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1、2023新课标版英语高考第二轮复习专题八短文改错Proofreading 1My hometown,Wanning,Hainan,which is a lively city within a 90-minute drive from Sanya.It enjoys a warm climate with an annual average temperatures of 20.It is the better surfing spot withmany international competitions hold there each year.Riyue Bay,located 25km
2、 south of Wanning,is myfavourite place.With its strong waves,Riyue Bay is a ideal beach for surfing,what always offers an incrediblesurfing experience.Taxis at Wanning Station are plentiful.Ignore others vehicles and head directly to the taxi line.Your totally travel time to Riyue Bay should be40 mi
3、nutes or so.It is a long but slightly expensive road,but it worth a visit!答案My hometown,Wanning,Hainan,whichO is a lively city within a 90-minute drive from Sanya.It enjoys a warm climate with an annual average temperatures of 20.It is the better surfing spottemperature best with many international
4、competitions hold there each year.Riyue Bay,located 25km south of Wanning,isheldOmy favourite place.With its strong waves,Riyue Bay is a ideal beach for surfing,what always offersan。which。an incredible surfing experience.Taxis at Wanning Station are plentiful.Ignore others vehicles and head directly
5、 to the taxi line.Your totally travel time to Riyue Bay shouldother total be 40 minutes or so.It is a long but slightly expensive road,but it A worth a visit!aTd is 解析1.考查简单句。句意:我的家乡，海南万宁，是一个生机勃勃的城市，离三亚不到90分钟的车程。本句为简单句,而不含有非限制性定语从句，故将which删除。2.考查名词的“数”。句意:这里气候温暖，年平均气温20。根据错误处前的冠词“an”及句意可知错误处应为名词单数形式
6、，故将temperatures改为temperatureo第1页 共2 4页3.考查形容词比较等级。句意:它是最好的冲浪地点，每年都有许多国际比赛在那里举行。结合句意及定冠词the可知此处要表达的意思是“最好的冲浪地点”，故使用besto4.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。文中“with many international competitions hold为“with的复合结构with后的宾语many international competitions与作宾补的hold为逻辑上的被动关系，需用过去分词而非动词原形作宾补，故将hold改为heldo5.考查冠词。句意旧月湾的海浪很大，是理想的冲
7、浪海滩，它总能给人们令人难以置信的冲浪体验。错误处后的ideal以元音音素开头，需与an连用，故将a 改为an。6.考查非限制性定语从句。先行词为Riyue Bay,将先行词代入定语从句后可知先行词在定语从句中作主语;先行词指“物”,故用which而非what引导非限制性定语从句。7.考查形容词。句意:不乘坐其他车辆，直接乘坐出租车。错误处后有名词复数形式vehicles,错误处应改为other。other+名词复数形式=olhers08.考查形容词。句意:到日月湾的总行程时间应该是40分钟左右。错误处作travel time的定语，需用形容词，故将totally改为totalo9.考查并列连
8、词。句意:这条路很长且打车费用稍微贵一点，但那里值得一游！错误处前后的long和slightly expensive为递进关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and。10.考查谓语动词。本句缺少谓语动词,worth为形容词,因此在前面加系动词is,构成be worth a visit结构,意为:值得一游。Proofreading 2I was riding my bike down to the comer shop in a Saturday morning when I attracted by a cute boy whowas walking his dog.Suddenly my nei
9、ghbour drives past and honked（按竦me.I was so surprising that Icrashed into an old lady walk down the street!Lucky,the old lady wasnDt hurt,but I fell off my bike andlanded in the hole.My neighbour saw me to fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help her.The worstpart was that the cute boy sto
10、pped to watch all happen.What an embarrassing but dangerous day!答案I was riding my bike down to the corner shop in a Saturday morning when I A attracted by a cuteoO was boy who was walking his dog.Suddenly my neighbour drives past and honked（按喇叭）at me.I was sodrovesurprising that I crashed into an ol
11、d lady walk down the street!Lucky,the old lady wasnDt hurt,butsurprised walking LuckilyOI fell off my bike and landed in the hole.My neighbour saw meIo第2页 共2 4页to。fall so she stopped her car and rushed out to help her.The worst part was that the cute boy stopped tome。watch all happen.What an embarra
12、ssing but dangerous day!and解析1.考查介词。句意:一个星期六的早晨，我正骑着自行车去街角的商店,就在这时我被一个正在遛狗的可爱男孩吸引住了。错误处表示“在具体某天的上午”，需用on而非in,故将in改为on。2.考查被动语态。主语 与 attract为被动关系，故该句应该用被动语态;再根据上下文可知需用一般过去时的被动语态形式，故在attracted前加was。3.考查时态。句意:突然，我的邻居开车经过，对着我按喇叭。根据上下文可知本句讲的是过去的事情，应该用一般过去时，故将drives改为droveo4.考查形容词。句意:我太惊讶了结果撞上了一个正在街上行走的老太
13、太!错误处表示“感到惊讶的”而非“令人感到惊讶的”,故将surprising改为surprisedo5.考查动词的非谓语形式作定语。被修饰词an old lady与 walk为逻辑上的主动关系，且 walk表示“正在进行“，需用现在分词作定语，故将walk改为walkingo6.考查副词。句意:幸运的是，老太太没有受伤，但我从自行车上摔了下来，倒在了一个坑里。错误处位于句首，修饰后面一句话，需用副词作状语，故将Lucky改为Luckilyo7.考查冠词。错误处后的hole表示泛指，意为“一个坑”,需与不定冠词连用，故将the改为a。8.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。句意:我的邻居看到我摔倒了，所
14、以她停下了车,冲出来帮我。动词see接宾语时，后面用不带“to”的不定式作宾补，故将to删除。9.考查代词。根据上下文情节可推知邻居匆匆下车是为了帮助“我”，故将her改为me。10.考查并列连词。句意:最糟糕的是那个可爱的男孩停下来看着这一切发生。多么尴尬和危险的一天呀!根据上下文可知错误处前后的embarrassing和 dangerous为递进关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and。Proofreading 3Among so much proverbs,I like“The early bird catches the worm.best.This proverb means that
15、 to being successful,one needs to start early or before anyone else.It advises usseize the day and take every opportunity.That is why I liked it so much.Looking back,I have come to realize that success is never goes to those who are lazy!Often the mostlysuccessful people are those who do something b
16、efore anyone else do.Success takes hard work and time.Theearly one wakes up,the more work time you will have and the more one will get.第3页 共2 4页Are you a early bird?答案Among so much proverbs,I like“The early bird catches the worm.best.manyOThis proverb means that to being successful,one needs to star
17、t early or before anyone else.It advisesbeus A seize the day and take every opportunity.That is why I liked it so much.t。likeLooking back,I have come to realize that successis never goes to those who are lazy!Often the mostly successful people are those who do somethingmost。before anyone else do.Suc
18、cess takes hard work and time.The early one wakes up,the more workdoes earlier。time you will have and the more one will get.one0Are you a early bird?aJ解析1.考查形容词。句意:在这么多谚语中，我最喜欢“早起的鸟儿有虫吃错误处后的proverbs为名词复数形式，需用many而非much修饰，故将much改为many。2.考查动词的非谓语形式作状语。句意:这句谚语的意思是:一个人要想成功,需要早早地或在其他人之前就开始。错误处作目的状语，意为“为了
19、成功”，因此需用“t。be”,故将being改为be。3.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。句意:它建议我们要抓住每一天，抓住每一个机会。advise后需用不定式作宾补，构成advise sb.to do sth.结构，故在seize前加不定式符号to。4.考查时态。句意:那就是我这么喜欢这则谚语的原因。本句介绍的是现在的情况,错误处需用一般现在时，故将liked改为likeo5.考查谓语动词。句意:回顾过去,我意识到成功从来不属于那些懒惰的人!错误处后的goes为谓语动词,因此错误处的“is”是多余的，故被删除。6.考查副词。句意:最成功的人往往是那些比其他任何人都先做事的人。错误处应该用most
20、,与successful连用构成最高级，表示“最成功的”,故将mostly改为mosto7.考查主谓一致。错误处前的主语anyone else属于单数第三人称概念，因此错误处应为does,故将do改为 doeso第4页 共2 4页8.考查固定句式。句意:一个人醒得越早，他拥有的工作时间就越多，他得到的也就越多。根据本句中的“themore work time”可知本句考查“the+比较级+主语+谓语,the+比较级+主语+谓语”句型，故将early改为earliero9.考查代词。根据错误处前后的“one”可知错误处应为one,故将you改为one。10.考查冠词。句意:你是捷足先登者吗?错误
21、处后的early以元音音素开头，故将a 改为an。Proofreading 4I grew up in a small town about a hour outside of Chicago.There were only a handful of local shops andcafes,and everyone know their neighbors as there were only twenty thousands people in the whole town!Myparents used to let my brother and me walking to and fro
22、m the kindergarten every day,and we were allowedto do whichever we liked before dark.The only thing we had to worry about was getting bite by insects orgetting sunburned from staying outdoor for too long!After high school,I went to college in the city.Takingthe subway was much faster than riding my
23、bike.People from all over the world spoke languages I neverheard before.There were huge department stores,where sold everything.The entertainment at all hours wasmy most favorite thing about the city.答案I grew up in a small town about a hour outside of Chicago.There were only a handful of local shops
24、anand cafes,and everyone know their neighbors as there were only twenty thousands people in the wholeknew thousandtown!My parents used to let my brother and me walking to and from the kindergarten every day,and wewalk were allowed to do whichever we liked before dark.The only thing we had to worry a
25、bout was gettingwhateverbite by insects or getting sunburned from staying outdoor for too long!After high school,I went tobitten。outdoorscollege in the city.Taking the subway was much faster than riding my bike.People from all over the worldspoke languages I A never heard before.There were huge depa
26、rtment stores,where sold everything.Thehad。whichentertainment at all hours was mymost favorite thing about the city.解析1.考查冠词。句意:我在离芝加哥约1 小时路程的一个小镇上长大。错误处后的hour以元音音素开头，需与an而非a 连用。第5页 共2 4页2.考查时态。句意:当地只有几家商店和咖啡馆，而且每个人都认识他们的邻居，因为整个镇只有两万人！根据上下文可推知错误处也应该用一般过去时，故将know改为knew。3.考查数词。thousand前加具体数字时,thousand
27、用单数形式，故将thousands改为thousand4.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。句意:我父母过去每天都让我和弟弟步行上下幼儿园，天黑前我们可以做任何我们想做的事。let后需用不带“to”的不定式作宾补，即 let sb.do sth.。5.考查名词性从句。错误处前面没有给出范围作为铺垫，因此需用whatevero6.考查动词的非谓语形式。句意:我们唯一需要担心的就是被昆虫咬伤或者因为在户外待的时间太长而被晒伤!根据错误处前的“getting”及后面的介词“by”可知错误处需用过去分词形式，故将bite改为bitten7.考查副词。outdoor是形容词,不能作staying的状语。作 s
28、taying的状语应该用副词形式，故将outdoor改为 outdoors8.考查时态。句意:来自世界各地的人们说的语言我以前从未听过。根据错误处后的时间状语“before”可推知错误处应该用过去完成时，故在“never heard”前加助动词had。9.考查定语从句。句意:那里有很大的百货商店，出售各种商品。根据错误处前的标点符号（逗号）,可推知错误处引导非限制性定语从句。先行词为department stores,将先行词代入定语从句后可知先行词在定语从句中作主语，先行词指“物”,故用which而非where引导该非限制性定语从句。10.考查形容词的用法。句意:关于这座城市我最喜欢的是它有
29、全天候的娱乐活动。形容词favorite没有最高级形式，不与most连用,故删除most。Proofreading 5Today I went out with my friend Ann for lunch at a restaurant.It is a pretty specially one,what iscalledSigns Restaurant”.In order to make the order for food,you have to use sign language.All the waitersand waitresses are without hearing.The
30、 waitress who served us was amazed.She taught we a bunch of signswhile we had waited for our food.She was patient for me as I tried.My friends helped me out a little,either.The waitress said I did a good job.I feel inspired now take an ASL course and will do so next year.I will dosome learning onlin
31、e before the course starts.I just canDt wait.答案Today I went out with my friend Ann for lunch at a restaurant.It is a pretty specially one,what isspecial which called4Signs Restaurant”.In order to make the order for food,you have to use sign language.All the waitersanand waitresses are without hearin
32、g.The waitress who served us was amazed.She taught we a bunch ofamazingO us signs while we第6页 共2 4页had。waited for our food.She was patient for me as I tried.My friends helped me out a little,either.Thewith friend too。waitress said I did a good job.I feel inspired now A take an ASL course and will do
33、 so next year.I will dotosome learning online before the course starts.I just canQt wait.解析1.考查形容词。句意:今天我和我的朋友安一起到饭馆吃午饭。这是一家很特殊的餐厅,被称为“手语餐厅错误处作one的定语，需用形容词而非副词，故将specially改为specialo2.考查定语从句。根据错误处前的标点符号（逗号）,可知本题考查非限制性定语从句。先行词为one,将先行词代入定语从句后可知先行词在定语从句中作主语;先行词指“物”，需用which引导，故将what改为which o3.考查冠词。句意:为了
34、点餐，你必须使用手语。错误处后的名词order在本句中表示泛指,需与不定冠词连用，故将the改为an。此外,make an order for sth.也是固定短语。4.考查形容词。句意:为我们服务的女服务员很令人惊喜。amazing令人惊喜的,amazed感到惊喜的。错误处表示“令人惊喜的“，故将amazed改为amazing5.考查代词。句意:当我们等餐的时候，她教了我们一些手语。错误处作taught的宾语，需用人称代词宾格形式，故将we改为us。6.考查时态。本句中waited与前面的taught同时发生，而不是先于taught发生，因此需将had waited（过去完成时）改为wait
35、ed（一般过去时）。7.考查介词。句意:当我努力学习手语时，她对我很有耐心。be patient with sb.为固定短语，意为:对某人有耐心。8.考查名词的“数”。句意:我的朋友也帮了我一把。错误处指的是第一句中的“Ann”,需用单数名词，故将friends 改为 friend9.考查副词。too表示 也 ，常用于肯定句;either表示“也”，常用于否定句。本句为肯定句，故将either改为10.考查动词的非谓语形式作状语。feel inspired后需用不定式作状语，故在take前加不定式符号“to”。Proofreading 6My friends made a plan go to
36、 the seaside last week.I was very excited and asked for my parents permission.To my delight,they agree.We gathered at 6:30 but set off at once.Honest speaking,it took usmore than an hour to arrive there by bike.When we arrived,there was plenty of visitors.Some were playing第7页 共24页in the sand,playing
37、 the volleyball happily while others were walking along the seaside.On addition,someeven sat on their chair,enjoying the beautiful sight.What made us happy was whether we could swim safely.We enjoyed us that day and returned home at about three oDclock.答案My friends made a plan A go to the seaside la
38、st week.I was very excited and asked for my parentsCto Jpermission.To my delight,they agree.We gathered at 6:30 but set off at once.Honest speaking,itagreed and HonestlyOtook us more than an hour to arrive there by bike.When we arrived,there was plenty of visitors.Somewere were playing in the sand,p
39、layingtheO volleyball happily while others were walking along the seaside.On addition,some even sat on their靛chair,enjoying the beautiful sight.What made us happy was whether we could swim safely.We enjoyedchairs that。us that day and returned home at about three oD clock,ourselves 解析1.考查动词的非谓语形式作定语。
40、句意:我的朋友上周计划去海边。名词plan后需用不定式形式作定语,故在go前加不定式符号“to”。2.考查时态。句意:令我高兴的是，他们同意了。本句讲的是过去的事情,其谓语动词需用一般过去时，故将agree 改为 agreed3.考查并列连词。句意:我们六点半集合完毕便立即出发了。错误处前后的gathered和 setoff不是转折关系而是顺承关系，故将but改为and。4.考查副词。句意:老实说，我们骑自行车花了一个多小时才到那里。错误处作speaking的状语，需用副词形式，故将Honest改为Honestly5.考查主谓一致。句意:我们到达时，游客很多。根据错误处后的visitors可知
41、错误处应该用were。6.考查冠词。句意:一些人在沙滩上高兴地打排球，另一些人在海边散步。本句中的volleyball为球类运动,与零冠词连用，故将the删除。7.考查介词短语。句意:此外，一些人甚至坐在椅子上,享受这美丽的景色。in addition为固定短语,意为：此外。故将On改为In。8.考查名词的“数”。错误处表示“他们各自的椅子”，需用名词复数形式，故将chair改为chairso第8页 共2 4页9.考查名词性从句。句意:使我们高兴的是我们可以安全地游泳。从句意思完整，故用that而非whether（是否）引导。10.考查代词。句意:那天我们玩得很开心，大约3 点钟就回家了。en
42、joy oneself为固定短语,意为:玩得高兴;根据主语“We”可知需将us改为ourselvesoProofreading 7!never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown.On the way to my grandpa,my father drovevery carefully or slowly all the way,for it was snowing heavily.When we arrived,my cousin Maomaograbbed my arm at once,inviting me collect sno
43、w with our grandpa.We felt not a little excitedly.After awhile,in the yard was some snowmen,all look funny.uLook,hereDs another snowman,shouted Maomao,joyfully clapping his hand.It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind.We laughed,whichmade our grandpa a kind of awkward.How I wish I c
44、an go back there next year!答案ID11 never forget the last winter holiday in my hometown.On the way to my grandpa,my father drovegrandpas very carefully or slowly all the way,for it was snowing heavily.When we arrived,my cousin Maomaoandgrabbed my arm at once,inviting me A collect snow with our grandpa
45、.We felt not a little excitedly.After a“excitedOwhile,in the yard was some snowmen,all look fUnny.Look,hereDs another snowman,shoutedwere lookingMaomao,joyfully clapping his hand.It was our grandpa who grey hair was blowing in the wind.Wehands。whose laughed,which made our grandpaa。kind of awkward.Ho
46、w I wish I can go back there next year!could 解析1.考查名词所有格。句意:在去爷爷家的路上，我爸爸一路开车很小心、很慢，因为雪下得很大。错误处表示“爷爷的家”，需用grandpa的所有格形式，故将grandpa改为grandpaDso2.考查并列连词。错误处前后的carefully slowly表示顺承关系而非选择关系，故将or改为and。3.考查动词的非谓语形式作宾补。句意:我们一到达，我的堂弟毛毛马上抓住我的胳膊，邀请我和我们的爷爷一起堆雪人。invite加宾语后需用不定式作宾补，故在collect前加不定式符号“to”。4.考查形容词。句意:
47、我们感到非常兴奋。错误处作系动词felt的表语，需用形容词而非副词，故将excitedly改为 excitedo第9页 共2 4页5.考查主谓一致。句意:过了一会儿，院子里就堆出了几个雪人，它们看起来都很滑稽。本句为倒装句，谓语动词需与主语“snowmen”（名词复数形式）保持一致，故将was改为were。6.考查动词的非谓语形式作状语。本句既无并列连词又无从属连词，由此可判断“alllook funny”为独立主格结构。该结构中的all与look（系动词）为逻辑上的主动关系，需用现在分词作状语，故将look改为lookingo7.考查名词的“数二句意:“看，又堆了一个雪人。”毛毛一边喊一边高
48、兴地拍着手。根据常识,“拍手”应该是“拍双手”,因此错误处应该用hand的复数形式，故将hand改为hands08.考查定语从句。爷爷的白发在风中飘扬。先行词为。urgrandpa,将先行词代入定语从句后为:OurgrandpaOs grey hair was blowing in the wind.由此可知先行词在定语从句中作定语，因此错误处应该用whose 而非 who。9.考查固定短语。句意:我们笑了,这让爷爷有点尴尬。kind of为固定短语，意为:稍微（slightly）,用来修饰形容词、副词。“a kind o计名词”（一种）不符合本句逻辑和要求，故将kind前的a 删除。10.考
49、查虚拟语气。句意:我多么希望明年能再去那里呀！wish后宾语从句谓语动词需用“could+动词原形”,表示将来的主观愿望。故将can改为couldoProofreading 8I still remember my first presentation in front of my entire class.When it comes to my turn,I was verymuch nervous!My head went blank and I had no idea that to say.Then I took deep breath and slowly breathedout.I
50、 kept do so for some times.That helped me feel less terribly.After a while,I calmed down but began myspeech.I did a good job in the end.It was deep breathing that helped me out of anxious.So remember tobreathe deeply when you feel nervous in a presentation.Focus on your speech and don Lt worry with