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1、篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统记叙文n记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，以写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史，写人、叙事为主要内容。它可以包括历史，游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。游记，报道，回忆，故事，琐事等。n这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三这样的文章也要有中心。一般从第一或第三人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感人称角度出发，表达自己或他人的经历或感受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。受，使读者对事情十分明了以获得强烈感受。n记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据
2、上下文记叙文通常以一般过去时为主，根据上下文用各种时态。用各种时态。记叙文写作的注意事项记叙文写作的注意事项一、交代背景一、交代背景文章的开头应概括地介绍事件发生的 时间、地点、人物以及事件时间、地点、人物以及事件等二、详略得当二、详略得当过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切相关选择与主题密切相关 的内容，从而点明文章中心。三、条理清晰三、条理清晰记叙文一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序时间顺序或空间顺序来描述，要求层次清晰、条理清楚。层次清晰、条理清楚。篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统例
3、文 A traffic accident首段：首段：首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人首段概括交代事件发生的时间、地点、人物等信息物等信息 A week ago,I witnessed a traffic accident in a rainy day on my way to school,which still sticks in my mind.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统例文 A traffic accident中心段：中心段：交待细节，注重在交待细节，注重在how;交待细节时应注意的事项？交待细节时应注
4、意的事项？n过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统中心段细节描写练习中心段细节描写练习请找出下文与主题无关的细节 An accident This afternoon I went out in the country to see my grandparents.After I got out there I decided to take a short drive.I drove down to East Greenwich,which is about eight miles fro
5、m Centreville.While coming home I was obliged to follow the railroad for a mile or two.When I had gone about half a mile I heard a terrible whistling ahead of me.On coming near to where the sound came from,I discovered that an express train had run into the rear end of a freight train.Fortunately no
6、 one was seriously hurt,although I heard on man say that he never got shaken up so badly in his life before.The engine of the express train was somewhat disabled,as the cow-catcher was broken and the head-light and the smoke-stack were knocked off.No one seemed to know the cause of the accident.篮球比赛
7、是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统例文 A traffic accident中心段：中心段：交待细节，注重在交待细节，注重在how;交待细节时应注意的事项？交待细节时应注意的事项？n过多不必要的细节会冲淡文章的主题。n因此，在细节的选择上应注意选择与主题密切选择与主题密切相关相关的内容，从而点明文章中心。n从首段也可看出从首段也可看出 文章重点在traffic accident和stick in my mind 篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统例文 A
8、traffic accident中心段赏析 It was about 7:00 on Friday morning,(Oct.31st).（补充说明时间补充说明时间）I was walking through the pedestrian overpass near my school when I was shocked by the screech of a car.（事情的起因事情的起因）I saw a man knocked down by a black car.Soon many cars were jammed there.I got there and found that b
9、eside a black Benz lay a middle-aged man in a pool of blood.（交代一些细节交代一些细节）The street turned chaotic.（事情的大致经过事情的大致经过）After a moment,the police and an ambulance arrived.The victim was instantly sent to the hospital.（事情的结果事情的结果）注意空间的移动：注意空间的移动：I got there篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得
10、分类型的系统例文 A traffic accident结尾段赏析 结尾段：结尾段：可适当发表一点议论可适当发表一点议论In my opinion,the pedestrian should have taken the overpass when crossing the street.Besides,the driver might have driven too fast,regardless of such bad weather.Anyway,I believe accidents may be avoided if we become aware of the importance
11、of safety.（结尾）（结尾）篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统记叙文常用句式记叙文常用句式首段：交代主题首段：交代主题n It was the most exciting moment that I have ever experienced.nAll through my senior high school,I couldnt forget nIn the years that followed the event frequently floated in my mind/often recurred to
12、 my memory/kept haunting me.nLast week,when I was on my way home something terrible happened.nI quickly turned around,just in time to see the whole process of the accident.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统记叙文常用句式记叙文常用句式首段：交代主题首段：交代主题补充交代时间补充交代时间nThe event took place/happened/occ
13、urred in the early morning.nThe whole story happened the(first)day I entered the senior high school.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统记叙文常用句式记叙文常用句式主体部分：主体部分：（一）作者心理活动的描写（一）作者心理活动的描写nI could hardly believe my eyes.nI felt as if I were on top of the world.nI was completely shocked
14、.nI was bursting with joy.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统记叙文常用句式记叙文常用句式主体部分：主体部分：（二）人物外貌和性格的描写（二）人物外貌和性格的描写nHe is of medium height.nHe is good-looking/ordinary-looking.nShe is plump/slim,with fair skin and curly hair.nHe looks handsome in a sports suit/blue jeans.nHe is of mil
15、d/bad temper.nAt first glance,you would say he is the perfect image of an obedient boy,but deep down,he is not that way at all.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统记叙文常用句式记叙文常用句式主体部分：主体部分：（三）物体的描写（三）物体的描写nIt comes in a variety of colors/shapes.nIt consists of several integrated part
16、s.nIt is shaped like a circle.nIt is flat in shape and small in size.nAttached to the bottom is篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统记叙文常用句式记叙文常用句式主体部分：主体部分：（四）景物的描写（四）景物的描写nThere is a wonderful array of flowers along the street.nThe air is filled with the scent of roses.nThe trees s
17、tood there on guard for generations,with branches reaching out like a canopy over the road.nI feel miserably insignificant approaching the mountain.nEven judging by modern standards,the town was large in population.nThe campus has a unique atmosphere.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分
18、类型的系统练习一练习一The Day My Classmate Fell Ill）简单描述这位同学的生病情况；）简单描述这位同学的生病情况；）同学、老师和我是如何帮助他）同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的；她的；）人与人之间的这种互相关爱给我的感受是）人与人之间的这种互相关爱给我的感受是篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统词汇拓展词汇拓展n扭伤扭伤 twist ones ankle/give a wrench to ones ankle/sprain ones ankle ones sprained anklen喉咙疼痛喉咙
19、疼痛 have a sore throatn痛苦的表情痛苦的表情 an expression of pain Her face was contorted with pain.她痛她痛得脸都变了样。得脸都变了样。n量体温量体温 take ones temperaturen轮流照顾某人轮流照顾某人 take care of sb.by turns/take turns at caring sb.n发高烧发高烧 have/run a high fevern健康状况健康状况 health/conditionn请假请假 ask for a(sick)leave/ask for a four-day l
20、eave/be on sick leave篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统范文一范文一Last year,a terrible flu spread across the whole school.One ofmy classmate,John/Jane Doe,became a victim of it.He/She ran a high fever,and ordinary medicine didnt work onhim.The news quickly reached everybody in our cla
21、ss.Someclassmates recorded the English lessons for him so that he/she could keep up with his/her studies.Our English teacher called on him/her at the weekends sometimes.With care and help,he/she was soon able to be up and about and finally came back to the class.From this event,I learn two things.On
22、e is that with love,noillness or difficulty is terrible.The other is that love and help are two-way streets.Our classmates offered John/Jane Doe kind help partly because he/she himself/herself had always been a helpful person.So I realize that when we help others,we are helping ourselves.篮球比赛是根据运动队在
23、规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统范文二范文二In the summer sports meeting last year,one of my classmates,John/Jane Doe,suddenly fell to the ground and hurt her left foot when he/she was practicing high jump.His/Her face turned pale and showed great pain.Seeing this,our classmates immediately cam
24、e to her aid.They struggled to take her to the temporary emergency room.One boy untied his/her shoe and applied ice rocks to his/her wound.Meanwhile,girls comforted her in a soft voice.Soon the P.E.teacher came.He checked his/her sound and took some emergency measures to lessen her pain.Fifteen minu
25、tes later,the ambulance arrived and she was sent to hospital.Luckily enough,with our care and concern,John/Jane Doe recovered quickly.Such an incident impressed everyone present.I realizethat love and care are the best medicine for an injured person 篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类
26、型的系统学生作品中的常见问题学生作品中的常见问题n在叙事时，一般用在叙事时，一般用过去时过去时，但在表述个人观，但在表述个人观点时可以用点时可以用现在时现在时。n在叙述部分缺少所对叙述事件的在叙述部分缺少所对叙述事件的结果结果。nLast week,my classmate had a bad cold.不要用不要用或或A,B,C来表示人，可以取一个来表示人，可以取一个恰当的名字，或是用恰当的名字，或是用John Doe或或Jane Doe来表示来表示“某人某人”。篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统学生的优秀作品（一）学
27、生的优秀作品（一）Last Friday,my classmate John was absent because he suddenly caught a heavy flu and ran a high fever.（时间、人（时间、人物、事件交代清晰）物、事件交代清晰）After school,we three volunteer students,together with our class teacher went to see him.John stayed in bed and had a running nose.He told us that he was anxious
28、about his studies.On hearing that,we promised him we would try our best to help.Therefore,in the following days,we arranged ourselves to teach him every day in turn,hoping to ensure that he would catch up with us when he came back to school.（条理（条理清楚，因果关系合乎逻辑，细节描写恰到好处）清楚，因果关系合乎逻辑，细节描写恰到好处）In my opini
29、on,no one is born to live alone.We should love,care and help each other.Moreover,friendship can help defeat difficulties more easily.(班班 袁宛青袁宛青)篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统学生的优秀作品（二）学生的优秀作品（二）Tough as the suffering is,we will feel much better when friends are around us.One
30、day,when we were playing basketball,an accident happenedLannes got wrenched in his ankle.From the painful look on his face,we knew it was serious.Without hesitation,Fenix and I raised him up and helped him walk to the clinic.But unluckily,the doctor was out.We knew if we didnt take action at once th
31、e injury would get worse.So we placed some cold-pack on his ankle.Soon after,the doctor came back and gave us some directions and then we took him to the classroom.We will never walk alone.Whenever we get hurt and fall down,there are always friends who will give us a helping hand by our side.It is f
32、riendship that links us together.It is the most precious fortune in our life.（班周剑帆）（班周剑帆）篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统学生的优秀作品（三）学生的优秀作品（三）As old saying goes,“A friend in need is a friend indeed.”It was such a group of true friends who melted my heart gently and deeply at one
33、 time.This autumn,I unfortunately came down with influenza becauseof not having well prepared for the chill.I kept feeling dizzy and had a headache accompanied with fever.My classmates and teachers tried to argue me into taking a good rest at home;nonetheless I was terribly concerned about missing l
34、essons.They handed me a glass of hot water,which warmed my heart along with their simple words,“dont worry,my dear,well help you.”At last,I asked for sick leave for 2 days and got over it soon.With the earnest aid of my classmates and teachers,I caught up with others before long.Do you have such a f
35、riend,or are you such a person whos always ready to offer a helping hand?Only when we realize the meaning of life lies in what we give rather than what we get will we no longer be lonely in this magicalsociety.Keep in mind that love is the best policy.(班方莹班方莹)篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时
36、计分系统是一种得分类型的系统学生的优秀作品（四）学生的优秀作品（四）One day on a PE lesson,we were enjoying the benign weather and playing sports on the playground.All of a sudden,we found the centre of the playground chaotic.When we got there,we were surprised to see our classmate John lying on the ground with painful expressions.W
37、ith the arrival of clinic teachers,the students about were evacuated and John was instantly sent to hospital.Because of Johns unexpected illness,my class teacher and all the classmates were intent on calling on him.After we decided to visit him in the hospital,some students carried the notes of toda
38、ys lessons,some bought what john loved most,others made a card bearing the signature of every one in class,hoping that he could recover soon.When we saw smile climbing up to Johns face,we all took an optimistic view of his condition.Nowadays,more and more people began to have glimmers of hope about
39、the relationship among the human beings,which is the same to me.However,the segments of that day frequently floats in my mind,which changed my opinion of this kind of circumstance in society.The reason why we human beings can“live together”in such harmony along with creating this prosperous city is
40、that we have the feelings of love.(班王奥维班王奥维)篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统范文 The Most Unforgettable Person All the people will meet a lot of people in their life.Among them,some are just known a little,others will be their friends forever.And in their minds,there will be one
41、or two persons who will be never forgotten.In my life,I also have met many people who are really worth mentioning.But perhaps the most unforgettable one I have ever known is My English teacher,Mrs.Sun篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统范文 The Most Unforgettable Person (continued)Fo
42、r the first thing,she gives me a very good impression because of her kindness and smiling faces.In the first class,she told us that she really wanted to be our friend rather than a teacher.In reality,she does as what she has promised.When we met with some trouble,the first helper appearing in our mi
43、nd would be her smiling face.We even treat her as our elder 篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统范文 The Most Unforgettable Person (continued)sister.Once the father of one of our classmates was seriously ill,which made this boy very upset and depressed.When Mrs.Sun knew this,she went
44、 to his home to comfort him and contributed a large sum of money to his family.After that she asked us to try to help him in any way we could.So some students helped him in any way we could.So some students helped him with his lessons.Others went to him home to help his mother to do some housework.篮
45、球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统范文 The Most Unforgettable Person (continued)And some others donated their pocket money to help the family.Through this special activity,we found our class strongly untied.And we all felt proud to be useful to others.For another,Mrs.Sun has a stron
46、g individual charm.Her classes were always full of laughter.She not only has a wide range of knowledge but also has humorous and lively teaching methods.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统范文 The Most Unforgettable Person (continued)I still remember that all the students in our gra
47、de liked to attend her class.From her,we learned a lot of valuable advice.Everything seemed much easier after attending her lessons.Now I will soon graduate from senior high school,and it is four years since I left my junior school.But Mrs.Sun will be in my mind forever.I even wish to be such a teacher as her.篮球比赛是根据运动队在规定的比赛时间里得分多少来决定胜负的，因此，篮球比赛的计时计分系统是一种得分类型的系统记叙文练习题目 ）你的同学、家人曾说过善意的谎言吗？请把这样的事写成一篇记叙文。2)My best friend3)某学生骑车上学路经工业区总是感到眼睛不适，以他的亲身经历体会，指出城市空气污染必须从源头整治。