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1、实实 战战 篇篇 一、写作评阅时遵循三原则一、写作评阅时遵循三原则 语言第一位语言第一位(语言高级语言高级)；内容第二位内容第二位(要点齐全要点齐全)；结构第三位结构第三位(文章分段文章分段)。语言高级：语言高级：1.高级词汇和语法；高级词汇和语法；2.修辞手法；修辞手法；3.有效的连词；有效的连词；4.名人名言或谚语。名人名言或谚语。二、基本原则二、基本原则 词组优先；避免重复；慎用生词。词组优先；避免重复；慎用生词。三、语法、修辞三、语法、修辞1.肯定不如双否；肯定不如双否；2.陈述不如倒装；陈述不如倒装；3.主动不如被动；主动不如被动；4.从句不如分词。从句不如分词。四、基础写作四、基础
2、写作 抓要点，连句成篇，抓要点，连句成篇，(多使用连词、非谓语、多使用连词、非谓语、分词、介词短语和从句等，尤其要注意动词使分词、介词短语和从句等，尤其要注意动词使用的正确性用的正确性)。五、高分技巧五、高分技巧 造句功能重基础能力培养；造句功能重基础能力培养；简单句须有复简单句须有复杂结构相伴杂结构相伴；复合句表述最讲恰到好处；联；复合句表述最讲恰到好处；联句成篇练习要天天不断；写作格式最好长短句成篇练习要天天不断；写作格式最好长短交错式；熟能生巧必定能妙笔生花。交错式；熟能生巧必定能妙笔生花。六、备考思路六、备考思路 每天练笔熟悉句型；名句谚语铭记心上每天练笔熟悉句型；名句谚语铭记心上注重
3、一词多义形式；英汉互译强化记忆注重一词多义形式；英汉互译强化记忆限时练笔提炼思路；平时演练实战见效限时练笔提炼思路；平时演练实战见效 细细审读要求题示；拟好提纲排列顺序细细审读要求题示；拟好提纲排列顺序书写核对认真细心；措辞时态准确到位。书写核对认真细心；措辞时态准确到位。第六阶段第六阶段三十八、三十八、文章概括文章概括 (记叙文记叙文)阅读下面的短文，然后按照要阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉考拉)at the Featherdale Wil
4、dlife Park in southern Australia.All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining.You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off.Thats right sleep it off.The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on th
5、e leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.The reason why Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is that they can be hugged and photographed by tourists,who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special exp
6、erience.Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal,which is understandable.How would you react,my friend,if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round,furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?【写作内容写作内容】1.以约以
7、约30个词概括这段短文的内容；个词概括这段短文的内容；2.然后以约然后以约120词就词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍该不该禁止游客和动物拍照照”进行讨论，内容包括：进行讨论，内容包括：(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照？照？(2)假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应？反应？(3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照？你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照？1.Who?2.What happened to them?3.Result?4.Why(条件或原因)?Koalas.Someone kept waking them.T
8、hey are unhappy and complaining.They are hugged/and photographed by tourists5.Meaning or purpose?(意义意义)整合所有信息：整合所有信息：Think and do as animals.Koalas are unhappy and complaining because someone kept waking them,hoping to hug them or photograph with them.The author asks us to take animals into more con
9、sideration.记叙文要点：记叙文要点：单单句句改改写写：1.同同义义替替换换；2.语语态态互互换换；3.非非谓谓语语动动词词短短语与从句的互换。语与从句的互换。1.Someone kept waking them.(被动被动)2.hoping to hug them or photograph with them(同同义替换义替换)They are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep.due to/because of/for tourists taking photos 3.asks us to think and do as animal
10、s(同义替换同义替换)整体概括：整体概括：be friendly to animals/take animals into more consideration The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos.The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求
11、写一篇150词左右的英语短文。词左右的英语短文。You may not be very familiar with“ecotourism”a new term in todays tourism industry but in an era if growing environmental consciousness,it is not too difficult for us to imagine and work out the meaning of this new form of holiday.Ecotourism is typically defined as travel to
12、places where the unique flowers,plants,animals and the cultural heritage are the primary attractions.It is considered as a kind of responsible tourism which seriously takes ecology and culture into consideration.Therefore,programs involving the conservation and preservation of some natural and cultu
13、ral sites also form a part of ecotourism（生态旅游生态旅游）.说明文说明文 Ecotourism is developing at great speed.According to a report by the World Tourism Organization,ecotourism in recent years has enjoyed an annual growth of about 5%worldwide.Over 80 activities have been listed for ecotourism,such as bird watch
14、ing,hiking,diving,photography,mountaineering and participating in various kinds of local cultural events.Although big cities are still the major places that absorb tourists in our society today,it looks like some smaller towns and rural areas rich in ecological,cultural and historical resources may
15、well become the new destination for people to visit tomorrow.【写作内容写作内容】以约以约30个词概括这段短文的内容个词概括这段短文的内容3.Function：4.Tendency(趋势)：Conservation and preservation of some natural and cultural sites；take ecology and culture into consideration.Rural areas rich in ecological,cultural and historical resources.b
16、ecome the new destination.tomorrow.1.Problem：2.Features(特点)：ecotourism (1)travel to places where the unique flowers,plants,animalsnatural and the cultural heritage are the primary attractions (2)Ecotourism is developing at great speed要点概括：要点概括：改写并组合：改写并组合：Ecotourism is a new fast-developing form of
17、holiday which attracts tourists by natural and cultural heritage,as well as historical resources.It can be a way to protect the environment.议论文议论文:阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的词左右的英语短文。英语短文。Getting up early has been regarded as a good habit since ancient times.Many years ago,people thoug
18、ht that if we went to bed early and get up early,we would be energetic the whole day.So,getting up early is of great importance to us all.In fact,morning is the best time of a day.In the morning,the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best conditions.Many of us may have the experiences
19、 that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning,we can build our bodies and become much healthier.Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or
20、 study of the day if we get up early.However,if we get up late,we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry.Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it.If we stick to getting up early every day,we will certainly benefit a lot from it.【写作内容写作内容】1.以约以约30个词概括
21、这段短文的内容；个词概括这段短文的内容；2.然后以约然后以约120个词论述个词论述“早起的好处早起的好处”。要点概括：要点概括：1.Main idea：2.Supporting ideas：Getting up early/a good habit/of great importance to us all.(1)Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day.a b
22、etter memory(2)If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning,we can build our bodies and become much healthier.a healthier body(3)Also we will have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early.a better preparation for the day3
23、.Conclusion：改写并组合：改写并组合：If we stick to getting up early every day,we will certainly benefit a lot from it.The passage says getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot.It enables us to have a better memory,healthier body and better preparation for the day.新闻报道新闻报道 阅读下面的
24、短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。A new study shows that fat people in the United States suffer direct economic and social effects because of their size.The findings are from an 8 year study of about 100,000 people.The people studied were between the ages of 16 and 24 when the research began.The researchers w
25、ho carried out the study say they consider the people fat if they are in the top of 5%of the measurement in which weight is connected with height.For example,fat women in the study were about 160 centimeters tall and weighed about 90 kilograms.Fat men in the study were about 175 centimeters tall and
26、 weighed 100 kilograms.The researchers say that more than 1,000,000 Americans are that big.The researchers found that fat young women were more likely to lose social and economic power even if they were from wealthy families.The fat women also were 20%less likely to get married and they earned an av
27、erage of about$6,700 a year less than other women.The study showed less severe effect on fat men.They earned an average of about$3,000 a year less than other men.Fat men also were 11%less likely to get married.【写作内容写作内容】1.1.以约以约3030词概括短文的内容要点；词概括短文的内容要点；2.2.以约以约120120词就词就“肥胖引起的问题肥胖引起的问题”这个主题这个主题发表你的
28、看法，至少包含以下的内容要点：发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点：(1)(1)简介中国的肥胖人群面临的问题；简介中国的肥胖人群面临的问题；(2)(2)你认为人们应如何避免过于肥胖；你认为人们应如何避免过于肥胖；(3)(3)你认为应该怎样对待肥胖人群。你认为应该怎样对待肥胖人群。1.The first sentence/paragraph 2.Examples or figures：Fat people in the United States suffer direct economic and social effects because of their size.(1)More tha
29、n 1,000,000 Americans are that big.(2)(2)Fat young women were more likely to lose social and economic power(3)The fat women were.less likely to get married and they earned.less than other women.新闻报道类要点新闻报道类要点3.(有时可省有时可省)Conclusion/prediction(the last sentence)改写并组合：改写并组合：该篇没有该篇没有“总结句总结句”A recent rep
30、ort says there are over a million fat people in the US.Fat people meet a series of problems in their life.They are less likely to get married and are badly paid when they work.记叙文：记叙文：who，what，result(结果结果)，why(条件或原因条件或原因)，meaning(意义意义)说明文：说明文：phenomenon/problem，feature(特点特点)，process(过程过程)，function(功
31、能功能)，tendency(发展趋势发展趋势)议论文：议论文：theme(论题论题)，opinion(作者的观点作者的观点)，supporting sentences（支持句支持句），conclusion(结论结论)新闻报道类：新闻报道类：the first sentence/paragraph；contents(examples or figures)；conclusion/prediction(the last sentence)书信类：书信类：可参照记叙文的做法可参照记叙文的做法(特别注意题目要求的写特别注意题目要求的写作格式作格式)总总 结结 归归 纳纳三十九、主题句及拓展三十九、主题
32、句及拓展四种常用方法：四种常用方法：1.1.对题目要求作出回答对题目要求作出回答 如：假如你处在那些动物的处境，游客与你拍如：假如你处在那些动物的处境，游客与你拍照你会有什么反应？照你会有什么反应？(2009(2009年广东高考年广东高考)要点：要点：我会不开心。我会不开心。(注意虚拟语气的用法注意虚拟语气的用法)If I were an animal in the wildlife park,I would feel annoyed when people keep photographing with me.写主题句写主题句2.2.重述题目要求重述题目要求 如：人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢
33、和动物拍如：人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照？照？(2009(2009年广东高考年广东高考)要点：要点：人们参观动物园是喜欢拍照。人们参观动物园是喜欢拍照。3.3.明确表达自己的观点明确表达自己的观点 如：你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。如：你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。(2009(2009年广东高考年广东高考)要点：要点：如果我处在那个位置，我会强烈反对。如果我处在那个位置，我会强烈反对。When people are visiting wildlife parks,they like to take photographs with animals.If I were in t
34、he same position as the animals in the zoo,my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed.4.4.叙述个人经历叙述个人经历 要点：要点：就拿我学英语来说吧。就拿我学英语来说吧。Take my personal experience in learning English for example.四种常用方法：四种常用方法：1.列举：列举：12点点如：列举学校里的浪费现象如：列举学校里的浪费现象 We could see such kind of small th
35、ings around us every day.(主题句主题句)拓展主题句拓展主题句 For example,when we leave the classroom,we just ignore the lights and computers and leave them on;when we have dinners,we often use the throwaway chopsticks and plastic bags;when we finish some drinks and food,we throw the leftover very casually.(拓展句拓展句)要点
36、：要点：教室时教室时；吃饭时；吃饭时；吃完时；吃完时2.递进：递进：not only.but also.moreover 如：就如：就“互联网给人们生活带来的影响互联网给人们生活带来的影响”发表自发表自己的观点己的观点 Surfing the Internet brings people more benefits.(主题句主题句)The Internet not only provides people with amounts of latest information,but also changes the way people communicate with each other.
37、Besides,the Internet enables people to go shopping at home easily and conveniently.(拓展拓展句句)要点：要点：提供最新信息；改变交流方式；网上购物，提供最新信息；改变交流方式；网上购物，方便快捷。方便快捷。3.对比：对比：for one thing正面原因；正面原因；for another反面反面原因原因 如：你是否支持该校长体罚学生的做法如：你是否支持该校长体罚学生的做法 I believe the headmaster is right to suspend those misbehaving studen
38、ts class.(主题句主题句)For one thing,if these misbehaving students are allowed to stay in class,they will negatively affect other students learning.For another,if they are removed from the class,not only the others can learn in peace,but they also can have time to learn their lessons and then behave bette
39、r when they return.(拓展句拓展句)要点：要点：一方面，他们待在教室会一方面，他们待在教室会；另一方面，；另一方面，不待在教室会不待在教室会4.类似故事或经历类似故事或经历故事归纳故事归纳 如：就如：就“如何看待外貌如何看待外貌”的主题发表看法的主题发表看法 What makes a person beautiful is his attractive personality rather than his physical appearance.(主题句主题句)要点：要点：举例：某某同学举例：某某同学 In one of my previous classes,there
40、was a beautiful girl named Lucy who had almost a perfect face and slim figure.She treated her beauty in a matter-of-fact way and she was nice to everyone.Her personality was mostly accepted by others and it made her an outstanding beauty.(拓拓展句展句)实实 例例 展展 示示 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英
41、语短文。词左右的英语短文。These two years,many high school students have been crazy about Super Girl,a hit talent show for girls broadcast by Hunan Satellite Television.It has attracted many peoples attention,especially some teenagers and many people have different opinions on it.Some people think highly of this
42、 competition.They think that it provides a broad stage for young girls to show their talent for singing in public and also encourages them to realize their dreams.It can also develop their self-confidence and improve their sense of competition.But some people think Super Girl has a bad influence on
43、young peoples values and their taste in beauty.They think it costs lots of time and energy and makes many girls concentrate less on their studies,which isnt good for their further progress.【写作内容写作内容】1.以约以约30词概括短文的内容要点；词概括短文的内容要点；2.以约以约120词就词就“我对我对超级女生超级女生的看法的看法”(My View on“Super Girl”)这个主题发表你的看法，至少包
44、含以下的内容要点。这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点。(1)(1)你是否喜欢你是否喜欢超级女生超级女生这个节目？这个节目？(2)(2)你怎样评价这个节目？你怎样评价这个节目？(3)(3)你是怎样对待这个节目的？你是怎样对待这个节目的？My View on Super Girl There are two kinds of ideas about Super Girl which is held by Hunan Satellite Television.Some people think highly of the show,while others have different i
45、deas about it.I like this show very much.And I think it is just a successful show,which has attracted lots of viewers attention.Whats more,I really appreciate the girls courage and passion in realizing their dreams in the competition.When the show was being broadcast,I was busy with my lessons at sc
46、hool.In order to watch those games,I bought some CDs of the show and borrowed some from my friends after the competition finished.So when I was free,I could watch them at home without delaying my lessons.I suggest everyone should hold a right attitude towards it,then we can be inspired by their spir
47、it and benefit a lot from it in the future.例二：阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇例二：阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语词左右的英语短文。短文。Shopping online is becoming very popular,on which people cannot only buy various physical products,such as electrical appliances,clothes,shoes,books,but also get all kinds of information,like onli
48、ne news,newspapers and magazines and blogs.Besides,people can download computer software and services.For example,booking airline tickets or hotel rooms are available on the Internet.Shopping online has many advantages,of which the most important one is convenience.We can go shopping whenever and wh
49、erever we like and it is often cheaper to buy goods online.However,we should be very careful when shopping online so as not to be cheated.【写作内容写作内容】1.1.以约以约3030个词概括上文的主要内容；个词概括上文的主要内容；2.2.以约以约120120个词表达你对这件事情的看法，并包括以下要点：个词表达你对这件事情的看法，并包括以下要点：(1)(1)你对上面阅读材料的观点的看法；你对上面阅读材料的观点的看法；(2)(2)解释你的理由并提出你的建议。解释
50、你的理由并提出你的建议。Be Careful When Shopping Online Popular shopping online with many advantages makes people buy various physical products,get all kinds of information and download computer software and services,but we should avoid being cheated.I cant agree more with the above opinion.As a matter of fact,