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1、如何精彩收尾精彩收尾 1.画面定格 2.对话收尾 3.主题升华 4.结尾留白 5.首尾呼应1.人物动作的画面定格如：（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考）They stood there for a moment,side by side,waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it.Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother.And slowly,almost reluctantly,she placed her arm
2、with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mothers shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.一、画面定格如：His hard work paid off!Holding the soda tin firmly,Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch.The moment he got the beautiful brooch,he burst through the front door and placed it
3、in Doras hand.Never had Dora received such a gift.Speechless and happy,she held her son tightly into her arms,with tears welling up in her eyes.如：The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.”God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human again.”But she shook her head and said,“N
4、o,I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life.”Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever.On the top of the mountain,she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.2.特殊寓意的写景画面（1）The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot,it was as
5、 if night and day had become one beautiful moment.Dawn had come.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（2）Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean,bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。（黎明到来的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面
6、（3）The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it,the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（4）The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕
7、阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落时的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（5）The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness.The never ending blackness consumed everything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（6）Looking up,I saw th
8、e sun shine brighter than I ever knew before.I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the suns rays.My consciousness ebbed away with the heat.I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud.抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意
9、）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（7）Dotted with glittering stars,the sky,midnight blue,gave the scene a fairytale quality.缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。（神话般美丽的夜空画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（8）Kissed by the rain and glistening,the wet ground is cold under foot.A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground,enveloping everything with
10、in its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）The rain drummed on the window,bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。（雨水来临的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（9）The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street.Occasionally,one would fall past m
11、e,lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground.我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）二、对话收尾（1）Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother,but both brothers had changed their last names.“He does remember me and my older brother and
12、he told me that hes been looking for us ever since we lost contact，”he said.Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well.When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life,Chester said，“I got family everywhere,so it might lead to many more trips
13、 now.”(2)What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others.Ninas family had moved to a bigger apartment.“Ive heard amazing stories about dogs loyalty,but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me.Even now,I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long
14、distance to find us，”said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again.I never grow tired of repeating thisanimals are the most devoted and loving creatures.They need our love and care.”(3)Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale,Dolores Haworth.Soon she offered him a job working f
15、or the company.She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for.I was told,If he does this for free,imagine his jobs if he was being paid.I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.”(4)They
16、hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley,“Are you really willing to lead a tough life with me？”She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads of stuffon them satisfactorily,saying，“Yes!For me，it is not a suffering to live.”三、主题升华(1)Everyone has one person they l
17、ook up to as a role model.To me there is none other than my mom.She has beauty,brains,and one of the best hearts I know.Without her in my life,I would have no idea whether I can be a_famous_dancer.Someday,when_I_am_older and have children of my own,I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母
18、爱的深远影响）(2).I am extremely unhappy about it.I think money doesnt equal happiness.And free life style also doesnt equal happiness.The real happiness is that everyone loves each other,and does everything useful for our society.Most of my classmates support me.But some of them think money is everything.
19、In my opinion,money cant take the place of everything,such as your life,your time and your happiness.(表达自己的价值观）(4)“Two reasons account for that you won，”the teacher answered.“First,youve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo.Second,the only known defense for that move is fo
20、r your opponent to grab your left arm.It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match.As a proverb says,Every coin has two sides.Making full use of your strength is your achievement.Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble.God is fair to everyone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题）
21、四、结尾留白(1)While she wrapped them,I took a deep breath and asked Joy,“Do you have dinner plans?”I explained that Id like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital gave Grace and her husband some time alone with baby.“Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat?”I asked.“Id love to,”s
22、he replied,her eyes sparkling like diamonds.And,this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsys death.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间）(2)The beggar hesitated for a moment,then he decided to open it.He declared aloud,“Who cares?He wanted me to have it anyway.I might as well enjoy it no
23、w.”With that,he unwrapped the white tissue paper,but to his surprise,there was no hard rock candy inside.Instead,into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.五、首尾呼应(1)2017年浙江高考题 开头：I had an interesting childhood.It was filled with suprises and amusements,all because of my mot
24、her-loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange faimly trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.结尾：Despite moms being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom.(再次重申妈妈的性格，来深化主题)(2)2018年浙江高考题开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like
25、 never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before.The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved刻 in my mind.(3)2016年浙江高考题开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.结尾：What a funny d
26、ay.Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious 搞笑的experience.同学们可以在续写的结尾，融入故事主人公的观点和评价。精彩的结尾，可以凸显文章的主题，升华事件的意义，起到画龙点睛的作用。注意：要衔接自然，不可生搬硬套名言警句。附：名言警句升华主题 乐观积极的名言警句 1.Without the dark,you would never see the stars.没有黑夜，你将永远无法看到星星。2.The pessimist sees difficulty in every oppor
27、tunity.The optimist sees opportunity in every difficulty.悲观主义者在每个机会里看到困难，乐观主义者在每个困哪里看到机会。3.Dont cry because its over,smile because it happened.不要因为结束而哭泣，要微笑，因为它曾经发生过。4.You will never find a rainbow if you are looking down.如果你低着头，是看不到彩虹的。5.Be thankful for what you have;youll end up having more.If you
28、 concentrate on what you dont have,youll never,ever have enough.感激你所拥有的，最终你会得到更多。如果你总是对那些没有得到的东西耿耿于怀，那么你永远也不会满足。面对挫折的名言警句 1.Man is not made for defeat.A man can be destroyed but not defeated.人不是为失败而生的。人可以毁灭，但不能被打败。2.What doesnt kill me makes me stronger.杀不死我的会让我更强壮。3.Storms make trees take deeper ro
29、ots.暴风雨让树木扎根更深。4.Strength doesnt come from what you can do.It comes from overcoming the things you once thought you couldnt.强大并不来自于你能做到什么，而来自于你克服了自己曾经认为不可战胜的艰难险阻。5.Dreams that seem impossible can be realized with determination and persistence,no matter what the odds are.看似不可能的梦想可以通过决心和坚持来实现，不管实现的可能性
30、有多大。树立自信的名言警句 1.The greatest prison that people live in is the fear of what other people think.人最大的牢笼常常是由对别人看法的恐惧铸成的。2.The best way to defeat your fear is to face your fear head-on迎面.克服恐惧最好的方法是迎面直击。3.Never underestimate低估 yourself,for you have no idea what you are capable of能力.4.Throw off your shy m
31、ask and show the world who you really are.关于友善的名言警句 1.Kindness is the golden chain by which society is bound together.2.Even small acts of kindness can make a big difference.3.The world is full of good people.If you cant find one,be one.Your acts of kindness can impact the world in proud ways.4.Try
32、to be a kind person,and the world will be nicer and nicer.5.Kindness goes a long way.关于爱的名言警句 1.Only by love,life is kept together and moves forward.2.True love is to give everything to each other without asking for anything in return.3.It is love that makes the world go around.4.Where there is great love,there are always miracles.Thanks!