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1、2022届高考英语写作专题之读后续写精读精炼（一）原 文 呈 现阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Henry once worked in a middle school in a remote area.He loved to teach the teenagers.He worked to understand what his students were thinking and feeling in order to meet theirneeds.When a student was struggling,he would work harde
2、r to show the child that he or shewas capable and cared for.He would try everything in order to help every student achievesuccess in and out of the classroom.But he would never discover that the impact his small actof kindness had on one student after he left the profession to join the navy.Henry wa
3、s teaching science then,there was one girl who sat at the front of the class andwas filled with typical middle school pain and anxiety.Her name was Mary.She was anew-comer then.She wasnt accepted by the classmates that soon.She was quiet and kept toher-self and always writing a journal during lesson
4、s.Henry was looking for a chance to giveher a hand but had realized this task was tough.That class Henry decided to look over her shoulder and see what she was writing.On asmall piece of paper,he saw the painful words I am not good enough.Tm ugly.Im stupid.Noone likes me.I hate myself.The girl was a
5、bsorbed in her loneliness and sadness and didntrealize she was overseen.This task was more challenging because he had never seen a young girl was sodisappoint-ed and sad.Great teachers knew that putting extra effort,a kind heart and soul intocaring for his students made all the difference.Without th
6、inking.Henrysnatched（一把抓起）lhe note-book from her and started writing in it Youre great,yourebeautiful,youre intelligent,youre loved.The opposite of everything she wrote,then handedit back.He smiled at her with encouragement saying nothing.Mary was surprised at her teachers behavior.But when she read
7、 the words he wrote,tearswelled down her face.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Several weeks later,Henry had to left the school to join the navy.Several years later,when Henry was walking,a woman asked him whether heremembered her.思路分析一、准确理解材料，理清人物事件1.浅层信息理解首先审题：体裁是记叙文；人称是第三人称；主体时态是一般过去时；记叙文“六要素
8、“who(Henry,Mary)、when(When Henry worked as a teacher)、where(in amiddle school)、what(Henry gave Mary a hand and encouraged her.)、why(to helpMary out of disappointment and sadness)2.深层信息理解(How)段落Behaviors(行为)Topic(段意)Para 1-2(Background)He loved to teach teenagers,hewould work harder to show thechild
9、that he or she was capable andcared for.He would try everything inorder to help every studentachieve success in and out of theclassroom.Henry who was sokind and would tryeverything to help everystudent achieve successwanted to give Mary-anew comer a hand but hadrealized this task wastough.Para 3-5(t
10、he detailsof the event)look over her shoulder and seewhat she was writing;saw thepainful words;snatched thenote-book;started writing in itYoure great,youre beautiful,youre intelligent,you7e loved;Hesmiled at her with encouragementsaying nothing.Henry wrote theopposite words of Maryson her notebook a
11、nd Shemoved.3.整合本篇的情节和情感线索Henry在参加海军前是在一所中学教书，他很爱教学生，会努力理解学生所想和所感，会为了让学生获得成功而尝试一切方法。作为新转来的学生M ary,还没能融入新环境和新同学，所以情绪是低落的、伤心的。Henry瞅准时机，给了她鼓励。但他从来没想过他的小小善举，会给学生带来怎样的影响。二、分析续写段首，确定续写方向由第一段首句内容Several weeks later,Henry had to left the school to join thenavy.(几周之后，Henry离开学校加入了海军。)根据前文，第一段可就时间点Beforehe le
12、ft设问如下：1.What happened to Marry?What changes did she do?2.How did he feel when he saw those changes?3.What was his hope and regret?根据第二段首句Several years later,when Henry was walking,a woman asked himwhether he rememberedh er.（几年后，当Henry正在散步的时候，一个女人问他是否记得她）由这个首句，自然很容易知道 awoman肯定是M ary,由此第二段主要写Henry和Ma
13、ry重逢，Mary谈Henry对自己的影响。可设问如下：4.Who is the woman?What does she look like?5.How did Henry remember her?6.What did Mary say and what was she now?What changed her?7.After hearing what Mary said,how did Henry feel?三、借助文本资源，创设续写情节根据六要素和自己的想象，借助文本资源，创设续写两段故事的情节。开端Henry在中学教书，鼓励新学生Mary。故事发展 Henry离校参军前的小善举。1高潮
14、 Mary的小变化，但Henry遗憾不能看到更多她的改变。结局 两人重逢，Mary的现状告知及最后点题：小善举持续影响她一生。续写句式提炼1几周后，亨利不得不离开学校加入海军。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _2在他离开之前，他发现玛丽慢慢地开始向她的同学敞开心扉。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
15、 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _3他很高兴看到这些变化，但他对此并不以为然。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _4他希望他的话能帮助这个女孩变得更加外向和自信。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
16、 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _5然而，让他失望的是，从此看不到玛丽更多的变化。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _6几年后，当亨利走路时，一个女人问他还记得她。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
17、_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _7他面前是一位年轻的女士，看起来阳光明媚，自信满满。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _8当他被提醒她是他工作的中学的学生时，亨利想起了她的名字。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
18、 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _9玛丽告诉亨利，她已经大学毕业，也在海军服役。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _1 0 正是亨利几年前在班上的一个小小的鼓励行为继续对我产生了巨大的影响。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
19、 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _1 1 亨利为自己做了好事感到骄傲。译：_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _参考答案：1.Several weeks later,Henry had to left the sc
20、hool to join the navy.2.Before he left,he had found that Mary slowly started opening up to her classmates.3.He was happy to see the changes but he didnt think too mach of it.4.He hoped that his words could help the girl become more outgoing and confident.5.However,what made him disappointed was that
21、 he couldnt see more changes from Mary fromthen on.6.Several years later,when Henry was walking,a woman asked him whether he remembered her.7.In front of him was a young lady,who looked sunny and confident.8.When he was reminded that she was a student in the middle school where he worked,Henrythough
22、t of her name.9.Mary told Henry that she had graduated from the university and was serving in the navy,too.10.It was Henrys small act of encouragement in the class years ago that continued to have a bigimpact on Mary.11.Henry felt proud that he had done something good.篇 薪 文Several weeks later,Henry
23、had to left the school to join the navy.Before he left,he hadfound that Mary slowly started opening up to her classmates.He was happy to see the changesbut he didnt think too mach of it.He hoped that his words could help the girl become moreoutgoing and confident.However,what made him disappointed w
24、as that he couldnl see morechanges from Mary from then on.Several years later,when Henry was walking,a woman asked him whether heremembered her.In front of him was a young lady,who looked sunny and confident.When hewas reminded that she was a student in the middle school where he worked,Henry though
25、t ofher name.Mary told Henry that she had graduated from the university and was serving in thenavy,too.It was Henrys small act of encouragement in the class years ago that continued tohave a big impact on Mary.Henry felt proud that he had done something good.课后练习Where were you when you first heard M
26、y Heart Will Go On?You know that love songthat took over the world in the late 1990s,the one that ruled radios and television screens,thatthrilled through the air when you rang your neighbors doorbell,or rang out of a ValentineDay musical card the song we love to hate now because it is almost shamef
27、ul to admit howmuch we listened to it in 1998.Im no fan of the song,but Ill tell you one thing-it savedmy life.I remember where I was when I heard the song,13 years old,only a few weeks away fromreceiving my class eight report card.When my mother and I went to collect it from school,theskies were gr
28、ey.On the left side of the report card was the failure of my choosing-Maths,Physics and Chemistry-on the bottom of the right hand side it said Not Promoted（不升级）inred ink.My mother,an English teacher in another Calcutta school,was too proud to beg theprincipal for the three marks I needed in Chemistr
29、y to be promoted to class nine.I walkedalong,thinking of the last song I was watching on MTV before we left for school.It wasDions all-knowing hit My Heart Will Go On:You have come to show you,.”I was a fool to have ever thought that I could get away with not studying and watchingMTV for hours on en
30、d.Till class eight,my father had refused to get a cable connection on thegrounds that I would forever be glued to the screen,not study and fail the exams.The year afterhe gave in to his desire to watch late night football,I proved him right.I failed class eightbecause I was in love with the Backstre
31、et Boys and would watch MTV all the time so that Iwouldnt miss a single video.Thats the whole truth and the band will never know the price Ipaid for my love.注意：1.所续写的短文的词数应为150词左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph 1:Failing the year changed the world as I knew it.Paragraph?:Some months later,when the
32、 talent competition was announced in school,I was pickedfor the final round.参考答案：Failing the year changed the world as I knew it.Overnight,it seemed as though everythinghad changed.I lost my friends in school because every conversation was filled with pity,theirs,and shame,mine.I was stopped from wa
33、tching TV.At school,some teachers ignored myraising hands because Id already studied the text before but failed.I used to love singing,nowmy lifewas filled with sadness.Some months later,when the talent competition was announced in school,I was pickedfor the final round.On the day of the contest,I s
34、tood before the entire school,closed my eyesand sang the song.In that moment,I realized what“You have come to show you“meant tome-1 had come to show me to my classmates and my teachers,to show them that I wasnt justa girl who got held back,that failed,that I was good for something,that I was enough
35、the wayI was.Sometimes,when you sing like you mean the words,chances are you might win.2022届高考英语写作专题之读后续写精读精炼（二）原 文 呈 现阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。My dads life seemed typical of his generation.He graduated from high school during theDepression and worked for a large company.He enlisted（入伍）i
36、n 1941,served in the Pacificand Europe.On returning,he met my mother,married and had three children.Because of the job,heneeded to continue his education.With his full-time job and attending to his family,heattended college in the evening and obtained his degree.As kids,we knew what Dad told us.Duri
37、ng cold winters he sympathized with unfortunatekids in just T-shirt and shorts.He was saddened by children with nothing under the Christmastree.He loved kids and schools and he wanted to spread kindness to everyone in need of help,so he was always ready to give a hand to people he met.With us three
38、kids on our own.Dad and Mom retired and came to Florida.Two years later Mom died,in 1980.From that time.Dad got into the habit of walking around his house.Healso tried golf but failed to become addicted to it.Although it was hard time for Dad,he didntgive up the hope of life.He decided to do somethi
39、ng meaningful to society.Then he saw an ad requesting literacy（读写能力）volunteers.Dad helped some children,who were homeless learn to read and write.He also helped an old man learn to read because hisliterate wife was going blind.He told us he even wanted to be a teacher to help more people.As time pas
40、sed,Dad had some health problems.His legs became weak and he started tohave trouble in sleeping.My brother,my younger sister and I came to look after him,tellinghim to stop doing the volunteer work and have a rest at home.However,he was so stubbornthat he disagreed with us and insisted on his decisi
41、on.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Before long,Dad made his dream come true.One year later,something surprising happened.思路分析一、准确理解材料r 理清人物事件1.浅层信息理解首先审题：体裁是记叙文；人称是第一、三人称；主体时态是一般过去时；记叙文 六要素who(L my dad,children,oldman,my brother,my youngersister)、when(after my dad retiring and my momd ied)、wher
42、e(Florida)、what(Dad wanted tobe a teacher but he had some healthproblems)、why(to help morepeople)2.深层信息理解理清故事的发展线索(How)段落Behaviors(行1 为)Topic(段意)Para 1&2(dad wasyoung)Graduatedfrom high school,worked fbr alarge company,enlisted in 1941,served in theP&U,marriedand had threekids,continuedhis education
43、.Dads lifeseemed typicalof his generation.Para 1&2(dad was young)Graduated from high school,worked for a large company,enlisted in 1941,served in theP&U,married and had three kids,continued his education.Dads life seemed typical ofhis generation.Para 1&2(dad was young)Graduated from highschool,worke
44、d for a largecompany,enlisted in1941,served in the P&U,married and had threekids,continued hiseducation.Dads life seemedtypical of hisgeneration.Para 3(When wewere kids)Sympathized,saddened withunfbrmulatedkids;loved kidsand wanted tospread kindnessto everyone.Dad waskind and alwaysready to give aha
45、nd to people hemet.Para 3(When we were kids)Sympathized,saddened withunformulated kids;loved kids andwanted to spread kindness toeveryone.Dad was kind and alwaysready to give a hand to people hemet.Para 3(When we werekids)Sympathized,saddened with unformulatedkids;loved kids andwanted to spreadkindn
46、ess to everyone.Dad was kind andalways ready to give ahand to people he met.挖掘文章人物的情感和品质Para 4-5(in 1980)Got into thehabit of walkingaround his house,tried golf butfailed,helpedchildren and anold man learn toread.Dad decidedto do somethingmeaningful tosociety andwanted to be ateacher.Para 4-5(in 198
47、0)Got into the habit of walkingaround his house,tried golf butfailed,helped children and an oldman learn to read.Dad decided to dosomething meaningful to societyand wanted to be a teacher.Para 4-5(in 1980)Got into the habit ofwalking around hishouse,tried golf butfailed,helped childrenand an old man
48、 learn toread.Dad decided to dosomething meaningful tosociety and wanted to bea teacher.Para 6(after 1980)His legsbecame weak andstarted to havetrouble insleeping,insisted on hisdecision.Dad hadsome healthproblems butinsisted on hisdecision.Para 6(after1980)His legs became weak andstarted to have tr
49、ouble in sleeping,insisted on his decision.Dad had some healthproblems but insisted on hisdecision.Para 6(after1980)His legs becameweak and started to havetrouble in sleeping,insisted on his decision.Dad had some healthproblems but insisted onhis decision.My dads life seemed typical of his generatio
50、n.Hegraduated from high school during theDepression and worked fbr a largecompany.He enlisted(入伍)in 1941,served in the Pacificand Europe.On returning,he met my mother,married and hadthree children.Because of the job,heneeded to continue his education.Withhis full-time job and attending to his family