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1、高考作文之一高考作文之一基础性作文基础性作文第一节第一节基础写作基础写作（共1小题；满分15分）【写作内容】你收到一位笔友的电子邮件，你要给他写一封回信。【写作内容】请根据以下信息写一封回信。1得知笔友所在的小镇现正流行禽流感，你对此感到非常遗撼；2提出你的建议，包括：(1)勤洗手，避免到家禽(poultry)较多的地方去。(2)最好不要食用当地的鸡、鸭，如果要食用，需将其充分煮熟后再食用，以免感染病毒。(3)如果发现自己有感冒、发烧等症状，及时就医。【写作要求】1只能用5个句子表达全部内容；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数。Dear Tom,1得知笔友所在的小镇现正流行禽流感，你对此得知笔友
2、所在的小镇现正流行禽流感，你对此感到非常遗撼；感到非常遗撼；ItisapityforyoubecauseIheardthatthebirdfluisattackingyourhometown.IfeelsorryforyoubecauseIheardthatthebirdfluisattackingyourhometown.2提出你的建议，包括：提出你的建议，包括：勤洗手，避免到家禽勤洗手，避免到家禽(poultry)较多的地方去。较多的地方去。Toensureyourhealth,Isuggestwashingyourhandsfrequentlyandavoidinggoingtoplac
3、eswheretherearealotofpoultry.3.最好不要食用当地的鸡、鸭，最好不要食用当地的鸡、鸭，Besides,itsbestnottoeatthelocalchickenorduckwhenthebirdfluisgoingaround4.如果要食用，需将其充分煮熟后再食用，以免感如果要食用，需将其充分煮熟后再食用，以免感染病染病毒。毒。Evenifyouwanttoeatit,youshouldnteatituntilitiswellcookedsothatyouwontbeaffectedbyitsvirus.5.如果发现自己有感冒、发烧等症状，及时如果发现自己有感冒、
4、发烧等症状，及时就医就医Ifyouhaveacoldorfever,youshouldseeadoctorimmediately.Dear Tom,I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking(侵袭，袭击侵袭，袭击)your hometown.Dear Tom,I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking your hometown.Toensureyourhealth,Isuggestwashingyourhandsfrequen
5、tlyandavoidinggoingtoplaceswheretherearealotofpoultry.Dear Tom,I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking your hometown.To ensure your health,I suggest washing your hands frequently and avoiding going to places where there are a lot of poultry.Besides,itsbestnottoeatthelocalchic
6、kenorduckwhenthebirdfluisgoingaround.Dear Tom,I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking your hometown.To ensure your health,I suggest washing your hands frequently and avoiding going to places where there are a lot of poultry.Besides,its best not to eat the local chicken or duc
7、k when the bird flu is going around.Evenifyouwanttoeatit,youshouldnteatituntilitiswellcookedsothatyouwontbeaffectedbyitsvirus.Dear Tom,I feel sorry for you because I heard that bird flu is attacking your hometown.To ensure your health,I suggest washing your hands frequently and avoiding going to pla
8、ces where there are a lot of poultry.Besides,its best not to eat the local chicken or duck when the bird flu is going around.Even if you want to eat it,you shouldnt eat it until it is well cooked so that you wont be affected by its virus.Ifyouhaveacoldorfever,youshouldseeadoctorimmediately.Yours,The
9、passagemainlytellsusthat+第一段第一第一段第一句和最后一段最后一句句和最后一段最后一句第一段第一段概括概括USexpertscallforgreatattentiontothegirlsmathsandscienceeducation.Fromhighschooltocollege,therearefewerandfewergirlslearningmathsandscience.Soparentsarewarnedtopaymoreattentiontotheirdaughterslearningthem.第二段.(评价)AsfarasIamconcerned,at
10、school,most of girls dont like maths and science.They think maths and science are difficult subjects.Whats more,some parents think girls are born to be poor at them,which,in some way,will make many girls afraid of studying them!第三段.经历感受 Onreadingthestory,mymindbeganitssearchforasimilarexperience.Imm
11、ediatelyitoccurredtomethat自己或者别人的例子自己或者别人的例子读了这个故事，我的头脑开始搜索类似的经历，读了这个故事，我的头脑开始搜索类似的经历，很快，我就想起了很快，我就想起了.I dont agree to the above.It is true that girls are not good at maths and science at school.But great women scientists have proved that girls can do as well in them as boys do.For instance,Madam Cu
12、rie,a Nobel Prize winner,set a good example to us.第四段.(总结)1.Insummary,.+谚语谚语总之，总之，.2.wecansafelydrawaconclusionthat.+谚语谚语综上所述综上所述.If girls want to learn maths and science well,they should make up their minds at the beginning,and their parents and teachers should often encourage them and give them timely advice or guidance,especially when they meet with some difficulties.最后可以再加一句谚语，点睛之笔如：Anythingispossible!Nothingisimpossible!Nopains,nogains!Wherethereisawill,thereisaway!