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1、试题回顾：A Vacation with My Mother I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusement, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yetabsent-mindedandforgetful. One strange familytripwe took when I was elven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and Nort
2、h Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached,David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we would ever see them again? Finally, t
3、he moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games,campingequipment, and atentinto the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervou
4、s when using gas station bathroom ifMomwas driving whileDadslept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout (放哨) while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh I thought they were being a
5、wfully quiet.” We were never actually left in a strange city, but we were not about to take any chance. On the fourth or fifth night, we hadtroublefinding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backy
6、ard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is asniceas she is
7、. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along
8、 the way.审题分析：1.提炼原文情节1. My mothers forgetfulness filled our life with much surprise and amusement.2. During a family trip, my family had to go back to fetch our purse and travelers checks as my mother forgot to bring them.3. She advised us to put up a tent in a strangers family, because she thought
9、 others were as nice as herself. But my father turned down the idea. we finally spent a night in a hotel.2.实战解析首先，根据文章当中第二段内容比较开心的基调，第一段的故事情节应该比较偏向正面感情色彩，例如：我们在露营过程中一起搭建帐篷的开心时光或露营过程中的趣事(尤其是前文有铺垫妈妈是个forgetful的人，这一点也可以埋下伏笔来表达后面过程中由于妈妈健忘而带来的趣事)(也有同学在此处描述了露营过程中对其他陌生人提供帮助，来集中体现nice这一个点);其次，第二段开头说来描述欣赏风景：
10、此处可以用一些描述景色环境的表达来烘托下氛围，但是第二段不能仅仅只能有景色描述; 例如：这里可以实写和虚写结合的方式，看到景色(同时回忆往事)，最终把故事的落脚点放在“家人的感情”“亲情”“生活的乐趣”“与妈妈一起的趣事”等等角度都可以的;当然也有同学描述与陌生人的相遇，引出了陌生人的善意这个主题;总之这次的话题比较开放，情节可以写的角度比较多; 再次，除了情节方面的内容以外，以下几个方面是考生需要着重关注的得分点：字迹清晰程度，语法多样性和句式丰富性，衔接成分的使用，语言的场景恰当程度。范文欣赏01Version 1The next day we remembered the brand-n
11、ew tent we had brought with us.Mominsisted that we should make full use of it since we had brought it.Davidand I looked atDad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea. To our great disappointment, he agreed. We spent a whole afternoon seeking a nicecampingplace and set up outtentbefore the night fell. I
12、t was the first time that I had thoughtMomcould be wise as I was admiring our tent. “Oh, I forgot the pillows!” What a misconception! Regardless of my neck pain, we had some great nights.We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.The bright blue sky, the endless green
13、 grass, groups of sheep, the setting sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me spellbound. Not only did we see the picturesque scenery, we also managed to consider Moms scandals as a kind of fun. I really love my mom.To our relief, we arrived at grandparents place and went back to
14、 our home with all of four people. It was so fortunate to see my friends again.02Version 2The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.“Were not going to stay in hotels any more.”Momsuddenly said, with a firm tone, “Or ourtentwould be of no use.” With all our objections in va
15、in, we finally stopped at the front doorstep of a house with a big backyard. To our surprise, it was a much better experience than we had imagined.Davidand I had a great time trying all thecampingequipment and Mom was chatting happily with the kind family. Though we didnt have the tools for cooking
16、since Mom was so forgetful, we still had a good meal as there truly was someone who was asniceas mom was.We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.Whats more, we had many unforgettablecampingnights after moms decision. When we were about to reach Colorado, mom asked,
17、 “What do you feel about our trip, my sweet heart? Is it interesting?” “Well, I cant say its a perfect one but its great, espcially at night when we enjoyed meals with others.” David giggled. The sun cast a warm golden glow on moms face. She was still our childlike mom, but I realized that she was t
18、he one who can enjoy the life to the best in the world at that moment.03Version 3The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.What a pity if we finished our trip withoutcampingoutside! Thus we decided to have a try. Parking the car in a small village,Mompersuaded us to camp n
19、ear the woods. However, just after we excitedly marched to the site and set up thetent, my poorabsent-mindedmother realized we didnt have any food at all! Humger troubled us andDavidand I even found that sitting on the grass seemed to be a torture! Fortunately, an enthusiastic villager encountered u
20、s and treated us well. And the night was splendid in all.We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.And, of course, we camped a lot. And from that awful experience, our small car was always loaded with packs of foods and other stuffs. You cannot imagine how wonderful
21、and brilliant it was to lie on the grass and stare at the stars. And you cannot imagine the senses of loveliness and sweetness when you cast a secret glance to my mom, who always seemed to be active and did not feel exhausted at any time. To be frank, we will never never forget the vocation with my
22、mother.Version 4By Bling Bling04The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Mominsisted that we should make full use of the unusedtentwith a kind of childish excitement. ButDavidand I drifted from the suggestion because we were still immersed in missing our fellow friends. W
23、e raised our eyes, givingDada pleading look. Much to our disappointment, Dad acted as a go-between. Giving us a wink, he took out the tent and got us to to join him. Weve conquered tremendoustroublewith the help of a warm-hearted stranger before we managed to put up the tent and collapsed in fatigue
24、. Strangely, it turned out that we had a sound sleep and had a sweet dream even with the chilly wind blowing outside.We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.Drowning in the breathtaking and picturesque landscapes, we camped a lot. Beside the winding rivers, in the
25、deep valeys of the lofty mountains, off the sunny beaches, .Actually, this vacation with Mom a “silly”campingtrip, blessed me not only the fantastic scenery but also the warmth and love between people, even strangers. It was Momsforgetfulnessandabsent-mindednessas well as her sweetness that brought us theniceand permanent memory. I was lost in thought at the table of my grandparents when the stories about Mom were shared. “Where is our tent, David?” Oh, my God. Mom forgot to put it in the trunk.学科网（北京）股份有限公司