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1、but,however,while,on the contrary,in contrast,on the other handMr.And Mrs.Lee often had different opinions.Last month,they planned to spend their holiday at the beach.Mrs.Lee wanted to go there in their car,Mr.Lee,however,_.Mrs.Lee packed four big suitcases;in contrast,Mr.Lee _.On the day they left,
2、Mrs.Lee got up early,while _ When they arrived at the airport,Mrs.Lee wanted to _,but Mr.Lee_ Finally,_,but Mr.Lee missed the plane.insisted on going there by planeput only a few shirts in a bag.Mr.Lee stayed in bed until 9 oclock.get on the plane at once.get on it right before it took off.Mrs.Lee w
3、ent on the trip.Over the past twenty years or so,great changes have taken place in our life.Take my family for example.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them lettersin the past,but now we call long distance at home.And oncemy parents listened to the radio for news and other information,b
4、ut now we watch the news and other programs on TV.Another change is in the housing conditions.When they got married about twenty years ago,my parents lived in a smallroom crowded with furniture,but now we have moved intoa big new three-room apartment.In short,changes in our lifein the past twenty ye
5、ars have brought us comfort and convenience.(2004)Outline (ABABA)Topic sentence:Support 1 contacting others in the past nowSupport 2 getting information once nowSupport 3 Another change is in the housing conditions when they got married twenty years ago,nowConclusion:great changes have taken place i
6、n our life.contacted others mainly by sending them letterswe call long distance at homelistened to the radio for news and other informationwe watch the news and other programs on TV lived in a smallroom crowded with furniturewe have moved into a big new three-room apartmentchanges in our life in the
7、 past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.接受建议买得起同意容许参加美丽相信而且责备勇敢变化枯燥的毕业选择收集学院公司电脑控制鼓励创造发展奉献不同的讨论教育努力雇佣足够进入提高重要爱好习惯将来acceptadviceaffordagreeallowattendbeautifulbelievebesidesblamebravechangeboringgraduatechoosecollectcollegecompanycomputercontrolencouragecreatedevelopdevotedifferent
8、discusseducationeffortemployenoughenterimproveimportanthobbyhabitfuture表达对比和变化的经典句型：表达对比和变化的经典句型：1 过去父母们主要通过写信彼此联系。2 但是现在我们可以在家打长途电话。3 过去我们甚至在周末还要上课，写没完没了的作业。4 现在我不再熬夜，大约10点睡觉。5 在过去的20多年里，我们的生活发生了很大的变化。6 我很高兴告诉你自从减负我们 生活的变化。7 总之，自从学校减负以来，有了很大的变化。8 总之，过去20多年的变化使我们的生活更舒服方便。9 到2008，北京将成为一个美丽、现代、国际化的大都市
9、。In the past my parents contacted others mainly by sending letters.But now we call long distance at home.We used to have to attend classes even at weekends anddo endless homework as well.I no longer stay up late,on the contrary,I go to bed at 10 pm.In the past 20 years,great changes have taken place
10、 in our life.Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has been reduced.In a word,things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.In short,changes in our life in the past 20 years have broughtus comfort and convenience.By 2008,Beijing wil
11、l become a beautiful,modern and international city.The old houses in the central part of the city will be turned into new shopping centers.change,improve,become,turn into(AB)Change in my villageGreat changes have taken place in my village.Ten years ago,the small and low houses of my village lay on t
12、he north ofa lake.They produced much waste.As a result,the lake wasseriously polluted.To the west of the village was a sandy field,which was the source of much dust whenever wind was blowing.Worse still,a brickyard on the southwest sideof the lake used up a great deal of good soil.Now the poor house
13、s have been replaced by green trees andthe brickyard by tall buildings.The sandy field that the villagers used to plough has been covered with fruit trees.On the lake,now clean and clear,the villagers often spend their spare time boating and fishing.In a word,my village has become a modern and green
14、 one.First of all he can persuade the bus driver to allow himto get off so that he can walk out of the heavy traffic jamto take another bus or a taxi.Or he can get off and ask an assistant in a nearby shop to lend him a bike.Sinceit is an important day for the high school graduates,dialing110 and ge
15、tting help from the police is one of the choices as well.to the east/west/south/north ofin front of behind opposite around/across1.There is a man-made lotus pond _ the main building.2._ the main building,there is meeting hall.3._ the meeting hall is the library.4.There is a lawn_the main building.5.
16、Trees are planted _the lawn.6.Also behind the main building,_ the lawn,there is a tall laboratory building.in front ofTo the north of MEETING HALLLABORATORY BUILDINGLABORATORY BUILDINGSNPONDPONDLIBRARYLAWNMAIN BUIDINGMAIN BUIDINGOppositebehindaroundacross老教学楼原操场新操场老教学楼图书馆新教学楼（2001）假设你是李华在一所中学读书。最近收到
17、美国朋友）假设你是李华在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信，希望了解学校变化情况，给他写回信介绍变化。先生的来信，希望了解学校变化情况，给他写回信介绍变化。-Dear Mr Smith,I was so pleased to hear from you and I am writing to tellyou something about my school.You are right.Quite a fewchanges have taken place.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On
18、the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new building-our library.In it there are allkinds of books,newspapers and magazines.The playgroundis now in front of the school.We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school.I hope you come and see for yourself some day
19、.Best wishesYours,Li Hua60%的同学认为1 不应收门票2 公园是公众休闲的地方3 如收票，需键大门、围墙，会影响城市形象40%的同学认为1 应收门票，但票价不宜高2 支付园林工人工资3 购新花木NEMT 2002你校正在组织讨论：公园要不要收门票？请根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。Dear Editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had aboutwhether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Dear Editor,
20、Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had aboutwhether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions are divided on the question.60%of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.They believe a public park should be free of charge.People need a place where they can rest and
21、enjoy themselves.Charging entrance feeswill no doubt keep some people away.Whats more,it willbecome necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.On the other hand,40%think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers,and t
22、o buy plants and young trees.They suggest,however,fees should be charged low.1.60%of the students are against/for the idea of-2.40%think/believe-3.Two thirds of the students agree/disagree to this idea.Two thirds of the students agree/disagree that-4.The other 20%have never thought about it or dont
23、care a bit.5.In my opinion,请你就下表的信息，给编辑写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况，然后表述自己的看法或建议。参加讨论的学生有4O人，男生20人，女生20人。40%的同学燃放鞭炮是很好的民间传统；增加节日气氛20%的同学没有考虑过，无所谓40%的同学燃放鞭炮造成空气污染；造成对人体和财产的伤害set off firecrackers tradition propertyDear Editor,Im writing to tell you about our discussion we had on the afternoon of last Wednesday abou
24、t the good and bad sidesof setting off firecrackers during the Spring Festival.Homework:38-19A 38-38B 38-18B 38-12BMost students/a few studentsgo online/surf Internetas much as possiblein ones spare time/be freeconvenient /communicategain/knowledgemake-colourfullives outside classa time limitinstead
25、 ofbe absent from schoolDear Mary,Im glad to receive your letter again.You want to know something about what is going on in our school.In short,great changes have taken place since our school began to carry out the research-based learning.In the past,the teachers almost took up all the period,writin
26、g on the blackboard,explaining the points,and answering the questions raised by themselves.We students are the slaves of study.But now,weve taken up most of the period,discussing the questions raised by the teachers or ourselves,exchanging our ideas,or solving the problems.We are now the masters of
27、study.After class,we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework.We go to the library to read books,have sports on the playground and surf the Internet for various kinds of information.How happy we are now.welcome to our school.Best wishes.yours trulyDear Mary,Im glad to re
28、ceive your letter again.You want to knowsomething about what is going on in our school.In the past,the teachers controlled the whole class all the time.There is no time for us to think or study freely.Whats more,we had so much homework every night thatwe couldnt go to bed until midnight.We were real
29、ly the slaves of study.To our delight,great changes have taken place in our class.We can discuss questions,exchange ideas and work out questions by ourselves.We become the master of study.We have not only interesting lessons but also wonderfulactivities after class,doing sports on the playground,rea
30、dingbooks in the library and surfing Internet.How happy we are now!welcome to our school.(杨波涛）Before we began research-based learning,teachers werethe center of the class,they gave us a talk all through the class,and we were forced to study.But now we have playedan important part in class.We can dis
31、cuss some questions,exchange opinions and solve the problems by ourselves.In the past,the only thing we should do was to finish our homework after class.On the contrary,we now have many interesting things to do,for example,surfing on the net,playing on the play ground,reading books in the library an
32、d so on.Weve become the master instead of the slaves of thestudy.周宇 I will tell you the changes of my life.Before,we had many classes every day.I had to do a lot of homework after school.I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening.I had no time to play.I was very tired.Now I can visit museums.I can learn
33、computer and drawing.In the evening,I can read books and newspapers and watch TV.I go to bed at 10:00 now.(12 points)Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again.I will tell you the changes of my life.Before,we had many classes every day.I had to do a lot of homework after school.I went to bed at 11:30
34、 in the evening.I had no time to play.I was very tired.Now I can visit museums.I can learn computer and drawing.In the evening,I can read books and newspapers and watch TV.I go to bed at 10:00 now.7514分2001年高考书面表达 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。注
35、意：1、词数100左右 2、开头已为你写好 生词：减轻学习负担reduce learning load*Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again._周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11：30就寝时间：10：00满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life_._,learning during the day was very simple.Having classes and doing
36、 homework was _ we should do.In the evening,we _ had a lot of homework to do.We could _ go to bed _ 11:30._,_ reducing the learning load,my life has become _ interesting.I _ visit museums and computer rooms _ draw pictures _.In the evening,I _ have time to watch TV and read newspapers.I _ stay up la
37、te,_,I go to bed at about 10 p.m._,I am quite satisfied with my life now.since our homework has been reducedBefore thatthe only thingalsonotuntilNevertheless 然而 sincemuch moreoftenandin my spare timealsono longeron the contrary 相反In short Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since ourh
38、omework has been reduced.Before that,learning during the day was very simple.Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do.In the evening,we also had a lot of homework to do.We could not go to bed until11:30.Nevertheless,since reducing the learning load,my life has become much more
39、 interesting.I often visit museums and computer rooms and drawing pictures in my spare time.In the evening,I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers.I no longer stay up late;on the contrary,I go to bed at about 10 pm.In short,I am quite satisfied with my life now.(20 points)First of all,Xiao
40、Hong could ask a passer-by for direction.Since it was a sunny day,she could also use the position of the sun to tell the directions.And finally she could also replace the signpost so that it correctly named the directionshe had come from.Then it would be correct for all the other direction.Homework:38-10A