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1、应用文练习写作指导：介绍活动的电子邮件 讲义题目假定你是李华，你校四月份举办了“世界读书日”系列活动。请给你的笔友Adam写一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况。内容包括：1.活动目的；2.活动内容；3.你的收获。题目分析拿到作文题目后，我们就要开始写作构思和预写作的过程。每个作文题目里都有若干写作重点，是你在这个阶段需要去设计的。以这篇介绍类应用文为例，开头结尾的写作套路已经熟练的前提下，重点应该就是题目里的三个写作要点。要点一 活动目的活动目的肯定涉及动词短语的写作。世界读书日希望达成的目标是什么？这个问题可以推广到所有活动的目的，无外乎意愿、次数、水准三方面，说得更直白一些，就是让人们“更愿意做某
2、事、更多地做某事、更好地做某事”。让不愿意做的人愿意做，让愿意做的人做得更多，让做得多的人做得更好，这就是活动能够带给参与者的转变。按照这个思路去构思动词短语，就能得到如下结果：inspire the enthusiasm about reading books激发对阅读的热情encourage students to read more books鼓励学生读更多书help students appreciate the value of books帮助学生欣赏书籍的价值用这些动词短语配合活动目的写作的句式，就完成了第一个要点的初步写作。The event aimed toinspire th
3、e enthusiasm about reading books.此次活动旨在激发对阅读的热情。（一个动词短语）The purpose of this activity was toencourage students to read more booksandhelp them appreciate the value of books.这个活动的目的是鼓励学生读更多书并帮助他们欣赏书籍的价值。（两个动词短语）要点二 活动内容活动内容的写法就比较灵活了。你既可以构思“世界读书日包括哪些活动”，也可以构思“我们在世界读书日的活动里做了什么”。前者需要名词短语，要考虑列举的并列逻辑；后者需要动词
4、短语，要考虑动作的先后顺序。以我个人的经验来看，名词短语的写作难度要远低于动词短语，但是动词短语的内容水准要远高于名词短语。世界读书日包括哪些活动？目标要列举出若干个，所以不要把思维局限在“读书”上，买卖书籍、赠送书籍、介绍书籍，只要是和书籍相关的合理的动作，都可以纳入考虑范围。book fairs图书市场book sharing图书分享book exchange图书交换book donation图书捐赠使用列举的句式把这些内容放进去，就完成了这个句子的写作。There were various activities such asbook fairs, book sharing, and a
5、 book donation.有各种各样的活动，如图书市场、图书分享和图书捐赠活动。我们在世界读书日的活动里做了什么？上面的名词短语当然可以直接转换成“sell books、share books、exchange books、donate books”这样的动词短语，但是动词短语体现的是你对动词和名词的应用能力，所以你要构思的是完全不同档次的内容。share ones unique views on books分享某人对于书籍独特的看法try ones best to promote the awareness of reading努力提升阅读的意识把两个动作合并在一起，就完成了这个句子的写
6、作，注意动词时态要使用过去时。We shared our unique views on booksandtried our best to promote the awareness of reading.我们分享了我们对书籍独特的看法，并且努力提升阅读的意识。动词短语的构思与名词短语最大的不同之处在于，动词短语可以在核心动作前后进行扩充，也就是动作原因、动作顺序、动作结果。你可以根据自己的写作能力和字数需求来决定是否需要扩充或者要扩充哪些内容。扩充前置动作顺序Aftersearching related materialsandcompletely understanding the au
7、thors opinions,we shared our unique views on books and tried our best to promote the awareness of reading.在搜索了相关资料并且完全理解了作者的观点之后，我们分享了我们对书籍独特的看法，并且努力提升阅读的意识。扩充后置动作结果We shared our unique views on books and tried our best to promote the awareness of reading,which eventually made this activity a great
8、success.我们分享了我们对书籍独特的看法，并且努力提升阅读的意识，最终使这次活动取得了巨大的成功。这就是活动内容写作的灵活性。你有名词短语列举和动词短语扩充两种完全不同的写作思路，在实际写作中，两种构思选择其一，或者两种组合使用都是可以的。要点三 个人收获活动中的个人收获同样可以从两个角度来构思，既可以讲述活动整体让我们明白了什么样的道理，也可以讲述活动里的某个环节让我们有什么样的感受。这个部分作为总结的环节，只要任选其一完成写作就可以了。道理：What I have learned from the day is that we shouldnever stop the pace of
9、 reading.我从这次活动里学到的是，我们永远不应该停止阅读的步伐。感受：Personally, I foundthe book sharingto be the most rewarding. It was interesting tosee how different people interpret the same book in different ways.就我个人而言，我觉得图书分享是最有意义的。看到不同的人对同一本书有不同的解读，是很有趣的过程。在以上的两个版本中各位会发现，无论是主语从句和表语从句的组合，还是形式主语句型，传统意义上的写作模板都发挥了重要的作用。但是在前一
10、个要点“活动内容”中，模板的作用就微乎其微。这就是对模板的进阶理解：全文模板并不能让你写出好的文章，但是句式模板可以帮助你完成某些特定环节的写作。开头结尾最后把你熟悉的开头结尾套路默写上来，文章的初步写作就完成了。开头How is everything going? My school conducted an activity with the theme ofWorld Reading Day in April.I am delighted to share it with you in details.最近怎么样？我们学校四月举办了“世界读书日”的活动。很高兴能为你介绍一下。Hope t
11、his email finds you well. I am writing to share with you the excitingWorld Book Dayactivityheld at my school in April.展信佳。我写这封信是想为你介绍我们学校四月举行的“世界读书日”的活动。结尾Thats all. Hope you can have a deep insight into it. If you have any questions, feel free to let me know.就是这样了。希望你能有所了解。如果你有任何问题，请随时告诉我。Overall,
12、I am glad to have participated in this successful activity. I hope thatmore people will be inspired to read and enjoy the benefits of books.总之，我很高兴能参与这次成功的活动。希望更多的人能够受到启发去阅读，享受书籍带来的好处。完成了初稿之后，可能还要对内容做些细微的调整，比如把重复的人换成代词，比如增加一些形容词让内容更生动，比如把原来的一句话拆成两句话等等，但是这些调整已经不会影响整篇文章的全貌了。重点短语句型conduct an attractive
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18、 the exciting World Book Day activity held at my school in April.The purpose of this activity was to encourage students to read more and appreciate the value of books. There were various activities such as book fairs, book sharing, and a book donation. Personally, I found the book sharing to be the most rewarding. It was interesting to see how different people interpret the same book in different ways.Overall, I am glad to have participated in this successful activity. I hope that more people will be inspired to read and enjoy the benefits of books.学科网（北京）股份有限公司