句：并列句；非谓语作定语】I took her orders and saw her to a table by my siblin
18、gs.注意到我的愁容，而且是知道我家庭情况的我同事立即主动接替我的工作。【内容：动作描写】【句：定语从句】My colleague whomy worried expression and knew about my family situation instantlyto take over my duties.我缓慢解开围裙，加入了家人中间。【内容：动作】Imy apron slowly and joined my family.Para2:Mother made me sit down. She was already crying, so were my siblings.我再也控制不
19、住感情，泪水夺眶而出，夹杂着羞愧和悔恨。【内容：情绪一动作】【句：并列句，cantanymore, with结构】I couldntmy emotions anymore and my tears“请原谅我隐瞒兼职工作的事情。我只是想要为家庭尽一份力。”我啜泣道。【内容：语言描写】“Please forgive mehiding the truth about my part-time job. I just want to do my part for our family.1然而，妈妈的回应震惊了我。【内容：情绪】【句：无灵主语】, mother9sme.用她的话来说，她感激我的付出，希望
20、我可以平衡好工作和生活。【内容：间接语言描写】【句：介词短语】I could balance myIn her words, shemywork and study.我的兄弟姐妹承诺会好好学习和做家务。【内容：间接语言描写】And my siblings promised tostudy and housework.我们的手被妈妈紧紧握住，眼泪变成了笑容。【内容：动作定格】【句：with复合结构，无灵主语】, tearsgrins.五、最终自测 Paral:(Version 1)One day, while I was busy serving the customers, I was sho
21、cked to see mother standing opposite the counter. 看到妈妈惊讶的表情的同时，我也看到她热泪盈眶。似乎她张嘴想说什么，但没有，只是转身离开，消失在 人群中。随后，我搞砸了顾客的订单，焦虑地想着怎样给出一个合理的解释。最终，我决定说出真相。 快餐店一到关门时间，我就快步走回家。当我推开门，我看到妈妈和我的三个兄弟姐妹都在，坐在桌前。 Paral:(Version 1)One day, while I was busy serving the customers, I was shocked to see mother standing opposi
22、te the counter.我 特别惊讶和尴尬以至于我不敢直视妈妈的眼睛。起初她似乎很吃惊，但后来她怀疑了很长时间的事情似乎得 到了证实。我笨拙地请她点菜，然后看见她蹒跚地走向一张桌子，那张桌子已经被我兄弟姐妹占领了。注 意到我的愁容，而且是知道我家庭情况的我同事立即主动接替我的工作。我缓慢解开围裙，加入了家人中间。 Para2:Mother made me sit down. She was already crying, so were my siblings.我再也控制不住感情，泪 水夺眶而出， 夹杂着羞愧和悔恨。“请原谅我隐瞒兼职工作的事情。我只是想要为家庭尽一份力。”我啜泣道。然而
23、， 妈妈的回应震惊了我。用她的话来说，她感激我的付出，希望我可以平衡好工作和生活。我的兄弟姐妹承 诺会好好学习和做家务。我们的手被妈妈紧紧握住，眼泪变成了笑容。六、优秀作文赏析（一）1. anxious and uneasy紧张不安的2. endeavor to do努力做某事3. ignore ones existence忽视某人存在4. capture ones embarrassment捕捉到某人的尴尬5. trot towards快步走向6. It was not long before .不久之后，7. exhaustedly疲惫地8. undoubtedly毫无疑问9. eyes
24、twinkles with tears热泪盈眶10. with a mixture of remorse and shame悔恨又羞愧（地）11. drop one*s head低头12. heartbroken心碎的13. sorrow choke me我很难过14. stroke her fingers through my hair手指抚摸头发15. in a tender voice温柔地说16. embrace each other拥抱彼此Anxious and uneasy, I endeavored to ignore my mothers existence and conti
25、nued to serve my precious customers. Mother seemed to have captured my embarrassment, thus trotting towards the door and waited me outside. It was not long before I finished my work and exhaustedly pull the door. Undoubtedly, my concerned mother was still there, whose eyes twinkled with tears. On th
26、e way home, there was nothing but terrible silence. Eventually, we reached home.With a mixture of remorse and shame, I dropped my head in order to avoid seeing the heartbroken figure. Sorrow choked me and I murmured, What I have done was in the hope of bringing home money. Mother sobbed, stroked her
27、 fingers through my hair and said in a tender voice, “Thank you dear. Im proud of you. We embraced each other tightly.（二）1. at a loss what to do茫然无措2. dash towards冲向3. as fast as ones legs could carry sb飞快的4. with a mixture of embarrassment and shame overwhelming me尴尬又羞愧地5. look sb straight in the e
28、ye直视某人6. apologize to sb for sth因某事向某人道歉7. with tears brimming over,泪眼朦胧地，8. stroke ones fingers through sbs hair手指抚摸某人头发9. go to great lengths to do sth竭尽全力做某事10. bear responsibility to do承担做某事的责任11. raise ones eyebrows in astonishment惊讶扬眉12. meet one*s gaze与某人对视13. with big grins on ones cheeks某人笑
29、着，For a while, I was at a loss what to do next. Urged by my boss, I continued to serve the customers. After completing the job, I dashed towards my mum as fast as my legs could carry me, with a mixture of embarrassment and shame overwhelming me. Standing in front of my mum, I couldnt look her straig
30、ht in the eye but said, nI am sorry that I cheat you, mom. Amazing enough, mother didnt criticize me.Mother apologized to me, I am afraid that I have no capability to offer you a affluent life*, with tears brimming over. Hearing this, 1 stroked my fingers through her hair and said, Mum, you have gon
31、e great lengths to do everything you can. I am the eldest so I should bear my responsibility to bring home money. Raising her eyebrows in astonishment and meeting my gaze, Mum smiled, HThank you, you have grown up. Instead of crying, we embraced each other, with big grins on our cheeks.（三）1. with on
32、e*s lips trembling嘴唇颤抖2. can*t utter a word说不出一句话3. what astonished me was that令我惊讶的是4. come along with和某人一起5. endeavor to do努力做某事6. pocket money零花钱7. Tears rolling down ones cheeks,.眼泪流下来，8. praise sb for sth称赞某人某事9. selfless dedication无私奉献10. put ones thumbs up点赞11. be bathed in the warmth of fami
33、ly沐浴在家庭的温暖下12. a diligent role model一个勤奋的榜样With her lips trembling, she started at me and couldn*t utter a word. What astonished me was that all my siblings came along with her. All of a sudden, I realized that they had known it before. Standing silently on the previous spot, I endeavored to speak t
34、o them, Mum J I said ultimately, HI work here to make some pocket money for us. So moved was mother that she held me tightly, stoking my short hair gently. nLet us talk.*1 Mother pulled a chair.Tears rolling down her cheeks, mother praised me for my selfless dedication to support our family. nYou have grown up, honey. It is my good fortune to have such a good kid as you. Hearing mothers words, siblings put my thumbs up and I could see their sparkling eyes. After that, bathed in the warmth of family, I went on working and set a diligent role model for my siblings.