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1、专题1 8书面表达应用文备战2023高考英语考试易错题（新高考专用）（解析版）一易错题类型-【易错题01】不一致1 .主谓不一致When he have money,he often buys what he want to.【答案】have改为has;wanl改为wards【错误分析】没有注重英语中谓语动词需要和主语保持时态，语态，人称和数的一致。单纯的按汉语意思来翻译。【写作思路】句子的核心谓语动词时刻保持人称一致，时态，语态合理运用，不可按汉语直译。2.前后指代不一致We can also know the society by serving yourself.【答案】w e 改为yo
2、u;或 yourself改为ourselves【错误分析】句中人称代词w e 和反身代词yourself指 代 不 致。【写作思路】保持前后指代一致。We can also know the society by serving it ourselves./Youcan also know the society by serving it yourselfo3 .句子不完整或者多词There are many ways to know the society.For example by TV,radio,newspaper and so on.【答案】将 fo r改为小写，前面句号改为逗号
3、。【错误分析】“For example by TV,radio,newspaper and so on”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清。【写作思路】There are many ways to know the society,for example by TV,radio,newspaperand so on.在句子写完以后，想加些补充说明时需要考虑句子结构和成分是否完整。Not only this activity enrich your school life but also it can broaden your horizon
4、s.【答案】在 only后面加cano【错误分析】本句属于特殊句式中的倒装句。助动词漏用，没有倒装。【写作思路】Not only用于句子开头时，句子使用部分倒装句型。助动词用于主语之前。故Not only can this activity enrich your school life but also it can broaden your horizons.For the people who they are diligent and kind,they use money only to buy what they need.【答案】去掉they【错误分析】定语从句中关系代词充当成分
5、，重复使用句子成分。【写作思路】关系代词who充当定语从句中的主语，定语从句中多了人称代词。故 Forthepeople who are diligent and kind,they use money only to buy what they need.4.词性误用Sincere,I hope this activity will be of great benefit to you.【答案】在 only后面加carlo【错误分析】词性误用一般表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等【写作思路】遣词造句时，需要考虑词性与修饰的关系。故 Sincerely,I hope this
6、 activity willbe of great benefit to you.The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.【答案】将 across改为was crossing【错误分析】across是介词，不能误用作动词。【写作思路】The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street.5.指代不清Lily was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.【答案】将
7、h e r改为my sister【错误分析】本句话没有明确两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。代词与被指代的人或物关系不清或者先后所用的代词不一致。【写作思路】写作是逻辑意思以及句子前后指代应当清晰一致。故 Lily was friendly to mysister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.【易错题（）2】低级词汇集中1.动词类简单词汇 attend,cause,help,consider,consider,happen,have,improve,master,realize,remember,should,thank,u
8、se,tend,understand,cant,decide,lie in,think of,try ones best,高级词汇 take part in/be involved in/participate in;lead to/result in/contribute to/give rise to;do sb.a favor/lend sb a helping hand;take.into consideration/account;occur/come about;possess/improve;promote;have a good command of;be aware o f;
9、bear/keep in mind;besupposed to;appreciate/be grateful to sb.;make use of/take advantage of;have a tendency todo sth.;make sense of/figure out;have trouble/difficulty in doing sth;determine to do sth;be determined to do sth.;be located in/be situated in;sth occurs to sb.;spare no effort to do sth.;【
10、动词分析】选词简单，不够高级，汉语意思直白翻译。【选词思路】注重积累，短语优先选择。2.名词类简单词汇 chance;choice;people;result;shortcoming;more and more people;allkinds of高级词汇 opportunity;alternative;individuals;consequence;drawback;an increasingnumber of people;a wide range of;a wide variety of.堂更 典例剖析（2022 全国高考乙卷满分作文）Nowadays,with the growing
11、popularity of smartphones andcomputers,ao increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroomin various ways.【高级词汇】an increasing number代替many【选词思路】注重积累，选词应当使用能够吸引阅卷老师目光的高级词汇和短语，使句子出类拔萃。3.形容词类简单词汇 good;difficult;enough;free;important;lucky;popular;proper;rich;tired;be ang
12、ry with;be busy with;be bored with;be very happy;be interested in高级词汇 outstanding/distinguished/brilliant;challenging;adequate;available;essential/vital/significant;fortunate;enjoy great popularity;appropriate;abundant;exhausted/worn out;be annoyed with;be occupied with/bury oneself in;be fed up wit
13、h;be wild with joy;have a great passion for;be crazy about;sth appeal to sb;be fascinated by4.副词类简单词汇 finally;hardly;immediately;nowadays;so;suddenly;very高级词汇 eventually/ultimately;barely;without hesitation/delay;currently;consequently/therefore;all of a sudden;extremely5.介词类简单词汇 considering;during;
14、in fact;in a word高级词汇 in view of;in the course of;as a matter of fact;to summarize/in conclusion/tosum up【易错题0 2 1 句子呆板不生动1.运用介词（短语）Because he helped me,I finished the task on time.Thank to his help,I accomplished the task on time.【原句分析】句型呆板，缺乏灵动性。【写作思路】注重积累，短语优先选择。可以运用介词短语对句子进行转化，可以使句子简洁有新意。知识拓展】常用
15、介词短语有 because of,as well as,by doing;through,but for,despite,inspite of,on/upon thanks to 等。（2 0 2 2年 全 国 高 考 新 高 考I卷 应 用 文 写 作）The program with the theme Culturedifferences is intended to arouse students9 interest in different cultures especially western cultureabout American cuisine.【选词思路】介 词 w it
16、h短语作后置定语，增加句子的变化性，彰显出灵活的句子结构运用能力。2.运用定语从句和名词性从句He has two sons and both of them are doctors.He has two sons,both of whom are doctors.We all know that he is a warm-hearted man.What is known to us all is that he is a warmhearted man.【原句分析】句型较为简单，只运用了比较容易的并列句和宾语从句。【写作思路】不改变句意，运用定语从句和名词性从句可以对并列句进行升华，可以使
17、句子脱颖而出。3.运用非谓语短语对祈使句和从句进行转化He was told many times,but he didnt memorize the rule.Told many times,he didntmemorize the rule.They entered the forest in search of the missing boy.They entered the forest to search forthe missing boy.As I was lying on the grass,I thought of my brother who was studying ab
18、road,the grass,I thought of my brother studying abroad.【原句分析】句型运用了比较容易的并列句和介词短语，比较单一。Lying on【写作思路】一篇高分文章应当多种句型运用丰富，非谓语的熟练运用是能体现高水准的表达方式之一，可以转化祈使句，并列句和从句。二举一反三（3I.（2022年全国乙卷书面表达）.It turns out that students attach greater importance to interest and entertainment instead oftraditional approaches such
19、as reading books when learning English.However,from my point of view,what benefits students most is reading English books,for itis one of the best ways to increase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding ofgrammar.【佳句赏析】句意：事实证明，学生在学习英语时更重视兴趣和娱乐，而不是像阅读书籍等传统方法。然而，在我看来，对学生最有利的是阅读英语书籍，因为这是增加词汇量和加
20、强对语法理解的最好方法之一。句型运用It tums out that灵活生动。动词短语attach greaterimportance t o 代替pay attention to 高级不单调，实为背诵佳句。下段运用介词短语from mypoinlofview于主语之前，句子显得很有新意。使用名词性从句作主语，写作中实为加分项。2.（2022年全国高考新高考I卷读后续写）.I quietly said,David,if youre not running because youre afraid someone is going to laugh,thats not a good enough
21、 reason.【选词思路】熟练使用形容词enough;副词quietly;连词if,because等引导从句,句子生动不简单。【佳句赏析】句意：我平静地说：“大卫，如果你因为害怕有人会笑而不跑步，那是一个足够好的理由。”i f 引导条件状语从句，because引导原因状语从句，以及句子中形容词和副词的运用都显示出作者很扎实的基本功，适合背诵模仿。3.（2022年全国高考新高考II卷）This is an amazing program where you can share your ideas with students.Now,when havingtrouble in learning
22、 English well,plenty of students urge to know how to deal with it.【选词思路】句子中高级词汇和短语熟练运用，amazing,share.with;have trouble in doing;plenty of;deal with。【佳句赏析】句意：这是一个很棒的项目，你可以与学生们分享你的想法。现在，当他们在学习英语方面遇到困难时，很多学生都很想知道如何处理它。where引导的定语从句先行词表示抽象地点的program,这是高考中语法填空的常考知识点，作者能将其运用于写作中，实乃妙句。When后运用了省略句，以及句子中大量的短语
23、，都为作文加分亮点。模拟题通关 7应用文1.（2022年全国高考新高考I 卷写作）假定你是校广播站英语节目Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Caroline,Yours sincerely,Li Hua【满分范文】One possible version:Dear Caroline,I am writing to invite you to attend our program“Talk and Talk”in
24、our school broadcastingstation at 7:00 p.m.next Friday.The program with the theme Culture differences,is intended toarouse students?interest in different cultures especially western culture about American cuisine.As our distinguished foreign language teacher,your opinion will be of importance.In the
25、program,you can communicate with our school students,which not only provides a platform forstudents to relieve their pressure and add spice to their dull routine,but also inspires their interestin western culture.rd appreciate it if you could spare your time to join us.An early reply about your fina
26、ldecision will be highly appreciated.Yours,【佳作赏析】第一段开门见山表达写信目的I am writing to invite you to 紧接着便是节目话题介绍 The program with the theme“Culture differences“is intended to arousestudents interest in different cultures especially western culture about American cuisine.第二段第句表明邀请参加的H 的As our distinguished fo
27、re.接着展开描写参加活动 的意义 In the program,you can communicate。其中倒装句 not only.but also 是一大亮点。最后一段再次邀请.Id appreciate it if you.。2.（2022年全国高考新高考II卷）假定你是校广播站英语节目Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Caroline,Yours sincerely,Li Hua【满分范文】Dear C
28、aroline,This is my first time that I have invited you to attend our program Talk and Talk.It is tenyears since Talk and Talk was established.This is an amazing program where you can share yourideas with students.Now,when having trouble in learning English well,plenty of students urge toknow how to d
29、eal with it.As our distinguished foreign language teacher,your aid can help us a lot.If you are available on this Sunday,I together with the whole Talk and Talk staff am waiting for yourcoming.Td appreciate it if you take my invitation into consideration.Yours,Li Hua【佳作赏析】1.句型“自从.以来多久了“Il is ten yea
30、rs since Talk and Talk was established.2.省略句 when having trouble 的运用。3.短语搭配运用灵活 share.with;have trouble in doing sth;urge to do sth;be available;4.虚拟语气句式运用 Id appreciate it if you.3.（2022年 1 月浙江卷）假定你是李华，在“中国爱尔兰文化节 活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友C hris,现在他已回国，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.回忆活动经历；2.分享个人收获；3.希望保持联系。注意：1 .词数80左右；3.可适当增
31、加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Chris,_ Yours,Li Hua【满分范文】Dear Chris,How are you doing these days?It has been a year since you came back to Ireland.I miss you somuch.I still remember the very day when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting
32、 things about your country together,through which I learned a lot about your food,culture and history.We really enjoyed ourselvesthere.Whats far more important is that we became good friends then.Though I felt a little sorrythat you left China last year,I am pleased to know you are leading a happy l
33、ife in your hometown.I hope we can keep in touch often.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【佳作赏析】I.句型表示“自从.以来多久了”It has been a year since you came back to Ireland.2.定语从句 when we met at China-Ireland Cultural Festival two years ago.3.强调句型 It was at that festival that you shared so many interesting things about y
34、our countrytogether,4.非限制性定语从句 through which I learned a lot about your food,culture and history.5.名词性从句中主语从句和表语从句 Whafs far more important is that we became good friendsthen.6.让步状语从句 Though I felt a little sorry that you left China last year,7.短语灵活运用如：share.with;am pleased to；are leading a happy li
35、fe；keep in touch.5.（2022湖南雅礼中学测试卷）假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。要点：1.表示欢迎；2.提出学习中文建议；3.期待与祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Muhammad,Yours,Li Hua【满分范文】Dear Muhammad,Welcome to be an exchange student at our school next year.As to how to learn Chinese,herecome
36、 my tips.First,you might as well take a Chinese course to lay a solid foundation.Whats more,it is awise choice to pick up proper Chinese TV programs,which will enable you to access standard andauthentic Chinese.Plus,befriending warmhearted Chinese friends around you is sure to betteryour oral Chines
37、e.Meanwhile,it can enrich your knowledge of Chinese customs.Finally.Isuggest you try e-mailing me in Chinese.I hope my suggestions above may benefit you.Hope you will make sufficient progress inChinese soon.I am looking forward to your an ival.Yours,Li Hua【佳作赏析】1.Plus,not only is befriending warmhea
38、rted Chinese friends around you sure to better your oralChinese,but also it can enrich your knowledge of Chinese customs.2.Whats more,it is a wise choice to pick up proper Chinese TV programs,which will enable youto access standard and authentic Chinese.（运用 了 which 引导非限制性定语从句）3.Finally,I suggest you
39、 try e-mailing me in Chinese.（运用 了 省略 that 的宾语从句和虚拟语气）4.词汇积累：至于：as to as for；建议：tip/suggestion advice；明智的：wise advisable；U 七 夕 卜：whafs more-besides6.（2022年全国甲卷书面表达）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1 .词 数 100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。one possible versionOur Oceans,Our Responsib
40、ilityDo you know June 8,which is not only a day for the college entrance examination to Chineseyoungsters,but also World Oceans Day,designated by the UN to arouse peoples awareness toprotect the oceans?The ocean is the home to all life on earth,rich in natural resources,and also our blue home fora h
41、appy life and happy growth.To care for the ocean is to care for our future.So we shouldshoulder responsibility to protect it.To begin with,protect the Marine ecological environment andadvocate green environmental protection actions.Whats more,to strengthen the consciousness ofthe sea in accordance w
42、ith the law,consciously protect the blue land and resources environment,start From me,start from now,start from around things,take an active part in green volunteeractivities,and advocate green environmental protection.Do you agree with me?If so,lefs hand in hand to protect the Marine environment,an
43、dinherit the Marine civilization from heart to heart.(165)【佳作赏析】1.运用定语从句 which is not only a day for the college entrance examination to Chineseyoungsters,but also.并在其中穿插关联词组 not only.but also.。2.目的状语 To care for the ocean is to care for our future.中 to do 不定式的运用。3.熟练运用短语 arouse ones awareness be ri
44、ch in;care for;to begin with;whats more;inaccordance with;take an active part in;hand in hand 等。7.(2022年全国乙卷书面表达)学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述：2.简单评论；3.你的建议。65.学 生 英 谓 学 习 活 动 蚂 在 结 果 人 做 百 分 比）注意：1.词 数 100左右;2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Learning English
45、Beyond the ClassroomThere are many things we can do to learn English well.【满分范文】Learning English Beyond the ClassroomThere are many things we can do to learn English well.Recently a survey about how to learnEnglish beyond the classroom has been conducted.As can be clearly seen from the statistics,ap
46、preciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50%who choose to watchmovies as a way of English learning.Reading English books prove to be the less popular waysmaking up 18%,together with visiting English learning websites,taking up 12%.It turns out that students attach greater impor
47、tance to interest and entertainment instead oftraditional approaches such as reading books when learning English.However,from my point of view,what benefits students most is reading English books,for it isone of the best ways to increase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding of grammar.Ther
48、efore,students become best English learners quickly.【佳作赏析】文中加分句型和短语都能运用自如。I.There be 句型的运用 There are many things we can do to learn English well.2.As 引导的定语从句 As can be clearly seen from the statistics3.动名词短语作主语 appreciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50%4.定语从句 who choose to
49、watch movies as a way of English learning.5.动名词短语做主语 Reading English books prove to be the less popular ways making up 18%.6.句型 It turns out that students.的运用.7.名词性从句中主语从句的运用 what benefits students most is reading English books,8.（2022重庆一中模拟）假定你是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。内容包
50、括：1.表示同意；2.计划拍摄的内容（12点）；3.邀请对方提建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear James,Yours,Li Hua【满分范文】Dear James,How is everything going?Its my great privilege to record a short video about my campuslife for your classmates.Tm writing to tell you what will be included in the video.First of