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1、书面表达书面表达 A letter of giving advice 一 Cross-question(审题)做到四确定1体裁 _（记叙文？议论文）2主导时态 _ 3主导人称 第_人称（我？你？他？）4 布局谋篇：_段 Para1_ Para2_Para3_ 基本框架：基本框架：开头（开头（beginning）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea)主体主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)结尾结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)注意事项：注
2、意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。3）符合英文信件的基本格式常用套语常用套语A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1After I read your letter in the newspaper,I am sorry to know that 2I am very glad to hear that you want to3I k
3、now you have trouble inafter reading your letter4.I am writing to you for the purpose of-5.I am writing to share some advice with you.6.You have asked me for my advice with regard toand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions.7.You have asked me for my advice about English learning.B.表达建议（表达建议（b
4、ody）1.first，firstly，secondlythen，after that，in the endfinallyMeanwhile,whats more2.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 3.I would like to suggest/recommend that4.If I were you,I would5.You may consider doing6.I would seem to me that you could7.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the f
5、ollowing action.8.I wonder if you have considered the following.9.When it come to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you canC.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式 1.I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/usef
6、ul/helpful.3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.4.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.5.I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it.6.In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful.注意衔接词使用注意衔接词使用:表先后次序：表先后次序：First,seco
7、nd,third.Finally Firstly,secondly，eventuallyto begin with/to start with,at last,last but not least递进关系：递进关系：furthermore；moreover；not only.but also.；not.but.；,besides；in other words；on the one hand.，on the other hand.；meanwhile；at the same time；写作模板写作模板模板一：模板一：Dear _,You have asked me for my advice a
8、bout_(问题问题)，and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.In my opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions:_(建议内容建议内容).I hope youll find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details.Yours sincerely,Li Ming 模板二：模板二：Dear _(对象对
9、象)，I am writing to express my views concerning _(问问题题).My suggestions to deal with the problem are as follows.First and for the most _(建议建议一一);in addition_(建议二建议二);whats more _(建议三建议三).I hope youll find these proposals useful.Yours sincerely,Li Ming纠错纠错1 语气错误语气错误You must go to do some sports outdoor
10、s,such as playing football and so on.2 从句错误从句错误You can find a good friend can listen to you.3 从句错误从句错误If you do this,you will feel happy and forget something make you upset.4 重复重复As far as I am concerned,I think doing sports is good for you.5 词汇错误词汇错误You could do some outdoors exercises.6 成分成分Be opt
11、imistic about life is very important.7词性和语序Youcaneasycalmdownyourself.8单词拼写错误Italsocouldbeagoodidearifyoudosomesports.9单词核心用法错误Itisagoodwaytomakeyourelax.10that理解错误Iamsorrytohearthat.Itisnotgoodtoloseyourtemper.阅读以下考场作文，并进行必要的润色改写。阅读以下考场作文，并进行必要的润色改写。DearJack:Iamsorrytohearthatyouarelosingyourtemper
12、recently.Thisseriouslyinfluencesyournormallifeandstudy.Yes,itisbad.Dontworry.Igiveyousomeadvice.（1）,Ithinkyoucanfindafriendtolistentoyourproblems.Youwillfeelrelaxed.（2）,Ithinkyoushouldgoouttodosportslikeplayingfootball.（3）,youmustbeoptimisticaboutlife.Ifyoudothese,Iamsureyouwillbehappyagain.Iamwaiti
13、ngforyouletter.思考：思考：1结构？结构？2语言及符号？语言及符号？3可以得多少分？可以得多少分？书面表达如何写？书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step 1 List the key pointsStep 2 Make sentences Step3.Form a passage and polish如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending 小结；呼应主题佳作欣赏佳作欣赏 假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如
14、何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。提示：1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。2、关心同学、乐于助人。3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。5、（你的建议）注意：1.词数130左右，信的格式已给出，但不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearLinHao,Imgladtoreceiveyourletter.Fromyourletter,Iknowyouhavetheproblemofhowtomakenewfriendsinhighschool.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.First,yous
15、houldsmileandtrytobefriendlywhenyoumeetpeople.Youshouldalsocareaboutyourschoolmates.Ifyouarealwaysreadytohelpthem,theywillunderstandyoubetter.Second,itisimportantforyoutobeagoodlistener.Thatway,whenpeoplearewithyou,theywillfeelcomfortableandhappy.Finally,itisbetterforyoutotakeanactivepartinclassacti
16、vitieswhereyoucanshowyourtalent.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Mayyoubehappyinyournewschool.YoursLiHuaDearLiMing,Inyourletter,yousaidyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothersandoftenfeellonely.Ithinkyoucanjustmakeitsolongasyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.First,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmateslikesanddisli
17、kes.Second,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionheldinyourclassandshowyourownopinionactively,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherspatiently.Thenyoucanmakefriendswithmorepeople.Third,itwillbeagoodideatohelpotherswhennecessary.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyouifyou
18、candotheabove.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,Lihua二、根据提示，写一篇150词左右的建议信。假如你是某报编辑，昨天收到一位学生来信。请根据来信的内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信。（要注意写信的格式）DearEditor,Iamahard-workinggirlandwanttobethetopstudentinmyclass.Butinexams,Ialwaysmakemanycarelessmistakes.Ireallyworryaboutit.WhatshouldIdotoimprovemyperformanceine
19、xams?BestregardsYourssincerely,LiFang要点提示：1.收到来信，获悉信中所提到的有关情况；2.不要压力太大；3.如有问题请教老师或同学；4.考试时合理分配（distribute）时间，并尽量抽出几分钟检查；5.其它建议DearLiFang,Ireadyourletteryesterday.Itsgoodthatyouhaveahighaimforyourselfandyouknowwhathaspreventedyoufromachievinghighscoresinexams.Butyoushouldrememberthateventheverybestst
20、udentcanmakemistakessometimes.Sodontputtoomuchpressureonyourself.AsfarasIamconcerned,learningfromyourmistakesinpastexamsisaquickwaytostopmakingthesamemistakesnexttime.Tobeginwith,iftherearequestionsthatcantbesolvedbyyourself,youshouldturntoyourteachersorclassmatesforhelp.Whatsmore,duringtheexamsyoudbettermakeagoodplantodistributeyourtimeaccordingtothequestions.Besides,trytoleaveafewminutesattheendtocheckyouranswers.Enjoythechallengethateachnewexambringstoyou.Ibelieveagoodlearninghabitwillfinallyhelpyougainsuccess.BestwishesYourssincerely,Editor