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1、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Mei Mei frowned as she helped her mother and father set out the cooking supplies in the shiny steel kitchen. Her family had just moved here from San Francisco, having bought a small restaurant, which was set to open in the next few days.“Moving here was a stupid idea. I
2、 have lost all my friends in San Francisco. What should I do now?” Mei Mei grumbled, mostly to herself.“Whats that?” Her mother asked, opening a box and lifting out several pots and a wok.“Nothing,” Mei Mei mumbled. The girl had been complaining about the move, but her parents had made the decision
3、and were now too busy getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints.The first few days at her new school hadnt been easy, either. She found it hard to talk to people she didnt know, and it seemed like the students hadnt even noticed her. Mei Mei sighed and got back to washing dishe
4、s.On the day of the grand opening, Mei Meis parents were all smiles, welcoming customers into the restaurant, brightly decorated in gold and red. Even Mei Mei was in a good mood as she rushed around, seating guests, handing out menus, and pouring tall glasses of water. This was a big day for her fam
5、ily.At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were about Mei Meis age. As she filled their glasses, Mei Mei realized the twins were in her class. Mei Mei ducked her head down so her long hair covered her face, and she turned away from the table.Mei Meis mother found her soon after, in
6、 the kitchen loading the dishwasher.“Honey, what are you doing back here? We need you out front with the customers.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:“Mom, I dont want to be out there!”Paragraph2:Mei Mei put a handful of cookies in
7、to a small plate and left the kitchen._【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，梅梅一家刚从旧金山搬到不熟悉的地方，梅梅很不适应，她发现很难与不认识的人交谈，而且学生们似乎根本没有注意到她。而梅梅家里餐厅开业的那天梅梅也去帮忙，这对她的家人来说是个大日子。结果梅梅遇到了班上的同学和父母来吃饭，梅梅转身离开了桌子。【情节分析】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：“妈妈，我不想出去!”所以后文应该是讲述妈妈开导梅梅主动去和同学打招呼；第二段开头是：梅梅把一把饼干放进一个小盘子里，离开了厨房。本段应该写梅梅将饼干端给双胞胎，以及他们的反应
8、。我们不难理清故事情节：moved from San Francisco-opened a restaurant-she was unhappy because she didnt know anyone in her new school and found it hard to make friends because she was shy-she helped in her mothers restaurant-she found two girls in her class in the restaurant and hid away.【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句
9、子。如：plead with, awkward situation, greet等高级词汇；Mei Mei whispered, as if pleading with her mother not to let herself face the awkward situation.方式状语从句；Mei Mei found that she was accepted.宾语从句等高级句式。【伏笔】通过所给文章的第一段的首句frowned，第二段的第一行a dumb idea / joyless，第三段的The first few days at her new school hadnt been
10、 easy,either.She found it hard to talk to people she didnt know,and it seemed like the students hadnt even noticed her.Sophiasighed and got back to washing dishes.可以看出主人公Sophia在随着父母搬到一个陌生的地方后，心情是及其孤独lonely郁闷的depressed，同时她认为父母的这种做法非常不明智stupid.一般而言，一个人在孤独郁闷时，最需要的是陪伴，而她的父母却在忙着新餐馆的开业和做生意。这点在所给文章的第二段这个句子
11、看得出来：her parents were now too busy getting ready for the grand opening to listen to her complaints.家人的陪伴是指望不上了，其实这里也为后面的她的两个同学的出现埋下了伏笔。在她父母餐馆开业的当天，根据所给文章的第4段she rushed around,seating guests,handing out menus,and pouring tall glasses of water.通过这段的描写，可以看得出来Sophia是个懂事considerate的孩子，尽管她不赞成父母搬到一个陌生的城市，但
12、是她并没有因为此而不去给父母帮忙，因为她知道这天对她们全家很重要This was a big day for her family.而且在餐馆里帮忙，让她心情特别好Sophiawas in a good mood。因为她知道自己作为家里的一分子，能为父母分担一些重担。根据所给文章的第5段At one of the tables sat a family with two daughters who were aboutSophias age.As she filled their glasses,Sophiarealized the twins were in her class.Sophia
13、ducked her head down so her long hair covered her face,and she turned away from the table.而这里也是全文发展的高潮climax.躲在厨房的Sophia被她妈妈发现了。当她的妈妈得知事情的真相后，她鼓励Sophia勇敢地主动地去跟她的同学打招呼。这点在所给文章的第9段这个句子看得出来：Thats good! Go take them some fortune cookies and say hello。笔者认为她的妈妈这样做，其实是在给Sophia传递着这样的一个信息：靠自己的双手劳动赚钱，是光荣的，高贵的
14、。工作没有贵贱之分。而且这个饼干的名字是fortune，所以她的妈妈认为会给Sophia带来一份好运气。根据所给文章的第10段：first she tore open a wrapper and cracked a cookie open for herself.其实这个动作刻画了Sophia的心情很忐忑不安nervous and anxious，她不知道接下来会发生什么。就在这时她无意间看见了饼干外包装上的一个句子 ，也就是所给文章的最后一段：“Many friends are found with a single smile,”it read.笔者认为这也是作者想要传递的一个情感主线。【
15、答案】Paragraph1:“Mom, I dont want to be out there!” Mei Mei whispered, as if pleading with her mother not to let herself face the awkward situation. “Why?” her mother asks. “They are my classmates and I dont want to greet them in this situation.” “You shouldnt be afraid. Maybe this is your chance to m
16、eet them. Go ahead and get them these cookies, too.” Mei Mei hesitated and accepted her mothers suggestion.Paragraph2:Mei Mei put a handful of cookies into a small plate and left the kitchen. She served them the cookies, and the twins recognized Mei Mei. They greeted her warmly. And they talked a lot about Mei Meis family. It was the first time since she had been here that she had talked to anyone other than her family. Mei Mei found that she was accepted. From then on, the twins often came to the restaurant for dinner, and Mei Mei became good friends with them.学科网（北京）股份有限公司