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1、 人物介绍人物介绍-写作课写作课 学习目标1 熟悉人物介绍的基本内容和结构。2 能利用相关词汇、高级句型写一 篇80词左右短文。3 学习使用同位语,with词组,定语从句等扩展信息4 健全完善的评价思维模式manly handsomegraceful Step 1 Warm up!“Can you describe your heroes?”Star-LordLook at the pictures and describe them!Look at the pictures and describe them!strong muscular(肌肉肌肉的)slimsharp-mindedGre
2、en Giantstrong-willed determinedhumorouscreativeIron ManCan you think of some adjectives(形容词形容词)to describe them?handsometall sunny active young populardevotedhardworkingsuccessfulStep2 Keep the words in mind!Please remember the words on the composition list Please remember the words on the composit
3、ion list and well have a competition!and well have a competition!“Who can say more words to describe a man “Who can say more words to describe a man in 30 seconds?”in 30 seconds?”PKLets have a competition!Who can memorize more words and phrases,Group BGroup A单词接龙 1 依次说出英语的单词依次说出英语的单词2 不知道说不知道说 sorry
4、,由下一位同学说,由下一位同学说3 先说完先说完20个为胜个为胜1 漂亮 2 随和 3 阳光 4 积极 5 善良 6 热心 Lets check our memory and accuracy!15帅气 16外向 17幽默 18自信19 聪明 20勤奋 7 精力充沛的 8意志坚定的 9考虑周到的 10有教养的 11 勇敢 12无私 13 慷慨 14公平 Step3.Follow the rules in the composition!A good composition languagestructurecontent1.概况:概况:age,sex,birth,family backgrou
5、nd appearance,character/personality(外貌性格外貌性格)2.事迹:事迹:big events in his or her life (education/achievement)3.评价:评价:evaluation (what other people think of her/him)What aspects should be included?content:II structure 1 The beginning-The main body-The ending (凤头-猪肚 -豹尾)2 The tense(时态)_;_;_ 介绍人物的文中一般会用到介
6、绍人物的文中一般会用到一般过去时、一般现在时一般过去时、一般现在时一般过去时、一般现在时一般过去时、一般现在时 和和和和 现在完成时现在完成时现在完成时现在完成时。若描述其出生和具体的过去行为若描述其出生和具体的过去行为 对现在的影响成就对现在的影响成就 世人的评价以及他的地位世人的评价以及他的地位-一般过去时一般过去时 现在完成时现在完成时一般现在时一般现在时一般现在时一般现在时The person(人称人称)_introduce yourself Iintroduce someone else he/sheIII language colorful and accurate words;b
7、rief and advanced sentencesStep 4 Combine the 2 sentences into one!1.1.介绍概况:同位语结构、分词结构,使文章简洁介绍概况:同位语结构、分词结构,使文章简洁 Abraham Lincoln is the son of a poor family.He was born in Kentucky in 1809Abraham Lincoln,the son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky in 1809.同位语同位语 FaFu shuai is capitain of the bask
8、etball team.Hewill win the match with his staff next year!FaFushuai,capitain of the basketball team,will win/won the match with his staff!Born in Maryland,USA in 1985,Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.固定的分语短语(2)Michael Phelps was Born in Maryland,USA in 1985.Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.Born
9、in Jinan,CG is a pretty and active boy.CG was born in Jinan.He is a pretty and active boy.2.描写外貌:巧用with短语My history teacher is a beautiful woman.She has long hair and big eyes.(两只大眼睛,留着长发)My history teacher is a beautiful woman,with long hair and big eyes.(两只大眼睛,留着长发)with+小特征(外在 或?)Hai Tao is a stri
10、ct but kind man,with a considerate heartand broad chest.体贴的级部主任3.性格 与 成就:尽量用定语从句,非谓语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如:Yue Yunpeng is a confident and humorous man He is popular with us.Yue Yunpeng is a confident and humorous man who is popular with us.定从 Yue Yunpeng is so confident and humorous that he is popular with
11、us.状从Being confident and humourous,Yue Yunpeng is popular with us.Yan Lin is a tall,rich and handsome man,who we all like.帅气的体育老师Having broken the world record and got the gold medal,he became the idol(偶像)of the youth.(2)NingZetao has broken the world record(打破世界纪录)and got the gold medal,he became t
12、he idol(偶像)of the youth.Having failed many times,he managed to lose weight.Step5 Practice!“Can lovely boys become more charming with beautiful language?”励志人物!The Fighting BoysTFBOYS is a teenage Chinese boy bandwho are from Mainland,China.2.They are about 1.75-metre-tall.They have short black hair.(
13、with)They are about 1.75-metre-tall boys with short black hair.合并句子1.TFBOYS is a teenage Chinese boy band.They are from Mainland,China.(who)3.They are very young and lovely.(Being)They are very popular with people of all ages.Being young and lovely,they are popularwith people of all ages.4.They prac
14、ticed skills very hard.They succeeded at last.(and,so,Having done.,.)Having practiced skills very hard,they succeeded at last.TFBOYS is a teenage Chinese boy band who are from Mainland,China.They are about 1.75-metre-tall boys with short black hair.Being young and lovely,they are popular with people
15、 of all ages.Having practiced skills very hard,they succeeded at last.Now,what have you known about TFboys?Pay attention to the underlined adjectives(划线形容词划线形容词)and phrases to describe a person!在学校组织的“感动校园人物”评选活动中,你班经过讨论,决定推荐_参加评选。请按以下要求写一篇100词左右的文章。内容包括:1推荐_的理由;2列举12个事例。a外在形象 b爱好特长 c.性格特点 d.人际交往e.总
16、体评价注意:文章开头已经给出,不计入总词数。After a heated discussion,our class has decided to recommend _ as the Touching Figure on Campus.Step 6 Write【活学活用】is a.with.is interested in is good at is a and lady who is.is so that she.Being.,.Having.,.Therefore,is thought highly of byTry to use the phrases and sentence patterns we just practiced!假设你目前在英国参加英语培训班,住在Mrs.Green家。你需要完成培训老师布置的作业:用英语描述你的房东(hostess)。内容要点如下:40岁左右,身材不高。容易相处,爱好广泛。对中国感兴趣。注意:1 词数 80-100 2 可适当发挥,使内容连贯。Show time!【评分标准评分标准】评分评分标准标准信息内信息内容完整容完整 (5分分)句子结构句子结构准确准确 (8分分)篇章结构篇章结构连贯连贯 (2分分)总分总分15分分自评自评得分得分他评他评得分得分