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1、托福英语写作范文(合集10篇)托福英语写作范文第1篇写作中最主要的三种句型:因果论证句、比较对比句和假设条件句。下面就来看一下因果论证句具体该怎么写!因果论证句Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Theresnoneedforthegovernmenttohelpthosewhocanhelpthemselves.Oneofthemajorreasonswhysomeindividualsarereluctanttoseekhelpfromthegovernmentisthatpeoplehaveformedtheimpressionth
2、attheofficialsaretoobusytocareabouttheirprivatematters.why后面是结果,一个完整的句子.Peoplewillreducecarusein20years.Oneofthereasonswhytheuseofprivatecarscanandwillbereducedin20yearstimeisthatdiversifiedmeasuresabeingtakenbythegovernmenttolimittheuseofcars.Todaysparentsdonotunderstandtheirchildrenaswellasparents
3、did50yearsago.托福独立写作“无话可说”怎么办当我们开始准备托福独立写作的时候,很多考生会面临着一个问题,就是“无话可说”,特别是如果遇到一个自己不熟悉的题目,加之时间又紧,头脑就一片空白了,想到的也只是空泛的东西。在这种情况下,即使是中文也难以写好,更谈何用英语去表达呢。对此办法就是要善于联想到一些具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象。那么问题来了,具体的事实、具体的例证以及具体的现象到底有哪些呢?考生们的内心是崩溃的,人生过于平淡,阅历太少,书到用时方恨少,那么考生们该如何来准备这些具体的例子呢?我们就拿北极星教材为例,来给大家分析一下如何从平常的阅读中积累托福写作素材写作真题
4、Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Intwentyyearstime,peoplewillleadamoreleisurelylife.写作思路Mainpoint:DisagreeSubpoint1:工作压力比现在更大。Subpoint2:环境问题更为严重。Subpoint3:任何事物更新换代的速度更快,意味着20年之后我们需要不断的学习,更加努力的去适应时代的发展,不被时代所淘汰,所以不是更休闲了,而是更累了。话题相关内容第三版北极星4Unit5-Longevity:TooMuchofaGoodThing?Adoubledlifesp
5、anIfscientistscouldcreateapillthatletyoulivetwiceaslongwhileremainingfreeofinfirmities,wouldyoutakeit?Ifoneconsidersonlythepersonalbenefitsthatlongerlifewouldbring,theanswermightseemlikeano-brainer:Peoplecouldspendmorequalitytimewithlovedones;watchfuturegenerationsgrowup;learnnewlanguages;masternewm
6、usicalinstruments;trydifferentcareersortraveltheworld.Theworkplace讲解如何运用同学们注意,以上内容给了我们非常好的素材(尤其是标绿部分)。当我们要证明subpoint1.工作压力比现在更大。你能想到用什么方法来有效的论证呢?Maybe你会说以后大家都是高学历者(well-educated),那么工作的竞争压力自然会更大。这个理由大部分同学都能想得到,那么怎么让你的素材比较novel?赶紧学学以上段落吧!20年后我们会变得更加长寿,这就意味着我们的退休年龄pushback了,在这种年轻人不断进入职场,而年长者延迟退休的情况下,是不
7、是竞争压力要更大了呢?同时篇章中许多expressions是我们都可以学习的,eg.mid-lifere-trainees人到中年再就业者;alimitednumberofentry-levelpositions有限的招聘岗位;写作真题Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Itisawasteofmoneyforgovernmenttofundspacetravelandexploration.写作思路Mainpoint:DisagreeSubpoint1:目前地球存在的问题:环境污染越发严重,能源日益减少,人口激增等。所以我们有必要去探索
8、宇宙,找到新的居住地,发现新能源。Subpoint2:Spaceexploration是非常practical的一项投资,不能说是awasteofmoney.Subpoint3:诚然当今社会还有很多没有解决的问题需要政府来处理。这些问题可能比宇宙探索、旅行迫切多了,但是这并不意味着政府做这件事情就是浪费钱。因为如果政府不做就没有人有这个能力了。话题相关内容第四版北极星3Unit3-ExploringtheRedPlanetMARS:OURNEWHOME?calledMarsOnewillsoonadvertiseforpeopleinterestedincolonizingMars.Ifyou
9、havealltheforthechallenge?Asafuturecolonistinoneofthesixteams,youwillgothroughyearsoftraining.IfyourteamisthefirstteamtotraveltoMars,yourmainresponsibilitywhenyougettherewillbetobuildaplacewherehumanscanlive.TheatmosphereonMarsdoesnothaveenoughoxygenforhumans,andthelandisnotgoodenoughtogrowfood.Colo
10、nistswillhavetocreateanartificialenvironmentonMarswherethereisairtobreatheandlandtofarm.ScientistsknowEarth-likeconditionscanbesimulatedonMarsbecausesomethingsimilarhasalreadybeendoneinAntarctica,wherehumanscannotsurviveoutsidethecreatedenvironment.(对火星环境的具体描述&科学家们如何将其改造的适合人类居住。)讲解如何运用关于这个话题,同学们脑海中应
11、该会浮现中一幅幅宇宙探索的画面,例如近期的火星救援(TheMartian)相信大家在这个话题上比较能达成共识,那就是政府花钱探索宇宙并非浪费钱的一种行为。但是如何解释清楚呢?思路已经给大家了。现在我们回到Subpoint2:Spaceexploration是非常practical的一项投资,不能说是awasteofmoney.同学们想一下,当我们要证明宇宙探索的实效性、是有前景的,是不是应该展现给考官一个画面:在探索宇宙的过程中政府正在克服一个个unavoidable困难,政府正在为寻找下一个家园而努力着,所以怎么能叫浪费钱呢?!想清楚这点之后,不够哦!接下来怎么写呢?探索宇宙过程中具体会遇到
12、什么难题呢?又是如何去解决的呢?英文要怎么表述啊?感觉好多专业术语不会讲,怎么办?!同学们,那么请再仔细看看以上篇章中标绿的部分,是不是心中豁然开朗了呢,这篇文章简直就是为托福写作量身定做的!520daysinthisenvironmentandonlyhadcontactwiththeirbossesandtheirfamilies.Thesixastronauts“returned”totheEarthingoodphysicalconditionandstilltalkingtoeachother.ScientistsviewedtheMars500Missionasagreatsucc
13、essbecausetheywereabletoseehowtheastronautshandleemotionalandphysicalstresses.Surprisingly,thegreatestemotionalproblemwasboredom.Thegreatestphysicalproblemswerenotgettingenoughsleepandgainingtoomuchweight.(针对情况:在太空中我们的心理可能会遇到什么挑战,会不会出现心理疾病呢)写作真题Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Inthepast
14、peopleweremorefriendlythantheyaretoday.写作思路Mainpoint:AgreeSubpoint1:现在人生活节奏快,每天都非常忙碌,没什么时间关注他人,自然不如以前的人friendly。Subpoint2:当今社会诈骗行为很多,加上媒体的曝光,人们的防范心理很强,对陌生人极其警惕;而以前人们对陌生人是比较友善的。Subpoint3:当然不能否认当今社会中依然有很多friendly的行为举措,很多人也极其warm-hearted.但是整体来说是以前的人比较friendly。其中有个比较重要的因素是现代人相对selfish,尤其在中国One-ChildPoli
15、cy的影响下,独身子女相对会比较自私。话题相关内容第四版北极星3Unit2-TheConsequencesofFraud(如下篇章内容围绕思路中的subpoint2展开)TYPESOFFRAUD(注意:本文通篇可用,就不标注重点内容)讲解如何运用写作真题Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Themoremoneyapersonhas,themoreheorsheshouldgiveawaytothecharities写作思路Mainpoint:DisagreeSubpoint1:Money越多在一定程度上意味着能帮助越多的人,而当今社会还
16、有很多人温饱问题都解决不了,所以应该出更多的钱给慈善机构。可以用BillGates的例子。Subpoint2:对自身也有好处,自己在帮助他人的过程中可以更好的认识自己,变得更加快乐,更加自信,更加知道生命的意义。Subpoint3:可以让这个世界更加美好。许多问题的出现都是因为贫富差距过大导致的,如果富了之后会拿更多的钱出来帮助他人,那么这个世界必将更加美好。话题相关内容第三版北极星4-Unit6-GiveandLearnThis1979NobelPeacePrizewinnerspentmanyyearsworkingwiththeextremelypoorinIndia.Thoughnot
17、arichperson,MotherTeresawasabletopersonallyhelpthousandsofpeople.disagreewiththefollowingstatement?Themoremoneyapersonhas,themoreheorsheshouldgiveawaytothecharities.Thisbusinesspersonisoneoftherichestpeopleintheworld.BillGatesisalsoaverygenerousphilanthropistandhascreatedafoundationfocusingoneducati
18、onandhealthcare.alsotheGoodwillAmbassadorfortheUnitedNationsHighCommissionforRefugees.Thiswealthytalkshowhosthascreatedafoundation“tosupporttheeducationandempowermentofwomen,childrenandfamilies”.OprahWinfreyhasalsoestablishedaschoolforgirlsinSouthAfrica.讲解如何运用本文的展开需要有大量的实例来说明做慈善是必要的,本单元中的AngelinaJol
19、ie,OprahWinfrey,BillGates,MotherTeresa都是慈善的好例子。托福写作时“无话可说”乃是因为平时缺乏素材积累,输入太少呐。对于素材,同学们要注意以下几点:一是素材最好是英文表达,不然考试时,即使心中满满的例子写的时候却发现好多意思不知怎样用英文表达;二是素材在表达上不宜太难,否则难以理解和记忆。三是好的素材要熟悉到位,同学们面对好的素材不能只是记在本子上或是存在电脑中,一定要记在脑子里!如何确定已经记在脑子里了呢?找个一起考托福的小伙伴,把例子用英文讲一遍给他/她听;或者找张纸,写一遍。当你说完或者写完,对方听了或者看了惊叹你的表达或者例子好棒时,说明你是真的掌
20、握了这个例子!不然没有记在脑子里,再好的素材也是枉然托福英语写作范文第2篇decentlife,basedonthestandardofthosedays.Theycouldhavemanyhourstotheirown,whichwaswhytheycouldbehealthier.当然,让步也可以以范例三中的更简短的形式出现,同范例二中以evenif引导的句子相同,这样的让步应用更加灵活,在段内的位置也更加随意,应用范围也更广。如何正确理解和应用让步这一论证方法,要重点注意两点:套用易中天先生曾归纳的一类中国式逻辑结尾:中式逻辑问态度而不问事实,而想要破除这种思维误区,写出更符合英语思维的
21、文章,更正确灵活的应用让步,就应该重视基于事实的论证和分析。托福英语写作范文第3篇Inthereadingpassage,theauthorraisesthatreadinglessliteraturehascausedunfortunateeffectsonthereadingpublic,theculturalgeneralandliteratureitself.Onthecontrary,theprofessorstronglycontradictswithit.Tobeginwith,accordingtothereadingpassage,theauthormainlytalksab
22、outreadinglessliteraturecannotprovidereaderswithintellectualstimulation.Bycontrast,thelecturerdisagreeswithitandshereasonsthatabookdoesnthavetobeliteraturetobeintellectuallystimulating.Sciencebooks,historyandpoliticalanalysisarentliteraturebuttheyareoftenofhighqualityandsomeofthosebooksarejustascrea
23、tiveandwell-writtenasnovelsandpoems.Sodontassumethatsomeonewhoisntreadingliteratureisntreadingagoodbook.Tobefollowed,thereadingpassageindicatesthatthecultureisindecline.However,thespeakerholdstheoppositeopinionandshesaysthatpeoplearenotjustspendinglesstimeinliteratureandtheyarespendinglesstimewithbo
24、oksingeneral.However,today,therearemanyculturallyvaluablematerialthatisntwrittensuchasabrilliantsongandgoodmovie.Peoplearenotwastingtheirtimewhentheylistentogoodsongsandwatchgoodmovies.Thosenon-literalactivitieswillnotlowertheculture.Evensomeofthosecreativeformscanspeakmoredirectlytocontemporaryconc
25、ernsthanliteraturedoes.authorsfaultbecausetodaysliteratureisintendedtobedifficulttounderstand.Sodontassumetheearliersgenerationsofreaderswouldreadalotmodernliteraturetoday.满分托福综合写作范文In1990,newrulesandguidelineswereadoptedintheUnitedKingdomthathaschangedthewholefieldofArchaeologyinthatcountry.Thenewg
26、uidelinesimprovedthesituationinallthereareasdiscussedinthepassage.First,thenewguidelinesstatethatbeforeanyconstructionprojectcanstart,theconstructionsitehastobeexaminedbyarchaeologiststoseewhetherthesiteisofarchaeologicalinterestorvalue.Ifthesiteisofarchaeologicalinterest,thenextstepisforthebuilders
27、,archaeologistsandlocalgovernmentofficialstogettogetherandmakeaplanforpreservingthearchaeologicalartifacts,eitherbybuildingaroundthemorbyexcavatinganddocumentingthemproperlybeforetheconstructionisallowedtoproceed.Last,thenewguidelinesprovidealotofpaidworkforarchaeologists,workthatdidntexistbefore.Ex
28、pertarchaeologistsarenowhiredatallstagesoftheprocesstoexaminethesiteforarchaeologicalvalue,thentohelpdrawupthepreservationplantodotheresearchinaprofessionalscientificmannerandfinallytoprocessthedateandwritereportsandarticles.TheincreasedjobandcareeropportunitiesinArchaeologyhaveincreasedthenumberofp
29、rofessionalarchaeologistsinBritain,whichisnowthehighestitseverbeen.托福英语写作范文第4篇Forteenagersagedbetween15to18,whatisthemostimportanttotheteacher?1)theabilitytohelpstudentsplanforfuture2)theabilitytorecognizewhichstudentneedshelpandofferthathelp3)theabilitytoencouragestudentstolearnontheirownoutsideoft
30、heclassroom托福写作三选一类范文Secondaryeducationcanbeoneofthemostformativeexperiencesinapersonslife.Whatqualitiesmakeagoodhighschoolteacher?Peoplemightgoforabilitieslikehelpingwithfutureplanningorencouragingacademicautonomy.I,however,believethatthemostimportantfactoristheabilitytorecognizestudentsinneedandth
31、ewillingnesstolendahand.Thefirstbeneficiaryisunderachievers.Moreoftenthannot,studentswhofallbehindsufferfromalowself-esteem.Itisespeciallytrueforteenagerswhofinditadisgracetolosefaceinfrontoftheirpeers.Inthiscase,theywouldstayundertheradarandtrytoburytheirproblemsinthedark.Nobodywouldevennotice,nott
32、omentionofferinganyhelp.However,ateacherwithaperceptivemindcandiscovertheproblembeforeitgetsworse,sothatthetroubledkidcouldgetproperhelp.Letssayaboywhoseparentsaregoingthroughanastydivorcemayshowuplateatschoolormissthedeadlineforscienceprojects.Iftheteachercanspothisrecentanomalyandreachesouttohim,t
33、heboymightopenupandconfidetotheteacher.Thisisthefirststepontheroadtorecoveryandanattentiveteachermakesallthedifference.Tosumup,tobenefithighschoolstudentstoagreaterextent,theteachershavetobeabletorecognizewhatsgoingwrongandwhatcanbedonetomakeitright.Othercharacterscanbegoodtohave,butalsofinetolivewi
34、thout.托福英语写作范文第5篇Stillonething,afactorycanbeverydangerous.Becauseafireoraexplosionmaybreakoutinthefactory.Ifitsverynearourhome,itsquitedangerous.2.Makesurethatthefactorycandealwiththewasteproperly.Donotreleasethepoisonousgasintotheair,andnotreleasethewastewaterintotherivernearby.3.Makesurethesecurit
35、yguardinthefactoryworksverywell.托福作文满分范文:increases,theywillbeabletospendmoremoneyontheirfood,clothingandleisuretime,andthequalityoflifewillbeincreased.Ofcourse,therewillbesomedrawbacksofbuildinganewfactoryhere.Butinmyopinion,thebenefitsoutweighthedangers.Istronglysupporttobuildafactoryhere,andhopeth
36、atothersfeelthesameway.托福英语写作范文第6篇Task:“Whenpeoplesucceed,itisbecauseofhardwork.Luckhasnothingtodowithsuccess.”Doyouagreeordisagreewiththequotationabove?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestoexplainyourposition.托福写作模板范文参考:First,luckhashelpedagreatnumberofpeopleinventanddiscoverthings.SirAlexanderFlemingexp
37、erimentedwithantibacterialsubstancesfornineyearsbeforehediscoveredpenicillin.Hewentthroughlaborioustrialanderror,butitwasonaccountofluckthathelookedatthemoldonapieceofcheeseandgottheideaforpenicillinthereandthen.BenjaminFranklinhadbeentryingtoprovehisideathatlightningandelectricityisthesamething,but
38、itwasonlyinflyingakitethatheproveditandtheconceptofalightningrodhappenedtostrikehim.Finally,luckhashelpedmanypeoplesecurejobs.Onemayspendmuchtimewritingandsendingresumes,readingrecruitingads,andgoingtojobinterviews.Onemaypondthepavementforalongtimebeforegettingajob.However,itiswithluckthatajobhunter
39、meetsthepersonwhowillofferapositiontohimorher,orlearnsofavacancythatisnotadvertised.Beingattherightplaceattherighttimeoftenhelpsonelandajob,andthishasalltodowithluck.Onecanhardlysucceedwithouthardwork,buthardworkwithoutluckoftenleadstonothing.Luckhasagreatnumberofpeoplefindsuccess.Infact,luckgoeshan
40、dinhandwithhardwork.托福英语写作范文第7篇Talkaboutabookyouhavereadthatwasimportanttoyouforsomereason.Explainwhythebookwasimportanttoyou.GivespecificdetailsandexamplestoexplainyouranswerTPO1托福独立口语Task1满分范文:Recently,IreadabooknamedKeeptheaspidistraflyingwrittenbyGeorgeOrwell.Thebookinfluencesmealotbecausethesto
41、ryhassomethingthattouchesmyheart.Thestorytalksaboutamanwhowantstobeapoetandwhoabandonsmanywell-payingjobstopursuehisdreamofbeingapoet.Ihaveasimilarexperienceofquittingaverygoodjobinordertobeawriter.Also,themaninthestoryislackofmoneybecauseheworksasabookstoreassistantandthushasaverylowsalary.Helivesi
42、nashabbyapartmentandsometimeshavenomoneytobuyfood.Again,Ivegotsimilarexperience.Ioncelivedinacrampedapartmentaloneandhadnomoney.Thebookisimportanttomebecauseittouchesmeandgivesmeencouragementtopersist.托福英语写作范文第8篇Theclubofyourschoolplantohelponeofthefollowinggroupofpeople,pupilsreadingandmath2.buildh
43、ousesforthosewhocannotaffordthehousecareoftheoldLifeisloadedwithvariousdifficultiesandhardship,especiallyforoldpeoplewhoareincapableoftakinggoodcareofthemselvesbecauseoftheirpoorphysicalquality.Therefore,amongthethreechoicesofhelpingyoungstudentsinnearbyprimaryschool,helpingpeopletofindnewhousesforr
44、entandassistingoldpeopleforcaringthem,Idefinitelychoosethelastone.Foranotherthing,theprocessofhelpingtheoldcancultivatecollegestudentssenseofresponsibilitythatmattersintheirfuturelifeandprofession.Manymoreuniversitieswill,literally,decidewhethertoadmitstudentsbycheckingifthereisanyvolunteeringexperi
45、enceliketakingcareoftheoldinanursinghomeintheirapplicationmaterials.Inaneraofbothhighlydevelopedeconomyandtechnology,ittendstobeeasierforchildrentodeveloptheunwantedbehaviorsandunhealthyvaluesandworldoutlook.Nowadays,peoplecanoftenheartheNewsaboutcollegestudentsfailingtograduatefromschoolsbecauseoft
46、heiraddictiontovideogamesandmanyoverseasstudentscatchingtheaffluenzawhichreferstowealthypeoplewholiketoshowtheirrichnessbypurchasingmanyunnecessaryluxuries.Therefore,manyyoungpeoplesideologyhasbeendistortedseriouslyanditisurgenttocallontheirsenseofresponsibility.Andtakinggoodcareoftheoldcanteachthem
47、alot.Forinstance,theywillbeconsciousofthefactthatthereisstillavulnerablegroupthatneedstobeassistedandtheircontributiontothesocietycandriveawaythesolitudeoftheold.Thus,theywillincreasetheirconfidenceinundertakingmoresocialresponsibilities.Admittedly,someothersmaylayemphasisontheimportanceofhelpingthe
48、youngsincetheyarethefutureofanation.FromwhatIbelieve,itishypesincetheeducationofyoungchildrendoesnotcountonthehelpfromcollegestudents.Asforthestatementthatcollegestudentsshouldhelpothersrentahouse,thatisridiculoussincetherehavebeenawiderangeofchoicesfortenantsamongdiverseAppsviatheInternet.Toconclude,helpingtheoldcanbeofenormousbenefitsforboththeoldandtheyoung.托福英语写作范文第9篇托福英语写作范文第10篇满分托福综合写作范文In1990,newrulesandguidelineswereadoptedintheUnitedKingdomthathaschangedthewholefieldofArchaeologyinthatcountry.Thenewguidelinesimprovedthesituationinallthereareasdis