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1、读读后后续写续写讲评课You are simple,the world is a fairy tale;Heart is complex,the world is a maze.Obje ective es1.tounderstandthepassage2.toknowhowtocontinuethestoryandhowtoscoreandpolishwritingLo3.toappreciateanddevelopthethekindnessinlifeI had never been more anxious in my life.I had just spent the last th
2、ree endless hours trying to get to the airport so that I could travel home.Now,as I watched the bus driver set my luggage on the airport sidewalk,I realized that my anxiety had only just begun.This was my first visit alone to the international terminal of the airport,and nothing was familiar.I could
3、nt make sense of any of the signs.Where was the checkin counter Where should I take my luggage I had no idea where to go,feeling as if I were deaf and blind and stupid.I began to panic.What time was it?Where was my plane?I had to find help because I couldnt be late.I tried to ask a passing businessm
4、an for help，but my words all came out wrong.He just frowned and walked away.What had happened?I had been in this country for a whole semester,and I could not even remember how to ask for directions.This was awful!Another bus arrived at the terminal,and the passengers came out carrying all sorts of l
5、uggage.Here was my chance!I could follow them to the right place,and I would not have to say a word.I dragged my enormous suitcase behind me and followed the group.We finally reached the elevators.Oh,no!They all fit in it，but there was not enough room for me.I watched in despair as the elevator door
6、s closed.I was abandoned again!I had no idea what to do next.I got on the elevator when it returned and stared at all the buttons.Which one could it be?I pressed button 3，because I thought I saw those passengers pressed 3,though it was no more than a quick glance.The elevator slowly climbed up to th
7、e third floor and came to a stop.A high，unpleasant noise announced the opening of the doors，and I looked around shyly.注意：注意：1.续写词数应为续写词数应为150左右；左右；2请按如下格式作答。请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1：Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane.Paragraph 2：When I turned to thank
8、 him for all his help，he was gone.Main ideakindness/helpmamainnfa actorswhowherewhenI and_ international terminal of the airporttravelling home mamainnfa actorswhyhowwhatnot familiar with the placeasking for help and following the others I coundnt find my plane con ntenentfind the key words to descr
9、ibe the feelingpa ara1a1I had never been more anxious in my life.I had just spent the last three endless hours trying to get to the airport so that I could travel home.Now,as I watched the bus driver set my luggage on the airport sidewalk,I realized that my anxiety had only just begun.contentpara2本课
10、内容 This was my first visit alone to the international terminal of the airport,and nothing was familiar.I could not make sense of any of the signs.Where was the checkin counter?Where should I take my luggage?I had no idea where to go,feeling as if I were deaf and blind and stupid.I began to panic.Wha
11、t time was it?Where was my plane?I had to find help because I could not be late!LWhat can we get from the questions本课内容 I tried to ask a passing businessman for help，but my words all came out wrong.He just frowned and walked away.What had happened?I had been in this country for a whole semester,and
12、I could not even remember how to ask for directions.This was awful!Another bus arrived at the terminal,and the passengers came out carrying all sorts of luggage.Here was my chance!I could follow them to the right place,and I would not have to say a word.When I asked for help,what was the result?and
13、why?Does this give us some inspiration about the continuation?contentpa ara a4 I dragged my enormous suitcase behind me and followed the group.We finally reached the elevators.Oh,no!They all fit in it，but there was not enough room for me.I watched in despair as the elevator doors closed.I was abando
14、ned again!I had no idea what to do next.I got on the elevator when it returned and stared at all the buttons.Which one could it be?I pressed button 3，because I thought I saw those passengers pressed 3,though it was no more than a quick glance.The elevator slowly climbed up to the third floor and cam
15、e to a stop.A high，unpleasant noise announced the opening of the doors，and I looked around shyly.Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane.Paragraph 2：When I turned to thank him for all his help，he was gone.what happened plot 1.Who was the first to talk
16、to each other?2.Did he get my idea easily?what did he do to help me?3.What was my feeling changes?Paragraph 2：When I turned to thank him for all his help，he was gone.1.What happened then?2.What did I get from this experience?what was the influce it brought me?when we wrtie,we need continue the story
17、,and the text style.Attention1.the person1.the person2.the tense2.the tense3.the dialogue3.the dialogue Appreciationcontent:content:批判性批判性:主题相关主题相关 逻辑性：情节合理，衔接自然逻辑性：情节合理，衔接自然 创造性创造性language:grammerlanguage:grammer spelling spelling type type课堂练习课堂练习Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet,consectetuer adipiscing
18、elit.Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet,consectetuer adipiscing elit.Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet,consectetuer adipiscing elit.Aenean commodo ligula eget dolor.Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet,consectetuer adipiscing elit.Aenean commodo ligula eget d
19、olor.Appreciationcontent:content:批判性批判性:主题相关主题相关 逻辑性：情节合理，衔接自然逻辑性：情节合理，衔接自然 创造性创造性language:grammerlanguage:grammer spelling spelling type type精精讲精精评Language非谓语非谓语I followe ed himm,feeeellin ngaateaease e/re eleaease ed无灵主语无灵主语wordsfailedme_overwhelmed/coveredme连动句连动句 heehe eldmeme,ca aughtmmy ba ag,
20、anand heaeade ed towa ards theecoun nte er.课后作业倒装句倒装句n not on nly did heete ellmemehow to do,butaalso heele edmemeto theeright pla ace e.课后作业强调句强调句It wa as his kin ndneness tha at lit up theeworldmain idea It was no exaggeration（夸大）to utter that the unforgettable experience was like an everlasting flower,blooming in the river of ones memoriesIt is kindness makes the world go round and sb made up ones mind to pass on“kindness”to others.归纳总结谢谢大家观看You are simple,the world is a fairy tale;Heart is complex,the world is a maze.